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Hello! I'm here from the critique circle. This was a nice story but there were a lot of errors. For example, instead of "Spoked" I think the word you were looking for was "said". Also, every time a character speaks, or the topic changes there should be a new paragraph. Amruta should be capitalized because it is the girl's name. But, you did a good job with the story and it was creative :)
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Ok, I will work on that part thanks for suggestion .
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No problem.
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