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Adventure Friendship Fantasy

As the sun casts itโ€™s bright light over the horizon, lighting up the world, all the magical beings in Soarville are waking up. Yes, my species are magic folk, and I am one of them. My name is Yue Shukufuku. I am the daughter of King Tobu, leader of the Sky and Everything On It. Our kingdom is a peaceful one, but lately, I have been getting reports of strange beings in the Ocean, where the Mermaids live. And after that happens, I get weird messages in my head.

One Earth girl, almost a chief.

Six fire spirits all linked together.

One Mermaid unlike her kind.

Add a smart nomad with fire in his spirit.

Then comes two sisters with different elements.

Plus a Sky Flyer who is your best friend.

And you can stop them, or the world will end.

Who is โ€œthem?โ€ Why am I getting this message?

A voice cut through my monologue.

โ€œYue! Yue, come here!โ€

I swoop on over to my best friend, Andromeda. Sheโ€™s studying the ground below us, where the fire spirits live.

โ€œYou called? Whatโ€™s going on?โ€

Andromeda's normally cheerful face was filled with worry. She pointed to the ground below.

โ€œI think the Fire spirits are in danger!โ€

Sure enough, water was pouring into the Lava Lakes, and extinguishing the fire.

Even though I had no idea why, my body immediately reacted and I flew in the air.

โ€œWe have to save it!โ€

Without questioning my bravery; or maybe stupidity, my best friend also glided into the air, and together we dived towards the ground. But when we neared the lava, I realized that we couldnโ€™t do this. I slumped in defeat. But Andromeda jumped up and down happily.

โ€œYue! Look!โ€

A green figure with piercing eyes was sucking up all the water. I felt grateful. If father found outโ€ฆ

โ€œHello!โ€

I looked around; the figure was calling me. I glanced at Andromeda, and she nodded.

โ€œThank you for saving the Lava village! Who are you?โ€

โ€œIโ€™m Diane, the next chief of the Earth Folk. And you are?โ€

I did a double take. That was why she could stop all that water from destroying the village! She was a chief - in - training.ย 

One earth girl, almost a chief.

Thatโ€™s her!

โ€œIโ€™m Yue, daughter of King Tobu.โ€

Diane raised her eyebrow.ย 

โ€œYou're a Sky Flyer! But what are ya doinโ€™ here?โ€

Andromeda figitied nervously; I gulped.

โ€œUmโ€ฆ I was being foolish and thought I could save this.โ€ I gestured to the Lava Lakes.

โ€œThat was foolish, but I think you had good intentions.โ€

I nodded. Andromeda looked at Diane, then said:

โ€œDiane, would you like to come with us to see if the Fire Spirits are okay?โ€

โ€œOf course! Does this mean Iโ€™m your friend?โ€

She nodded.

โ€œYes!โ€

โ€œThen letโ€™s go!โ€ I shouted.

In the village:

After Diane got burnt from the flames, Andromeda stayed with her to heal her. I went into the village.

โ€œOops!!โ€ I slammed into a girl, who was fingering her sapphire ring and looking around.

โ€œS-so sorry about that!โ€ I said, helping her up.

โ€œNo,no itโ€™s okay! Iโ€™m waiting for my sisters and brother to get here.โ€

I shot her a look.

โ€œWho are they?โ€

Immediately, four girls and one boy shot out of nowhere.

The sapphire girl grinned.

โ€œIโ€™m Syvis, and this is Aria, Issac, Noelani, Maโ€™li, and Aderyn. We are all the protectors of this village.โ€

Six Fire Spirits, all linked together.

Thatโ€™s them.

โ€œSo, who are you?โ€ asked Maโ€™li

โ€œIโ€™m Yue, and I was here to check on this village. But you guys are far more interesting.โ€

โ€œWhy are we interesting? Have you been stalking us?โ€ Sneered Aria.

โ€œAria, Iโ€™m pretty sure sheโ€™s not a stalker.โ€ Noelani said softly.

โ€œI agree. She didnโ€™t even know our names!โ€ Issac, the only boy,ย remarked.

Aderyn smiled.

โ€œI guess weโ€™ll find out. Yue, why are we interesting?โ€

Aria gave me a dirty look. I pressed on.

โ€œY-you guys are in the message! The message that they keep sending me!โ€

All of them looked like I had invited them to an underwater party.

โ€œAre you alright? We havenโ€™t heard the message. And who are they?โ€ Issac question.

ย โ€œ I-i keep getting messages from- I donโ€™t know, ancients? And Iโ€™m looking for these people- I think. And we can stop the world from ending.โ€

I recited the poem for them.

โ€œThat sounds interesting...I think I know who the โ€˜nomadโ€™is.โ€

Whipping around, I summon the windโ€ฆ only to find an unamused boy, with glasses on and a load of books in his hands.ย 

โ€œSeriously, am I that big of a theart?โ€ The nomad picked up his fallen books, only to be knocked down again.

โ€œOBBELUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!โ€

they separate, Obelus looks me up and down.

โ€œAh..So you are the daughter of King Nobu, correct?โ€

โ€œUh, yeah.โ€

โ€œI knew it. You looked familiar. I read about you.โ€

He turned around to chat with the 6 fire spirits. Apparently they 're all friends.

A smart nomad with a will of fire.

I looked at all of them, figuring out a plan. I needed them to trust me- but how? I would have to come back to this.Laughing, the Fire Spirits enfold him in a huge group hug. Whenย 

โ€œWhere can I find you guys? Iโ€™ll...Iโ€™ll come back.โ€

โ€œOh. Just next to the tent with piles of books.โ€

As I turned, I heard Aria screech โ€œSEE? SHE IS A STALKER!โ€

Back outside:

โ€œDiane? Andromeda? You guys need to come with me.โ€

They immediately nodded and I summoned a wisp of wind to carry us into the Ocean. As I prepared to walk in, a voice saidย 

ย โ€œWAIT!!!โ€

And I crashed head first into the water.ย 

~ ~ ~

โ€œAre you okay?โ€

โ€œUgh..What planet am I on?โ€

โ€œUmโ€ฆ Well, sorry about that. I canโ€™t control my powers yet. Add that to the fact that I can turn into a human, and you have got a pretty weird mermaid.โ€

I looked up, into the eyes of the girl.

One mermaid different from her kind.

โ€œThen you are..?โ€

โ€œFlidaerae of the Ocean.โ€

March 02, 2021 04:47

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ugh im terrible at this XD Cast! Yue= Yours truly Andromeda=W.w. Skybelle Diane= Lunaaaaa Syvis= Saph! Aderyn= Ames Ma'li = Sarah <3 Issac=Issac Noelani=Maya Aria= Lone wolf (She choose frenemy) Flidaerae= NAINIKAAAAA If you weren't included, or weren't included enough, PLS TELL MEEEEEEE NEXT ONE COMIN NEXT WEEEEKKKKK

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Nainika Gupta
13:32 Mar 02, 2021

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MOTHER OF FREAKING GODS I IS AMAZING

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Nainika Gupta
16:33 Mar 05, 2021

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHAHHAH XD

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Radhika Diksha
04:53 Mar 02, 2021

Loved the characters of the story, the dialogue was amazing and clean. I loved the interaction and way of the representation of the characters. Good, keep writing. The plotline is amazing and I think you worked really well on it. Lovely story.

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Radhika Diksha
04:55 Mar 02, 2021

three weeks ago. Actually, I left writing here, but I will read all of the stories and give my feedback to you.

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Radhika Diksha
04:55 Mar 02, 2021

three weeks ago. Actually, I left writing here, but I will read all of the stories and give my feedback to you.

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TJ Squared
15:38 Mar 02, 2021

ooh can't wait for next week! :))))))))))

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Nainika Gupta
13:30 Mar 02, 2021

WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT CELESTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AM I FREAKING FLIDAERAE??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH other than that oml so goooooooooooooodddddd *fangirling over herself* EHHHH WAIT WAIT WAIT IS LUKE OBLEUS IN BOTH OUR REEDSYCAST STORIES???!!! LOLL AHAHHAHA OKOKOKOOKKOKOOK STILL HYPERVENTILATING AHHHHH

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YYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS GIRL YOU AREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *XD* YES HE IS XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IUE@HOUIHWPUIJPIOJQWOIHNCDIU:HDEJUQW :D

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Nainika Gupta
17:00 Mar 02, 2021

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CELESTE IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGG *STILL FANGIRLING* AHAHAH LOLL HES USING THE SAME NAME LOLLLLLLLLL AHAUHIUEATHEUTHAHGOIAHEHTEWTHIUEH(EWY(*#Y%*(U#@)JOGNJSNGSDJ

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OFCCCCC YOU AREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU HAVE TO BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *XDXD WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART HEJEJEJEJEJEJEJEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH* IKRRRRRRR XD HEGDUDIHEUQ@HJUIWGHYGHIUO@E&O&IF^FF&CTG#IYEW# XD

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Nainika Gupta
17:16 Mar 02, 2021

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU ARE TOO KINDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AKEHOJHTOAUTHUEOTHAUOGHANOHG#)*%#)*% &#Q)*&%OTHAJG

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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IU@HD@GBIU@GBIUJBG@GBWHGBLHIGBLHQUHBGE@UHBGEU

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Jay DMer
12:55 Mar 02, 2021

I want to take your form, but I haven't passed your quiz/ never taken it. Btw your fantasy is great. So lively and spiritful. :)

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12:50 Mar 02, 2021

This was awesome!!!! I larbed my inclusion and i be so coooooooool!!! Also, the names are very palatable and easy to read, so great job on that!!! Love the title.

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Nainika Gupta
13:31 Mar 02, 2021

wooowwwww do i sense some f avoritismmmmm *smirks* XD

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13:35 Mar 02, 2021

XD

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Nainika Gupta
13:38 Mar 02, 2021

XDXD

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13:42 Mar 02, 2021

I'm not choosing any favoritesssssssss lol

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Nainika Gupta
13:46 Mar 02, 2021

Uh-huh *smirks*

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Lol, thanks Luke!! I'll include ya more, you'll just be the smart person that keeps us outta trouble :D XD THE CONVO UP THERE

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17:03 Mar 02, 2021

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD XD

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12:35 Mar 02, 2021

Thank you so muchhhh for including meeeeeee!!!! (Also, RESPECT for naming yourself after the moon. If you don't understand, watch Avatar. The one with the elements, not the one with the blue people. Please.) This story was amazingggggg!!! It was the type of fantasy I enjoy. A few select people from different groups with different powers coming together because of a prophecy to save the world from being destroyed. And you executed it incredibly. I loved the different groups, the plot, the characters, and just the idea of this whole story. M...

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OFCCCCCCCCCC I LOVE AVATARRRRR (the blue one....not so much) AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Thanks! I needed a series sooooooo <3333333 *ScrEeCh* XD Thanks youuuuuuuuuuuuu <3333333

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17:05 Mar 02, 2021

Yaaaaaaay someone else likes A:tla!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ You're welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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YAYAYAYAYAYYYY WOw SO manyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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18:23 Mar 02, 2021

Do you ship any characters in A:tla??? Ahahahahahahhahaa lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll (I'm not beating that) XD

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OOh, I love the part at the beginning with italics. A little spooky, but very like magical, right? The only question/critique I have is "โ€œSeriously, am I that big of a theart?โ€ The nomad picked up his fallen books, only to be knocked down again." WHAT IS A THEART???? Am i supposed to know?

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
12:49 Mar 12, 2021

AYYYYYYYY, THE REEDSYCAST IS OUT! Sorry, I'm late to the party hehe. I really enjoyed it, but if you'll excuse me I *will* say the story felt kinda fast, but I totally get if you wanted to introduce the characters in one story so it doesn't bother me too much. So good job, I love my character already!

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AYYYYYYYYY It's fine :DDD XD yeah... But the story will go longer for pt 2. :DD Awww <3 Thanks Sarah!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
18:38 Mar 12, 2021

OH YAY PART TWO!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
18:40 Mar 12, 2021

like just in general (looks and personality) or just personality?

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15:33 Mar 08, 2021

Wow, this is a FANTASTICALLY FANTASTIC Muffin! It's creating a fog of susssssssspense............ Any way for me to squeeze in? XD Happy Today!

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10:16 Mar 09, 2021

=) Seriously? HAPPY TODAY!

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10:16 Mar 09, 2021

=) Seriously? HAPPY TODAY!

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Nainika Gupta
16:33 Mar 05, 2021

3 NEW STORIES CELESTTTEEEEEEEE AND ARANTHIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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Hii Celeste!!! Could I have a second power for your character in THotF? I want to make her super OPXD

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Lilliane Wei
01:13 Mar 05, 2021

ARE YOU LEAVING?????

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Lilliane Wei
01:10 Mar 05, 2021

AWESOMEEEEEEE I LOVE REEDSY CASTSSSSSS AHAHAHAHAHHA

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TJ Squared
05:00 Mar 04, 2021

hehehehe part 7 out :) you is in it again :))))

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DONT WORRY IM FINE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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ARE YOU SUREEEEEEEE? <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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:O that's my reaction -> :O XD this is gonna be a superrrrrrr cool series Celeste!!!!! the worldbuilding is super good :> also, I filled out your form again, is that fine?? ~ Amethyst

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:O TANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW OFCCCCCCCC :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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:DDDDDDDDDDD when do you think the next part will be out? :>

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17:26 Mar 02, 2021

Before we continue, a lil blip. "โ€œAre you alright? We havenโ€™t heard the message. And who are they?โ€ Issac question." I think you meant Isaac questioned :) This was so well written! The names are unique and cool and the characters are well formed! Lol guess a lot of people chose fire XD I feel kinda bad for Isaac for having so many sisters (one of them more annoying than the others *ahem* me) I love the fantasy theme and the idea of different creatures/species! I wonder what's gonna happen next...heheh I ALWAYS LOVE THE START OF A NE...

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XDXD YOU AND AMES ARE GONNA BE THE CENTER OF THE NEXT ONEEEEE XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ALSO THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSS XDDDDDDDDD ME TOOOOOOOOOOO XD

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18:28 Mar 02, 2021

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT NO PROBLEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEEHEHEHEHEHH I CANT WAITTT

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Ari Berri
15:11 Mar 02, 2021

Awesome story!

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Ari Berri
17:13 Mar 02, 2021

No problem!

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