The Doll Maker’s Reflection

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Thriller Suspense Horror

Margaret's weathered fingers traced the delicate stitches along the doll's hemline, her pride swelling at another perfectly executed creation. Afternoon sunlight filtered through her workshop's lace curtains, casting intricate shadows across the wooden workbench where dozens of half-finished dolls lay in various states of completion. The rich scent of chamomile tea mingled with the mustier odors of fabric scraps and aging wood.

"There you are, little one," she murmured, adjusting the tiny bonnet on the doll's head. "Ready for Sarah's birthday tomorrow."

At seventy-eight, Margaret found her greatest joy in crafting these unique companions for the local children. Each doll was a testament to her six decades of experience—every stitch deliberate, every fabric choice meaningful. She'd always believed that a properly made doll could be a child's most trusted confidant.

As she reached for her scissors to trim a loose thread, her elbow knocked against her sewing basket. The wicker container tipped, spilling its contents across the floor with a clatter. Sighing, Margaret lowered herself carefully to her knees, gathering scattered spools and needles. Her joints protested the movement, a reminder of time's relentless march.

That's when she saw it.

Partially hidden beneath her workbench sat a doll she didn't recognize. Margaret's breath caught in her throat. The doll wore a dress of faded lavender cotton—her favorite color—and its silver-gray hair was arranged in the same neat bun she'd worn for the past forty years. But it was the face that made her hands tremble: high cheekbones, thin lips pressed into a gentle smile, and eyes the color of pale blue forget-me-nots. Her eyes.

"Impossible," she whispered, reaching for the doll with trembling fingers. "I never made you."

The doll's porcelain skin felt cool against her touch, its weight familiar yet wrong in her hands. Every detail was perfect—too perfect. The tiny crow's feet at the corners of the eyes, the slight asymmetry of the nose that she'd always been self-conscious about, even the small scar above her left eyebrow from a childhood accident.

Margaret placed the doll on her workbench, her heart pounding against her ribs. She'd made hundreds of dolls over the years, but never one of herself. It went against everything she believed about her craft. Dolls were meant to be companions, not mirrors.

The workshop suddenly felt colder, the familiar comfort of her creative space replaced by an unsettling awareness of the dozens of glass eyes watching her from the shelves. The doll's gaze seemed to follow her as she paced, her mind racing through possibilities. Had she made it during one of her occasional bouts of insomnia? No, she would have remembered the hours of work required for such detailed features.

A sharp rap at the door made her jump.

"Miss Margaret?" called a small voice. "Mom wanted to know if Emily's doll is ready?"

"Just... just a moment, dear," she called back, her voice shakier than she intended.

When she turned back to the workbench, the doll was gone.

Margaret froze, her eyes darting across the cluttered surface. She dropped to her knees again, ignoring the protest of her joints as she searched under the bench, behind boxes of fabric, anywhere the doll might have fallen. But it had vanished as mysteriously as it had appeared.

The knocking came again, more insistent this time.

"Coming," she called, pulling herself up with the help of her chair. As she smoothed her apron and tried to compose herself, Margaret couldn't shake the feeling that something fundamental had shifted in her ordered world. The boundaries between creator and creation had blurred, and in that blurring, something unsettling had taken root.

She cast one last glance at her workshop before heading to the door, unable to escape the sensation that among the dozens of dolls watching her from their perches, one pair of forget-me-not blue eyes followed her movement with particular interest.

***

Three weeks passed, and Margaret began to doubt her memory of that strange afternoon. The incident with the doll might have been a dream, she told herself, or perhaps a momentary delusion brought on by fatigue. Yet she couldn't shake the feeling of being watched, especially during the quiet hours when she worked alone in her workshop.

One morning, while preparing for her weekly visit to church, Margaret stood before her bedroom mirror, pinning her hat in place. A flash of lavender in the reflection caught her eye. There, seated in her rocking chair, was the doll.

The rocker moved ever so slightly, though no breeze stirred the heavy curtains.

"No," Margaret whispered, gripping the edge of her dresser. "This isn't possible."

The doll's painted lips seemed different now—the gentle smile had twisted into something closer to a smirk. Its porcelain skin showed new lines around the mouth and eyes, mirroring the very wrinkles Margaret had noticed forming on her own face in recent months.

She forced herself to turn around, half-expecting the chair to be empty. But the doll remained, its head tilted at an angle that made Margaret's neck ache in sympathy. As she watched, frozen in place, the doll's right hand twitched, fingers curling into a small fist.

Margaret fled the room, her hat forgotten, her heart thundering in her chest. She didn't stop until she reached her kitchen, where morning sunlight painted everything in safe, ordinary colors. Her hands shook as she poured herself a glass of water, spilling some on her Sunday best.

"Get hold of yourself," she muttered, pressing the cool glass against her forehead. "You're being foolish."

The telephone's sharp ring made her jump, water sloshing onto the linoleum floor. She answered it, grateful for the distraction.

"Margaret?" It was Helen from church. "Are you all right? We missed you at service."

Margaret glanced at the clock on her wall and gasped. It was nearly noon—she'd been standing in her kitchen for over two hours.

"I'm fine, dear," she lied, her voice steadier than she felt. "Just feeling a bit under the weather."

"Well, you should have seen little Sarah. She brought her new doll to show everyone. Such beautiful work, as always. Though..." Helen paused, and Margaret's grip tightened on the receiver. "She said the strangest thing. She told her mother the doll had been crying real tears."

Margaret's water glass slipped from her nerveless fingers, shattering on the floor. She barely registered Helen's concerned voice as she stared at the doorway to her bedroom. The doll sat there now, on the floor just visible through the gap, its face turned up toward her. A single, glistening tear tracked down its porcelain cheek.

"I'll call you back," Margaret whispered into the phone and hung up.

She approached the doll slowly, as one might approach a wounded animal. Its dress—the same shade of lavender she wore now—showed signs of wear it hadn't had before. The silver-gray hair had begun to thin at the temples, just like her own.

"What are you?" she breathed.

The doll's head turned, ever so slightly, the movement accompanied by the faint sound of porcelain grinding against porcelain. Its forget-me-not eyes, once merely painted, now held depth and shadow. Margaret saw something moving in those depths—memories, perhaps, or possibilities. She saw herself hunched over her workbench, younger and full of promise, threading needles by candlelight and breathing life into cloth and clay. She saw decades of solitude, of choosing her craft over companionship, of watching other women her age surrounded by families while she surrounded herself with dolls.

The tear on the doll's cheek caught the light, and Margaret realized with horror that it wasn't alone in its weeping. Her own cheeks were wet.

***

The summer heat turned oppressive as August dragged on, but Margaret kept her workshop windows sealed tight. She'd moved her workbench to face the door, refusing to turn her back on the rows of dolls that lined her shelves. The lavender doll appeared with increasing frequency now—on the kitchen counter during breakfast, in the garden while she tended her herbs, at the foot of her bed in the dark hours before dawn.

Its face had grown haggard, bitter. The once-neat silver hair now hung in stringy strands, and its dress showed dark stains that appeared to seep from within. Margaret noticed her own reflection beginning to match it, though she couldn't say which changed first—the doll, or herself.

"Miss Margaret?" Tommy Phillips stood in her workshop doorway, shifting from foot to foot. "Mom says you haven't answered your phone. She's worried about Katie's doll."

Margaret looked up from the half-finished doll on her workbench—her first attempt at work in days. Her hands trembled as she set down her needle.

"Katie's doll?"

"The one she got last month? Its... its face changed." Tommy's voice dropped to a whisper. "She says it looks angry now. And old. Really old."

A laugh bubbled up from Margaret's throat, high and brittle. "Dolls don't change, Tommy. They're just dolls."

"But—"

"They're just dolls!" The words erupted from her with unexpected force, causing Tommy to stumble backward. Behind him, on her highest shelf, the lavender doll sat with its legs dangling, watching. Its lips moved soundlessly, mouthing the words along with her.

Tommy fled, the workshop door banging shut behind him. Margaret slumped in her chair, exhaustion seeping into her bones. When had she last slept properly? Eaten a full meal? The half-finished doll before her swam in her vision, its features blurring into something familiar and terrible.

A soft thump made her look up. The lavender doll now stood on her workbench, its dress darkened as if dipped in ink. Its face—her face—had transformed into a mask of malice, deep cracks spreading across its porcelain surface like spider webs.

"You can't be real," Margaret whispered.

The doll's head tilted at an impossible angle, its neck creaking. When it spoke, its voice was the sound of scissors snipping through silk.

"We're all real, Margaret. Every single one you've made. Every dream you've stitched, every hope you've painted, every loneliness you've poured into porcelain and cloth."

Margaret's gaze darted to the shelves where hundreds of dolls sat watching. Had their positions changed? Were their heads turned just slightly more in her direction?

"I never made you," she insisted, but her voice wavered.

The doll took a step forward, porcelain feet clicking against wood. "Didn't you? Aren't we all pieces of you, scattered across the years? Little fragments of your soul, given away one stitch at a time?"

Another step. Dark liquid—not quite water, not quite blood—dripped from the hem of its dress.

"But you kept the bitterest piece for yourself, didn't you? Locked it away behind your smile and your gentle words. Behind your gifts to other people's children."

Margaret stood so quickly her chair toppled backward. The sound of it hitting the floor was echoed by soft thumps from the shelves as other dolls began to move, their heads turning, their tiny hands reaching.

"Stop this," she commanded, but the words emerged as a plea.

The lavender doll's cracked face split in a wide smile. "We can't stop, Margaret. We're not finished yet. After all..." It gestured to the half-completed doll on her workbench, which now bore the face of a young girl Margaret recognized—herself, sixty years ago, when she'd first picked up a needle and thread.

"...you still have so much left to give."

***

Helen found Margaret's workshop door unlocked on a crisp September morning, unusual for the early hour. The ancient bell above the door chimed her arrival, its cheerful tone at odds with the shadows that cloaked the room.

"Margaret?" she called, stepping carefully around scattered fabric scraps and upended boxes. "We've been so worried. No one's seen you in days."

Wan sunlight filtered through grimy windows, illuminating dust motes that danced like lost spirits. Helen's foot struck something that rolled across the wooden floor with a hollow sound—a spool of lavender thread, unwinding itself like a surrendered secret.

The workshop seemed different somehow. The familiar shelves of dolls that had always given Helen a slight sense of unease now stood empty, their collecting dust the only evidence they'd ever been there. Yet the room didn't feel vacant. If anything, it felt more crowded, as if the air itself had grown thick with watching things.

She found Margaret seated at her workbench, back turned, head bowed over her work.

"There you are! We've all been—" Helen's words died in her throat as she reached for Margaret's shoulder.

The figure at the bench was not Margaret. At least, not entirely.

Its skin had the same sheen as fired porcelain, its silver hair the texture of carefully stitched threads. The lavender dress it wore seemed to shift between fabric and painted clay, and when it turned—oh God, when it turned—its face was a perfect mask of Margaret's features, frozen in an expression of serene acceptance.

"Hello, Helen," it said in Margaret's voice, though its porcelain lips didn't move. "I've had the most wonderful revelation."

Helen stumbled backward, her heel catching on an oversized sewing needle. She grabbed a shelf for support, her fingers coming away sticky with something dark and viscous.

"You see," the thing that both was and wasn't Margaret continued, rising from its chair with clicking, grinding sounds, "I finally understood what was happening. All these years, I thought I was putting pieces of myself into my dolls." It gestured to a small doll on the workbench—the only doll left in the workshop. It bore the face of a young Margaret, its eyes bright with hope and possibility.

"But it was the other way around, wasn't it?" The porcelain creature twisted to face her with an unnatural fluidity, its joints moving in ways human bones never could. "They were putting pieces of themselves into me. Every stitch, every painted smile, every secret wish whispered to them in the dark. They were making me into something new. Something better."

Helen's back hit the workshop door. Her trembling hands found the handle, but it wouldn't turn.

The creature that had been Margaret picked up the young doll from the workbench. "I've saved this last piece, Helen. Would you like to see what I become when I add it? When I'm finally complete?"

Helen screamed then, a sound that was swallowed by the watchful silence of the workshop. As her consciousness began to fade, the last thing she saw was the creature lifting the final doll to its chest, pressing it into its porcelain flesh like a missing puzzle piece. And all around them, in the dust and shadows, Helen could have sworn she saw hundreds of dolls materializing on the empty shelves, their tiny hands reaching out in triumph or supplication or perhaps—most terrifying of all—welcome.

***

Helen's family found her trembling in the workshop doorway, her eyes fixed on the empty workbench. The shelves that had once held hundreds of dolls stood bare, save for a thick layer of dust and something darker that seemed to seep from the wood itself.

They searched for Margaret, of course. Filed reports. Asked questions. But all they ever found was a single doll in a faded lavender dress, seated at her workbench. Its silver hair was arranged in a perfect bun, its forget-me-not blue eyes bright with something that might have been triumph or resignation or perhaps understanding. Its porcelain hands were positioned as if threading a needle, though no thread was visible.

The curious thing was, everyone who looked at the doll saw something different. The children saw a kindly old woman with gentle hands and a warm smile. Their parents saw a talented artisan, proud of her life's work. But those who had known Margaret longest—those who had watched her pour herself into every doll she'd ever made, stitch by careful stitch—they saw only Margaret herself, finally becoming the thing she had always wanted to create: a perfect vessel for other people's dreams.

They sealed up the workshop after that. But sometimes, late at night, young girls press their faces against the grimy windows, drawn by a light no one else can see. And in their dreams that night, they find themselves holding dolls with faces that look remarkably like their own, each one wearing a tiny dress of perfect, faded lavender.

October 27, 2024 07:43

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9 comments

04:07 Nov 06, 2024

So creepy and imaginative. I once read a very scary story about a demonized doll that turned each owner into someone different and dark. It's like I am sensitized and easily frightened by creepy dolls. Had to read til the end. What an imaginative tale.

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Carol Stewart
01:04 Nov 05, 2024

Such a smooth read. Our creations are all little pieces of ourselves until we become our creations. I get the feeling there's a depth to this story that might not be immediately obvious. Much enjoyed.

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Helen A Smith
21:39 Nov 02, 2024

What is it about dolls? Excellent story, Jim. Loved the way her spirit seemed to enter these dolls. Creepily good.

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Darvico Ulmeli
18:01 Nov 02, 2024

Porcelain dolls always gives me the creep. Nice one Jim.

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KA James
14:48 Nov 02, 2024

Just when you think a good horror trope is about played out; just goes to show that a good imagination can always come up with a new angle. Yes, dolls are meant to be kids playthings but dolls can still be creepy as hell, and you mix the two back and forth very well to give us something different.

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Jim LaFleur
15:57 Nov 02, 2024

Thank you for your kind words!

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Shimmer ⭐
17:16 Oct 29, 2024

Wow! It had a perfect mix of thrill and horror. Jim, it was a truly remarkable story!

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Mary Bendickson
23:27 Oct 27, 2024

Stitched in details. Creature created.

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Alexis Araneta
17:39 Oct 27, 2024

Jim, another spectacular one. The imagery you used for the doll-making bit truly is charming. The chilling bit at the end was also well-executed. Great work !

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