As the sun casts itโs bright light over the horizon, lighting up the world, all the magical beings in Soarville are waking up. Yes, my species are magic folk, and I am one of them. My name is Yue Shukufuku. I am the daughter of King Tobu, leader of the Sky and Everything On It. Our kingdom is a peaceful one, but lately, I have been getting reports of strange beings in the Ocean, where the Mermaids live. And after that happens, I get weird messages in my head.
One Earth girl, almost a chief.
Six fire spirits all linked together.
One Mermaid unlike her kind.
Add a smart nomad with fire in his spirit.
Then comes two sisters with different elements.
Plus a Sky Flyer who is your best friend.
And you can stop them, or the world will end.
Who is โthem?โ Why am I getting this message?
A voice cut through my monologue.
โYue! Yue, come here!โ
I swoop on over to my best friend, Andromeda. Sheโs studying the ground below us, where the fire spirits live.
โYou called? Whatโs going on?โ
Andromeda's normally cheerful face was filled with worry. She pointed to the ground below.
โI think the Fire spirits are in danger!โ
Sure enough, water was pouring into the Lava Lakes, and extinguishing the fire.
Even though I had no idea why, my body immediately reacted and I flew in the air.
โWe have to save it!โ
Without questioning my bravery; or maybe stupidity, my best friend also glided into the air, and together we dived towards the ground. But when we neared the lava, I realized that we couldnโt do this. I slumped in defeat. But Andromeda jumped up and down happily.
โYue! Look!โ
A green figure with piercing eyes was sucking up all the water. I felt grateful. If father found outโฆ
โHello!โ
I looked around; the figure was calling me. I glanced at Andromeda, and she nodded.
โThank you for saving the Lava village! Who are you?โ
โIโm Diane, the next chief of the Earth Folk. And you are?โ
I did a double take. That was why she could stop all that water from destroying the village! She was a chief - in - training.ย
One earth girl, almost a chief.
Thatโs her!
โIโm Yue, daughter of King Tobu.โ
Diane raised her eyebrow.ย
โYou're a Sky Flyer! But what are ya doinโ here?โ
Andromeda figitied nervously; I gulped.
โUmโฆ I was being foolish and thought I could save this.โ I gestured to the Lava Lakes.
โThat was foolish, but I think you had good intentions.โ
I nodded. Andromeda looked at Diane, then said:
โDiane, would you like to come with us to see if the Fire Spirits are okay?โ
โOf course! Does this mean Iโm your friend?โ
She nodded.
โYes!โ
โThen letโs go!โ I shouted.
In the village:
After Diane got burnt from the flames, Andromeda stayed with her to heal her. I went into the village.
โOops!!โ I slammed into a girl, who was fingering her sapphire ring and looking around.
โS-so sorry about that!โ I said, helping her up.
โNo,no itโs okay! Iโm waiting for my sisters and brother to get here.โ
I shot her a look.
โWho are they?โ
Immediately, four girls and one boy shot out of nowhere.
The sapphire girl grinned.
โIโm Syvis, and this is Aria, Issac, Noelani, Maโli, and Aderyn. We are all the protectors of this village.โ
Six Fire Spirits, all linked together.
Thatโs them.
โSo, who are you?โ asked Maโli
โIโm Yue, and I was here to check on this village. But you guys are far more interesting.โ
โWhy are we interesting? Have you been stalking us?โ Sneered Aria.
โAria, Iโm pretty sure sheโs not a stalker.โ Noelani said softly.
โI agree. She didnโt even know our names!โ Issac, the only boy,ย remarked.
Aderyn smiled.
โI guess weโll find out. Yue, why are we interesting?โ
Aria gave me a dirty look. I pressed on.
โY-you guys are in the message! The message that they keep sending me!โ
All of them looked like I had invited them to an underwater party.
โAre you alright? We havenโt heard the message. And who are they?โ Issac question.
ย โ I-i keep getting messages from- I donโt know, ancients? And Iโm looking for these people- I think. And we can stop the world from ending.โ
I recited the poem for them.
โThat sounds interesting...I think I know who the โnomadโis.โ
Whipping around, I summon the windโฆ only to find an unamused boy, with glasses on and a load of books in his hands.ย
โSeriously, am I that big of a theart?โ The nomad picked up his fallen books, only to be knocked down again.
โOBBELUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!โ
they separate, Obelus looks me up and down.
โAh..So you are the daughter of King Nobu, correct?โ
โUh, yeah.โ
โI knew it. You looked familiar. I read about you.โ
He turned around to chat with the 6 fire spirits. Apparently they 're all friends.
A smart nomad with a will of fire.
I looked at all of them, figuring out a plan. I needed them to trust me- but how? I would have to come back to this.Laughing, the Fire Spirits enfold him in a huge group hug. Whenย
โWhere can I find you guys? Iโll...Iโll come back.โ
โOh. Just next to the tent with piles of books.โ
As I turned, I heard Aria screech โSEE? SHE IS A STALKER!โ
Back outside:
โDiane? Andromeda? You guys need to come with me.โ
They immediately nodded and I summoned a wisp of wind to carry us into the Ocean. As I prepared to walk in, a voice saidย
ย โWAIT!!!โ
And I crashed head first into the water.ย
~ ~ ~
โAre you okay?โ
โUgh..What planet am I on?โ
โUmโฆ Well, sorry about that. I canโt control my powers yet. Add that to the fact that I can turn into a human, and you have got a pretty weird mermaid.โ
I looked up, into the eyes of the girl.
One mermaid different from her kind.
โThen you are..?โ
โFlidaerae of the Ocean.โ
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ugh im terrible at this XD Cast! Yue= Yours truly Andromeda=W.w. Skybelle Diane= Lunaaaaa Syvis= Saph! Aderyn= Ames Ma'li = Sarah <3 Issac=Issac Noelani=Maya Aria= Lone wolf (She choose frenemy) Flidaerae= NAINIKAAAAA If you weren't included, or weren't included enough, PLS TELL MEEEEEEE NEXT ONE COMIN NEXT WEEEEKKKKK
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MOTHER OF FREAKING GODS I IS AMAZING
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THANKS YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHAHHAH XD
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CANT WAITTTT UNTIL IM IN HERE YAYYYY
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Loved the characters of the story, the dialogue was amazing and clean. I loved the interaction and way of the representation of the characters. Good, keep writing. The plotline is amazing and I think you worked really well on it. Lovely story.
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Awwww <3 Thank you and stay safe! (Sorry that your leaving <333)
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three weeks ago. Actually, I left writing here, but I will read all of the stories and give my feedback to you.
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Thanks again!
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Its ok, welcome.
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:D Keep being awesome, even if i cant see it!
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three weeks ago. Actually, I left writing here, but I will read all of the stories and give my feedback to you.
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A-are you leaving-are-are you going to...?
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AWWWW DONT WORRYYY IM NOT LEAVINGGGGGGGGG
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AWWWW DONT WORRYYY IM NOT LEAVINGGGGGGGGG
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Phew-okay. Also, I'm right here :)
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:D Thanks, going though something rn *Le sigh*
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Aww u wanna talk ab it? (If ur comfrtoable)
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WRITER'S BLOCKKK AND LE HELP PLS
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ooh can't wait for next week! :))))))))))
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:DDDDD TANKS YOUUUUUUUUUU
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:)))) some peeps on the doc, wanna join?
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sure!
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WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT CELESTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AM I FREAKING FLIDAERAE??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH other than that oml so goooooooooooooodddddd *fangirling over herself* EHHHH WAIT WAIT WAIT IS LUKE OBLEUS IN BOTH OUR REEDSYCAST STORIES???!!! LOLL AHAHHAHA OKOKOKOOKKOKOOK STILL HYPERVENTILATING AHHHHH
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YYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS GIRL YOU AREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *XD* YES HE IS XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IUE@HOUIHWPUIJPIOJQWOIHNCDIU:HDEJUQW :D
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CELESTE IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGG *STILL FANGIRLING* AHAHAH LOLL HES USING THE SAME NAME LOLLLLLLLLL AHAUHIUEATHEUTHAHGOIAHEHTEWTHIUEH(EWY(*#Y%*(U#@)JOGNJSNGSDJ
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OFCCCCC YOU AREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU HAVE TO BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *XDXD WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART HEJEJEJEJEJEJEJEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH* IKRRRRRRR XD HEGDUDIHEUQ@HJUIWGHYGHIUO@E&O&IF^FF&CTG#IYEW# XD
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU ARE TOO KINDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AKEHOJHTOAUTHUEOTHAUOGHANOHG#)*%#)*% &#Q)*&%OTHAJG
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I want to take your form, but I haven't passed your quiz/ never taken it. Btw your fantasy is great. So lively and spiritful. :)
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AWWWWW :D
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This was awesome!!!! I larbed my inclusion and i be so coooooooool!!! Also, the names are very palatable and easy to read, so great job on that!!! Love the title.
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wooowwwww do i sense some f avoritismmmmm *smirks* XD
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XD
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XDXD
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I'm not choosing any favoritesssssssss lol
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Uh-huh *smirks*
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Lol, thanks Luke!! I'll include ya more, you'll just be the smart person that keeps us outta trouble :D XD THE CONVO UP THERE
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD XD
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Thank you so muchhhh for including meeeeeee!!!! (Also, RESPECT for naming yourself after the moon. If you don't understand, watch Avatar. The one with the elements, not the one with the blue people. Please.) This story was amazingggggg!!! It was the type of fantasy I enjoy. A few select people from different groups with different powers coming together because of a prophecy to save the world from being destroyed. And you executed it incredibly. I loved the different groups, the plot, the characters, and just the idea of this whole story. M...
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OFCCCCCCCCCC I LOVE AVATARRRRR (the blue one....not so much) AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Thanks! I needed a series sooooooo <3333333 *ScrEeCh* XD Thanks youuuuuuuuuuuuu <3333333
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Yaaaaaaay someone else likes A:tla!!!!! ๐๐๐ You're welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YAYAYAYAYAYYYY WOw SO manyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Do you ship any characters in A:tla??? Ahahahahahahhahaa lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll (I'm not beating that) XD
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XDDDDD YEES UM Zuko and Toph XD
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OOh, I love the part at the beginning with italics. A little spooky, but very like magical, right? The only question/critique I have is "โSeriously, am I that big of a theart?โ The nomad picked up his fallen books, only to be knocked down again." WHAT IS A THEART???? Am i supposed to know?
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<33333 Thert Theat THEART THREATTTTTTT Oof sorry its supposed to be threat XD Ya wanna be in it?
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I think I filled out the formmmm
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YAY
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AYYYYYYYY, THE REEDSYCAST IS OUT! Sorry, I'm late to the party hehe. I really enjoyed it, but if you'll excuse me I *will* say the story felt kinda fast, but I totally get if you wanted to introduce the characters in one story so it doesn't bother me too much. So good job, I love my character already!
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AYYYYYYYYY It's fine :DDD XD yeah... But the story will go longer for pt 2. :DD Awww <3 Thanks Sarah!
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OH YAY PART TWO!
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Can you describe your character realll quick?
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like just in general (looks and personality) or just personality?
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In general :DDD
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Wow, this is a FANTASTICALLY FANTASTIC Muffin! It's creating a fog of susssssssspense............ Any way for me to squeeze in? XD Happy Today!
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YAY TANKKS! XDDD YES! Thanks!
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=) Seriously? HAPPY TODAY!
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Fill this:https://forms.gle/vQRrrAmM4R1QLxAP7 :D
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=) Seriously? HAPPY TODAY!
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3 NEW STORIES CELESTTTEEEEEEEE AND ARANTHIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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Hii Celeste!!! Could I have a second power for your character in THotF? I want to make her super OPXD
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Air, Magic, Poision, and can control darkness/ shadow XD
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yasssssssssss thank youuuuuuuuuu
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:D
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ARE YOU LEAVING?????
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NOooOoooOOOOOOOOoooo
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Phew๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
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Buttttt might not get your part out.
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Pshh it's okay as long as you're stayinggggg
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<3
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AWESOMEEEEEEE I LOVE REEDSY CASTSSSSSS AHAHAHAHAHHA
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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hehehehe part 7 out :) you is in it again :))))
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Eyyyyyyy <33333 Everything going on fine thereee???
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Noo... ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;www; but thanks for asking <333333333333333333333333333
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WATTT UR NOT OKAYYYY?!?!?!??!??!??!!?!?!
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DONT WORRY IM FINE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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ARE YOU SUREEEEEEEE? <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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:O that's my reaction -> :O XD this is gonna be a superrrrrrr cool series Celeste!!!!! the worldbuilding is super good :> also, I filled out your form again, is that fine?? ~ Amethyst
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:O TANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW OFCCCCCCCC :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:DDDDDDDDDDD when do you think the next part will be out? :>
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Next weeeek :D
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okay :3 are you planning to kill anyone? lol that sounds really dark XD
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yeees hehheehheheee XD yea it does-
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Before we continue, a lil blip. "โAre you alright? We havenโt heard the message. And who are they?โ Issac question." I think you meant Isaac questioned :) This was so well written! The names are unique and cool and the characters are well formed! Lol guess a lot of people chose fire XD I feel kinda bad for Isaac for having so many sisters (one of them more annoying than the others *ahem* me) I love the fantasy theme and the idea of different creatures/species! I wonder what's gonna happen next...heheh I ALWAYS LOVE THE START OF A NE...
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XDXD YOU AND AMES ARE GONNA BE THE CENTER OF THE NEXT ONEEEEE XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ALSO THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSS XDDDDDDDDD ME TOOOOOOOOOOO XD
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WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT NO PROBLEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEEHEHEHEHEHH I CANT WAITTT
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Awesome story!
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD THANKS SO MUCH IHWDCNLCJW
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No problem!
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