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Drama Speculative

Was it a coincidence it happened on All Souls’ Night?

No. The old lady always had perfect timing, panache and style. Maybe the scene was a prophecy from the famous Yeats poem of the same name, or conversely; was the scene an inspiration for his beautiful poem. Life has a habit of deceiving order, like the debate over the sequencing of the chicken or the egg. Neptune’s role was the spirit handler leading the old lady’s spirit to the next realm. While others would be putting the old lady’s body to her final resting place, the candle lit and decorated headstone in the village necrotaphio was being readied. The graveyard, especially on All Souls’ Night, was always at its best, with the focus of all the villagers remembering loved and cherished ones that had passed away. By tradition this would be the final resting place for the old lady’s body with other members of her family. In parallel, Mercury and Moon watched their father Neptune, the black cat doing his duty, assigned by his deity, the demiurge of all living creatures, in the entire and infinite universe.

In some circles Neptune was named a psychopomp. Meaning a guide of souls. A creature, a spirit, an angel, a demon depending on which religion or the circumstance of the recently departed soul. It was the responsibility of the psychopomp, Neptune the black cat, to escort newly deceased souls from Earth to the afterlife. His role is not to judge the deceased, but simply to guide them. People would be shocked to learn that it was the local stray cat – Neptune, that undertook this responsibility.

It was All Souls Night, and the old lady blindly followed Neptune, the village stray black cat, to the next realm, her next destination.

It occurred in the small village beside the vast Mediterranean Sea, a sleepy village cooled by the Meltemi winds in the summer, the village only came alive during the summer months, encouraged by the tourists, not by the winds. The cooling winds normally did the opposite, sending the local residents to their shaded rooms for afternoon naps, their serkeleme, a siesta for the many.

Neptune watched from the shade and waited.

They would be even more shocked to learn that the old lady knew her days were numbered when Neptune turned up and stood like a guard outside her small but tidy house during the last days of her life.

It’s an interesting fact, that psychopomps often appear on funerary art, from the tombs of ancient Egyptian cenotaphs to the Terracotta army tombs; psychopomps have been depicted at different times and in different cultures as anthropomorphic entities, such as horses, deer, dogs, all varieties of birds such as ravens, crows, vultures, owls, sparrows, and cuckoos. In the case of birds, these are often seen in huge masses, timelessly waiting outside the final home of the dead, the huge tombs of the deceased. But not many of these excavated edifices have carvings of cats.

Nonetheless, Neptune was a psychopomp from a long line of ancestral psychopomps.

He was also the most sexually active tomcat in the neighbourhood, no female cat in heat could ignore his charms, and his formidable appetite and desires. Thus, Mercury and Moon were amongst many of Neptune’s offspring, born in a chimney, completely grey in colour, with little beady mischievous yellow eyes. Unfortunately motherless, as their mother, a pure white cat died in kitten birth, but credit to Neptune, he never ran away from his responsibilities as a guardian mother and father for the two tiny kittens. On top of his responsibilities as psychopomp.

That’s another story, and the writer digresses.

Neptune is a perfect name for a psychopomp, a spirit guide. The planet cannot be seen by the naked eye, and rightfully has been designated the planet of mystery and dreams. Also, Neptune the god of the water kingdoms, connects those different watery realms on this planet, the depths of oceans, lakes and seas are ruled by this god with his symbolic trident. Conceptually the essence of Neptune is to work through superficial attraction, Neptune is the teacher of us all and is the anvil of the soul. In many realms, Neptune helps us to transform and heal any inner wounds that lacerate the soul.

The old lady never moved far from the sleepy Mediterranean village beside the mesmerizing blue waters, on the remote occasions she did travel, the sounds, the smells, the sights of the village by the sea had captured and haunted her senses, and she quickly became homesick and vowed never to travel away again. The old lady eventually grew roots which were attached to the ground around the village, and she became part of the landscape. Her face, her body, became as one with the surroundings, weathered like the ascending granite hills, her body perfume smelt like a mixture of sea salt, kelp and wildflowers found scattered amongst those granite hills.

Nonetheless, she lived a life, she grew and ripened into a young woman, fell in love, gave birth to children, and her children gave birth to their children, and grew old. Her life was full, but now Neptune had come calling.

In her later years she would sit for hours looking at the sea, the minuscule dots of white sails on the horizon, never seeming to move far, a flick of the painter’s brush on the virtual canvas. Only the Meltime winds knew how far the white sail would travel, and to which haven it would rest and gain shelter that night. She breathed in the sea air full of imagined sea spray and imagined being carried to the clear depths of sea bottom, where the forests of green kelp waved lazily by the tides, sometimes hiding the owners of shy peeping eyes. She counted her days, blessing her existence, when Neptune appeared.

“I was expecting you.” She said in a dreamy voice, still visualizing the depths of the sea, the feeling of peace and tranquility filling her senses, her soul was full. The old lady was ready for her journey.

Neptune sat in front of the old lady, he knew she was ready for the end of her life, and the start of a new journey. This one was ready, he thought. This one had a nature unto itself, natural wisdom beyond this realm, without sorrow, fear or regret. He watched her heavy breathing, her last breaths, and although her face and her body were old, her bright eyes still sparkled with youthful gaiety. There was no interference from those outwards seeing sparkling eyes to the depths of her soul, she would follow blindly when she passed. Neptune knew, and in some ways, he wished he could stay longer with some of these souls, but he was the guide, and the duty of the guide was never to linger, never to prolong the journey. Others were waiting.

The old lady glided from her physical body still sitting on the chair, and followed Neptune blindly, but not before she murmured a thought.

“I wonder who your guide will be, when it is your time black cat?” The old lady said to Neptune the psychopomp, as they both moved into the shadows of the night.

November 03, 2024 09:10

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Alla Turovskaya
14:51 Nov 14, 2024

I like your Neptune! Followed.

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John Rutherford
15:13 Nov 14, 2024

Yes, I like Neptune too! I have plans for him, and his children, a project coming up.

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Alla Turovskaya
15:14 Nov 14, 2024

Good thing I followed you:)

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John Rutherford
15:13 Nov 14, 2024

Alla - don't forget to leave a like all helps.

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Alla Turovskaya
15:14 Nov 14, 2024

Done!

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Alla Turovskaya
15:16 Nov 14, 2024

Would you mind having a look at my story? I'm genuinely curious about what you would say

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Asfa Afzaal
12:39 Nov 12, 2024

Personally, I found the story quite captivating. I really enjoyed how you combined mythological and cultural references with a sense of quiet, personal intimacy. The setting—the sleepy Mediterranean village with its sea air and the mysterious black cat—creates such a vivid, cinematic atmosphere that I could almost see and feel the scene unfolding in my mind. It felt like one of those modern-day folktales that tap into something universal, something that feels timeless yet fresh. What stood out to me the most was Neptune, the psychopomp. He’...

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John Rutherford
14:17 Nov 12, 2024

Wow - I think this is longest and most detailed remark that anybody has ever shared on here. Thank you so much, you certainly felt the story.

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20:27 Nov 11, 2024

I've learned what a psychopomp is. The name has a pompous sound to it. No wonder some people are scared of black cats. This story adds bones to the superstitious belief that black cats bring bad luck. (for a variety of reasons which all of us know some of) A beautifully written story. Location, location. I loved the setting of your story with the old woman.

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John Rutherford
05:23 Nov 12, 2024

I'm interested in stray cats; I look after many where I live. I find all felines so different to canines. Psychopomp came out of the research for this piece, but the interesting fun fact is that these animals appear on the tombs in different cultures over centuries. Thanks for your comments, Kaitlyn, I always look forward to them.

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07:32 Nov 12, 2024

The title of your story really intrigued me.

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John Rutherford
08:00 Nov 12, 2024

It was an easy choice.

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KC Foster
19:25 Nov 10, 2024

I really liked it. I love the black cat.

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John Rutherford
08:41 Nov 11, 2024

Thanks. Neptune would appreciate that.

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Mary Butler
23:23 Nov 09, 2024

This story is a beautifully layered reflection on life, death, and the quiet wisdom of the soul, brought to life through the character of Neptune, the black cat psychopomp. The description of Neptune as “a spirit handler” with the dual roles of “guardian mother and father” gives this tale a haunting depth, blending the mysticism of ancient beliefs with the warm familiarity of a village setting. Lines like, “Her face, her body, became as one with the surroundings, weathered like the ascending granite hills,” show how intimately the old lady i...

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John Rutherford
05:08 Nov 10, 2024

Thanks so much Mary, what a wonderful write up. So glad you liked the piece, haunting in a reverent manner, appropriate words.

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LILLIAN PASSMAN
22:57 Nov 08, 2024

To they do not like you book

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John Rutherford
06:05 Nov 09, 2024

OK

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Linda Kenah
20:37 Nov 08, 2024

A very comforting story to discuss an uncomfortable topic. Really well done! I love all your descriptions which painted a vivid picture of a peaceful transition from life. I agree with the comment below that this was a very creative interpretation of the prompt. Great story!

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John Rutherford
06:06 Nov 09, 2024

Thanks Linda.

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Mary Bendickson
21:16 Nov 04, 2024

Purr-fect story.🐈‍⬛

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John Rutherford
05:13 Nov 10, 2024

Thanks. I hope you liked the short tail.

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Alexis Araneta
18:24 Nov 03, 2024

Oooh, I quite like this concept. Very, very creative use of the prompt. Lovely use of imagery too. Great work !

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John Rutherford
06:23 Nov 04, 2024

Thanks for normal lovely comments Alexis

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Darvico Ulmeli
11:28 Nov 03, 2024

Well done, John. I love the concept of Black Cat being guide to deceased people. Egyptians treat them with respect.

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John Rutherford
13:59 Nov 03, 2024

Thanks for reading and taking time to comment. Cats always represent a mysterious hidden side to their nature. I want to write about the concept of their nine lives one day.

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