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Judas felt he knew everyone that came into the Mauve Room. He knew their sunken eyes, the desperate gazes as they searched in vain for a person to help them. He always found it ridiculous that they would look to an Executive for help, but they would still look at him, every time without fail. A deep red glowing band circled their necks, and he knew they had committed heinous crimes, but he couldn’t help feeling amused. They were like beggars, with all their money squandered, and he a nobleman. Even if they gambled their way to glory, he would never stop feeling amused at them.


That morning, it was a woman. Judas never got to know their names. He only remembered their faces, shelving them in a photo album of sorts stashed in his brain. This one had no nose. He’d never seen one without a nose. They were like circus animals, the prisoners. It was quite amusing to him.


“What you laugh at?” The woman asked. She had that crude accent that was customary of those from the Outskirts. It only made Judas chuckle more to himself. He had been doing his job for some forty years, but he never decided to be polite. The guards didn’t care; they had captured the offenders. They had tied them up, interrogated them, slapped them a couple of times. Polite wasn’t a word in their Begspeak-Noblespeak dictionary.


“Oh, nothing. Just the hole on your face.” With that solemn sentence, Judas grabbed the chalice of mauve liquid and threw it on her face. Then he looked away.


Five minutes later, the screams left the room, and he turned around to clean up the remains.


Judas lived in the Mauve Room. Well, it was more an extension of it that he slept and ate in, but everything else, he did in there. He couldn’t even remember that time before his recruitment where he had multiple rooms to himself. Over time working here, Judas had learned to thrive in solitude. It was quite nice once you got used to it.


For fifteen weeks after the execution, Judas woke up and tended to the laboratory. The more of the mauve liquid he poured on an offender, the more he had to recreate and tend to. It was a complicated process for a rare commodity. Early in his career, he had to have a servant to oversee him. Judas didn’t feel any shame for putting the man out of a job once he had learned it enough. Once, years later, after time had passed, the man came back. Judas smiled at seeing his face, but frowned at the red band around his neck.


After twenty weeks of preparation, a file appeared at his mail-slot. The mail-slot was the only work thing that lived in his bedroom, sitting there in a metal outfit. He would have to execute the offender that the file contained.


This time, it was a cold, blue-eyed face. He had blonde hair and piercing cheekbones. It looked as if he had chiseled his face out of ice and spray-painted it pale white. Judas felt no amusement, for the first time, as he looked at the face and sighed… it wasn’t often that he had to execute a nobleman. There would be no laughing or smiling involved, only a solemn ceremony of death. There would have to be a significant period of mourning.


When the day came, ten weeks later, Judas was feeling dread. Dread didn’t normally accompany an execution. They were very rare occasions, like this one. His feet felt heavy as soon as he swung them out of bed, flopping down and sticking to the floor. As he pushed on his shoes, they curled and felt uncomfortable and itchy.


There he waited until the guards pounded on the door. In those times, Judas would try to shut off his mind, to be entirely averse to all things happening, though of those there were very little. When the sound came, he rushed to the door in a flurry of having a purpose. There stood the guards, waiting with the cold-faced nobleman.


Judas kept his eyes down. The nobleman was higher-ranked than him, any nobleman would be, so he had to show them respect even in death. As the cold eyes set down upon him, he felt a shiver. It was cold, cruel, unforgiving. Curse the man who sent it, he thought.


Judas felt unnaturally alone in a room filled with five people. He felt as if the Mauve Room was the one place he’d rather avoid at that time, as if there was no worse room to live in. At the time, he kept his mind silent, as if to shield his thoughts and emotions from the intruder. How funny, he would think later, that when one feels out of place they are so much more efficient in any task laid upon them!


“Well? Get on with it!” the guard shouted. They were an impatient lot, not willing to be any more in the presence of the prisoner than Judas did. As a rule, they prefer not to take up much time with the ceremonies; if they finished early, the bar would be open until midnight. The guards thought with one mind, moved with one motion, mirrored across the four.


Judas had no concept of time, not as the guards did. In a way, he was as helpless as the prisoners, locked up in his little cell. His little room.


“All right, I’m getting on,” He fumbled. There was an awkward silence, the prisoner’s gaze fixed upon Judas, unflinching, uncaring. He picked up the vat of purple fluid, took a deep breath and cast his eyes down. Then, looking away almost instantly, he dumped it on the nobleman’s head. He had done the deed. Now there would be months of waiting… waiting in the silence for something to do other than wait.


Sure enough, twenty weeks later, the file came. In those weeks where there was nothing, barely anything to do, he would shut his mind off to anything, hole himself up in the walls of himself. Deep within the recesses, he found profound peace in waiting. That was the only constant in a life like his.

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Radhika Diksha
14:10 Mar 16, 2021

It's not what I said the last time. Sorry, it was late in the night and I got confused. The story was great. The details weren't little or overboard. They are perfect. The end was fine. You have done a terrible journey and I love your writing style as usual. Nice work. Looking forward to your stories.

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14:11 Mar 16, 2021

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! That's so sweet!!

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Radhika Diksha
14:14 Mar 16, 2021

YOU ARE DOING A GREAT JOB AND IMPROVING DAY BY DAY. bY THE WAY CAN YOU COMMENT ON THE 2ND PART OF MY SERIES.

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14:14 Mar 16, 2021

THANKOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! SURE!!!!

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13:05 Mar 13, 2021

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15:32 Mar 13, 2021

LUKE! HI! We haven't talked in what feels like FOREVER!

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17:43 Mar 13, 2021

TIS TRUTHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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17:51 Mar 13, 2021

*screams because we're talking again*

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17:51 Mar 13, 2021

SO HAPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYY *squeals in joy*

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21:49 Mar 12, 2021

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00:31 Mar 13, 2021

Lollllllll Isaac then Sia and I started this and I got this like twenty times after I sent it to Aerin

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01:04 Mar 13, 2021

Ahahaha lol

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13:49 Mar 12, 2021

ENJOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! This came out of nowhere with no prompting...

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B. W.
03:22 Mar 19, 2021

Hey

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11:08 Mar 19, 2021

Heyyyyyyyy

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B. W.
14:18 Mar 19, 2021

How are ya?

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14:28 Mar 19, 2021

Great!! Lol all of our convos start this way

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B. W.
16:25 Mar 19, 2021

Oh, I guess they do

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Izzie Q.
17:07 Mar 16, 2021

HI LUKE!! Wow, nice job, you have 41 stories! We all look up to you <3 How've you been?? I need a couple story ideas and I would love for some of your help!

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17:10 Mar 16, 2021

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank you!! That is SO. SWEET. Ok, what genre are you thinking of writing?? One that I was thinking of was for the love-hate prompt and it had something to do with déja vu.

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Izzie Q.
02:49 Mar 17, 2021

Oooh yeah!! I kinda wanted to experiment with deja vu or something like...lucid dreaming? thoughts?

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11:50 Mar 17, 2021

Well deja vu would be very hard but with dreaming you would really have to embrace the weirdness of it, like in my story Comatose. That's basically dreams. Its really interesting because dreams seem weird and complicated when portrayed realistically.

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Izzie Q.
01:45 Mar 18, 2021

Yeah! I was thinking about doing something where like, the whole story, the character can't tell if they are lucid dreaming or not.

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12:00 Mar 18, 2021

That's great!! My one advice is to make it as jumpy and weird and complicated as possible, because dreams run with each thought you have.

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Izzie Q.
17:09 Mar 16, 2021

How was your weekend? I had a picnic with some friends! It was really windy :) At one point, my friends and I left our stuff by the area we were having a picnic in and went to the playground, which is really close to the picnic area and while we were chilling on the playground, a guy dressed in all black ran up to our stuff, grabbed something and ran away. Upon investigatiobn, we realized he'd taken my friends royal farms chicken and fries XDD EVEN THOUGH THERE WAS EXPENSIVE MINI BACKPACKS LAYING ALL AROUND

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Radhika Diksha
14:11 Mar 16, 2021

By the way, you can remove My name from your bios list and I have posted the 2nd part so I would love your comment on it.

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14:16 Mar 16, 2021

OH RIGHT OOP

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12:52 Mar 16, 2021

HELP DYSTOPIA

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13:03 Mar 16, 2021

LOL WHAT DO YOU MEAN

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17:43 Mar 16, 2021

This is dystopian, right? I'm addicted

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17:48 Mar 16, 2021

HA LOL YERP IT IS!!!!!!

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00:41 Mar 16, 2021

Hi Luke! We haven't talked in a while . . . NEW EMOJI PUZZLLLLEEEEEE

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11:48 Mar 16, 2021

HIIIIIIIIIIIIII AME!!!!!!!!!! YERPPPPPPPP

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22:43 Mar 16, 2021

I don't know what it is (when do I do XD) You're pfp is so cuteeeee

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22:57 Mar 16, 2021

Heeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehee I know I saw it and I was like YAS.

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23:00 Mar 16, 2021

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23:04 Mar 16, 2021

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Polly R.
22:40 Mar 15, 2021

does ur name mean black thoughtfully handshakes white on a plane 😭

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22:50 Mar 15, 2021

Nerp!! Its a book.

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Polly R.
00:39 Mar 16, 2021

wow these are so hard 😭😭😭

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11:32 Mar 16, 2021

Lol that's trueeeeeeeeee eeeheeeheeee

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Polly R.
14:12 Mar 16, 2021

ur so meannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn can you give me a past one you did you really liked?

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14:14 Mar 16, 2021

Heeheeheeheehee ok one that I loved trolling people with was Don Quixote...

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Laiba M
18:21 Mar 15, 2021

🧑🏾‍🤝‍🧑🏻🛩💭... Man handshakes man plane thought? Man collaborates man plane of thought??????? T-T

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18:33 Mar 15, 2021

Nope!! Notice the lack of color in the clothes... and also what book starts with a plane?? And centers around thoughts or... perhaps memories???

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Laiba M
19:59 Mar 15, 2021

Ahh T-T Ohhhh, are these book titles????

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20:25 Mar 15, 2021

Nerp!! They're references to things in the story... and its a dystopian YA classic. You should totally get thisssssssssss

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Laiba M
22:44 Mar 15, 2021

Aww. I'm probably not going to get thissssssssssssss :( The Plane Effect? It talks about memory loss, has a plane in the title, and is dystopian!~

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22:50 Mar 15, 2021

Lollllllllllllllllll well nope.

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Radhika Diksha
14:04 Mar 15, 2021

Finally added images to my series, you can kindly check.

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14:11 Mar 15, 2021

YAYYYYY!!!!!

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Sia S
05:37 Mar 15, 2021

PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!PART TWO OUT!

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11:51 Mar 15, 2021

YAY!YAY!YAY!YAY!YAYYYYYY!!!

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Sia S
14:47 Mar 15, 2021

EEEEEEEEKEEKEKEKEKEKE

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Amany Sayed
22:09 Mar 14, 2021

Hello Luke! I liked this one, it was short but well written. I love how differently everybody went with this prompt. I feel like these new prompts are your style, are you writing anything? Anyways, I love the name Judas! I love the ominous end to this story too. Overall, nothing to really critique. Keep writing!

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00:27 Mar 15, 2021

Thank youuuuuuuuu Amany!!! No, nothing at the moment...

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Mazie Gray
20:03 Mar 14, 2021

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17:57 Mar 14, 2021

Ooooh new emoji puzzle!!! Any hints?

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18:00 Mar 14, 2021

Heehee its a dystopian classic

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18:08 Mar 14, 2021

Oooooh dystopiannnnn Ummmm The Handmaid's Tale? It doesn't fit the emojis lol, but it's the only one I can think of rn XD

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18:12 Mar 14, 2021

Nerppppppppppppp

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18:21 Mar 14, 2021

I knewww ittttt 18th, 19th, 20th, or 21st century?

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18:29 Mar 14, 2021

I think 20th...

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Radhika Diksha
14:35 Mar 14, 2021

The new part is out. Would appreciate your comments on this.

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B. W.
02:13 Mar 14, 2021

Hey

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15:45 Mar 14, 2021

Heyyyyyyyyya

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B. W.
15:58 Mar 14, 2021

How are ya?

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16:34 Mar 14, 2021

Amazing!!! Both of my stories were approved!!!

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B. W.
16:46 Mar 14, 2021

They were? Was it taking a while for that to happen or something?

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16:46 Mar 14, 2021

Nope, I'm just happy about it.

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19:24 Mar 13, 2021

Heylooo

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20:53 Mar 13, 2021

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20:58 Mar 13, 2021

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03:42 Mar 14, 2021

INFINITE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLS

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Kate Reynolds
17:29 Mar 13, 2021

OMG RADHIKA'S BACKKKKKKKKK

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17:42 Mar 13, 2021

YESHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Kate Reynolds
17:57 Mar 13, 2021

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