She was his anchor, keeping him sane, and he was her glue, keeping her together. They were never apart if they could help it. It was only supposed to be a small business trip...But then the airports closed down to ease the spread of the virus, so the two lovers were apart. Little did she know it would be forever...
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Girl’s Perspective
You’re so far away
I wish you were with me
Please come and stay
I need you, can’t you see?
My heart is aching
My mind is racing
Are you okay?
When will you say?
My emotions are large
My tears drop quietly
You are my charge
My energy
If you don’t answer, I’ll come
Mask and all
I’m stronger than some
But I’ll race at your call
Please tell me
Please don’t go
You’re across the sea
And I miss your glow
I want to hold you
To gain comfort, and to give
You are my glue
Without you, I can’t live
Is it the same for you,
Or are you alright?
I haven’t a clue
Because you aren’t in my sight
I’ve almost lost hope,
But I’m trying to hold on
In truth, you were my rope,
But now you are gone
You went like the wind
And left me here alone
Maybe I was blind
Maybe I should’ve known
Did you mean to leave me
Right when you could
Did you take your chance to flee
The moment it seemed like you should
I was naive back then
I still am today
Because I jump when
I hear something you say
There are problems in the world
We should be solving them together
Instead, my heart is furled
Because you severed our tether
Now I am alone
What about you?
Have you simply grown
Learned to tie your own shoe?
Yes, I remember
I did it for you
It was my pleasure
And of those, I have few
Especially now
Now that you left
Are you sick in bed
Or are you healthy?
Are you well-fed
And eating plenty?
The reason you don’t answer me
And leave me in the dark
The reason you don’t hear my plea
To remember our spark
Is it because you’re hurt
Or do you ignore
This is something I blurt
To you, my heart I pour
If you would just let me know
If you could just send me a text
If you would just let me see your glow
Then I’d give it a rest
Instead, you leave me to guess
Terrible things
You put me in distress
And are pulling my strings
The strings of my heart
Now they are frayed
The longer we are apart
The more I feel betrayed
Sweet words you used to say
Your hands were delicate and soft
Then you were on your way
But at what cost
Not just the money-
But the ache of my heart
My stomach feels funny
Like I forgot my part
Is it all because of me
Did I do something wrong
Is it no longer we?
Does your heart sing a different song?
Mine does not
It calls for you
You’ve got it all in a knot
You’ve got it asking who
Who to believe
Who to turn to
Do you deceive?
I need another clue
How much longer can I wait
How much longer can I bear it
I just need to think straight
I must use all my wit
I’m feeling so much pain
Pain you brought upon me
Maybe I should let go
Even if it breaks my heart
Maybe I should let go
And begin with a new start
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Guy’s Perspective
My love, my dear,
My darling,
I fear
That I might be falling
It’s hard to feel
When I gave you my heart
To think this is real
I want a restart
I cough, and I sneeze
But the biggest pain I feel
Is this small squeeze
One that cannot heal
If only you were with me
If only I could see you
If only it could be
That I didn’t have to leave you
They say there’s no such thing,
As a happily ever after
But together we could bring
Over the pain some laughter
Instead, I lie alone
Breathing some of my last breaths
I’m on my own
Lying on the bed of death’s
Yes, I am hurt
But I worry more about you
Once I’m under the dirt
What will you do?
Are you going to move on?
Are you going to stay strong?
I’m almost gone
It shouldn’t be long
Though I do wish
That I could’ve told you
Though I do wish
I could’ve given you a clue
I feel very blessed
For everything I had
I had the best
For that I am glad
My only complaint
The thing I really want to have
If I had no restraint
I’d want you, my other half
I don’t know which is worse
Not seeing you again
Because that’s like a curse
Or you being in pain
I hope someone tells you
What happens to me
I hope someone tells you
And you’ll come to see
Though I’ll be underground
I want you beside me
Though I won’t hear a sound
I need you beside me
We’ll be together forever
That’s what we said
What’s happening, however
Fills me with dread
I couldn’t say goodbye
One last time, and
I hope you don’t cry
But you’ll certainly be stunned
There was nothing we could do
Don’t blame anyone
What we’re going through
Is happening to everyone
Will you remember me
Or will you forget
I want you to be free
And live without regret
I’m sorry, truly
I didn’t mean for it to end this way
Sometimes the world does things cruelly
Don’t let it shade you in black and grey
Keep your cheer
And keep your smile
Wipe away your tear
I’m not worth your while
I feel my consciousness slipping
So I guess it’s time to say goodbye
My heart is nearly ripping
It’s too late to ask why
I love you is all
I really have to say
It might seem small,
But I hope it goes a long way
° 𐐪𐑂 ♡ 𐐪𐑂 ₒ 𐐪𐑂 ♡ 𐐪𐑂 °
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Also, I was thinking of making one poem submission per week to improve on my poetry skills. What do you think?
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Sure! Although for a selfish reason: You’re already amazing at poetry, I just want to read MORE from you! 😅
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Haha, thank you so much! That's very sweet.
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Wow, wow, WOW! I’ve read tons of poetry Reedsy stories and this was nothing like them. I love the way you captured their voices, blending it into an awesome image of their separated love! I especially adore the first part: “She was his anchor, keeping him sane, and he was her glue, keeping her together. They were never apart if they could help it. It was only supposed to be a small business trip...But then the airports closed down to ease the spread of the virus, so the two lovers were apart. Little did she know it would be forever...” It re...
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Thank you so, so, SO much for this! I'm glad you liked the first part, I didn't like it much myself like I said it was only for word count purposes. And about my name, thank you as well! Never had someone complement my name before... It's really nice to have someone checking my profile that much to notice I took away my pen name. I'm also waiting for your next story! Maybe you should give poetry a try. -Amany :)
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Hmm, maybe. I’m not much of a poet but it sounds fun.
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Hi, Amany! I’m back. To ask you something. Okay, I swear I’m not a creepy internet guy or anything, but would you mind telling me what time zone you live in? I just want to know when I should pop by to read the daily quotes. People on Reedsy live in all time zones-for example, I had a chat with a girl in India the other day. Basically, I just want to know if morning for you is morning for me, or lunchtime, or even 10 at night. You don’t have to answer if you don’t feel comfortable telling me ~YoUr LoCaTiOn~, but...yeah. Okay,...
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Hey Aerin! Sorry, it took me so long to read this, I didn't get a notification due to the fact that you replied on yourself not me. After repeatedly searching, it appears where I live has the same time zone as you, though I would rather not say where I do live. I usually update the daily quote by 10am in the morning each day, that's when you should check. I hope this helps! It is late afternoon for you at the moment, correct?
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Oh, okay. Thanks! I think. For me, it’s 2:25 as I’m writing this. Okay then! I’ll stop by at around 10 am for the daily quotes!
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I 100% agree! Beautiful work!
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Okay, so, I've seen a lot of people writing poetry submissions, so I decided to give it a try. The little thing on top is kind of a backstory, but it was mostly added for word count purposes. The two poems are not written and sent to each partner, they are just sort of the story in poetry form. I hope you enjoy it! Thanks, and again, I hope you liked "Infected Love"!
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It was really beautiful 😊
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Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it!
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Please don't make me so jealous by your amazing poetry💜
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Aw, stop, your too kind 💛😊
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Lol yeah<33
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Oh. My. Gosh. That was amazing! This was so clear, and it was sweet. I try to write poetry, but it's not my strong point. But this was one of the best! Great job!
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Thanks so much! Don't say that, I'm sure you're great and hopefully I'll have the chance to read a poem by you one day!
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You're welcome! Aww, thank you! You are so sweet!
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¨Instead, you leave me to guess Terrible things You put me in distress And are pulling my strings The strings of my heart Now they are frayed The longer we are apart The more I feel betrayed¨ Are just SOME of the great lines in this gorgeous story about pining and worrying from afar. I really love that you made it like poetry, it gives it a even sweeter touch. I dont know how you do it, does it come naturally, all this talent?? You continue to impress me, and this one is a winner! You go sis!
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Those were my favorite stanzas too. Thank you so much! You're too sweet! Haha, no, it comes with practice, lol. You too sis! :)
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no problem! ;D always great to hear from you
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You too! Waiting for your next story!
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lol me too! I haven't been able to get inspired by an of the recent prompts
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Oh, that's too bad... You should try out Reedsy's title or prompt generator for help. Also, while you're bored, I have plenty of stories that could use your critiques 🙃
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Beautiful poem Amany! Loved it! ❤️
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Thank you! <3
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You are welcome Amany! If you have time, please have a look at my story too. Thanks! :)
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Of course! No problem!
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OMG.. what just i have read, the most emotional line I ever read in 2020.. when you are in true love with someone every single breath names your beloved.. the poetry had a great connectivity which melts every heart whoever reads it.
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Thank you soooo much, that means a lot to me! :)
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This made me almost cry. The poems—how in the world did you come up with THAT? It was so good! The poems themselves are beautiful and heartfelt, and that last line was PERFECT. I loved it! Keep writing!!!
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Awww, thank you so much! I just knew I wanted to write a poem so I thought about which prompt would work best. Thanks again ☺
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This is amazing. The poem is heart touching and beautiful (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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Thanks so much :)
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This is a great story!! <3 ❤️❤️
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Thanks, Felicity, glad you enjoyed it!:)
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So emphatically romantic!💘
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Thanks for reading Skyler :)
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Omg! That was literally the best poetry I have ever seen. Usually I write poetry but for some reason I don't understand others. But this was so clear and simple you didn't make it complex, you went straight to the point, it was really beautiful and sweet as well as sad. I love how I could feel the pain of each character through such little words. I honestly loved it..good job!
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Wow, the best?!?! Thank you so much for all your super kind words!
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This is a very sweet and heartfelt story, I loved that you used poetry. Your rhyming was very on point. This was all nicely said. Well done.
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Thanks so much! At some points, I felt like the rhyming was off, so this is very kind of you to say.
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Nah this was awesome, but I get what you mean when I'm writing poetry I get the same way. If anything just keep trying. It's all worth it in the long run.
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Your rhyming is so TIGHTLY done! I love love love poetry and I love spoken word and this could easily be performed as either one.
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Aww, thanks Rhondalise, this means a lot coming from you, you're such an amazing writer and poet! :)
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I am so sorry I am late on commenting but let me just say, this made me tear up! I have a boyfriend, and this poem is just so relatable and heart touching. I absolutely LOVE this poem, wonderful use of words. Your writing is a gift!
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Aw, thank you so much! This made my day! :D
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh *Blinded by awesomeness* One sec lemme put on sunglasses.😎😎 Wowowowowowow!! I absolutely loved it ! (Like always) You should definitely write more poetry!!! Really looking forward to more!!!💯💯 -S
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Thank youuuuuuu so much! :) That's really sweet. I'm actually planning on writing one for this week as well. Thanks again!
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Yay! Welcome 😊
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This was an interesting take on the prompt. Cool use of rhyme.
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Thank you!
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I fell in love with this one Amany. It is my favourite among your works, truly. Wow. Brilliant. I just love how you brought forward the two's thoughts and feelings. Great. 😍😍 I can't get enough of this, I have read this three times over and over. Please keep it up. It would be an honour if you checked out even one of my stories. This is brilliant. Wow.
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Oh, wow! Thanks so, so , SO much! I'm so flattered! I would love to check out one of your stories! Thanks again! You made my week!
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