๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐จ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ๐จ๐ง๐! ๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐ก ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง ๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ฒ! ๐ ๐๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐๐ซ ๐๐ฑ๐๐ข๐ญ๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ก๐๐ซ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐ฐ๐๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ฒ! ๐๐ก๐๐ง๐ค ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐๐ก ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐จ๐ซ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ฉ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ ๐ซ๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐๐๐ซ๐ง! ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐๐ข๐๐ญ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ! โค๏ธ
I will hunt you down...I wonโt let you live.
I will make sure that you die.
Beware, Devaki, BEWARE!
โHey, whatโs wrong Devaki?โ asked Laiba.
โOh...nothing, Laiba, call Rachel and Isaac for a second.โ she told Laiba.
โOk,โ
You think that you and your puny friends will be able to defeat me?
Ha!
In your dreams, Devaki!
โWhatโs up, Devaki?โ asked Isaac.
Devaki saw Rachel right behind him.
โI want to tell you something. I feel as if, Avnee...she...I donโt feel good. What have I ever done to her? Why wonโt she leave me alone? We even agreed to part our own ways!โ
โCalm down, Devaki.โ consoled Rachel. โIsaac and I have the field crew ready. Laiba is really improving her archery skills. Nainika has gotten good at the spy work. Of course, Valerie is teaching them how to do all of this. Plus, everyone has been doing excellent in their training lessons.โ
โBut still, I donโt fear that Avnee will hurt me, but I am afraid she will hurt you all.โ Devaki was upset.
โNo need to, Devaki. Trust us, we have got the crew ready. If she ever strikes, we will all make sure that we are two steps ahead of them.โ Isaac said to Devaki.
โYouโre right, Isaac, I trust my crew.โ
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โKamryn! Are you done yet?โ hollered Sapphire.
โIt isnโt as easy as you think it is Saph!โ she hollered back.
โGIRLS! Devaki must be ahead of us! What have you two been doing? Oh, let me guess, fooling around like toddlers?! I told you, Devaki has an emotional side...our parents. Well, โherโ parents, since mom and dad left me in the orphanage to rot.โ Avnee got angry at the two.
โI am really sorry, Devaki. Luna, Leroy, and Katya have reported to us that they are done with the chip. Actually, I am pretty sure that Devaki has been getting all these messages. Our transmitter has been showing us the data for when they reached her camp.โ said Sapphire.
โGood work, Saph,โ
Kamryn wasnโt looking so happy after Anveeโs words.
Smirking at Kamryn, Sapphire thanked Avnee and giggled back to her work.
โI will make sure that Devakiโs life is ruined. She has gotten all the love and compassion from everyone, and what have I got? Nothing, well, other than these sidekicks. My childhood has been ruined by you, and to get even, I will ruin your life and your sidekicks. Then, youโll finally understand all the pain and sufferings...โ Avnee chucked maniacally.
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โAvnee, I have good news for you!โ Luna had come in.
โWhat is it?โ
โThis chip can be the solution. We are sure to win. It will make sure to demotivate her as much as you can, though it wonโt work if the others wear it. Since Devaki is really nice...โ Luna noticed Avnee giving a disgust look at her, โ...in a bad way, of course, so she will make sure that she suffers from this chip. The longer she wears it, the more it will poison and weaken her body.โ
โYou know, Luna, this is why I assigned you the team caption of Katya and Leroy! Those fools who ran away are probably realizing mistake by now.โ
She will pay for this...
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โAre you sure that theyโll let us in?โ asked Lillian.
โWell, we did run away from Avnee and the rest for a reason.โ replied Sarah.
โBut how are you so sure that they will trust us to fight alongside them and help Devaki and the crew?โ questioned Tiffany.
โLook, guys, I suggest that we stop worrying about all of this. I think we should just explain their rotten plan. Letโs just be calm and enter. From there, we shall see how they behave towards us.โ Ellie replied.
Suddenly, they saw Valerie open the door. She wanted to go to her training lesson, but of course, didnโt expect visitorsโespecially them.
โISAAC! LAIBA! DEVAKI! NAINIKA! RACHEL! GUARDS UP! INTRUDERS HAVE ARRIVED! COME ON!โ she took out her sword and began fencing with them.
โNo, no! Look, we came for peace! We donโt want to fight you! Please, trust us! Let us in!โ the four begged, but Valerie didnโt even bother listening to them.
Just then, Devaki arrived.
โSTOP!โ she ordered Valerie. โWhy did you all come here? If Avnee wants anything, then she shouldnโt send her minions here. โ
โNo, we ran away from her base camp,โ explained Sarah.
โSo, you expect us to listen to whatever you say? We want proof.โ
โI told you! This will never work!โ Lillian groaned.
โOk, you want proof? Well, have you been lately receiving negative messages, Devaki?โ
โY-yes, wh-why? Avnee did this! I knew she did!โ
โWell, the others have bugged you. You might be feeling weak right now, and that is because this piece of technology has venom in it, and if you wear this continuously for a week...well, you might not survive. Avnee is planning on war, revenge for her childhood. For what your parents did to her. Be cautious, because this piece will not impact any of us, except you and Avnee.โ
โWhy?โ Devaki croaked in fear and shock. She was hearing too many things and couldnโt process all of this.
โBecause you two have the same blood. Are both sisters...โ explained Ellie.
โWe are saying that we should rebel against Avneeโs crew. Once we corner them, we can insert the chip inside her, and she will go down.โ
โNo. I wonโt hurt her, I cannot! Sheโs my sister.โ
โBut does she ever show that love towards you Devaki?โ Rachel asked her.
โShe doesnโt need to love me, but I do. No matter what she does. We will go to the Rubicon Valley, and if needed, we will fight, but I cannot let you poison my sister. She is only doing this for revenge, but I am elder sister and your team leader. You four, what are your names?โ asked Devaki.
โMy name is Lillian. Her name is Ellie, the one over there is Sarah, and she is Tiffany.โ
โOk, Lillain, Ellie, Sarah, Tiffany, you are officially one of us.โ
โThank you!โ the four squealed with joy.
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โAvnee?โ Leroy called her.
โWhat do you want?โ she answered back, rather rudely, though, expected.
โCome here, we need to tell you something.โ
โOh no, did Katya do something wrong?โ
โNo! Of course not, itโs just...well, none of us did anything wrong, itโs just, they reached.โ
โWho?โ
โThe betrayers. This chip has a micro camera designated within it, and itโs capturing all of this and sending it to our data files. We found this one.โ
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โThey told Devaki our plan!? NO! NO! I WILL NOT LET THEM WIN! THIS IS A BATTLE IN WHICH I DESERVE TO WIN! THEY CANNOT DO THIS TO ME! MARCH TO THE RUBICON VALLEY, AND BRING YOUR WEAPONS! WE WILL START THE FIGHT AND END IT, JUST LIKE HOW IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE.โ
โO-ok, Avnee, I willโโ
Suddenly, they heard a knock on their door. Katya rushed and curiously, opened the door.
โYour 4? Go and serve Devaki!โ yelled Katya and almost closed the door when Sky held it.
โNo, you have to listen. We never liked her in the first place. They didnโt even notice that weโre gone, because we snuck out of there. I am Sky, over there is Maya, Delta, and Mania.โ
โHmm, I bet Devaki sent you four here to spy on us! You know about the chip because of Lillian, Ellie, Sarah, and Tiffany, donโt you?โ asked Katya.
โWell, yes. But we understand Avneeโs pain and frustration about her terrible sister. They have a strong team with ferocious members. But with us on the team, oh, weโll assure you that you will win.โ they persuaded Katya.
โWhat is all of the commotion going on here, Katya?!โ questioned Avnee.
โThese people want to join us...they say that theyโre not spies and can help us win. I say we recruit them, because we are in trouble. Devakiโs team have a high chance of winning, and we will be in trouble. What do you say, Avnee?โ
Just then, Luna came in. โWhat are they doing here? Shouldnโt they be fighting for that Devaki? Avnee, please tell them to leave. They donโt know who theyโre messing with. I bet those four told them all our plans. We already made a mistake joining them on our team, do you really want to do the same with these four?โ
โKatya is right. We are in need to win the war in Rubicon Valley. We need more people in field team. If these four are all that we have left, then we have no other choice. Donโt you want me to stand taller than Devaki? Donโt you want our team to rise?โ Devaki started speaking.
โYes,โ Luna mumbled quietly.
โThen consider this as an emergency recruitment you four. But donโt let me down...if you do, the consequences are high. You might be seeing the world one last time if I ever catch you guys tricking us.โ
โUmm...y-yes, of course Avnee!โ the four spoke frightened.
โWell, let the war begin! Kamryn, Sapphire, quick! Shoot the gun, and we will start this fight.โ ordered Avnee.
โWeโre on it Avnee!โ replied the two.
BOOM! BOOM!
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โDid you hear that?โ asked Rachel.
โThat sound...oh no!โ Isaac was worried.
โQuick, Laiba, call Devaki!โ yelled Nainika.
โIโm on it!" replied Laiba.
โIโll let the four new recruits know what weโre headed for.โ Valerie said to the team.
โI...I hear it. Avnee came much sooner than I expected.โ
โYes, but no need to worry. I had already removed the chip from you right after, so it wonโt affect you too much. But, just saying, I think you should rest here. Donโt come to battle arena to fight, itโs not safe for you yet.โ advised Sarah.
โIโll try, but itโs hard to accept the fact that I should just stay here while all my friends go out there, including you, risking their lives for me. My sister doesnโt deserve this. She should understand pain. But, at the same time, I love her. I donโt know what to do, Sarah. If only you would understaโโ
Chills of glass burst out and inside their cabin. Many arrows had poked holes inside their place, destroying it.
โCOME ON FOOLISH SISTER! COME DEVAKI! COME! IF YOU REALLY ARE THAT BRAVE AS EVERYONE CLAIMS YOU ARE! COME AND FIGHT ME!โ Avnee yelled ferociously.
โDonโt go Devaki! Sarah, Ellie, and I will go and fight. Tiffany will stay here with you!โ pleaded Lillian.
โNo. She is my sister, and I have to face her. This is not the quarrel in which you two should interfere in. This is our quarrel, and we should resolve it.โ commanded Devaki.
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It had been some time, but Devaki trudged across the fields, and finally reached the Valley. She was already tired and was going to faint, but she held all in.
โAvnee, listen to me, I know about the chip, and yet I forgive you. Please, letโs start over.โ
โNO! You, mom, and dad ruined my life! Made me rot in the orphanage! How could you all do that?!โ
โWe already discussed this, Avnee. We can stop fighting! Please, listen to me! We can have a new sisterhood again. I know it must hurt for you, knowing that I lived a better life, but I care about you! I wish you would listen to me! I love you! I really do, and if you are willing to start over, I would be more than ecstatic.โ Devaki tried to convince Avnee.
โIโโ Avnee couldnโt finish her sentence. She started sobbing, and soon threw away her weapons, and hugged her sister. And for the first time, she felt good.
Devaki hugged back.
โI am so sorry, for all the I have done. I was just...jealous, mad that your childhood was better than mine. But now I understand what a fool I have been. I love you too, Devaki.โ
โMe too, Avnee.โ
~The End~
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WHOOOOOOO!! 100th STORY EVERYONE!! I INCLUDED 20 PEOPLE FROM REEDSY BASED ON THE NAMES I RECEIVED YESTERDAY!! THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT!! <3 Character Key: Main Protagonist: 1. Devaki Inadmar Main Antagonist: 1. Avnee Writes 5 People working with Protagonist: 1. Laiba 2. Rachel 3. Valerie 4. Isaac 5. Nainika 5 People working with Antagonist: 1. Kamryn (Amythyst) 2. Katya (Kate) 3. Leroy (Jose) 4. Luna 5. Sapphire 4 People who betrayed antagonist and joined protagonist: 1. Lillian Brooks 2. Ellie 3. Sarah 4. T...
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CONGRATS LALIA!!! You are SO talented! Sad I wasn't able to make it into this story, but maybe another one? You did really well and I love the way this turned out! You're pacing was even and diolouge was very well timed, even with all the characters!! I look forward to more and I'm so lucky to know you <3
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Thank you so much Izzie! I will write a story dedicated just for you soon! :))
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Awww, really you don't need to!! I don't want to add any extra pressure to you, you're already super busy! Congrats again on your 100th story! Big achievement and you've inspired me so much! Maybe I'll get to 100 one day hahah ttyl!!
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Of course I will! Consider it as my little present! :))) Oh, I'm not that busy at all! But your support means so much! <3
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100 stories!!!!!! WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Thank you!
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This was really enjoyable to read! You have a distinct writing style that almost seems to pop. Once again, thanks so much for working my name into this story, and congrats on 100 stories!
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Ahh, thank youuuuu!
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OMG!!!!!! TYSM FOR FEATURING ME!!! Also, CONGRATULATIONS ON 100 STORIES!!!
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Congratulations Laila on 100 stories!!!! I can't believe you were able to fit so many characters in one story, that was pretty impressive. Thanks so much for including me! I thought that the story had a fast pace and, in about one day, you were able to piece together a functioning story which is quite impressive. Thanks again for your beautiful stories who inspire me and so many others!
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Of course, Leroy! ;) I had a blast writing this story!
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I love this story so much. Absolutely fantastic! Congratulations on your hundred stories. Well done, Laila.
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Thank you so much Eddie! Please let me know if you want a story dedicated to you! I will happily do so.
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You're Welcome, Laila. Of course, I do. I'll be most joyous and grandly honored if you do so.๐
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Of course...also, I surely will.
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Hello Laila...
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Yay!!! Congratulations on 100 stories Laila!!! Can I call you L? Amazing work!!!! Sorry, I can't give enough compliments, I'm literally about to go to bed. Sorry!!!
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WoO! Congrats on your 100th storyyyyy! ยท.ยธยธ.ยทโฉโชโซ ๐๐ธ๐ท๐ฐ๐ป๐ช๐ฝ๐ผ โซโชโฉยท.ยธยธ.ยท (I know other people already said it but...)
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This is amazing! ๐ congratulations for 100 stories! ๐ never stop writing, Laila!
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Congrats on your 100th story ^^ I don't really have a lot to say about this besides that it is really great, and I loved what you did for the prompt. I also really like what you did with everyone in it, and I'll give this a 10/10 :)
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Thank you so much B! :)
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No prob ^^ Your stories have always been so great :)
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I don't think you'll see this, but I just wanted to do this because it feels...right, you know? I don't know why you left, and I would like to know, even though I can't. It makes me cry every single time I see that someone has left Reedsy. I almost left myself. In fact, I did, and then something almost...pulled me back. If you ever do come back, though, please reply to this comment or comment on one of my stories. Let me know in some way that you are active again. I will be looking out for that. Your stories are amazing, and as one of the...
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CONGRATS ON 100 STORIES!!! AND THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING ME IN YOUR STORY!!!!!!!! IT MEANS THE WORLD!! โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR โค๏ธ...
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Hey Hari. Just saw your note, I really hope where ever u are, that you'll always be happy and never give up writing because ur a natural at it. I'm gonna miss u so much:((( Reedsy just won't be fun without u. I hope u read my message and I wanna say. Thank you so much for being my friend and reading my stories. Your messages always make my day, hopefully one day we can talk again. Your friend -Varsha
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I don't know the reason due to which you are leaving( this concludes that I am not a stalker). I got to know it late, I saw your bio now. Sometimes I feel guilty when anyone leaves, if I had the power to stop I would have definitely stopped you. You are such an amazing person. I kinda saw your behavior changed from the past few months, when I had come here you were so bubbly and kind. Even you are kind now, but I see something, not "hari" in you which I used to see. You gave this platform tremendous stories for which I am grateful. We don't ...
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Oh my so many characters! it's impressive you fit them all in 3000 words, this story was also nicely detailed. I love the idea, so sweet at the end. This is your 100th story? Wow! I am so happy for you! Keep writing keep improving and keep going!
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WAIT WHAT? NOOOO! Omg why?
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Ok first of all CONGRATS ON 100 STORIESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *confetti* *confetti* Now onto the story!!! OMG I LOVED THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Thank you soooooo much for including meeee!!!!!! I really liked the ending (we love a calming resolution!!!) And wow just this story in generallllllllll WONDERFUL JOBBBBBB
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Congrats on 100! And congrats on keeping all your characters straight in this one. I love it when you guys do a Reedsy friends story - it fun to shift everyone into a different light for a moment. This was such a great story and, as always, so well-written. Onward to 200!
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Congrats Laila on the 100 stories- wow, that's got to be over 100,000 words by definition :-)
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