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Funny Thriller Mystery

“Broccoli?” I mutter to myself, gawking at the green thing in front of me. Broccoli may not tickle my fancy, but my mom…she could have a room full of them and never get tired of eating them raw.


I throw a whole bag of them in my cart, glaring at the package with personal grudge. When I was merely twelve years old, I had mocked Aunt Love for being nosy in EVERY matter. Being the female version of Santa Claus she was, she’d never take an insult to herself. Who were we even kidding; she was the Kim Kardarshian, but well, at the end of the day, it was what defined her and it was at the end of the day, my mom had forced fed me a bunch of raw bro- not taking the name, while I cried a waterfall of salty tears.


After shoving half of the listed items into the cart, I move toward the next aisle, throwing a glance towards the clerk napping behind the counter. A smirk tugs at my lips and I begin searching for the leftover items.


 The howling wind sends shivers up my spine, causing strands of hair to erect on my arms. It was a bad choice to visit the supermarket during the crazy blizzard. I could’ve waited for the drama to come to a halt if it weren’t for mom and her br- nevermind.


I tug my muffler closer to my face as I watch the starlit sky, the polar-white snow enveloping the ground, the pine trees and the screeching winds rise up in occasions and when they die, a tomb-like silence haunts over the streets. It frightens me. It frightens me to be the only one stuck in the store. Yes, the clerk’s here, but her presence is better left unnoticed.


I drag my cart to the other aisle, already growing bone-tired when I notice a patch of dark red hue on my shirt sleeve. A woman had bumped into me outside the store; blood drenched her t-shirt, concern and horror shone in her almond eyes. I had gripped onto her arms in alarm as she collapsed against me, whispering please into my ear before yanking herself free, dashing and staggering down the white street. She was my neighbour, Ruby.


Faint footsteps invade my ears, snapping me back to reality. I whip my head around, stillness of the aisle greeting me in return. I heave a sigh, mentally cursing at the blizzard for making me think things. If we weren’t in the middle of a loco blizzard, I would’ve been convinced of this place to be a jinx.


“Austin!” I shriek in surprise as hands thump on my shoulders. Leah, the clerk who was way past forty winks a while ago, beams her stupid grin at me which symbolizes she has some favour to ask.  

I roll my eyes, “I told you already, Seb is not free this weekend.”

“I know, I just wanted to ask how you’re doin’.”


“I was fine until you asked.” I turn the cart away and toward the counter with Leah bouncing after me like a bunny. “Now hurry up!”


It takes Leah a millennium to get the supplies in the bag. Being the impatient bloke I am, I continue to burn a hole through her petty head, shifting my weight from one hip to the other and tapping my fingers at the surface of the counter desk when a low sound pricks my ears. I focus on the sound, debating if it’s another trick the tranquility of the store is playing on me. In a trice, the cries shoot up, causing me to flinch at the unforeseen escalation.


Without any exchange of words, Leah and I amble toward the suspected source, nearing a pile of huge boxes. Leah throws the lighter boxes on the floor, estimating where the cries could be coming from. The heavier boxes to the bottom are all sealed with tape except one, its flaps bent and closing over each other in vain.

“Holy marmite!” Leah exclaims, eyes fixed on the box in front of her.


“What’s it?” I scoot closer. The sight I witness leaves me nonplussed, the gap in my mouth expanding enough for a toad to fit right in.


“Aww! Don’t cry!” Leah cradles a pale, rosy cheeked baby of around ten months in her arms, swaying and doing all sorts of actions a mother would do to calm her baby down.


A drop slides down my arm and I realize I’ve been shedding tears in silence. I run my sleeve over my eyes as my vision blurs. My heart skips a beat when the gorgeous baby peers at me, it’s ocean-blue eyes sparkling with tears and it smiles at me, three tiny pearl white teeth lined along the bottom gum, dimples forming miniature crates at the right place. But, my heart burns at the mother’s cruel and gruesome audacity.


Leah looks up at me, her eyes red and damp and looks back at the baby, making it giggle with her baby language. A car’s rough screech pulls our attention toward the streets. A black SUV pulls up in front of the supermarket. Two men clad in dark clothes step out and stride towards us, something unsettling striking about their aura.


They enter the store and with a single glance toward us, swagger through the aisles, surveying the empty boxes, the counter and every nook in the store. I clench and unclench my fists, contemplating what I should do at their feral outbursts.


“You, have you seen William? Twelve months old, dimples and blue eyes.” A man points out at Leah, referring to a picture from a phone with the screen cracked. His bloodshot eyes pierce into hers, a weird symbol painting the side of his forehead.


Cult of the Gate symbol by wakabarupic from pinterest;))


“No, I haven’t seen him.” She shakes her head. “You will have to pay for the mess you’ve created, you nincompoop!”


Like a shot, the pounding of my heart spirals, reaching my ears, my fingers tremble profusely. I dash outside, leaning against the chill wall. Breathing in and out, I watch rings of fog form and ebb away into the darkness. I squeeze my eyes shut. It’s clear, they’re after the baby and they won’t retreat without getting their hands on the little one.


A man draws his gun out, pointing it at Leah and shouting things which I’m not able to comprehend as my heart beats even louder, the world spinning around me. Fear propels me out of stillness, but I only manage to shift a spot, if only I weren’t a coward.


A deafening crack of thunder fills the room. My head whips to Leah, her head turned away and hands covering her ears in cringe. The man’s gun pointed toward the ceiling, smoke rising from the nozzle in thin wavy lines.


William’s yammers burst out from the storage room, our attention snapping toward the ceiling. Leah looks at me, her bottom lip trembling.


“Get him, Ted.” The man with the stained shirt orders, but before Ted can take a step forward, Leah pounces on them, all three of them collapsing to the ground.


“Run, Austin!” She screams as she wrestles with the men.


What am I waiting for?


I rise up, hurrying inside when Ted growls loudly and bang! I wheeze, clenching my mouth as numbness surges up further through my legs.


The man flips Leah’s limp corpse onto the ground, Ted scoffing and getting up, helping up Riz, if that’s what I heard. Riz’s eyes lock on mine for a brief second before I get on my heels, rushing toward the stairs.


Sorry Leah, I owe you my life.  


William still whimpers as I climb up the stairs. My entire nineteen years of life, I’ve been called a coward. Leah had always been an encouraging friend and seeing her sacrifice her life for William has encouraged me even more, to let the world know I am no coward. Not anymore. It’s for William, I am about to give away mine. I clench my hands into tight fists and shoulders upright.


 I open the door to the store room, William’s innocent eyes flickering to mine, tears staining his plump cheeks. I gather him in my arms, not sure if I should bring him out in the open. Heading out, I turn off every switch on the switchboard and slink back towards the store room.


Let the game begin for the radges!


The room remains immersed in the murkiness. An icy shudder trickles down my spine; cold, hesitant light streaming through a corner window, casting eerie shadows on the wall.


As I sit in the cramped room, I can’t help but feel eyes on me. The clicking of boots on the floor alerts me. I press my palm against William’s mouth and whisper soft words to him. Riz walks past us, appearing only as a tall shadow as his dark clothes amalgamate with the dim lit room, the patterns of his heavy breathing sinister-like.


“Where are you, boy?” Riz mutters. “You know, you anger me. Trying to meddle with our affairs? We just need William for our little ritual. Afterall, he's witnessed the world for just a few months.”


I watch as Riz nears a stand of windcheaters, searching through it. He straightens up and gives a sharp, weary sigh, his eyes directly where I am situated.


“Kid, do you want me to send a bullet through you like your friend and Ruby?” 


A squeak leaves my lips at the mention of Ruby. I knew he had to do something with her.


When the voices subside, the floor devoid of any presence, I get up with William tucked in my arms and descend the stairs in caution. I near the transparent back gate only to find Ted standing right in front and chugging down some liquid from a bottle. I extend an arm out, groping for any sort of wall to make sure I don’t bump into it. Before giving Ted any chance to notice me, I head back upstairs, pain stinging my arms from carrying William for too long.


I press myself against a wall and hold my breath as Riz walks past me, too close to not notice. I crouch and walk toward the attic when a hand grabs my hair, tossing me to the other side. William releases out of my grip, his diaper protecting his delicate buttocks. I throw my hands at Riz, fingers pressing deep into his eyeballs. That’s the only thing I can do to protect William. I shriek as Riz brings his foot down on my ankle, crushing it. I grunt, the torment bringing tears to my eyes. He struggles to get to William when I kick him hard on the jaw. I grab William and limp toward the attic, getting my hands on a sledge hammer in the process. 


The attic’s door opens with the inbuilt ladder landing down. I climb up in hurry; place William on a bundle of bubble wrap, smiling as his eyes flicker and shut, a peaceful atmosphere settling around him.


 I hiss as my sprained ankle lands on the step with a thud. Riz yanks me down: I land on the floor, my head coming into a harsh contact with it and my hammer slipping away from my hand. His hands wrap around my neck and I struggle to pry his fingers away from my skin. He punches me in the nose and I yell, blood trickling out and going senseless as if it weren’t there in the first place. He gets up and heads toward the ladder. I cough, tracing my fingers along my neck which must have reddened by now. I get up, making sure not to put my weight on my sprained ankle, grab the hammer and advance toward Riz.


The blow on his head comes off really hard, causing me to cringe. He hits the ground, his head swimming in a puddle of blood. I turn around as mismatched and heavy footsteps climb up the stairs. I grip on the hammer with both hands, heading toward the stairs.


Hardly have I taken a step forward, when Ted flashes in from behind the wall and pulls the trigger of his gun. The bullet passes my waist by a nose, considering his as-good-as-dead frame is toxic with alcohol. I bolt and leap onto him, causing us to tumble down the stairs. My hands wrap around the gun before I pull the trigger resulting in William’s cries to rise even more.


I get up, staring at my hands and back at Ted’s bloody torso. I wince as my head throbs with pain. It is at this time, my legs turn into boiled noodles and the world fades out in front of me.

I jolt up, finding myself in white sheets, my head and ankle bandaged.


“Mama!” I turn to my side, William chuckling and playing with the locket of a policewoman.


 I smile and my eyes turn to a few people sealing three bags on a stretcher, dragging them into the ambulance.


“I hope you’re alright!” The policewoman with William on her waist says. I nod and glance at William, his dimples tugging at my heart.


“You have no idea how grateful we are. Those men were minacious and they’d been illegally sacrificing hundreds of people for God knows how many decades! We were never able to get our hand on any of them. And no emergency help was available because of the blizzard till morning.”


“Weee!” William squeals and throws his hands at me. I laugh at his adorable squeak. I place him on my lap and meddle with his tiny, cold fingers.


I’m uncertain whether William has a father. But, if it weren’t for broccoli (well, it has now earned its respect), he would’ve never lived to see what surprises life has for him.  


🥦🥦


a/n: R.I.P. Leah. May her soul rest in peace. She was such a good soul. I shed tears myself when killing her off >_<  *wipes away nonexistent tears and blows a perfect dry nose on a tissue paper*

July 29, 2020 18:14

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Sia S
05:14 Sep 17, 2020

Yoooooooo orenda meh get in sed

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Orenda .
07:07 Sep 17, 2020

Awwwww what happened?

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Sia S
07:21 Sep 17, 2020

stupid covid killin da life outta me.

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Orenda .
07:35 Sep 17, 2020

It do be killing everyone:(

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Sia S
07:40 Sep 17, 2020

do ya know was happenin with da jugjes

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Orenda .
07:41 Sep 17, 2020

Lol wut? No, tell me plej

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Sia S
07:41 Sep 17, 2020

about not approving stories and stuff

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Sia S
07:40 Sep 17, 2020

yas:(((

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Sia S
07:21 Sep 17, 2020

dunnoooooo

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Sia S
07:21 Sep 17, 2020

m borreedddd

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Sia S
05:14 Sep 17, 2020

I need da splotchhhhh

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Sia S
04:35 Sep 17, 2020

me nickname is SKY!!!!!!!! Ya wanna join ? We got rainbow (aerin) Sunny (amany) Snow ( Ugochi) Moon (Deepshika) and Sky ( MEEEEE)

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Orenda .
07:07 Sep 17, 2020

Oh lmaoooo, you're THE Sky...omggg Oh yeah, I'll join too. I'll be Oatmeal...such a noice name omgg

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Sia S
07:21 Sep 17, 2020

Yayyyyuyyyyy hehe. If you want one u could ask Snow. Ugochi. But oatmeal lmaoo

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Orenda .
07:34 Sep 17, 2020

Yeahhhh I like quirky nicknames!

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Sia S
07:39 Sep 17, 2020

Noice !!

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Skyler Grey
16:01 Sep 16, 2020

your quiz is the most confusing thing ive seen in my life lol

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Orenda .
16:50 Sep 16, 2020

😃😃😯😯 glad that you at least visited it

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Skyler Grey
17:04 Sep 16, 2020

yeah i love quizzes like those

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Orenda .
17:20 Sep 16, 2020

You were 😜 ig, who didnt bother to take the quiz lmao, not saying you should've, but great👌

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Skyler Grey
17:49 Sep 16, 2020

um, no i was Sky..?

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Orenda .
18:22 Sep 16, 2020

Aaah! Sky next letter L?

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Amany Sayed
14:25 Sep 16, 2020

Did your quiz hehe Thanks for the flash image ;)

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Orenda .
14:49 Sep 16, 2020

hhuhu, did it keeping you in mind:)))

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Orenda .
14:52 Sep 16, 2020

dudeeee....horror's sooo correct..

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Rebecca Lee
03:11 Sep 16, 2020

All I can say is that was well-done. I would go back and reread - there were some little mechanic issues here and there - and in some places, it was like you went off on a tangent. (I got kind of lost) But overall it was a good story.

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Orenda .
08:38 Sep 16, 2020

Thanks so much for reading and I understand there are some mistakes like, how did the baby get teleported to the storeroom XD But I'm glad you enjoyed it:) And also, could you please mention some of those issues here? I know, the story's been approved, but I'd like to know them anyway:n

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CY Croft
05:09 Sep 14, 2020

I had to reread when I saw the name William. I like how this was turning out although I got confused and had to read it again.

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Orenda .
05:28 Sep 14, 2020

I'm really sorry it got confusing, many have said that😅 but thanks for reading and enjoying. Would matter a lot if you give a like too:)))

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00:30 Aug 24, 2020

ALERT! ALERT! There is more Afrassi! PIRATES, THIS IS A CODE NEW-STORY!

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Orenda .
03:05 Aug 24, 2020

Hmm....what? New wrirates on the ship? Cool!

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. .
07:51 Aug 22, 2020

This was so incredible! It was written with beautiful description and the depth in it was incredible. ~Sarah 🍔

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Orenda .
10:17 Aug 22, 2020

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks a lot! :))

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20:56 Aug 21, 2020

Hey, Orenda! Just thought I’d drop by to saaay... I just posted a new story!!! It’s part 1 of 3. Would you mind checking it out (when you have time)? Thaaaanks, sis! ~Aerin

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Orenda .
07:46 Aug 22, 2020

Yesssssseu I will😘😘

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12:20 Aug 22, 2020

Thanks! 👊

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Authoring Studio
15:45 Sep 24, 2020

Thanks a ton for speaking up against the downvoter(s)! I am really grateful to know there are some good people in this world!

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Orenda .
15:49 Sep 24, 2020

:)))

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D. Shikha
07:51 Sep 19, 2020

Hey Orenda, I'm sorry if I'm bothering you but I posted a new story and I'll be so grateful if you check it out.

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Orenda .
08:19 Sep 19, 2020

you're not bothering at all and yeeeee I'm excited!!

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Keerththan 😀
06:57 Sep 18, 2020

Hey Orenda This was so thrilling. When she poke her fingers into Riz or the other guy's eyes I was laughing. It was a funny attack to do on him. This started very funny and ended with a great suspense. I loved this story. And I gasped at your description. They were totally awesome and I could just picturise William. Keep writing. Waiting for your next..... And mind checking my new one? I love marvel too. Who's your favourite?

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Orenda .
08:23 Sep 18, 2020

Waauuu I'm glad you enjoyed it haha..you too, keep writing! Oh yeah, I love marvel. I love black widow like anything else! Cap America, Spidey, Hawkeye, thor pretty much everyone else. They're just awesome. I also love X-Men, pretty cool freaks huhu what about you?

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Keerththan 😀
08:25 Sep 18, 2020

My pleasure! Yeah! I am a hard core fan of Captain America(even if he's old) I also like Thor and Iron man and pretty much everybody. They are totally awesome and then black panther😥😥 I also love Xmen and Apocalypse. *gasps* wonderful movie.

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Orenda .
08:43 Sep 18, 2020

Omg yess how could I forget black panther????? Yeee yess *gasps too sharply and chokes on her own saliva* lmaooo

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Keerththan 😀
08:44 Sep 18, 2020

Yeah how did you forget him! Yeah! Really awesome. He was 10 times more powerful than Thanos.

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Orenda .
08:53 Sep 18, 2020

Huhu BP is powerful, but nah, not stronger than thanos! Without gauntlet? Probably, but not while he's the one with all the stones.

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The Cold Ice
04:02 Sep 01, 2020

Hilarious story.Great job👍keep it up.I enjoyed the story.Keep writing. Would you mind to read my story “The dragon warrior ?”

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Orenda .
06:18 Sep 01, 2020

Thanks a lot and yess, I will:))

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Radhika Diksha
04:59 Dec 16, 2020

it’s ocean-blue eyes sparkling with tears and it smiles at me, three tiny pearl white teeth lined along the bottom gum, dimples forming miniature crates at the right place. But, my heart burns at the mother’s cruel and gruesome audacity. A wonderful sentence, I loved your broccoli concept and the image you added from Pinterest. You are an amazing writer and I love your writing style. You hell inspired me.

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Orenda .
05:09 Dec 16, 2020

Omg Radhika, I appreciate your time, man. Thank you soo much and I'm so flattered I inspired you. <33

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Writers Block
22:52 Dec 05, 2020

Similar to the Stephanie plum novels by Janet evanovich

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Orenda .
06:48 Dec 06, 2020

ooh, this broccoli one? I've never heard of her, but I'm actually glad it reminds you of her. :D

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B. W.
23:28 Nov 06, 2020

i think i could use some advice for something

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Orenda .
05:33 Nov 07, 2020

yeah, ssup!

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B. W.
05:43 Nov 07, 2020

well not much as advice- i just wanna see what ya think, do ya know that alien prompt that's one of the new ones?

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Orenda .
05:44 Nov 07, 2020

yesss

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B. W.
05:45 Nov 07, 2020

well i sorta have a idea for it and I wanted to run it by ya to see what ya would think

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Orenda .
05:46 Nov 07, 2020

ohkie. Tell me your idea.

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B. W.
01:23 Oct 09, 2020

Heya. So you, Vayd and some others saw the story "Blind date" Right? Could you maybe send a link to the thing? i need to talk to the person.

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Orenda .
03:08 Oct 09, 2020

oh i see you changed your name, FINALLYYY! I'm sending it right away.

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B. W.
03:11 Oct 09, 2020

Yep, though it'll only last for october and i'll probably change it back real soon since it's just a Halloween name ^^ and thank you

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Orenda .
03:17 Oct 09, 2020

oh i see you've already commented on the story, nevermind. And, yeah even my name is temporary:)

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B. W.
03:18 Oct 09, 2020

What made ya decide to make your Halloween name that?

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Orenda .
03:20 Oct 09, 2020

Ah, I dont know at all. At first, a put Jason from Friday the 13th, but it didn't work well and I randomly came up with the current name 😂

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Orenda .
14:43 Oct 09, 2020

yo, new thread. And, you're really quick to do that! Awesome!

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B. W.
14:45 Oct 09, 2020

Do you like all the prompts? or are there a certain few that ya like?

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Orenda .
14:46 Oct 09, 2020

all of 'em are nice, but i like the 2nd one more :)

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B. W.
14:48 Oct 09, 2020

You may see a couple new stories from me real soon

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Orenda .
14:50 Oct 09, 2020

oooh aight, cool!

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B. W.
00:53 Oct 07, 2020

Do you maybe know how to draw really well? i need help with something.

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Orenda .
03:19 Oct 07, 2020

oh, you've asked the right person hehe what do you need?

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B. W.
03:25 Oct 07, 2020

I was wondering if you could maybe help me with the cover art for my novels?

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Orenda .
03:52 Oct 07, 2020

hmm okay depends on what type of art you want...

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B. W.
04:13 Oct 07, 2020

Well what could you do?

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Orenda .
04:16 Oct 07, 2020

tell me what you want on your covers. I guess, making covers digitially will be easier

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B. W.
17:56 Oct 05, 2020

Heya there

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Orenda .
18:06 Oct 05, 2020

hola hola, wassup!

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B. W.
17:44 Oct 06, 2020

New thread because yes. Well there are ways to stop that, i think.

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Orenda .
18:38 Oct 06, 2020

yeah there is. Like, closing all the freakin tabs and GETTING THE WORK DONE because I have one tab with music blasting from it, one with reedsy site open, one with instagram and one legit with pinterest cuz why not? Lol.

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B. W.
18:07 Oct 05, 2020

Estoy trabajando en una de mis novelas

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Orenda .
18:15 Oct 05, 2020

I pretty much put two and two and understood what you said? Lol. Anyway, whoch novel? That demi God series?

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B. W.
18:16 Oct 05, 2020

Nope, it's a different one that i'm almost done with. i'm on chapter 20

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Orenda .
18:19 Oct 05, 2020

omgg daz cool🤟🤟

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B. W.
20:33 Oct 02, 2020

i need someone to talk to

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Orenda .
20:37 Oct 02, 2020

yess sis

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B. W.
20:37 Oct 02, 2020

i may need some help or advice with some things but it's not really with stories, it's with something else

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Orenda .
20:38 Oct 02, 2020

yeah how can I help?

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B. W.
20:41 Oct 02, 2020

i'm not sure if you'll really be able to help but i think i should just tell some people. I don't feel like i should be here. (on Reedsy not gone completely like ya know) or that i should keep writing. I worry about a lot of stuff but i feel like i shouldn't keep writing maybe. They'll probably just be really terrible novels and no one will like them and what if no one likes my newer stories or even me??

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Orenda .
20:46 Oct 02, 2020

why do you think so, pal? It's your stories, your mind, why should you care what others think about you or what you write? Reedsy needs you here, we need you here. Dont doubt yourself, just keep going. I worry about a lot of things, but I just learn to ignore things that doesnt have an importance in my life. if you're worried about your first drafts, it's natural that's it's not going to love upto your expectations since it's just the first draft. you can always go back and get into it with a fresh mind. What others might think isn't your pr...

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Orenda .
20:52 Oct 02, 2020

also, dont rush to complete your drafts, you have plenty of time ahead of you, take your time and do what you love. I definitely don't think you should stop writing because you're tremendously talented and quitting writing because what others might think shouldn't happen at all. People always have a habit to get into other's affairs and demoralize them for whatever they're doing and you should be the one to actually ignore them because they arent helping you with anything

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Orenda .
20:42 Oct 02, 2020

sis, I might have to go now. It's very bad that I couldnt help you with what you needed. I'll surely help you out when I'm back.

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B. W.
20:44 Oct 02, 2020

i guess its fine

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