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Adventure Fantasy

If you haven't already, you should go check out the first part to this little series. Though if you don't really want to, that's completely fine. "B" or "Bri" would be me.

Kate and B had been discussing something in a small tent like thing that had been left in the woods for what seemed like ages. They had been trying to find anything that could help them, though when they stepped outside, the leaves seemed to be on fire.

"What the? Did you guy's do something??" B and Kate ran over to the others, they seemed to kind of be watching as the leaves remained on fire. What was strange though was that not all of the leaves were like this, only about five total leaves were on fire despite the fire leaves touching them.

"We shouldn't worry about that, we need to get out of here!" Brooke spoke. The leaves weren't even much of a problem to them, it was that they were in each-others stories. How was this even possible? This feels like a dream..

"Alright i'm back now, what did i miss?" Aerin had slid down a large rainbow from near by and headed back over to the others. None of the character's had actually seen her while doing this, that was a good thing.

"Maybe we should ask someone for help? I'm sure that someone would want to help us, i think that this is a nice place." Brooke then suggested.

Everyone turned and stared at her in silence.

"What??"

Itay was the first to speak, "Brooke i don't think that we should do that. Who knows what would happen if we ran into some of our characters?" oh, i guess i kinda forgot about that. what if everything explodes?

"Let's just sneak around and hope that we find an exit that get's us out of here? That sometimes works with things and maybe it'll work with this." B suggested. Let's hope that we don't turn this into a horror movie though..

"That work's for me, come on everyone let's go." Aerin decided to try and lead the group. This area they were all in were surrounded by thousand's of rainbows, she could do this. She could probably lead them out. Probably.

"Guys, we probably shouldn't split up though. That's gonna make this end up like a horror movie, none of us want to die right?" Both B and Kate seemed to say in unison.

As everyone walked through the rainbows they began to hear voices. They sounded a bit familiar, at least to Itay. He had thought of what they would sound like and it sounded just like the voices he picked.

They all passed through a couple more rainbows until they bumped into a girl and boy. They both seemed to be around the age of sixteen or so. George and Elizabeth. What?? what are they doing here??

"Um. Hello there sir..." George said with a small wave.

"Well, I think it's completely fine Itay, nothing bad has even happened with us or them.." Aerin said in a whisper to him. What if they even don't realize that they're story characters? How would we explain?

B pulled Itay over to the side while everyone just seemed to stare at his two characters in silence. No one even seemed to be speaking, not even his characters. "B, what is it?"

"I know this may seem to be a bit strange but, well you made those characters right? They are kinda alive now as well...i think you might be a dad now." She was speaking barely above a whisper. She didn't want the characters to hear.

"What?? I mean..i guess your kinda right in a way with that. I don't think i could be a dad to them though, even if they're just book characters they still have actual parents as well. How do i even be a dad?" Itay didn't need this today. How would his character's even react to this?

"What are you even talking about? Get back over here, Aerin's trying to distract the two." Brooke walked over to the two of them. They looked back over to see Aerin showing the two of them the rainbows.

"Itay, i think we just have to bring the two of them with us. At least until we find a way to get outta this weird place, but that might be a long while." B spoke.

"Hurry up guys, they don't seem to really like the rainbows." They can hear Kate say. Brooke and B then began to drag Itay over to the rest of them. This was going to be even stranger than it already was.

They didn't really explain to Elizabeth and George what was even going on, they just gently grabbed them and began to bring them along. They didn't really struggle that much though so that was good. Wait, does this count as a kidnapping?? oh gosh

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"Laiba! what's the matter, what happened? Stop gripping my arm like that." Vayd asked as he was getting dragged along with a few other friend's. He and a few other's had been hanging out at his place when Laiba entered all freaked out.

"Come on, why don't you come with us back to the house? we could go and watch a movie?" Both Kylie and Orenda seemed to speak in unison. Amany remained silent as she stood behind them.

"Weren't you with Nayab earlier as well? Where did she even go?" Vayd asked. He was watching as Laiba was trying to unlock the door to B's house. What's even going on? are they in trouble or something?

"Laiba, move aside please." Kylie seemed to have a key for the house as she gently pushed Laiba aside and unlocked the door. Laiba quickly ran inside of the house, Vayd and the others quickly followed.

"Ew! what is that??" Vayd seemed to point over to the floor where books lay with strange liquid and gooey things on them. There were Yellow ones, Blue and even light purple on the books. What even is this stuff?

"Something happened earlier, they just disappeared! i think it was because of that stuff...i don't even know where they went, it was like infinity war or something." Laiba seemed to try her best and explain.

Everyone stared at each other in silence while Amany still stayed at the entrance not saying anything. At first they didn't know what to think and thought she was playing a small joke on them.

"Crap."

Everyone turned around to see a strange purple light around Vayd and it looked like he was starting to disappear somewhere. Just like how the others had disappeared earlier.

It was happening to them now as well. In a matter of second's Vayd disappeared completely, the only thing left was the purple light at the moment. Though Laiba knew, it was going to take all of them as well. Not just him.



October 09, 2020 17:11

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492 comments

Wait did you use some of the names I suggested (for the guardian angel thing)? I read your bio! 0:

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B. W.
14:14 Oct 14, 2020

Yep i did :) i really liked them

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Aw thanks : D

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B. W.
18:27 Oct 14, 2020

No prob :) i'm actually working on a new novel

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23:19 Oct 09, 2020

Thank you so so so much for adding me in here! I love it to death!

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B. W.
23:22 Oct 09, 2020

No problem, i'm glad that you liked it ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part or something?

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23:26 Oct 09, 2020

I loved my dialogue, just cuz it made me smile seeing my name there!

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B. W.
23:30 Oct 09, 2020

Yep ^^ anything else? :)

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00:01 Oct 10, 2020

I just thought it was so cool how you included your friends, great job!

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B. W.
00:04 Oct 10, 2020

Do you want something to happen to story you in it?

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00:24 Oct 10, 2020

Noiceeeeee! And yay it’s so funnnnn being in storiesssss I’ll definitely add you in one of mine again at some point :)

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B. W.
00:35 Oct 10, 2020

"Again" ? i still don't know which story that you did a nod to me in, or i forgot. Though thanks, i'm glad that you liked it ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part for it?

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07:54 Nov 16, 2020

Great follow up from the first one! My favorite part was when B suggested that Italy was a father, It was really fun to imagine how that conversation must have been awkwardly funny. Can't wait for part three!

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B. W.
07:56 Nov 16, 2020

It's actually Itay by the way and not Italy, but yeah I think that was one of my favorite parts to write in this ^^ do ya maybe have any other favorite parts or anything like that?

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09:57 Nov 16, 2020

I'm so sorry about that. I'll be sure to remember that it's *Itay*. I liked Aerin's initiative to take the lead although all of you don't really know what to do to go back to the real world. And the ending when the rest of the guys are also pulled into the book. It was a good read full of uncertainty. Right now its sort of unclear, how they will escape and what dangers they will encounter, so i'm keen to read about what happens next.

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B. W.
18:25 Nov 16, 2020

I'll try to get part 3 out soon ^^

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Orenda .
14:17 Oct 14, 2020

I couldn't find your comment, but HOLY CAKIE!!!! YOU'RE RIGHT. IT HAS BEEN UPDATEDDDDDDDDDDD

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B. W.
14:19 Oct 14, 2020

So it's for everyone and not just me then? I was kind of getting a bit worried and confused for a few minutes because i thought that something was wrong with it

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Orenda .
14:21 Oct 14, 2020

lol it's for everyone.

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B. W.
14:22 Oct 14, 2020

Wait, so how is it going with the confession thing?

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Orenda .
14:41 Oct 14, 2020

yo i have it here, lemme know what you think :D “What are you even talking about?” Ryder says, crosses his arms over his chest and leans against the wall, his arm muscles awfully prominent. “Just what you heard.” Mika smirks. “You know, you act like you’re very oblivious, but it’s just the opposite.” “What?!” Ryder straightens up and runs his hands over his breathtaking face as if “Arren’s my life” is written all over it and he wants to ensure he wipes it off. “Dude, do you even know what you’re talking about?” “Absolutely!” “NO! No...

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B. W.
14:44 Oct 14, 2020

Okay, that's really a good one ^^ could you maybe the do the kiss between em now if that's alright? i know how it's still kinda weird or maybe it's not. I could still help you with it so it would be easier as well :) the confession is still good as well.

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C.j 🤍
03:48 Oct 10, 2020

Good job! I like these 2 story’s a lot !

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B. W.
03:52 Oct 10, 2020

Thanks ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part?

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C.j 🤍
04:06 Oct 10, 2020

I liked it all ! But I like how you choose people from your follower list and put them in your story’s . You do a awesome job at that 👏🏼

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B. W.
04:10 Oct 10, 2020

Thanks ^^ well it's mostly Reedsy Friends while i guess they are on my follower list, i haven't added everyone because that would be complete chaos and i'd probably forget where everyone was or something.

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C.j 🤍
04:13 Oct 10, 2020

Yeah I understand 🤣

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B. W.
04:19 Oct 10, 2020

wow- did you change your name??

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Orenda .
18:57 Oct 09, 2020

Alrighty yo, lovely matey! Thanks so much for adding me in here and i'm so amazed with how fast you upload a story. It's awesome! Also, it was light and funny and the ending was super nice, too. There were some mistakes which can edited real quick. I sound like that person who's like, "Yo cool story. Some mistakes here and there, but can be corrected real easily. Nice!" Lmaooo but i'm pointing out "That work's for me, come on everyone let's go." omit the apostrophe after work. and somewhere else though i can't find where, capitalise...

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B. W.
19:05 Oct 09, 2020

Thank's, i'm glad that you liked it ^^ Yeah, i could try and fix some of those small things whenever i can. I always get ideas a LOT and so i decide to make a lot of stories on here whenever i can. Did you maybe have a favorite part in it or something?

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Orenda .
19:14 Oct 09, 2020

yep, anytime! I didn't have any favourite part, i loved every bit of the story.

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B. W.
19:22 Oct 09, 2020

What do you think will happen in the next part?

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Orenda .
19:28 Oct 09, 2020

well i don't know, they all disappear, so they reach someplace unusual and weird? I don't know.

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B. W.
19:34 Oct 09, 2020

ya want anything to happen with story you?

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B. W.
19:35 Oct 09, 2020

ya want anything to happen with story you?

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B. W.
19:35 Oct 09, 2020

ya want anything to happen with story you?

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20:44 Oct 15, 2020

Looking forward to reading more. Keep it coming. Robert

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Kate Ulrich
14:36 Oct 15, 2020

Hey! I have a question- in your other stories, what does Zio look like? I always imagined him with black hair and blue eyes, but I don't know if that's right.

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B. W.
14:41 Oct 15, 2020

Hey Katie, how it going with the thing? Tomorrow is when the newer ones come out and i'm worried since you keep leaving a lot. Actually, your kind of right about what he looks like, i first thought of him having brown hair but changed it a while ago to black with blue stripes in it and some lighter blue eyes. Also, on his shoulders he kind of has the symbol of Zeus.

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Kate Ulrich
14:43 Oct 15, 2020

I'm almost done with it! :) Sorry to worry you. I don't have as much time to spend on Reedsy as I used to. Okay, thank you for the description. The story should be out I think in a few hours? Before Friday morning.

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B. W.
14:49 Oct 15, 2020

I guess that's good ^^ when will you start being here again? You leave for a while but sometimes you leave for a few days and i know i have others to talk to but your one of my friends (best friend? :) ) and one of the main people i talk to as well and i'm not entirely sure if it's because family stuff or something else.

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Kate Ulrich
15:01 Oct 15, 2020

Aw :) I think you're my best Reedsy friend too. The reason I'm not on Reedsy as often anymore is because of all the online learning, and covid, and work I have to do. So I don't have as much free time as I used to. Sometimes I leave for a day or more because I take a break from my computer and spend some time screen-free. But I always look forward to when I check my notifications because usually it's you commenting. :)

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B. W.
15:14 Oct 15, 2020

That's all alright ^^ ill be waiting for the part, though i already have a feeling that it'll be great, just like the other ones :) also, what do you think of this new update?

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Nayab Ahmar
03:55 Oct 14, 2020

Omg! This story is so so so amazing B!! I love it sm and I'm so excited to find out what happens next esp where my character is hehe. The plot is so interesting, I love how everyone has ended up in each others stories. P.S the forest with the fire in the beginning reminded me of the forest with the fire in my story Battle for the Crown so it made me feel even more connected to this story hehe :) Are my characters going to show up in the future as well maybe? Whatever you decide, I'm sure it will be amazing B! Thank you sm for including ...

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B. W.
03:57 Oct 14, 2020

I was going to add you into the second part but i already added a lot of other characters into this part and i'd probably forget where everyone was or something. Though i'm glad you liked it and maybe your characters will appear ^^ what did you think of the part where we met Itay's characters?

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Nayab Ahmar
04:02 Oct 14, 2020

It's ok, I'm still a part of the story and that's really cool in itself- plus I understand how hard it would be to keep track of all the characters- you're truly amazing! And oooh I'd wonder which ones would show up (since many of mine are evil or morally gray lol) ^^I think that part was really cool and also funny hehe with the kidnapping thing lol! Very creative!

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B. W.
04:04 Oct 14, 2020

what do you think might happen in the next part?

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Nayab Ahmar
04:06 Oct 14, 2020

Ooh I think the rest of the characters are also sucked into the universe too right!

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B. W.
04:07 Oct 14, 2020

how many parts do ya think this'll be?

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19:49 Oct 13, 2020

Wow, 'Blair'! This was awesome! Thanks again for adding me into this! At the end when the other Reeders got sucked into the books--that was awesome. I would just say to watch your capitalization and punctuation. Keep writing! -Brooke D. <3

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B. W.
19:51 Oct 13, 2020

Thank's, i'm glad you liked it ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part or was that when the others got sucked into the books?

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20:00 Oct 13, 2020

You're welcome! ^^ Yes, when the others got sucked into the books was my favorite part.

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B. W.
20:01 Oct 13, 2020

What did ya think about meeting Itays characters and him sorta being a dad in there now?

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20:05 Oct 13, 2020

I thought that was really interesting! And I liked it!

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B. W.
20:07 Oct 13, 2020

:)

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Orenda .
15:34 Oct 13, 2020

helli! :D

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B. W.
15:39 Oct 13, 2020

Hello there :D how are ya?

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Orenda .
15:43 Oct 13, 2020

elluuuu all fine, but i'm bored. Suprisingly, didn't talk to anybody here. Wby?

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B. W.
15:50 Oct 13, 2020

I'm also bored at the moment, can we just talk?

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Orenda .
15:56 Oct 13, 2020

OFC what'dya want to talk about?

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B. W.
15:59 Oct 13, 2020

My demi-god novel if that's alright?

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Orenda .
19:48 Oct 13, 2020

starting a new thread.... and yeah, I totally love that and I'd want that to happen to. you know, i got a mail from reedsy about thr dv issue i told them about. i haven't read it yet. Lemme see what they've written and ill come back to you.

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B. W.
19:51 Oct 13, 2020

Alright then, i could do that and probably a few other things with your character as well. oh, i hope its good news from them ^^

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Orenda .
19:53 Oct 13, 2020

yeee okayyy

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B. W.
19:55 Oct 13, 2020

Also, should i maybe try and kill off one of the characters, or at least to a near death thing? I always start thinking that i should do something like that whenever i make a new novel.

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Orenda .
19:56 Oct 13, 2020

this is what Jenn said- Thanks for reaching out. We are aware of the downvoting issues, and are working to implement the best solution. We appreciate your patience in the meantime. All the best, Jenn

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B. W.
19:58 Oct 13, 2020

I guess that's good news, and that they're at least going to try and do something ^^ are you gonna tell them about Matt as well since She responded to this?

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Hriday Saboo
04:52 Oct 13, 2020

B.W to Blair witch. Quite innovative. Liked the story too. Would you mind reading my new story

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Hriday Saboo
04:52 Oct 13, 2020

B.W to Blair witch. Quite innovative. Liked the story too. Would you mind reading my new story

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B. W.
12:40 Oct 13, 2020

I'll do it soon

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Hriday Saboo
13:42 Oct 13, 2020

Thanks a lot

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Hriday Saboo
13:42 Oct 13, 2020

Thanks a lot

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B. W.
13:45 Oct 13, 2020

No problem. Though you just came on here to tell me that, could you leave some feedback for this story?

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Hriday Saboo
17:07 Oct 13, 2020

Nope

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B. W.
17:42 Oct 13, 2020

what

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00:44 Oct 13, 2020

I think I'm leaving Reedsy...

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B. W.
00:45 Oct 13, 2020

What??? why?? oh gosh why do you have to leave? everyone just seems to be leaving now

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00:59 Oct 13, 2020

Nonono! I would never!!

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B. W.
01:08 Oct 13, 2020

??? then why did you ever even say it?? You started to get me worried and kind of scared! everyones just leaving man!

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01:28 Oct 13, 2020

I know, I would feel the same way if I were you. ;) So many people are just poof! Gone!

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B. W.
01:33 Oct 13, 2020

I don't even know if it's because of what the down-voter is doing or if it's something else.

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Orenda .
16:54 Oct 12, 2020

i finally wrote a message to the reedsy team, though i'm not sure if it's the right place. want me to send the msg i wrote there?

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B. W.
16:58 Oct 12, 2020

Yeah sure, send it to me.

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Orenda .
17:31 Oct 12, 2020

aight, I will. Lemme go on my pc and then ill send it to ya.

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B. W.
17:39 Oct 12, 2020

alright ^^

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Orenda .
17:51 Oct 12, 2020

yup.

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B. W.
17:53 Oct 12, 2020

wait, ya sent the thing to Jenn right?

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Itay Frenkel
22:48 Oct 11, 2020

Reading about myself meeting my own characters was such a surreal, meta experience, thank you for that! The whole thing about me being like their father is a really cool way of thinking about the relationship between author and creator. I liked that you split the characters into 2 groups, as there’s so many of them. One question, what were the italicizes parts? Somebody’s thoughts?

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B. W.
23:02 Oct 11, 2020

Yes, the italic stuff were thoughts. "Wait, is this a kidnapping??" or whatever was said in it was you thinking about it. Though thanks, i'm glad that you liked the story and i hope i'll make part 3 soon ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part or something? or was it you meeting your characters?

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Itay Frenkel
22:00 Oct 13, 2020

That line, is this kidnapping or something, was really funny. Also, Aerin sliding in from a rainbow was cool, it’s like all kinds of magical things from different peoples’ stories exists in this world we got transported to.

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B. W.
22:04 Oct 13, 2020

Could you help me with something?

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Itay Frenkel
14:54 Oct 16, 2020

Sure, what do you need?

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B. W.
15:12 Oct 16, 2020

I'm writing a demi-god novel and i could probably just use some help with the romance

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Kate Ulrich
15:48 Oct 11, 2020

This series is so fun. Thanks for adding me! :)

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B. W.
16:24 Oct 11, 2020

Thanks ^^ did you ever have a favorite part in it? well i didn't just add you in it, you were in the first part as well but no prob ^^

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Corey Melin
22:28 Oct 10, 2020

Quite the imaginative story. Good read. Suggestions: "What the? Did you guy's do something??" B and Kate ran over to the others, they seemed to kind of be watching as the leaves remained on fire.- "What the..." Did you guys do something?" B and Kate ran over to the others, they seemed to be watching as the leaves remained on fire. Re-read the sentences you use the word "that" and see if you can do without it.

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B. W.
22:53 Oct 10, 2020

Thank's i'm glad that you liked it ^^ yeah, there's still a while before some stuff happens with the stories so i guess i could go and fix all the stuff. Did you maybe ever have a favorite part?

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Corey Melin
02:23 Oct 11, 2020

The rainbows that sounds like they come or go to different lands

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B. W.
02:39 Oct 11, 2020

Nice ^^

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Orenda .
13:12 Oct 10, 2020

henlo there!

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B. W.
15:01 Oct 10, 2020

Hiya ^^

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Orenda .
15:01 Oct 10, 2020

hola

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B. W.
15:03 Oct 10, 2020

Amiga

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Orenda .
15:08 Oct 10, 2020

aaah, ¿como estas?

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B. W.
15:27 Oct 10, 2020

uhh, i think i'm good? i honestly don't know or understand that much spanish

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