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Adventure Fantasy

If you haven't already, you should go check out the first part to this little series. Though if you don't really want to, that's completely fine. "B" or "Bri" would be me.

Kate and B had been discussing something in a small tent like thing that had been left in the woods for what seemed like ages. They had been trying to find anything that could help them, though when they stepped outside, the leaves seemed to be on fire.

"What the? Did you guy's do something??" B and Kate ran over to the others, they seemed to kind of be watching as the leaves remained on fire. What was strange though was that not all of the leaves were like this, only about five total leaves were on fire despite the fire leaves touching them.

"We shouldn't worry about that, we need to get out of here!" Brooke spoke. The leaves weren't even much of a problem to them, it was that they were in each-others stories. How was this even possible? This feels like a dream..

"Alright i'm back now, what did i miss?" Aerin had slid down a large rainbow from near by and headed back over to the others. None of the character's had actually seen her while doing this, that was a good thing.

"Maybe we should ask someone for help? I'm sure that someone would want to help us, i think that this is a nice place." Brooke then suggested.

Everyone turned and stared at her in silence.

"What??"

Itay was the first to speak, "Brooke i don't think that we should do that. Who knows what would happen if we ran into some of our characters?" oh, i guess i kinda forgot about that. what if everything explodes?

"Let's just sneak around and hope that we find an exit that get's us out of here? That sometimes works with things and maybe it'll work with this." B suggested. Let's hope that we don't turn this into a horror movie though..

"That work's for me, come on everyone let's go." Aerin decided to try and lead the group. This area they were all in were surrounded by thousand's of rainbows, she could do this. She could probably lead them out. Probably.

"Guys, we probably shouldn't split up though. That's gonna make this end up like a horror movie, none of us want to die right?" Both B and Kate seemed to say in unison.

As everyone walked through the rainbows they began to hear voices. They sounded a bit familiar, at least to Itay. He had thought of what they would sound like and it sounded just like the voices he picked.

They all passed through a couple more rainbows until they bumped into a girl and boy. They both seemed to be around the age of sixteen or so. George and Elizabeth. What?? what are they doing here??

"Um. Hello there sir..." George said with a small wave.

"Well, I think it's completely fine Itay, nothing bad has even happened with us or them.." Aerin said in a whisper to him. What if they even don't realize that they're story characters? How would we explain?

B pulled Itay over to the side while everyone just seemed to stare at his two characters in silence. No one even seemed to be speaking, not even his characters. "B, what is it?"

"I know this may seem to be a bit strange but, well you made those characters right? They are kinda alive now as well...i think you might be a dad now." She was speaking barely above a whisper. She didn't want the characters to hear.

"What?? I mean..i guess your kinda right in a way with that. I don't think i could be a dad to them though, even if they're just book characters they still have actual parents as well. How do i even be a dad?" Itay didn't need this today. How would his character's even react to this?

"What are you even talking about? Get back over here, Aerin's trying to distract the two." Brooke walked over to the two of them. They looked back over to see Aerin showing the two of them the rainbows.

"Itay, i think we just have to bring the two of them with us. At least until we find a way to get outta this weird place, but that might be a long while." B spoke.

"Hurry up guys, they don't seem to really like the rainbows." They can hear Kate say. Brooke and B then began to drag Itay over to the rest of them. This was going to be even stranger than it already was.

They didn't really explain to Elizabeth and George what was even going on, they just gently grabbed them and began to bring them along. They didn't really struggle that much though so that was good. Wait, does this count as a kidnapping?? oh gosh

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"Laiba! what's the matter, what happened? Stop gripping my arm like that." Vayd asked as he was getting dragged along with a few other friend's. He and a few other's had been hanging out at his place when Laiba entered all freaked out.

"Come on, why don't you come with us back to the house? we could go and watch a movie?" Both Kylie and Orenda seemed to speak in unison. Amany remained silent as she stood behind them.

"Weren't you with Nayab earlier as well? Where did she even go?" Vayd asked. He was watching as Laiba was trying to unlock the door to B's house. What's even going on? are they in trouble or something?

"Laiba, move aside please." Kylie seemed to have a key for the house as she gently pushed Laiba aside and unlocked the door. Laiba quickly ran inside of the house, Vayd and the others quickly followed.

"Ew! what is that??" Vayd seemed to point over to the floor where books lay with strange liquid and gooey things on them. There were Yellow ones, Blue and even light purple on the books. What even is this stuff?

"Something happened earlier, they just disappeared! i think it was because of that stuff...i don't even know where they went, it was like infinity war or something." Laiba seemed to try her best and explain.

Everyone stared at each other in silence while Amany still stayed at the entrance not saying anything. At first they didn't know what to think and thought she was playing a small joke on them.

"Crap."

Everyone turned around to see a strange purple light around Vayd and it looked like he was starting to disappear somewhere. Just like how the others had disappeared earlier.

It was happening to them now as well. In a matter of second's Vayd disappeared completely, the only thing left was the purple light at the moment. Though Laiba knew, it was going to take all of them as well. Not just him.



October 09, 2020 17:11

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Amany Sayed
00:53 Oct 10, 2020

So cute! That ending is awesome too. Thanks for including me ^^ Waiting for Part 3!

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B. W.
01:07 Oct 10, 2020

Thank's i'm glad you liked it ^^ and no prob, i'm just adding most of my friend's on this stuff now. did you maybe have a favorite part? or was it maybe the ending? ya want anything to happen to story you?

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Amany Sayed
01:17 Oct 10, 2020

No problem. Favorite parrrrt- when someone thought, I forgot who- "Wait is this kidnapping??" I thought it was funny lol. Maybe I could grow wings idk that was really really random.

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B. W.
01:26 Oct 10, 2020

Itay was the one who kinda said that, or at least thought it. What do ya think will happen in the next part?

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Ariadne .
23:50 Oct 09, 2020

Wow, this is fabulous! Well done! It's really neat how you incorporated your other Reedsy friends in here. Great work! ~Ria :)

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B. W.
23:53 Oct 09, 2020

Thanks, i'm glad that you liked it ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part in it, or was it that i added some Reedsy friends?

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Ariadne .
23:54 Oct 09, 2020

The Reedsy friend thing was my fave! :)

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B. W.
23:59 Oct 09, 2020

What did you think about them meeting two of his characters?

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Ariadne .
02:19 Oct 10, 2020

Super cool! I love how they traveled to different story worlds. Very unique idea! There are some grammar and spelling errors, though. Run it through an editing tool, perhaps? I'd help but there's quite a few.

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B. W.
03:19 Oct 10, 2020

Yeah, i still have time, i could try and edit it

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Laiba M
17:28 Oct 09, 2020

I love this so much!! Thanks again for deciding to add me to your story, Hope~! I definitely liked the 'real-life' part more than the fantasy part, one, because I was in it (haha~ :D) and two, because you added the other characters being taken in the end as well! Good job with incorporating Aerin's love of rainbows, by the way :)

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Laiba M
17:29 Oct 09, 2020

Oh, right, I had some questions! Is this series going to have anything scary for Halloween, like a Halloween special? Is there any romance in the series?

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Laiba M
17:32 Oct 09, 2020

And~ I keep forgetting to add things, haha~~ for one point to improve, or a suggestion in general, I think you should leave one or two friends behind, and they could be stressed out trying to get the others back,.. maybe it could lead to a romance or close friendship between them? Or maybe they end up getting sick of each other, because they weren't close in the first place.

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B. W.
17:36 Oct 09, 2020

Thank's i'm glad that you liked it ^^ Well, i'm not sure, maybe i'll at least try to do something with Halloween if i feel like it. I started the first part way before october so i don't think it would count as a halloween thing. How would i do the romance though? I don't think anyone would want to be shipped with each other and i don't know how they'd even react if i did do it. Because what if i decided to ship you and Amany in it or something? wouldn't that be a bit strange? i don't know how you and her would react.

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Laiba M
17:42 Oct 09, 2020

Yeah, I was thinking a Halloween special, which wouldn't affect the actual storyline but is a fun spooky short story with the characters! Since it isn't affecting the storyline they can all be in the fantasy world or the real world together :) Also, I was thinking that, so you would have to ask if they were comfortable with that and who they were comfortable with being put with.

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B. W.
17:44 Oct 09, 2020

You really want some Romance in the story though? i don't even have any ideas for it at all. Unless you could give me some ideas, then i could go and ask if they were comfortable with it or something?

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Laiba M
17:47 Oct 09, 2020

It's not that, I thought it would be fun :) Just a suggestion! My idea was that two people would be left behind in their normal world and have some romance, but you could use that idea and instead of having romance they could hate each other and get competitive to see who would get the others back first!

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B. W.
17:56 Oct 09, 2020

I mean, what if i decide to ship you with someone? who would you wanna be with?

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Charles Stucker
04:13 Oct 12, 2020

"Alright i'm back now, what did i miss?"- capital I'm, and I "I'm sure that someone would want to help us, i" - I "Brooke i don't think that we should do that. Who knows what would happen if we ran into some of our characters?" oh, i guess i kinda forgot about that. what if everything explodes?- I I I exit that get's us out of here- gets "That work's for me, come on everyone let's go."- run on This area they were all in were surrounded by- were all in was- They were, but the area was. "That's gonna make this end up like a...

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B. W.
04:15 Oct 12, 2020

Okay, thanks for all of that ^^ i still have a long time so i could quickly go and edit/fix all of that stuff you mentioned. I guess i mostly suck at doing the stuff with the "I" so i just need to remember when to do it. Oh yeah, i plan to write a lot and for a long time ^^

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Charles Stucker
08:23 Oct 12, 2020

Not capitalizing I is either a habit or is becoming one when you work on a tablet in haste. You just want to break it before it is so set you can't.

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B. W.
14:05 Oct 12, 2020

Yeah, i guess ill have to try and do that

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