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Murder.


I did it.


It was fun.


Gruelling, but fun.


Sorry Mum.


Plus, I needed food.


The smile faded from Her face as she walked in, blistered toes and tangled

curls.


"Where's Father?"


"The crown requires its secrets."


She hobbled to the window.


"Cersei, sweetling, your father told me your secret.


"Tell him I will burn you alive if he doesn't kill himself."


"Darling, he died in the battle! Have you been taking your concoctions regularly?"


Ignoring her, Cersei tore the curtain aside.


Behind her was the dead, crumpled form of her dead brother, chained to a post, hand missing, his flesh a pale blue and his skull cracked in a savage grin.


"Why is your brother dead?!"


"I got angry."


Cersei gave the queen a morbid glance, to see if she meant her secret dead, too.


"Did I have to get angry?"


"No."


The queen looked sad.


"It seems your father had killed himself at the beginningof the war."


"I killed him."


"Why?"


"I don't know.


"I just did."


"I meant the king, sweetie, why did the king kill himself?"


"I told you, I killed him. He tasted rather sour. Like Brother.


"Sweetie..."


"He wouldn't let me touch it."

"Touch what?"

"The crown"


The queen's hand flew to her mouth.


"My gods."


"It's right here, near his bones.


"What?!"


She tugged at the necklace on her chest, rasping.


It was not at all what she had expected.


"Maddie is dead too, in the stables."


The little horse was bloody and bruised, and the strong teeth that studded its head were now twisted and broken.


"Did you break the crown?"


"NO!" She screamed, looking scared.


"I burnt it." She smiled maniacally.


The queen collapsed, dead of shock.


She sat down next to her, bawling.


"Sister Cersei, why has Mother fainted?" The little girl walks in.


"I don't know, darling." She smiles sweetly.


"Okay. I want food."


"Do you want some of your brother?"


"What?"


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December 15, 2021 11:28

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AAAAH OMG THAT FREAKING ENDING QUEEN GIRL SIA SIS LETS TALK ABOUT THIS OMG YOU DIDNT NOT HAVE TO WRITE SUCH A GOOD ENDING AAAAHHHHHH ok, I'm composed now:) but GIRLLLLLL this was so amazing!!!!! like- I have no words. How. How. How. You should definitely write more in this style cuz this one turned out really well. Random thing but I love this line: The smile faded from Her face as she walked in, blistered toes and tangled curls. cuz it feels like rly poetic and tells you a good amount about the character without being boring(great job ...

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JDHRHDHDHE OMFG THA KS SO MUCH KWEEN THABLS SO MUCH FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART THIS IS SO SWEET THANKSSSSS <33333

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OFCCCC U DESERVE ITTTTT<3333

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<3333 YOU FESERVE SO MUCH MOREEE <3333

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AAAAH UR THE BEST KWEENNNN

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Akshara .
11:30 Jan 03, 2022

everything okay? you went inactive all of a sudden...

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omgggg you're so goshdarn sweet the fact that you've checked once before and give timely compliments, and that you checked back to check on me, and omg this is so frigging adorable thanks so much <333 YOURE A QUEEN

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Akshara .
07:50 Jan 08, 2022

Anything! You're my friend, and I care about you. <3 everyone needs a few compliments in their life (even if they don't deserve em) but you do ;) πŸ‘‘ YOU'RE ONE TOO

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HHJJYRISGKXUTD You're so sweet omg your like- ugh I dont even have words. Thanks so much ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

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Akshara .
16:59 Jan 12, 2022

ahhh tysm queen. :) i- i'm taking a break for a while... it was a pleasure talking with you!! ❀

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<33 Oh! Everything fine? Do you need someone to talk? (I'm always here :) Same :) take care <3

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Dhwani Jain
07:38 Dec 28, 2021

Read my full bio, there's a surprise for you! ;)

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Dhwani Jain
06:22 Jan 08, 2022

πŸ₯°

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Dhwani Jain
05:36 Dec 27, 2021

New Story!

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Sapphire ~β™š
00:04 Dec 25, 2021

:0 woahhh a lot of dark fantasy vibes- this could make a great series! I like the structured way it was written, and the gore was wonderfully described. For grammar: "I told you, I killed him. He tasted rather sour. Like Brother." You forgot the end quotations in that sentence :) But yeah other than that, no major grammar critique I've never seen you explore this form of writing before! You should def look into it more, I'd love to read it :)

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YAYYYY ITS BEEN A WHILE I WROTE SOMETHINGGG yas lol I have another one but I afraid it's too horrific lol Oop, yeah will edit dat Yayyyyyy tysm for the help!!

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Sapphire ~β™š
23:57 Mar 13, 2022

AYY YESS bro im sorry im responding so late lmaoo its been a hot minute since ive been on here ofc! ily! hru?

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My girl it's been 2 MONTHS I'm very stressed and practically dead inside, hru :DD

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Sapphire ~β™š
18:16 Mar 29, 2022

IK oh noo is there a specific reason? im doing pretty ok!

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Haha, not really. Good to hear :) How's Amethyst

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Luna 🌹
12:58 Dec 20, 2021

so they call you the queen around here? ~ i'm the princess than lol

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Haha, no nooo I'm just a normal human who likes writing and has a few awesome friends here. Noo I'm pretty sure you're better than me, haha. Btw nice hair :)

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Luna 🌹
17:03 Dec 22, 2021

omg no, i was kidding! i'm sure you're truly are a queen, inside and outside. :) hm... am i one of those awesome friends of yours? ;) Thank you! I was kinda insecure, ur compliment made my day!

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<33333333 Sure!! :D I'm happy to hear that!! :))

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Akshara .
15:57 Dec 16, 2021

hello! great job on making the narrator seem mentally unstable, and i loved the backstory with the royal family too. The MyStErIoUs vibes were everything. :) oh and i don't think we've ever talked before, love ur sassy bio. ;)

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Hi sis!! Thanks! My first go in that field, :)) Aw, thanks! Nice pfp :)

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Akshara .
09:50 Dec 17, 2021

thanks for thanks. ;) did you make yours?

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:) Haha, no, Google the almighty ;)

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Akshara .
09:53 Dec 17, 2021

<3 I can't imagine what you typed lol

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Dhwani Jain
06:02 Dec 16, 2021

This is so good!!! I mean, I didn''t understand the whole thing, and it gave me the MyStErIoUs vibes, but I LOVED IT! The sentences spoken by Cersei (I LOVE that name, how'd you come up with that?) were so expressive, that I was kinda hearing her voice in my head. The story had a lot of *TWs* but it was so nice, anyways. Like Kate, I'd like to say that it was poetic. I can imagine you writing great pieces of poetry too!

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Thanks!! Yay, lol thats what I was going for :)) Aw, thanks!! Must have heard it somewhere :D Oop, yeah. Should I put in? Idk I was thinking about it. Thanks, Dhwani!!! <3

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Dhwani Jain
05:24 Dec 17, 2021

I think you should put the TWs.... Rest all's well with you?

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Yeah, okay. Yup, you could say that :)

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Dhwani Jain
12:53 Dec 21, 2021

nice

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Dhwani Jain
12:53 Dec 21, 2021

hello Can you please read and review on some of my blogposts? Here's the link : www.djdhwanijain.wordpress.com

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Kate Reynolds
22:06 Dec 15, 2021

Oh wowwww this was really good! I really loved how you made the narrator seem very mentally unstable, and it's cool that there was a bit of a backstory, with the royal family and everything. Do you like writing poetry?

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Thanks!! I appreciate it :) Yeah! Tho I wrote like dark poems (not exactly poems poems, but more like proses.)

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Kate Reynolds
00:17 Dec 17, 2021

Ofc! Oooh, well I'm in this online community called The Inked Pages (we have a Insta @theinkedpagesofficial). We basically promote people's poetry and get people recognized by the community. Would you be interested in joining? Our group chat is on discord, so it would be best if you could download it (if you don't already have it). I can add you to the group chat if you'd like, there's more information posted there.

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:) Sounds interesting! I'll look into it :)

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Kate Reynolds
20:16 Dec 17, 2021

Alright! My discord is JustAnotherRandomGirl#5376 if you wanna text me there bc Reedsy is a bit hard to text on lol

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Philia S
14:50 Dec 15, 2021

Woah, this is so cool. I loved the air of mystery you have around here. Tis wonderful! Great job, Sia! I honestly have no critique. XD

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Aw, thanks. Its been a while I wrote something good, lol

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Akshara .
16:02 Dec 16, 2021

A while?! I'm sure everything you write is amazing...

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gosh thanks! Been a while I received such comments :D

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Philia S
04:18 Dec 17, 2021

I JUS REALISED HER NAME IS CERSEI-AHHHHHH THE REF-

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Philia S
14:47 Dec 15, 2021

HEAR YE HEAR YE THE QUEEN IS BACKK

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