"Hello, dear friend! It's been so long." Mira Caplan perched at the door like a hawk, being the social chemist she was. With great zeal, she embraced her dear friend Pierre.
"Ah, dear Duchess Caplan. You haven't changed at all." Duke Pierre Kuragin, though the nobles called him Kuragin, was a stout man, bullish in demeanor. He was a respectable man, though his wealth had dwindled in the past few years.
Mira swiftly directed him to the table of old generals, knowing that was where he wouldn't cause any trouble. After all, trouble at a social gathering was every hostess's worst nightmare.
As the guests filed in, everyone took their spot in the place the Duchess plopped them in. They all seemed to enjoy themselves, especially given the people they were next to.
"Everyone, it is time! The full moon rises!! Bring out your magical cookies." Mira announced with a commanding voice. Every year, the Magical moon rose, and Mira hosted the nobility for a magical cookie exchange. As the moonlight shone into everyone's cookies, someone gasped. Duchess Mira looked their way immediately only to find that the woman had received an orange. The third-rarest.
"Congratulations to this Madam! She has received the power of the mind!" Everyone cheered and clapped, but it was not the woman that Mira was looking at. It was young Andrew Beckingham. The child of the nobility. Through her magical gift of last year, she knew exactly which cookie he would receive.
"Oh dear Andrew, please come here." All bravado that had been in her voice was gone, and she talked in a hushed whisper.
"Yes, dear Duchess Caplan?" He was a tall young man, well built and lean, but Mira wasn't looking at him but at his cookie.
"My dear, you remember my power of divination that I received through the last moon festival?" He nodded his approval, not entirely invested in the conversation.
"Child, you have received a cursed cookie. Yes, don't question me about how I know, but I know." As soon as Mira uttered the word "Cursed" his eyes snapped up. Everyone knew of Mira's third rarest gift of divination, and most importantly, everyone trusted it.
"Will you take it, kind Madam? Will you dispose of it for me?" He didn't take the time to listen for her answer before dropping it in her hand and fleeing.
"That child. He can't use his head." She grinned, glee spreading across her face, as the moonlight shone into her cookie. It transformed, not into a cursed cookie, no, but into a red. The second-rarest. The power of control over all reality.
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"What does this have to do with the SRE?" I asked. Ayn had just finished telling her story, but I still couldn't see how it connected.
"My child, it has everything to do with it. Duchess Mira Caplan of the old Oligarchy was our very first member. Back when the Demogor and we were one."
"Wait... So... did all you guys eat weird magical cookies?" It made sense that that was how they got their powers, because I'd heard of using the moon to enhance powers.
"Yes. That is how we initiate and how we receive our extra powers. Now it is time for you to do the same." Ayn spoke in a tone of great wonder, like a storyteller.
So I was going to join a society of enchanters like me. I was going to get a special power that very few others had, hopefully, and I was going to do it by eating a cookie.
"Ayn, do you think we should tell her?" Toni Steinbeck, the raven-haired enchantress who hadn't spoke at all, whispered into Ayn's ear.
"Tell me what?" The other members exchanged furtive glances, and Ayn's eyes were clearest as she glared at Toni.
"Nothing, my dear." Ayn was withholding something. I was sure of it. Maybe she had a right to, though. After all, they were a secret organization that'd been around for centuries.
"Are you prepared for your cookie?" Another member, wearing the same type of sash as Ayn, stood with a tray.
"Is it the full moon yet?" It had been so long since I had seen the light of day that I had no sense of time anymore. The cookie-holder held out the tray in response, which I took to mean yes.
Three women cranked open the sunroof, which I hadn't spotted before. That was weird, that they had concealed it from view. Maybe that was someone's ability.
"Take your cookie and hold it out." I did what she asked, not expecting anything out of the ordinary. After all, I had been an enchanter for all my life, and I'd seen some crazy things.
Suddenly, the cookie glowed. I don't mean like a glowstick, or like stale Strickleberry, but it shone like a star. A silvery thread wove through the air in front of me, taking my breath away. That I hadn't seen before.
It settled into the cookie, weaving it's way inside. Just then, the cookie glowed silver. I didn't know what it meant, but I slumped my shoulders, expecting it to mean something weak and common. That was my luck, that I would get a weak ability.
However, when I saw the faces of the other members, my expectations morphed into something else. Ayn was in a prostrate position, her eyes sparkling in wonder. Toni and the other members were all pressed against the wall, avoiding me as if I was the plague.
"Ayn, do you know what this means?" Another green-dressed member hissed.
I couldn't breathe. I had no idea what they were talking about. It couldn't be that powerful, could it? The more I looked at their faces, though, the more I was sure that it was. My mind flitted back to my mother, stoic and brave. What she had always used to tell me.
"You are magical royalty. Remember that." I had always that meant that I was a member of the most powerful family of enchanters. Maybe it meant something else entirely.
"Yes, Joanne. I know what it means. The prophecy is true."
THIS IS DEDICATED TO MIRA CAPLAN AND JENNIE PLEASE LIKE AND FOLLOW THEM!!!!
ONLY NOBLES OF RANKS DUCHESS AND DUKE, PRINCE AND PRINCESS, AND KING AND QUEEN CAN RECEIVE MORE THAN ONE ABILITY.
LIGHT SPECTRUM:
GREEN: NOTHING
YELLOW: LIGHT CREATION
BLACK: LIGHT CONTROL AND DARK CONTROL
BROWN: ANIMALS CONTROL AND UNDERSTANDING
PINK: DIVINATION
GOLD: ILLUSIONS
ORANGE: MIND POWERS
RED: MANIPULATION OF ALL REALITY
SILVER: TBD
DARK SPECTRUM:
TBDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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276 comments
WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!!! Omg, I can't wait for part 4!!!! This was a great 3rd part that really paid tribute to the prompt, and tied into your other parts as well!! I loved how unique this was (while still being a great 3rd part - i can't stop saying that :D) and yeah!!! Just...amazing job :))))
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Thanks so much!! Also, what color do you think you'd be? I credit some of the inspiration to Darkest Minds, but not all...
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haha, ummmm i think i'd be red or brown :))) Just because I'm evil and an animal lover at heart ;) (btw, you misspelled brown as browm)
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Oh oop I'll fix that. Ya, that seems like you.
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haha I know - its like it spoke to meeeeee
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Lol
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Post another storyyyyyyyyy
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I MADE AN EASTER EGG IN THE STORY AND YOU WOULD KNOW WHAT IT IS IF YOU READ A CERTAIN NOVEL BY A CERTAIN RUSSIAN AUTHOR THAT COMES TO EVERYONE'S MIND WHEN I SAY "An extremely long and complicated book"
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GREAT JOBBB!!! This story fit the prompt really well! And it was realllyyyy good!! Are you going to add a part 4?
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Yeah! I'm not leaving you on a cliffhanger like that!!
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Ok good! Tell me when you finish it!!
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I'm gonna do that for next week but yeah I will! also pls post a continuation of yoursssssss
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Yep I willlll! I'll post it (hopefully) soon!! (BTW you're going to be in it!! And Mira as well :D)
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WHAT YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!
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Hi Luke! Just posted a new story!!
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O M GGGGGGGGGG
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heyyyyyy me joins the chat. AMAZING LUKE!!! i love stories that leave with powerful cliffhangers/discoveries (even tho its a tad agonizing). I love your word choice: zeal, bullish, dwindle and the descriptions: "...I don't mean like a glowstick, or like stale Strickleberry, but it shone like a star. A silvery thread wove through the air in front of me, taking my breath away..."
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Thanks so much Jen!! I loved writing this stuff!! Fantasy is real fun!! NOW GET YOURS OUT PLSSSSSSS
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Hiiiii!!!!!
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WHAT LUKE SAID!!!!!!!!!
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Is. It. Narnia?
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Yes. It. Is.
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AHHH
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You did it!!
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I LOOOOOOOVVVVEEEE The Darkest Minds!!! My first story on Reedsy was based on The Darkest Minds! :) Love the story!
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Ooh yeah it was kind of inspired! Thanks so much Phebe!!! Which color do you think you'd be? I'm a silver lol I'm so cruel
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Ummmmmmm I'm definitely a red. It's clearly the best, just like me. *hair flip* LOL, just kidding, I'm not a narcissist. I'm just a red.
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Haha yeah red is pretty cool, but not as cool as silver hahahahahaha why do I do this
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*narrows eyes* Would you like me to turn you into a plastic mug?
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No thx
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Hiiii!
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Yes!! I can't scroll!!!!
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XDDDDD same
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So happy to have that fresh comment thread!!
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Hola.
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Hiiiiiiii!
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What're you doing? (Lol I sound like B.W.)
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PINK AND ORANGE!!!!!!! GOOOOD JOB YAYAYAYAYAYY!!!! OR BLACK AHaHaHA
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Yay!! Yeah that seems like a you thing!! I'm a silver, but you don't know what that is yet hehehehehe!!
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:D Heheheeee
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I haven't talked to you much lately! Did you see my other story Cookiesplosion?
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YESSSSSSS!!! Thank you SO much for including me in it!!!!! (I promise, Luke Castor will play an important role in Part 6, as will Raya.) :) :) :) :) :)
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Yay!!! Which cookie color do you think you are
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Hmmmm.....idk
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I'd probs be orange or silver
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WHAT'S SILVER????
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You'll see it's gonna be amazing.
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Black, Gold, Orange, or Red
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Maybe not red...idk
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How about you???
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And, Jen, if you see this, WRITE A STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yes!!
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i see this and gosh you'd think I was forgetting to pay my bills lol 🤣
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i'd say ten more mins and you'll see my story 😁
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Hurry up and post Part 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's coming after school
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
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:DDDD
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could ya check out "A strange lover" and leave feedback?
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Totally!
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thanks ^^
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No prob
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:)
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:D
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DUDE YOU GOTTA TELL ME WHEN YOU HAVE A NEW STORY!!!! This was good!! I really enjoyed it! I don't know what color I would be, though. Part four, please!!! Also, it seems like nobody can get your emoji thing. EVEN WITH THE HINT I DON'T KNOW WHAT IT IS!!!! Great job!!!
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I WILL!! I WOULD BE COLOR SILVER BUT U DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT IS YET!!! FINE I'LL CHANGE THE EMOJI IT WAS DON QUIXOTE!!!!
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YEAH!!!! Silver...hmmm... OHHHHHHH OKAY!!!!!!
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Lol I made a new emoji
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Okay...hmm...clue, please
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My clue is a snowy lamppost
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Can't wait for pt. 4!!!
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Thanks so much!!
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Which color do you think you are?
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probs brown hbu?
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I'd be silver lol I'm so cruel.
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yeah because we dont know what silver is yet!!!!
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Hehehehehehe
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I just saw one of your comments on Zea Bowman's story, That One Feeling, I think, AND YOU CALLED ME YOUR BESTIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
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I did!!!!!!!!!!
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THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm your best friend???????????????????
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Yeah!
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I feel all warm and sparkly inside like I just had a cup of that tea you love so much. You're also one of my two best friends!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Idk why I'm freaking out so much BUT I'M SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYY
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Yayyyyyyyyyy!!! I do love that tea tho. I'm coming out with an awesome story, but this time I'm going to focus real hard and it might take *looks around for anyone watching* a day *gasps audibly*.
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Like, one of my two best best best best best friends. BFFAOE's. (Best Friends for All of Eternity!)
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ATLAS SHRUGGED, RIGHT??????
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Yes. sigh.
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hehe.......
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...
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Give me a clue for the current one
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No you should know this.
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Hiii! Me, again. I listened to some of Ailee's English covers and SRYDYHFV HVBYJFHMKGBUIJMN SHE'S AMAXING
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I KNOW
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I just upvoted you a ton
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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["Are you prepared for your cookie?"] I have never seen such suspense in a story before, **french kiss**. Loved Part 3, and I can't wait to read the next one. Amazing job! :D
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Lol XD Merci for your french kiss.
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De rien :)
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:D
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