In the bleak solitude of World War, in a hospital ward, I lay, my body battered and broken by the merciless hand of war. Each breath felt like a struggle against an unseen foe, my spirit teetering on the brink of despair. In the oppressive silence, whispers danced like specters in the shadows, their words a tantalizing refrain in the cacophony of suffering.
"What is the point of all my efforts?" I started to ask myself regularly. After almost dying from a British gas attack, which left me temporarily blind, I began to realize that this war was not my place to be. I would never be more than a corporal, serving as a petty messenger for German troops in France and Belgium. That was not my goal when I joined the war.
Now, blindness suffocated me, adding one more failure to my pride, like one more nail in my coffin. I could hear the laughs of officers passing by my bed, making insults and hilarious comments at my expense. Oh, how I wished to have the power to show them that I was more than this broken excuse for a human.
Somewhere around the sixth night of my treatment, I remember a member of the medical staff mentioning that five days had passed since I was brought in from the battlefield with a large group of other wounded, and barely a dozen of us had survived. I couldn’t ask anything because they had given me something that made me dizzy and disoriented. When their voices disappeared into the distance, I heard another voice. It sounded as if it were coming from high above me.
"You will survive," one voice murmured, its tone colored with a strange solemnity. "For I have chosen you to shape the world."
“God?” The word echoed in my mind like a distant bell tolling the promise of salvation. “Could it be true?” My mind started to play with that thought. “I never believed in God, but whose voice could it be? Is it possible that I, a lowly soldier amidst the chaos of war, can truly be destined for greatness?”
Days stretched into weeks, and the whispers persisted, each word a dagger of hope piercing the veil of my despair. "You are destined for greatness," another voice declared, its cadence filled with an otherworldly certainty. "The world will tremble at your feet."
With the passing day, I found myself drawn deeper into the web of deception, my doubts drowned out by the resounding chorus of affirmation. "I will not disappoint," I finally vowed, surprised to hear my voice tinged with newfound determination.
But as the war raged on and the world around me descended further into madness, doubt crept insidiously into the corners of my mind. "Do not listen to the naysayers," the voices urged their whispers like tendrils of smoke curling around my thoughts. "You are the chosen one."
Yet, amidst the whispers of destiny, a seed of doubt took root in my heart. “Was it truly God speaking to me, guiding me to greatness? Or were these voices merely the desperate pleas of men clinging to hope in a world gone mad?”
As the war dragged on, the voices that once whispered promises of greatness grew louder, their proclamations more fervent. But amidst the chaos of battle, a seed of doubt took root in my heart, blossoming into a gnawing suspicion that the voices were not the divine guidance I desperately sought. “What If I fail? Wasn’t my time in the army showing me how bad I am? If I could not become greater in the war, how can I become greater in the eyes of God?”
“You are the Chosen one.” The voice returned the next night and made all my doubts disappear.
One evening, as I lay in my hospital bed, the air thick with the stench of death and despair, my comrades gathered around me, their faces a twisted tableau of guilt and apprehension.
"Adolf," one of them began hesitantly, "we need to tell you something."
Their voices quivered with uncertainty as they confessed their deception, revealing that they had orchestrated the voices I had believed to be the voice of God. They just wanted to have some fun. My blindness was gone, and I could look them in the eyes, but they could not look at me. So, I knew that they were lying. I would easily recognize their voices.
Shock rippled through me, disbelief mingling with betrayal as their words echoed in the cavernous depths of my mind. How could they have the nerve to come between me and God? It was my connection with Him that they were trying to present as a joke. But the truth was – they were a joke.
"Sorry, Adolf." One of those bastards put his hand on my shoulder. "We were just making fun of you. It was a joke, man."
"No," I whispered, shaking my head in denial. "It can't be true. God spoke to me. He chose me." There was not any doubt in my mind. They were all jealous that God chose me, not them. That was true. It has to be the truth.
Released from the hospital, I returned home to a different man from who I once was. A flicker of something new ignited within me—a burning desire to shape the world according to my own vision. God's vision imparted to me. I was barely His tool.
I took to the streets, my voice ringing like a clarion call in the tumult of a world in upheaval. At first, no one wanted to listen to me. But with each impassioned speech, I drew crowds, my words weaving a tapestry of hope and despair, ambition, and madness. The voice of God was talking through me. With every new man who joined to listen to me, my strength became higher, and my connection with God even greater. No one could break the bond I had with Him. Imagine if I believed those who tried to convince me that it was all a joke, how wrong that would be for me. For my God.
In the echo of my words, I found solace, a semblance of purpose amidst the chaos of a world gone mad. And as I gazed upon the faces of those who hung upon my every word, I knew that I had found my calling—a new path forged from the ashes.
I was wounded twice, and twice He saved me. Not to be some joke, to be laughed at by others. No, I was the Chosen One. The One who was destined to rebuild the world as God wanted it to be.
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The story reflects Adolf's transformation from a disillusioned soldier to a charismatic leader who believed he was carrying out a divine mission. His conviction in his destiny and his ability to sway crowds with his speeches align with historical accounts of his rise to power, eventually turning the world into chaos.
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A very wonderful story. Can I translate it into Arabic and publish it?
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Sure. I don't mind.
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I knew this story was sounding familiar and it clicked when I saw “Adolf” as the name. This is such a creative and quietly terrifying way to show Hitler’s transformation from a broken soldier to one of the most horrific leaders in history. Very well done!
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Thank you.
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I was sent your story to critique. My only suggestion would be to switch around a couple of paragraphs. When you say, [was it truly God speaking to me should come before, I found myself deeper in the web of deception] I did find this story interesting and captivating and another great example of the results of bullying and cruel jokes. Yet, amidst the whispers of destiny, a seed of doubt took root in my heart. “Was it truly God speaking to me, guiding me to greatness? Or were these voices merely the desperate pleas of men clinging to hope i...
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Thank you for your feedback.
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Mr. Ulmeli I found your story fascinating. There is an interesting theme to this. I once read in Newsweek about a play that took and added a fictional twist to the last night of Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. in the Memphis hotel where he was assassinated on the balcony. It imagines him spending time with a hotel maid. It is called the Mountaintop. I am truly a fan of such dramatic interpretations of real-life events and people. This was fun.
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Deeply appreciate your comment.
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Very imaginative idea for this prompt.
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Thanks for reading.
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What a great job with this story, Darvico. BTW-your title for this piece was brilliant. Very scary how easily his unstable mind tricked him to justify all evil he thrust upon the world.
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Thank you a lot. I'm glad you like it.
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Wow! As I read Adolf the first time I got chills, hoping against hope it was not that Adolf. Scary stuff!!
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Just come to me when I saw the prompt. I had to write it.
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Amazing story to this prompt. If you say something often enough people believe it. This is the way of propaganda. I know Hitler was a nobody in his past and suffered trauma. He didn't like society and had no desire to fit in it. There is a fine line between gifted/charismatic and mentally deranged. Hitler utilized propaganda as his means to manipulate those around him. He was probably an unbalanced, unhealthy ESTJ. His personality type is more associated with high outgoingness, low openness to experience, low agreeableness and high conscien...
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Thank you for your insight. Always a pressure to read your comments.
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Thanks. Do you mean, 'pleasure'? (Had to ask as I'm an English teacher.)
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Hahaha. I wrote from my mobile and didn't notice an error. Pleasure of course. :)
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I think the second you mentioned the name Adolf, I started screaming. I only knew that he was a mad failed artist before he-did that.
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Thank you for reading. If only he stayed a failed artist.
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Holy hell! This is a story that makes sense of his disillusionment. The voice of God made me do it. oofda. Gripping. Nice work.
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Thanks for reading. I am glad that you like it.
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Wow, man! I have heard many takes on this man. You pretty well summed him up a bit, as well as providing a cautionary tale. Awesome job!
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I had to write it. It was screaming out like crazy. Thanks for liking the story.
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Excellent example how an unstable mind can go overboard with a little provocation.
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Thank you for reading.
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Darvico, by the end, it really gave me the creeps... it was really well written, and I liked it. In fact, we never know what our choices will bring and what our words will trigger...
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Thank you. That was my point. Words can be a destructive weapon if not used carefully.
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very true :)
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An excellent story Darvico. It was only with the use of the name that you gave us an inkling of the deception involved. A practical joke that led to horrendous consequences. Imagine that the power of oratory and ability to convince people had been used for good, the world might be in quite a different place.
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Thank you. That was my point when idea for the story appeard.
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Never knew this before.
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Thanks for reading.
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OMG ! The twist at the end at who your protagonist is ! It makes me...deeply uncomfortable. Nonetheless, great use of descriptions. Good flow, as well !
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That was my attention. He took the joke to seriously. Thank you.
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Very interesting. Deep themes, great descriptions, fascinating context and very creative! Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks, Isabel. I appreciate it.
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This is very deep, and evocative. It has universal themes of suffering, hope, meaning, and betrayal. It is an outward journey for the main character and an inward journey. Very well done!
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Thanks a lot.
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