YES! I HAVE A SERIES! This is the third story of my demonslayer fanfic with my lovely sis Priyamvada Deshmukh! Check out the first and second partssss! Also, me becoming a hasira has NOT occurred YET.
ย โT-tanjiro! Youโre alive!โ
He grinned and walked up to me. I could feel Hanaโs nervousnes.
โWhereโs Kanao? I thought I saw her....โ
โShe went to pick flowers.โ
Hana tugged at my sleve harder. I grimaced.
I admit that I am a bit jealous of Kaguya Saishohanamy(Hana), my adopted sister. Eleven years old and already a demonslayer. When I was eleven I was still napping and sleeping and had no fighting power. Her blade is a light purple-pink blade with a halo-like handguard with cards engraved on it. Wow. A blade that turned for her at age eleven! And with her having a disability! Hana has Alice-in-Wonderland syndrome. She can only see blobs of light and her most trusted friends. Still, in the selection, she sliced a demon from behind. That is top-notch skills!
โWhatโs wrong?โ
She pointed at Tanjiroโs case.
โHmm? Oh! Demon?โ
Yeah, she canโt speak, but she is super smart. I never taught her math yet she solved one hundred problems in a minute.
โThe demon is fine! Really!โ
She doesnโt trust Tanjiro. She is afraid of the demon he is carrying. I trust it, but Hana...
She edged closer to me.
โSo, you got a mission?โ I spoke to Tanjiro, hoping he would not see me blush.
โYeah, Majikku. I gotta go to a nearby village. Kids have been found dead, with horns around them. Itโs sad..โ
โCanmeandHanacomewithyoupleasewecanhelp-โ
Hana flinched.
He smiled at me.
โOkay!โ
Hana made a groaning motion. I grasped her hand.
โIโll protect you! Promise.โ
Ramen Villa Arc:
โThe villa is in a forest?โ
โYes, and we.....โ
Hana clutched her sword tighter. I noticed that she was more tensed up and emotionless. Go figure. I was too. The villa was creepy. I donโt know why, but it had a dark sense. It was-
ย E M P T Y
โNobody is here!โ
โ But we were sent here to-โ
โExactly.โ
Tanjiro suddenly grabbed his nose. He made a gagging motion and fumbled his sword. Hana unsheathed her sword and pointed it in the air. I was confused and worried. Then it hit me too. Disgusting. The smell was a mixture of sweat and rotting fish, with dirty socks and foul cabbage.
It was the smell that was swarming around us. We had not sensed it until we walked in the villa and-
โT-the demon-โ
โSmell?โ
โYes....โ
Hana jumped and took off. Me and Tanjiro were left standing in the foul swamp.
โSheโs fast!โ
โHana!ย
We started running after her. She was speeding into the villa ground.
Anywhere to distance me from that smell! The demonโs territory!ย
NIGHT:
In the streets of the villa, there was ten people walking around, stumbling and tripping. No kids.ย
I walked up to a man.ย
โSir, do you know about the horn attacks-โ
He looked up and started crying.
โNO! Donโt say it! The horned thing will get us! pLEASE! STOP!โ
โSir-โ
He finally stopped screaming at me to stop and looked at me, my uniform, and my star-shaped handguard on my sword.
โMy poor child...
Tanjiro looked like he wanted to punch something. I felt sick. A demon did that to a child. Did every kid here get horribly murdered?
Hana uncovered her eyes. She was crying. I patted her but broke down myself.
โThis- this is sick. Killing children is wrong.โ Tanjiro stared at the man. Then he looked at me again.
โI got an idea...โ
Hana was clutching her fists now. Her face was red. So was mine.
โletโs do it.โ
It was simple. I would stay in one of the houses and wait for the demon. I qualified as a kid, and it would probably come for me. Then Hana and Tanjiro would come and the the fight begins. But Hana still wouldnโt trust Tanjiro.
โHana! Youโll be fine!โ
She pointed at Tanjiro again, then unsheathed her sword and pointed at me.
โItโs safe.....safe.โ
Hana still shook her head. We ended up switching spots and I ended up with Tanjiro.
โSo, she knows the signal?โ
โYes. She does.โ
โItโs amazing how she can fight with a disorder.โ
โYep. It is!โ
I looked at the handsome boy before me. His red hair, his bright eyes, his black sword. I then looked at the case he was carrying. In it was a demon.
I can trust him.ย
The signal rang. I took out my sword and jumped out off the bushes, taking off to the house Hana was in.
HANA!
Tanjiro raced ahead and sliced the door down. I followed him in and-!
There was a ugly girl with a sickly pale yellow skin. Horns sat on her white hair.
Horns. Horns that killed kids.
Hana backflipped to us. She pointed at the demon.
โA-a-are you guys hAsHiRa?โ The demon started shaking.
โNo! Weโre here to stop your reign of terror!โ
โOh. D-die!โ
Then I saw the engraftment on her eyes. Lower rank four.
Oh no.
โSWORD SPELL OF A THOUSAND HELLS!โ I roared.
It squeaked and ran, shooting horns. One caught Hana in the arm. She fell.
โNO ONE HURTS MY SISTER!โ
Tanjiro opened the box, and screamed โNEZUKO! PROTECT HANA-CHAN!โ
I dodged more horns and flew to the demonโs neck. Then spikes rose up and hit me repeatedlyย and threw me up in the air.
โ.....S....s....SISTER!โ
Hana spoke!
C R A C K.
Broke my ribs and leg... The pain is unreal...
NO! DONโT FAINT!
I got up. Fell down. Is that Tanjiro?
โStay here.โ
He sprinted to the demon. Then got hit with more spikes. Knocked himself out. The demon is coming!ย
Stay here? No freaking way.
โGET AWAY!โ
I kicked the demon into itโs face. Then I stabbed it. Hana ran towards me too. Then pain.. again.ย
ARGHHH!
More spikes! No! Hana-ย
THE GIRL DEMON- TANJIRO SISTER NEZUKO- SHIELDED US?
I jumped up. Ouch.. no. Must. Cut. The. Neck.
Hana grabbed me and pushed me down. She then hugged Nezuko and charged the lower rank four. Her face was a scowl that burning everything in itโs touch. The demon shoot more sharper spikes. Hana avoided all of them. The demon was clearly panicking.
โS-stop coming! Iโll cut you to pieces! Ribbons! Strips of-โ
Itโs head fell off.ย
I blacked out.
Good job, Hana.
A BIG THANK YOU TO PRIYAMVADA DESHMUKH FOR SHARING MY LOVE OF DEMONSLAYER!!!!
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I have been downvoted 100 points. I don't know why and I'm a new marshmallow member. Can you help me?
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Omg you have been downvoted????????? (I was upvoting Celeste when I saw your comment.) Are you back up or do you still need help??
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Hey! I apologize if this comes off as desperate or annoying, but I keep getting downvoting like almost every single day. It's getting weird and kind of annoying at this point, so I was wondering if I could be upvoted or anything? It's totally fine if you're busy, and thank you :) -A fellow Marshmello, Riddhi
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Hi! Nope! Oh, that's TERRIBLE I will notify the other Mallows! I'm sorry... Also, 1. Are u getting spammed, and 2. Do You know who downvoter is??? :D -Werid Mallow who likes demonslayer
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Thank you so much for being kind! I haven't gotten spammed in a while (I think I got spammed once a few weeks ago). I'm not sure who the downvoted is :(
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Alright, letโs see wot I can do.
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I submitted the spirit animal story and you're in it. It's called "Endings and New Beginnings" :D
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Yay!
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Hi friend :) I missed u. Schools been really hard on me latley and I'm not feeling my best. How are you? :D
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Me too ๐ Awww.... Iโm sorry, hope you feel better๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐๐ Great! Hbu? ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Eh lol. ๐๐ What you up to? ๐๐๐๐
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XD๐ REaDsy Hey, what ur fav color?
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hahaha XD Hmmm I'm indescisive soooo....black, silver, or blue
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ONEeEeeEe XD๐๐๐๐๐
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This one doesn't have me in it, but it's still AMAZING! I love the little sister :)
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OMG I"M SORRY BUT I DON"T HAVE UR CHARACTER OOF Also the sis is Priyamvada Deshmukh's Oc, YESH
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Ok! :) (Mine's Akane, red hair, red robes, fire breath, if you can't find our first comment string)
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OH NO I CAN"T FIND IT IM SORRY YOU ARE DEFINTY IN THE NEXT ONE OMG SORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY
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it's ok! That's why I sent it :)
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:D :S
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As someone who only just started reading demon slayer, I can't tell how much of this is actually hidden spoilers, but from what my brother (who's way ahead of me) talks about, this seems pretty on point!
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Really? Thanks! BUT GO rEAD ITT IT IS SOOoO FReAKiNG GOOooOD
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I might do a story with friends on Reedsy, and I would like to put you in it, so what would you want your character's personality/ physical description/ special skills/ spirit animal to be? :)
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Your so nice! P: Smart, funny, crazy PD: Always has something purple on me. SS: flying SA: uhhhh.... Phoenix Again, thanks so much!
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Thanks! I'll include you in it! :)
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Yay! ;D
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:D
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Can I be there too? Pleading eyes emoji
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In the story? Sure! Just tell me how you want your character to act/ their physical description/ their special skills or superpower/ and their spirit animal. :)
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Thank you!! Name: Faye P: Quiet, calm, but kind of crazy once you get to know her PD: Caramel-blonde hair and blue eyes!~ SS: can super-travel using shadows, has a dagger too SA: Cat!! It would be cool if you made Faye a tsundere too!~ Google tsundere if you dunno what i mean ehehe Thank you!
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Great! I'll include you. :)
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thank yow!!~
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lets talk.... have you watched kimi no nawa? its very gooooooooooood
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YAS Can Priya have earth? SORRY BUT-
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noooooooo celeste trust me plssssssssssss you two are sisters from the same kingdom and you are both of the Air kingdom sorry... There's a plot twist in like part 7 that combines all da powers so don't worry lol
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YAY Idea: reval that i have dark tooooo bc my mom is dark!!!
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what? ok no i've already written your part so sorry but I can't change... you have light and air... priya is dark and air mira-water luke-fire kate-ice I dont wanna make one character have like 3 because thats not really fair to my other friends... however when y'all meet up to save the world, theres another 2 characters with sand and earth powers
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Okieeeeeeeeeeeeee yay i understnad XD Priya is ma sis yES
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Henlo fren, whose comment section ive come to cuz Iโm bored ๐ Whatโs up?
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heheheheehehe not much~
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Sameeeee. I feel like โnot muchโ sums up the essence of Quarantine Wassups, lol.
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Lolโโ- ;D
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Great job on this one!!! I think for this paragraph: I admit that I am a bit jealous of Kaguya Saishohanamy(Hana), my adopted sister. Eleven years old and already a demonslayer. When I was eleven I was still napping and sleeping and had no fighting power. Her blade is a light purple-pink blade with a halo-like handguard with cards engraved on it. Wow. A blade that turned for her at age eleven! And with her having a disability! Hana has Alice-in-Wonderland syndrome. She can only see blobs of light and her most trusted friends. Still, in the ...
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:D YESH TANK UUUUUUUUUUUU
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Nppppppppppo
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:D
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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How so many ppl coming here to like this? YESSSSSSSSSSSSS
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Em..., I haven't read demon slayer yet, actually, and, i know it's pretty kinda naive.but i liked your fan fic so i should probably check it out in, oh here is the time in which the time is surreal, i will have to fix these into the currents, then i will read, watch, listen or visit everything in my must check list but i dunno if i can continue my aura base, i will have to start from the beginning. Ok, i rambled off pretty weirdly from there, actually I wanted to say that i cant find a part two of this could you help?, Muffin bud?
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Its on Priya's ac, shes in me following list :DD
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Oooooooh?, oh!, ooooh...
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:DDDD XD
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XP
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CELESTE! Maya Emerson did one of those stories, like one that you're doing too with spirit animals and people and stuff and I am dying to make one! SO! Please fill out the following! (kind of the same as yours hehehehe) Favorite Color: Power: Hair and Eye Color: Pet/Spirit Animal: Weakness: THANK YOU!
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Fav color: Purple Power: Magic Hair and eye: Purple and rainbow Pet/sprit: Phoenix Weakness: Too smart XD Yay! Canโt wait to read it! Make sure to include me morrrrrrrr
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OBVI!!! Thank you!!
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Np :DDdDddDdDD
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NEW StORY
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I'LL READ IT ASAPPPPPPP
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Yeye!
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Upvoted all of your comments!
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THANKJSN OMG OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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Ofc!!!!!!!!
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Which names are cooler of these sets: Seridian or Lutheria? Veradis or Lirelian?
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DEF Seridian and Lutheria! BY FARrRr
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1 for me, 1 for Luke. (We're doing a name-off)
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But veradis is pretty too
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:)
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:D gggg
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:)
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1 for me, 1 for Luke. (We're doing a name-off)
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PART 10 OF TDR HAS BEEN POSTED
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YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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Okay, I finished the story with you in it. It's called Dead End.
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AMAZING!!
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Sis! :D
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PART 11 OF TDR HAS BEEN POSTED!!!
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TDR PART 9 HAS BEEN POSTED
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YES
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My email is: priyamvada.deshmukh08@gmail.com Code word: TANJIKKU!!
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Lol TaNJiKKU!!
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Sent it! U see it?
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Nope :(
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Hmmm Check one that says demonslayer
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didn't get a mail at all :'( What mail thing did you use?
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gmail
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