I stared at the street waited. And waited. What was I waiting for? My friends. It was book night again, and I was the host.
โCeleste! Iโm here!โ
It was Luke, decked with books in his arms and clutching a bulging backpack. I already knew he had Ayn Randโs โAltas Shruggedโ.
โCome in! Oh, is Mira coming?โ
โSheโs behind me! And Jennie, Nainika, and Kate!โ
I felt relieved that they didnโt forget. I would be weeping if that happened.
Everybody arrived with books and papers, and we settled down on the carpeted floor. Then my annoying sister comes in.
โCELESTE! DID YOU DO IT?โ
โI didnโt make waffles.โ
โDONโT TELL YOUR FRIENDS!โ
โGo away to Victoria Gardens.โ
โDONโT GO ON THE CARPET!โ
โWhatever, Sam.โ
She stormed off.
Rose, despite her name, is very bothersome. With bubblegum pink hair, dark brown eyes and tan skin, she was very pretty on the outside. On the inside, she was a nasty brat. Even if she was one year older, she should not be bossing me around. I could never understand what came out of her mouth, even if I was an interpreter.
โWhy was she so hyped about the floor?โ
โSapphire!โ We all shout
I hurry to open the screen door. She comes in, goes to our circle, and sits in the recliner. I think about her question. Why was Rose so upset about the floor? She had ignored me for the better part of a month now, so....?
โEveryone! Get off the rug!โ
Luke starts grumbling about โlosing his spotโ and Jennie quickly stops goofing around with a book on her head. Mira cleans up the knocked over pile of books, and Nainika speedily goes to stand with Sapphire, who is causally eating chips. I chuckle at everyoneโs reaction and try to pry off the carpet. Itโs heavier that it looks.ย
โHelp?โ
Mira rushes in to help, Luke tailing her and Sapphire following.
โGuys! Why are we doing this-โ The words barely left her mouth before we pull it up and-
Black shapes come out and smack us in the face.
โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค
ย I scream as a sliver-eyed person stares at me.
โCeleste! Itโs me! Luke!โ
He looks so different. His normal boring black hair has become flamboyant brown. His sweatshirt and pants are shiny and slick, and his aura is sliver, like his eyes. Luke hands me a mirror. I yell.
I have a head of purple hair, and rainbow irises, and my hands are a stunning purple too. I have a purple-pink adventure dress on, with a lot of pockets, and boots with high heels. I felt confused and excited. Confused as to where we are. Excited as in I LOOK AWESOME.
โAre you the only one here in my...โ
I realized we are not in my house. And all my other friends are gone.ย
Luke is about to respond when I here a sound.
โLuke! Celeste!โ
โMIRA!!!โ
I run towards her but stop to looke at her breathtaking beauty.
She has super long wavy black hair, with a hint of blue on the tips and a braid, inverted style. Mira has eyes that change from black to brown continuously.ย She has a short dress, and black combat boots. Her sapphire blue aura makes her very pretty.
I hug both of them. I donโt like losing people or friends.
โJ..Jennie....a....and..Kate...are..coming!โ Mira says, panting.
I glance up and see a maroon and mint figure. When they get close I run up to them.
Jennie has light magenta hair, deep and shiny. She has soft grey eyes and a magenta aura. Her flannel and tights looks very handsome. She cracks a smile at me. I return it.
Kate has chestnut hair tied in a ponytail, piercing blue eyes.ย She also has a watch. It stores all her clothes, convient for anything. She was wearing a tank top and sweatpants, perfect for this humid weather. I envied her; even in this strange world her still has the perfect invention.
Sapphire appears out of nowhere and I gasp again for the third time.
Her black hair has many sliver streaks in it, and she had glowing icy white eyes that look deep in my soul. She is wearing a cloak, like me, but has a hood and shadows around it. Sapphireโs menacing black aura clings to her. After she reunites with us, Mira speaks.
โWhere is Nainika?โ
We all gasp and immediately start looking for her.
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
ย โNainika! Na-โ
I pause to wipe the sweat off my head.
Luke grimaces.
โANY LUCK?โ Jennie hollers to us. She and Kate are busy chopping down trees. We were sent to a fantasy world with deserts and forests. Naiki could be anywhere. Luke and Mira were scouting the desert, but came back, and me and Sapphire are in the river part.
โNO JEN!โ
I bend up and help Sapphire up too. Then I do what I do best: think and wonder.
I think that my other friends are going to miss us.
I think that Rose would be angry for using my big brain.
I wonder what the aura are for. Powers? Fashion? Just an aura? I let my mind wander, and it wanders so far that I only come back when I hear Kate screeching in my ear.
โI found her!โ
I follow Kateโs gaze and find a young woman. I can not believe that it isย
โNainika!โ
She looks up from her flower-picking. Her brown-gold hair hangs around her back and she has a hazelnut eye and a eye-watering green one. Naiki has a flannel on, like Jennie, jeans, and a pair of cute converse shoes. Her aura is bright cream, like ice cream. It mixes nicely with her eyes and hair.
We all go to hug her.
โDonโt get lost again!โ
She laughs.
โWhen the weird shapes came out, I was thrown here and landed on this!โ She points to a box. As I get closer, I read what it says:
This is the propriety of Ms. Rose.
We all gasped and everybody looked at me. I looked at that word.
R O S E
Hi guys! So this is the first story of a very long series! I will expand on the characters and their personalities sooooon! And sorry if you didnโt get featured, but you will def be in the next one! Peace โฎ๏ธ!ย
Also, can you figure out what me and Rose said?
Ps. Sapphire is a shade she can use shadows and teleport and turn invisible hehehhehee
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wait wait waitt omg another realisation What if i write a story with your story and Maya's smooshed together? OMG nvm I 'm not talented enough scratch that XDDDDDD
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XDdDdDDdDdD ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
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O M G AAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG omg wait what if I'm a shade? like from kotlc? I CAN'T STOP SAYING OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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HEHE YES MAYBE YOu ARe A SHADE
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I AM SORRY I ADDED WOT U LOOK LiKEeeEeeE
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Noooo that's okayyyy!!!!!!!!! MAyBe i Am....
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Go bac in da story u is a shaddddddde
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WHAT OMG
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;D
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Yeaaaassss Beautiful Loved it soo much
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:D
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Hey!! Part 3 of Game of Lions is out your character is amazing!!!
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Awesome story, Celeste! I love how you included a ton of Reedsy writers!
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:D Tanks, Lily!
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Youre welcomeeeeeee!!
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:D Yay! Be on the lookout for part twooooo
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I willlll
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YAY!!!!
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Great story. There's a great balance between dialogue and description.
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New story!!! Dead End.
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heya
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hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey, Celeste. Just wanted to let you know that I just submitted a story you ๐ฎ๐ช๐จ๐ฉ๐ต be interested in... ;)
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Did you like it??? ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ
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I finished our collab! I'm going to submit it in the next few minutes! :D
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I will post a code in my bio then!
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okieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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CELESTE. AMONG US TODAY WITH ME AND MY irl FRIEND!!! 11 AM EASTERN TIME!
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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its tooooooo lateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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REREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE maybe next time XD
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REREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE maybe next time XD
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Celeste whaddya think - https://soundcloud.com/user-383767046
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Dat is HYPEeEeeEee
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lol he's my "friend" and I keep wondering WHY HE ISN'T FAMOUS YET
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can we chat? YESH HE IS HYPEPEPEPEPEPEPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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I gtg go somewhere but I will be back @3:30 my time (MST) we can chat then (if your still there)
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Okie!
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Nevermind. I think they deleted their account or something!!
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WOOoOoOo
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YaYyaYyaYYY
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HEhEEeH
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I need help...https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/proveme-wrong/ Check their comments!
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OH NO
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I talked to the downvoter person. I think they will stop troubling the marshmallows!
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OMG THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you SOOOO much for including me! I loved meeeeee!!!!!!!! Tell me when you post the second part! :D
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I WIiLlLllL THaNKs :D
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YaaAAaAaaYyYY!! nO pRobLeM!
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UWU
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oOMOOOMG soooo goooooood!!!!!! heheeheheh i love me btw. Handsome.. tru, tru. GSAP PLOT TWIST ROOOOSEEE!!!!?????/ squeeal plus pls spam some here for extra karma
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Heheheheehehehe tHanKs AnD HoW dArE yIu ROoOoZsEeE Okieeeee
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Heheheheehehehe tHanKs AnD HoW dArE yIu ROoOoZsEeE Okieeeee
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Heheheheehehehe tHanKs AnD HoW dArE yIu ROoOoZsEeE Okieeeee
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I HEARD YOU GOT DOWNVOTED NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT MY QUEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNN
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AWWWWwWWwWWW IMMA GO UPVOTE YOUuUuUuUuuUuU
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nooooooooooooooooooooo you are the top priorityyyy!!!!!
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TOoOoOoo LATEeEeEeEeeE
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noooooooooooooo spammmmm!!!!!
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YOU TOO. NOW.
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THANKs..>.>.>.LkjHreasarhJ
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THANKs..>.>.>.LkjHreasarhJ
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Hahaha whatโs that
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Downvoting is when you lose points, or when a person presses the arrow on the right next to a comment and deletes a karma point of yours. Upvoting is pressing the up arrow and giving them a point.
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Who is a werid girl named Celeste? And why is there a person called Mira? What? Sorry Iโm werid
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These are the profile names. In the story, there are characters that the author decided to name after the people with those profile usernames.
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Luke? Who is Luke? Iโm werid
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luke, don't take offense... werid is Penny Loveheart's way of saying amaxing... its like an inside joke they only have with themself as of now. See their bio and you'll understand!
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I just came across your profile and I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey thanks I like your name and yeah, itโs werid. (Sorry. Check my bio.)
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Thank you! (I LOVE YOUR BIO. SO VERY MUCH.)
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Aw thank you you are nice like the marshmallows. I actually know someone on here irl (Thanks )
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Hi! This is the first thing I read on Reedsy, and I'm looking forward to reading more! I was drawn in by your name :) Wow! Other people on Reedsy are in your stories! How do you do that? I'd like to be in one. Could you give me some pointers? I'm just a newb. Also, what do any of the things mean? Downvoting? Upvoting? Likes? What's my library? How do I submit? How long are the contests? Sorry if that's a lot, answer what you can :) Thanks for the story! Emerald
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;D Awww, sure! XD Upvoting is good, downvoting is bad. Library is the storyโs you like. You make a story and then press submit. And u can follow! Iโll follow u-
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Thanks! I'll follow :)
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;D
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Friens?
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Sure!!
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Y A Y
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NEW STORY
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Awesome story, Celeste! I really love this style of writing lol! Let me know if you're being downvoted!!! Have a wonderful day :) Love, Upvoter
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:D Okie!!
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