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๐‡๐ž๐ฅ๐ฅ๐จ ๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ซ๐ฒ๐จ๐ง๐ž! ๐“๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐Ÿ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ญ๐ก ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง ๐‘๐ž๐ž๐๐ฌ๐ฒ! ๐ˆ ๐š๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ž๐ซ ๐ž๐ฑ๐œ๐ข๐ญ๐ž๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ก๐š๐ซ๐ž ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐›๐ž๐œ๐š๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ž ๐ข๐ญ ๐ข๐ง๐œ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ž๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ž ๐š๐ฐ๐ž๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ž ๐ฉ๐ž๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ž ๐Ÿ๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐‘๐ž๐ž๐๐ฌ๐ฒ! ๐“๐ก๐š๐ง๐ค ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐œ๐ก ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ ๐š๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐จ๐ซ๐ญ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐ž๐ฅ๐ฉ ๐ฆ๐ž ๐ ๐ซ๐จ๐ฐ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐ž๐š๐ซ๐ง! ๐ˆ ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐š๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ž๐œ๐ข๐š๐ญ๐ž ๐ญ๐ก๐š๐ญ! โค๏ธ


Iย will hunt you down...I wonโ€™t let you live.ย 

I will make sure that you die.ย 

Beware, Devaki, BEWARE!ย 

โ€œHey, whatโ€™s wrong Devaki?โ€ asked Laiba.ย 

โ€œOh...nothing, Laiba, call Rachel and Isaac for a second.โ€ she told Laiba.ย 

โ€œOk,โ€ย 

You think that you and your puny friends will be able to defeat me?ย ย 

Ha!ย ย 

In your dreams, Devaki!ย ย 

โ€œWhatโ€™s up, Devaki?โ€ asked Isaac.ย ย 

Devaki saw Rachel right behind him.ย 

โ€œI want to tell you something. I feel as if, Avnee...she...I donโ€™t feel good. What have I ever done to her? Why wonโ€™t she leave me alone? We even agreed to part our own ways!โ€ย ย 

โ€œCalm down, Devaki.โ€ consoled Rachel. โ€œIsaac and I have the field crew ready. Laiba is really improving her archery skills. Nainika has gotten good at the spyย work. Of course, Valerie is teaching them how to do all of this.ย Plus,ย everyoneย has been doing excellent in their training lessons.โ€ย 

โ€œBut still, I donโ€™t fear that Avnee will hurt me, but I am afraid she will hurt you all.โ€ย Devaki was upset.ย 

โ€œNo need to, Devaki.ย Trust us, we have got the crew ready. If she ever strikes, we will all make sure that we are two steps ahead of them.โ€ย Isaac said to Devaki.ย 

โ€œYouโ€™re right, Isaac, I trust my crew.โ€ย 

โœฆโœฆโœฆย 

โ€œKamryn! Are you done yet?โ€ hollered Sapphire.ย 

โ€œIt isnโ€™t as easy as you think it is Saph!โ€ she hollered back.ย 

โ€œGIRLS! Devakiย must be ahead of us! What have you two been doing? Oh, let me guess, fooling around like toddlers?! I told you, Devaki has an emotional side...our parents. Well, โ€œherโ€ parents, since mom and dad left me in the orphanage to rot.โ€ย Avnee got angry at the two.ย 

โ€œI am really sorry, Devaki. Luna, Leroy, and Katya have reported to us that they are done with the chip.ย Actually,ย Iย am pretty sureย that Devaki has been getting all these messages.ย Our transmitter has been showing us the data for when they reached her camp.โ€ย said Sapphire.ย 

โ€œGood work, Saph,โ€ย 

Kamryn wasnโ€™t looking so happy after Anveeโ€™s words.ย 

Smirking at Kamryn, Sapphire thanked Avnee and giggled back to her work.ย 

โ€œI will make sure that Devakiโ€™s life is ruined. She has gotten all the love and compassion from everyone, and what have I got?ย Nothing, well, other than these sidekicks. My childhood has been ruined by you, and to get even, I will ruin your life and your sidekicks. Then, youโ€™ll finally understand all the pain and sufferings...โ€ย Avnee chucked maniacally.ย 

...ย 

โ€œAvnee, I have goodย news for you!โ€ย Luna had come in.ย 

โ€œWhat is it?โ€ย 

โ€œThis chip can be the solution. We are sure to win. It will make sure toย demotivateย her as much as you can, though it wonโ€™t work if the others wear it. Since Devaki isย really nice...โ€ย Luna noticed Avnee giving a disgust look at her, โ€œ...in a bad way, of course,ย so she will make sure that she suffers from this chip. The longer she wears it, the more it will poison and weaken her body.โ€ย 

โ€œYou know, Luna,ย this is whyย I assigned you the team caption of Katya and Leroy!ย Those fools who ran away are probably realizing mistake by now.โ€ย 

She will pay for this...ย 

โœฆโœฆโœฆย 

โ€œAre you sure that theyโ€™ll let us in?โ€ย askedย Lillian.ย 

โ€œWell, we did run away from Avnee and the rest for a reason.โ€ replied Sarah.ย 

โ€œButย how are you so sure that they will trust us to fight alongside them and help Devaki and the crew?โ€ questioned Tiffany.ย 

โ€œLook, guys, I suggest that we stop worrying about all of this. I think we should just explain their rotten plan. Letโ€™s just be calm and enter. From there, we shall see how they behave towards us.โ€ย Ellie replied.ย 

Suddenly, they saw Valerie open the door. She wanted to go to her training lesson, but of course, didnโ€™t expectย visitorsโ€”especially them.ย 

โ€œISAAC! LAIBA! DEVAKI! NAINIKA! RACHEL!ย GUARDS UP! INTRUDERS HAVE ARRIVED! COME ON!โ€ย she took out her sword and began fencing with them.ย 

โ€œNo, no! Look, we came for peace! We donโ€™t want to fight you! Please, trust us! Let us in!โ€ the four begged, but Valerie didnโ€™t even bother listening to them.ย 

Just then, Devakiย arrived.ย 

โ€œSTOP!โ€ she ordered Valerie. โ€œWhy did you all come here? If Avnee wants anything, then she shouldnโ€™t send her minions here. โ€ย 

โ€œNo, we ran away from her base camp,โ€ย explainedย Sarah.ย 

โ€œSo, you expect us to listen to whatever you say? We want proof.โ€ย 

โ€œI told you! This will never work!โ€ Lillian groaned.ย 

โ€œOk, you wantย proof?ย Well, have you been lately receiving negative messages, Devaki?โ€ย 

โ€œY-yes,ย wh-why? Avnee did this! I knew she did!โ€ย 

โ€œWell, the others have bugged you. You might be feeling weak right now, and that is because this piece of technology has venom in it, and if you wear this continuously for a week...well, you might not survive. Avnee is planning on war, revenge for her childhood. For what your parents did to her. Be cautious, because this piece will not impact any of us, except you and Avnee.โ€ย 

โ€œWhy?โ€ Devakiย croakedย in fear and shock. She was hearing too many things and couldnโ€™t process all of this.ย 

โ€œBecause you two have the same blood. Are both sisters...โ€ย explained Ellie.ย 

โ€œWe are saying that we should rebel against Avneeโ€™s crew. Once we corner them, we can insert the chip inside her, and she will go down.โ€ย ย 

โ€œNo. I wonโ€™t hurt her, I cannot!ย Sheโ€™sย my sister.โ€ย 

โ€œBut does she ever show thatย loveย towardsย youย Devaki?โ€ย Rachelย askedย her.ย 

โ€œSheย doesnโ€™tย needย toย loveย me,ย butย Iย do.ย Noย matterย whatย sheย does. We will go to the Rubicon Valley, and if needed, we will fight, but I cannot let you poison my sister. She is only doing this for revenge, but I am elder sisterย and your team leader. You four, what are your names?โ€ย asked Devaki.ย 

โ€œMy name is Lillian. Her name isย Ellie,ย the one over there is Sarah, and she is Tiffany.โ€ย 

โ€œOk, Lillain, Ellie, Sarah, Tiffany, you are officially one of us.โ€ย 

โ€œThank you!โ€ the four squealed with joy.ย 

โœฆโœฆโœฆย 

โ€œAvnee?โ€ Leroy called her.ย 

โ€œWhat do you want?โ€ she answered back, ratherย rudely, though,ย expected.ย 

โ€œCome here, we need to tell you something.โ€ย 

โ€œOh no, did Katya do something wrong?โ€ย 

โ€œNo! Of course not, itโ€™s just...well, none of us did anything wrong, itโ€™s just, they reached.โ€ย 

โ€œWho?โ€ย 

โ€œThe betrayers. This chip has a micro camera designated within it, and itโ€™s capturing all of this and sending it to our data files. We found this one.โ€ย 

โ€ฆย 

โ€œThey told Devaki our plan!? NO! NO! I WILL NOT LET THEM WIN! THIS IS A BATTLE IN WHICH I DESERVE TO WIN! THEY CANNOT DO THIS TO ME! MARCH TO THE RUBICON VALLEY, AND BRING YOUR WEAPONS! WE WILL START THE FIGHT AND END IT, JUST LIKE HOW IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE.โ€ย 

โ€œO-ok, Avnee, I willโ€”โ€ย 

Suddenly, they heard a knock on their door. Katya rushed and curiously,ย opened the door.ย ย 

โ€œYour 4? Go and serve Devaki!โ€ yelled Katya and almost closed the door when Sky held it.ย 

โ€œNo, you have to listen. We never liked her in the first place. They didnโ€™t even notice that weโ€™re gone, because weย snuck out of there. I am Sky, over there is Maya, Delta, and Mania.โ€ย 

โ€œHmm, I bet Devaki sent you four here to spy on us! You know about the chip because of Lillian, Ellie, Sarah, and Tiffany, donโ€™t you?โ€ asked Katya.ย 

โ€œWell, yes. But we understand Avneeโ€™s pain and frustration about her terrible sister. They have a strong team with ferociousย members. But with us on the team, oh, weโ€™ll assure you that you will win.โ€ย they persuaded Katya.ย 

โ€œWhat is all of the commotion going on here, Katya?!โ€ questioned Avnee.ย 

โ€œThese people want to join us...they say that theyโ€™re notย spies andย can help us win. I say we recruit them, because we are in trouble. Devakiโ€™s team have a high chance of winning, and we will be in trouble. What do you say, Avnee?โ€ย 

Just then, Luna came in. โ€œWhat are they doing here? Shouldnโ€™t they be fighting for that Devaki? Avnee, please tell them to leave. They donโ€™t know who theyโ€™re messing with. I bet thoseย four told them all our plans. We already made a mistake joining them on our team, do you really want to do the same with these four?โ€ย 

โ€œKatya is right. We are in need to win the war in Rubicon Valley. We need more people in field team. If these four are all that we have left, then we have no other choice. Donโ€™t you want me to stand taller than Devaki?ย Donโ€™t you want our team to rise?โ€ย Devaki started speaking.ย 

โ€œYes,โ€ Luna mumbled quietly.ย 

โ€œThen consider this as an emergency recruitment you four. Butย donโ€™tย let me down...if you do, the consequences are high. You might be seeing the world one last time if I ever catch you guys tricking us.โ€ย 

โ€œUmm...y-yes, of course Avnee!โ€ theย four spokeย frightened.ย 

โ€œWell, let the war begin! Kamryn, Sapphire, quick! Shoot the gun, and we will start this fight.โ€ ordered Avnee.ย 

โ€œWeโ€™re on it Avnee!โ€ replied the two.ย 

BOOM! BOOM!ย 

โœฆโœฆโœฆย 

โ€œDid you hear that?โ€ asked Rachel.ย 

โ€œThat sound...oh no!โ€ Isaac was worried.ย 

โ€œQuick, Laiba, call Devaki!โ€ย yelledย Nainika.ย 

โ€œIโ€™m onย it!"ย replied Laiba.ย 

โ€œIโ€™ll let the four new recruits know what weโ€™re headed for.โ€ย Valerie said to the team.ย 

โ€œI...I hear it. Avnee came much sooner than I expected.โ€ย 

โ€œYes, but no need to worry. I had already removed the chip from you right after, so it wonโ€™t affect you too much. But, just saying, I think you should rest here. Donโ€™t come to battle arena to fight, itโ€™s not safe for you yet.โ€ย advisedย Sarah.ย 

โ€œIโ€™ll try, but itโ€™s hard to accept the fact that I should just stay here while all my friends go out there, including you, risking their lives for me. My sister doesnโ€™t deserve this. She should understand pain. But, at the same time, I love her. I donโ€™t know what to do, Sarah. If only you wouldย understaโ€”โ€ย 

Chills of glass burst out and inside their cabin. Many arrows had poked holes inside their place, destroying it.ย ย 

โ€œCOME ON FOOLISH SISTER! COME DEVAKI! COME! IF YOU REALLY ARE THAT BRAVE AS EVERYONE CLAIMS YOU ARE! COME AND FIGHT ME!โ€ Avnee yelled ferociously.ย 

โ€œDonโ€™t go Devaki! Sarah, Ellie, and I will go and fight. Tiffany will stay here with you!โ€ pleaded Lillian.ย 

โ€œNo. She is my sister, and I have to face her. This is not the quarrel in which you two should interfere in. This is ourย quarrel,ย and we should resolve it.โ€ commanded Devaki.ย 

โ€ฆย 

It had been some time, but Devaki trudged across the fields, and finally reached the Valley. She was already tired and was going to faint, but she held all in.ย 

โ€œAvnee, listen to me, I know about the chip, and yet I forgive you. Please, letโ€™s start over.โ€ย 

โ€œNO! You, mom, and dad ruined my life! Made me rot in the orphanage! How could you all do that?!โ€ย 

โ€œWe already discussed this, Avnee. We can stop fighting! Please, listen to me! We can have a new sisterhood again. I know it must hurt for you, knowing that I lived a better life, butย I care about you! I wish you would listen to me! I love you! I really do, and if you are willing to start over, I would be more than ecstatic.โ€ย Devaki tried to convince Avnee.ย 

โ€œIโ€”โ€ Avnee couldnโ€™t finish her sentence. She started sobbing, and soon threw away her weapons, and hugged her sister. And for the first time, she felt good.ย 

Devaki hugged back.ย 

โ€œI am so sorry, for all the I have done. I was just...jealous, mad that your childhood was better than mine. But now I understand what a fool I have been. I love you too, Devaki.โ€ย 

โ€œMe too, Avnee.โ€ย 

~The End~ย 



February 23, 2021 22:20

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WHOOOOOOO!! 100th STORY EVERYONE!! I INCLUDED 20 PEOPLE FROM REEDSY BASED ON THE NAMES I RECEIVED YESTERDAY!! THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT!! <3 Character Key: Main Protagonist: 1. Devaki Inadmar Main Antagonist: 1. Avnee Writes 5 People working with Protagonist: 1. Laiba 2. Rachel 3. Valerie 4. Isaac 5. Nainika 5 People working with Antagonist: 1. Kamryn (Amythyst) 2. Katya (Kate) 3. Leroy (Jose) 4. Luna 5. Sapphire 4 People who betrayed antagonist and joined protagonist: 1. Lillian Brooks 2. Ellie 3. Sarah 4. T...

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Izzie Q.
23:51 Feb 23, 2021

CONGRATS LALIA!!! You are SO talented! Sad I wasn't able to make it into this story, but maybe another one? You did really well and I love the way this turned out! You're pacing was even and diolouge was very well timed, even with all the characters!! I look forward to more and I'm so lucky to know you <3

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Thank you so much Izzie! I will write a story dedicated just for you soon! :))

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Izzie Q.
00:09 Feb 24, 2021

Awww, really you don't need to!! I don't want to add any extra pressure to you, you're already super busy! Congrats again on your 100th story! Big achievement and you've inspired me so much! Maybe I'll get to 100 one day hahah ttyl!!

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Of course I will! Consider it as my little present! :))) Oh, I'm not that busy at all! But your support means so much! <3

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Mira Caplan
23:20 Feb 23, 2021

100 stories!!!!!! WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Ellie Yu
23:52 Feb 23, 2021

This was really enjoyable to read! You have a distinct writing style that almost seems to pop. Once again, thanks so much for working my name into this story, and congrats on 100 stories!

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13:39 Feb 24, 2021

OMG!!!!!! TYSM FOR FEATURING ME!!! Also, CONGRATULATIONS ON 100 STORIES!!!

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Valerie June
23:59 Feb 23, 2021

Congratulations Laila on 100 stories!!!! I can't believe you were able to fit so many characters in one story, that was pretty impressive. Thanks so much for including me! I thought that the story had a fast pace and, in about one day, you were able to piece together a functioning story which is quite impressive. Thanks again for your beautiful stories who inspire me and so many others!

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Eddie Thawne
22:52 Feb 23, 2021

I love this story so much. Absolutely fantastic! Congratulations on your hundred stories. Well done, Laila.

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Thank you so much Eddie! Please let me know if you want a story dedicated to you! I will happily do so.

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Eddie Thawne
23:18 Feb 23, 2021

You're Welcome, Laila. Of course, I do. I'll be most joyous and grandly honored if you do so.๐Ÿ˜Š

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Yay!!! Congratulations on 100 stories Laila!!! Can I call you L? Amazing work!!!! Sorry, I can't give enough compliments, I'm literally about to go to bed. Sorry!!!

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WoO! Congrats on your 100th storyyyyy! ยท.ยธยธ.ยทโ™ฉโ™ชโ™ซ ๐“’๐“ธ๐“ท๐“ฐ๐“ป๐“ช๐“ฝ๐“ผ โ™ซโ™ชโ™ฉยท.ยธยธ.ยท (I know other people already said it but...)

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Cassia Savage
02:01 Feb 24, 2021

This is amazing! ๐Ÿ‘ congratulations for 100 stories! ๐Ÿ‘ never stop writing, Laila!

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B. W.
00:20 Feb 24, 2021

Congrats on your 100th story ^^ I don't really have a lot to say about this besides that it is really great, and I loved what you did for the prompt. I also really like what you did with everyone in it, and I'll give this a 10/10 :)

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B. W.
00:24 Feb 24, 2021

No prob ^^ Your stories have always been so great :)

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Laiba M
00:58 Mar 13, 2021

CONGRATS ON 100 STORIES!!! AND THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING ME IN YOUR STORY!!!!!!!! IT MEANS THE WORLD!! โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œYOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ...

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Hey Hari. Just saw your note, I really hope where ever u are, that you'll always be happy and never give up writing because ur a natural at it. I'm gonna miss u so much:((( Reedsy just won't be fun without u. I hope u read my message and I wanna say. Thank you so much for being my friend and reading my stories. Your messages always make my day, hopefully one day we can talk again. Your friend -Varsha

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Radhika Diksha
06:57 Mar 03, 2021

I don't know the reason due to which you are leaving( this concludes that I am not a stalker). I got to know it late, I saw your bio now. Sometimes I feel guilty when anyone leaves, if I had the power to stop I would have definitely stopped you. You are such an amazing person. I kinda saw your behavior changed from the past few months, when I had come here you were so bubbly and kind. Even you are kind now, but I see something, not "hari" in you which I used to see. You gave this platform tremendous stories for which I am grateful. We don't ...

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Eva Bhalla
16:05 Feb 28, 2021

Oh my so many characters! it's impressive you fit them all in 3000 words, this story was also nicely detailed. I love the idea, so sweet at the end. This is your 100th story? Wow! I am so happy for you! Keep writing keep improving and keep going!

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WAIT WHAT? NOOOO! Omg why?

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Kate Reynolds
13:41 Feb 26, 2021

Ok first of all CONGRATS ON 100 STORIESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *confetti* *confetti* Now onto the story!!! OMG I LOVED THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Thank you soooooo much for including meeee!!!!!! I really liked the ending (we love a calming resolution!!!) And wow just this story in generallllllllll WONDERFUL JOBBBBBB

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Kristin Neubauer
19:00 Feb 25, 2021

Congrats on 100! And congrats on keeping all your characters straight in this one. I love it when you guys do a Reedsy friends story - it fun to shift everyone into a different light for a moment. This was such a great story and, as always, so well-written. Onward to 200!

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Mary Kate
16:33 Feb 25, 2021

Congrats Laila on the 100 stories- wow, that's got to be over 100,000 words by definition :-)

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Coco Longstaff
22:26 Feb 24, 2021

100 STORIES YAY GREAT JOB!

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