Hi.
My name is Carolina Shaw.
If you feel like you might be one of us, turn away. Trust me, you donโt want this life.
Still reading?
Okay, donโt say I didnโt warn you.
Let me just say, Algebra classes are dumb.
You mess around with x and y for long enough, and you start to ponder why it matters. I mean, the only jobs a person would have that they would need this for are being a math teacher or a scientist. I donโt plan to become either. Just sayinโ.
I look to the other side of the table, just because Iโm bored, and see a girl named Nainika. I never really knew her, but recently the teacher changed seating, putting me next to her. Weโve never exchanged more than a few words.
โHey,โ I said.
โHey.โ She said, not even looking up from her paper.
โDo you like this stuff?โ
โNo.โ She said, raising her head up to look at me. โI just do it because I know I have to do it eventually.โ
โThatโs fair.โ I said.
โYeah.โ
โSo, what are your hobbies?โ I asked.
โMy hobbies?โ She thought for a moment, then said, โI really like to cook.โ
โOh. Cool.โ
โYeah, I guess.โ
Since she was new this year, I decided to ask, โWhere are you from? I noticed that youโre new here.โ
โVanaheim.โ
โWhere is that?โ
โOff Yggridasil, the Worldโs Tree.โ
โYou mean the Vanaheim of Norse Mythology?โ
She nods.
โWow! Thatโs really cool! Did you ever meet any gods?โ
โYeah. I met Frey once. He was summery.โ
โOh. Thatโs cool.โ
โYeah.โ
โHey, you want to eat lunch with me and my friends?โ
โHuh?โ She looks back up from her paper. โSure.โ
The bell rang, and I walked out of the Algebra class, and to my locker to where my friend Addison was waiting.
โHey.โ I said, and offered my hand for a secret handshake.
She obliged, and said, โHow has your day been?โ
โEh, so so. You?โ
โSame.โ
โOh, and by the way, weโll be having someone new sitting with us at lunch today.โ
โOh?โ
โHave you met Nainika Gupta?โ
โOh, yeah! She seems cool.โ
โGood.โ I close my locker. โSee you at lunch.โ
In science class, we were doing chemistry. Can I just say, I dislike science almost as much as I dislike chemistry.
Mrs. Lewis tries to make it fun, but sometimes she falls short. Who can make learning the periodic table fun?
I looked over at my lab partner, Luke Howard. We didnโt hang out much, he was a popular kid, and I was...not. He hung out with his friends, Jennifer Smith, Celeste Majikku Kocho, and Maya Emerson. Not usually anyone else.
We didnโt usually talk unless we had to, we were just so different.ย
Eventually, he looked over at me and said, โHey. Did you hear about the pit?โ
I looked over. โWhat pit?โ
โThereโs a huge sinkhole on the other side of town. Happened and unearthed some radioactive stuff, supposedly.โ
โInteresting.โ
He cleared his throat. โYeah. Weโre gonna go later. You want to come?โ
โEh,โ I said. โIโll think on that and get back to you.โ
โOh, come on.โ
โI didnโt say no, I said Iโll think about it.โ
Although I was really thinking no.
At lunch that day, I found my Addison and Nainika at the lunch table.
โSorry,โ I said. โI got caught up.โ
โYeah.โ Addison said.
We ate our lunch, playing get to know you games. Of course, me and Addison knew each other well, but Nainika was new, so we wanted to get to know her better, of course.
Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Luke get up from his table. He casually strolled across the cafeteria like he owned the place.
โHey, Shaw,โ He said. โThink about that offer yet?โ
Addison and Nainika looked at me, eyebrows raised.ย
โYeah, I decided Iโm good.โ I said.
โWait, what offer?โ Addison asked.
โHe wants me to go to โThe Pitโ with him and his friends later.โ
โThe Pit?โ Nainika asked. โThere is definitely something paranormal about that place, I can tell. It gives off vibes.โ
โWhy not, Shaw?โ Luke taunted in front of the entire cafeteria. Everyone had stopped to watch. โScared?โ
โNo!โ I said, clenching a spork in my closed fist. โFine, Iโll go, but only if my friends can come with me.โ
โSure.โ Luke smiled. โThe more, the merrier.โ
He sauntered back to his table, and the cafeteria unfroze.
The cold wind whipped my jacket.
โWe shouldnโt have come. I knew they would flake and make us look like fools.โ I said.
โNot necessarily.โ Nainika said. โLook.โ
A group of figures appeared on the horizon. I sighed.
Addison put her hand on my shoulder. โHey, itโll be fine.โ
โI hope so.โ I mumbled.
โHey, Shaw!โ Luke called. โGlad you came!โ
I whispered to Nainika, โCan we go now?โ
โNo,โ She whispered back. โI need to investigate this.โ
I sighed.
And we walked to the edge of the crater.
A wind blew out of the sinkhole and up into my face, ruffling my hair around. That was obviously where all the wind had come from, and it was swirling around the sinkhole.
Nainika licked her finger and held it up, like she was testing the wind. She made an unsure face and brought it back down.
โSee, not so bad!โ Luke said. โNow, who wants to go down?โ
โIโll pass.โ I said, shivering from the cold wind.
โOh, come on, Shaw.โ
I groaned. โFine.โ
All seven of us trudged into the pit. I thought I heard a bush rustle, but when I turned around, there was nothing.
Luke smiled. โSee, this isnโt so ba-โ
All of a sudden, an ultraviolet light fills the space of the sinkhole. We are all blown backwards by an unseen force.
And the world goes black.
โCarolina! Wake up!โ My mom shouts.
I sat up and rubbed my eyes. I looked around. I was in my room.
How did I get here?
โMom?โ I said.
โYes, honey?โ
โWhat time did I get back yesterday?โ
She pauses, and thinks. โAbout four-ish. You came in, said you were tired. And you went to sleep.โ
Why do I not remember?
โUm, thanks.โ I say, and get ready.
I find Nainika in the hallways at school.
โWhat happened yesterday afternoon?โ
She rubbed her forehead and clenched her eyes shut. โI donโt know, Carolina, but itโs weird. Itโs like a time burp that everyone seems to remember but us.โ
I giggled. โTime burp.โ
Just then, I felt someone tap me on the shoulder. I turned around, and Luke was standing there.
โHello?โ I said.
โWhat happened yesterday?โ
โA time burp.โ
โWhat?โ He said with a confused look.
โAsk Nainika,โ I said as the bell rang. โBye.โ
Lunch. All seven of us ate together, trying to figure out what had happened.โ
โI-โ Luke started, but then went rigid.
โLuke?โ Celeste said. โHellloooo?โ She waved a hand in front of his face.
Jennifer shook him. โLuke?โ
He took a big breath, and disappeared into a cloud of blue light.
โLuke?!โ We all said at once.
โWhere did he go?โ Addison asked, looking under the table. The rest of the cafeteria thankfully hadnโt noticed our predicament.
Nainika glanced around the cafeteria, her eyes narrowed.
Just then, the blue light returned, and Luke reappeared in the same spot.
โLuke!โ We all said at the same time.
โWhoa. That was weird.โ He said, rubbing his eyes like he had just woken up from a nap.
โWhere did you go?โ I asked.
โAtlas Shrugged.โ
โWhatโs that?โ Addison asked.
Luke drew in a breath, ready to fight/explain it, but before he could, Jennifer did.
โItโs an old book he likes. By Ayn Rand. Itโs dystopian.โ
โOh.โ Addison said.
โIt is not old!โ argued Luke. โWhen you say old, you imply it's not good anymore. Atlas Shrugged will never die!โ
โOhhkkkaayyy,โ I said. โReel it in. What do you mean when you say that, though?โ
โI was in the world of Atlas Shrugged. Like, all the characters were there, and I was there with them. I met them.โ
โWow.โ I said. โDo you guys think this has anything to do with-โ
I looked up. โMaya. What are you doing?โ
Maya had been tossing a milk up in the air. Now, it hung suspended in midair.
โI donโt know.โ She said. โThat is really weird.โ
โGreat time for carving numbers into our eyes.โ Celeste and Jennifer said at the same time.
Celeste looked over at her. โHow did you know I was going to say that?โ
โI dunno.โ Said Jennifer, looking at her hands.
Nainika fell backwards as a wolf came running in and jumped on her chest. The wolf snarled, and it had grey fur with odd purple tips.
โNainika!โ I said, and the air became thick with ozone.
โWhoa, Carolina, chill. This is my pet wolf. And how are you doing that?โ
โDoing what?โ I looked down at my body. Electricity crackled across my clothes, wreathing my body in light.
โAhhhh! Get it off!โ I tried to brush it off, but it just wouldnโt go.
โOh, no.โ Nainika said.
โOh no, what?โ Celeste asked.
โThat sinkhole, yesterday.โ She said. โThe light. It was from one of the other eight realms.โ
โRealms?โ I said. โWhat?โ
โRealms,โ Nainika said, โAre the different worlds, different branches of Yggdrasil. Thereโs Midgard, that's here. The human realm. Then thereโs Vanaheim, where Iโm from. The home of the Vanir, or summery gods. Frey, Freya, et cetera. Then, thereโs Asgard, the home of the Aesir. Thor, Odin, Tyr, et cetera. And no, Thor does not look like Chris Hemsworth and he does not have an Australian accent. He gets quite angry when people even vaguely suggest that. Anyway, Alfheim, home of the Light Elves. Then, there's Jotunheim, home of the Jotuns, or giants. Nivadellir, home of the dwarves, Niflheim, the realm of ice, fog, and mist. Muspellheim, home of the fire giants and demons. And finally, Helheim, home of the goddess Hel and the dishonorable dead. And no, she does not want to destroy Asgard.โ
I brushed my hands together. โWell, all my questions are answered.โ
โAnyway,โ She continued, โWe got our powers when the Bifrost opened within close proximity of us, which is amazing that we didnโt disintegrate. A god gave us these powers, and gods only do good things for mortals when they want something.โ
โSo, we should hear from a god soon?โ I ask. โWith a mission or something?โ
โPrecisely.โ
โWhoa.โ
โYeah, itโs strange. So, soon-โ
HEROES, a voice boomed. GOOD TO KNOW MY EXPERIMENT WORKED.
And then everything turned colorful, and the world dissolved.
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MY FIRST REEDSYCAST! Character key: Carolina = me Addison = Amethyst Jennifer = Jennie Celeste = Celeste Nainika = Nainika Maya = Maya Luke = Luke (LitLover) Mrs. Lewis = Lalia (sorry! I'll include you more in the next part, I promise!) I hope I got your characters right! I hope you guys enjoy reading as much as I enjoyed writing!
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OMG I LOVE THISSSSSS im happy your using Norse mythology, everyone seems to forget about it luke strutting in the cafeteria is a whole new mOoD XD what's my power again? i forgot lol ahhhhhh I'm waiting for part 2 :DDDD ~ Amethyst
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:D Thanks! Your powers are...*checks notes* flying and mind reading!
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Ooh yayyyyyyy I wanna see what happens in part 2!!!
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:D i gotta figure that out first lol
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Hahahahah yeah
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First of all, I agree with everything in your bio. Second of all, I love norse mythology and I love friend stories, so this is epic. Can I be in one? For your nomination-- Hermione, and you might not know her, but Tsunami from Wings of Fire. A nerd and a dragon.
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yes, of course you can be in! ah, thank you! i will write that down. norse myhology is pretty rad. :)
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:) Can my power be mind reading? Or does someone already have that one?
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yeah, someone already has that, but its okay! a lot of us have the same powers, (namely flying) so im not too caught up about that.
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I could also be really strong or could talk to animals or something.
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okay! i actually am writing the scene where you're being introduced. we're half sisters in the story, the daughters of thor
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hey carolina this is not at all related, but I was on Amazom.com and I thought you might like this..? https://www.amazon.com/Indie-Room-Decor-Aesthetic-Collage/dp/B08PCBLW7B/ref=sr_1_17?dchild=1&keywords=aesthetic&qid=1611863884&sr=8-17
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wow, looks cool! thanks!
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Very, very Percy Jackson esque, lol. But I love Percy Jackson, so I enjoyed it. Question, though - am I Maya or is it Maya Emerson?
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its maya emerson, sorry. thanks for reading though!
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Totally okay! Maya Emerson is super nice.
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:D she is, and you are too!
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Why, thank you!
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Np!
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YESSSSSSSSSS Carolina....you're amazing honestly I love you :D:D:D Just caught a small typo "The bell rang, and I walked out of the Algebra class, and to my locker to where my friend Addison...." Addison waited?? Idk what you wanted there, but you forgot to put it in! AND EVERYTHING ELSE??? AAHHAHAHAH I loved how I explained the nine realms and GHAAA IT WAS BEAUTIFUL and er...Chris Hemsworth is Australian, not British XD YAY!! awesome start :D:D more parts, right??
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OH MY GOSH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU IMA FIX THAT RIGHT NOW ๐คฆ๐ผโโ๏ธ gosh i feel dumb Anyway, thank you! Yes, you are definitely the smart one, irl and in the story, haha more parts!
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aha no problemo!! YESSS I LOVE THAT!!! and I'm gonna be posting a new story soon!!
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okay i'll keep on the lookout!
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Pls cont. this :D
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workin on it! none of the prompts fit tho...i may just randomly post
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Yeeeees
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So, I have to shoutout that line "You mess around with x and y for long enough, and you start to ponder why it matters. I mean, the only jobs a person would have that they would need this for are being a math teacher or a scientist. I donโt plan to become either. Just sayinโ". It feels so sarcastic, yet they actually are pretty in-depth with the style. ANd... percy jackson vibes. Sometimes, I hate when people write things like this, but you really executed it well! (The fact that, even after taking a myth class, I still know the gods mostl...
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Haha same! Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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is it weird that my picture of you in my head looks really similar to your profile pic? XD ๐คจ๐คฃ๐
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haha i dont personally think soooo...
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hmmmm XDDD
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THIS WAS SO GREAT!!! I liked the nose mythology!!! Also, Mira is truly my best friend, so maybe add her in there. In addition to that, I loved my bookworminess, but I seemed a little mean :( I'm a nice person, right? Also, I'm like SOOO NOT POPULAR!
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Thank you! You get nicer, I promise. Im thinking that the snarkyness is just kind of a front for your character but he kinda lets down his walls since he's with good friends and he's not really expected to be anything. :)
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NEW STORY
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Ok
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhh fine
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W H A T Hang on still processing this crazy amazing story Ok, I think I'm good now. Oh my gosh, Carolina!!! This was amazing! You were able to incorporate enough worldbuilding where you could understand the story and what was happening but it wasn't a huge info dump. This was a really cool idea and I cant wait for the next part!!!!
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Thank you!
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M A G IC XD you included ittt! YES THaNKs SO MUCH! Wot is Jenโs power..?
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YES! Her power is seeing the future! :D
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Ooohhhhhh Include more demonslayer XDD This is a series right.......? PlS BE SERiES
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Yes! I definitely plan to do more Demonslayer in future parts.
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yA SSsSsS\ XD thanks
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OHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Intriguing... I LOVE IT
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thanks! sorry for the late reply ;P
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This was so ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, Carolina!!! I loved how the story started out with the line, "If you feel like you might be one of us, turn away. Trust me, you donโt want this life." It was perfect. XD This was so fun to read, the way it was in a more modern setting but with a fantasy/sci-fi twist. OMG when you explained why we all had powers all the sudden, that was really cool. Lol a time burp. ๐๐ฐ๐๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ story, I can't wait for future parts! :DDD โจ โจ โจ โจ โจ โจ โจ โจ
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Thank you so much! I got my first line inspiration from Percy Jackson!
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No problem! Oh, Percy Jackson, I love those series! Do you have a favorite book? :)
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The Last Olympian! Hbu?
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Oooh that one's good! I like The Lost Hero and House of Hades. :)
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:D My favorite from Heroes of Olympus is Mark Of Athena, just not what happens at the end. D':
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