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Adventure Suspense Thriller

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(Princess Kamalini with Rekti)


“I want to drink his blood.”

The way she utters those extreme words calmly makes me breathless. I gather my senses and push my words from my tongue.

“Are you sure about what you are saying?” I ask her. “You never mentioned anything so violent before; are you okay, Kamalini?”

She breathes in a huff of air and shuts her eyes. She does it when she is angry or when she finally made a decision.

“Yes, I am certainly going to do this.’’ She takes a momentary pause and studies my eyes. "I stand on my decision, and I am going to do it not caring what you think.”

The silence between us is stale and the waves of the river occupy it by questioning her motive.

“Who are you talking about?” She never demanded anything before. For the past few months, she is going through the turmoil of emotions. Being a princess is overwhelming, but taking the anger on innocent people; is not right.

“The Golden Deer.” She exclaims. “I want to drink its blood. It has magical powers, and when we consume its blood we can travel dimensions.”

A sinister reflection sparks in her eyes.

“You are the princess of the most affluent kingdom, next in line for the throne. Do you think this behavior is appropriate for you?”

I know I am crossing the line, I am a servant but before that, I am a friend. A friend must guide without acknowledging the consequences.

“You know your place in my life. Don't you?” Her words hit me sharply. “Your job is to protect me and to take care of my needs. So, do what I say.”

“But Nali….” She cuts me in our conversation.

She raises her palm and signaling me to not speak anything. ''I princess Kamalini, of Kingdom Ekalki, command you to take me to the northeast shore.’’

I gulp down the tears which swell in my throat. Still, I want to take the last chance.

“Nali, are you sure…” My hands were shaking, but I gathered my courage.

She glares at me with her raven black eyes, and her face flushes up.

“Will you take me, or should I travel myself alone?” When I did not respond to her right after, she stood up and tried to jump down from the boat. I cannot let her embark on this madness alone. ‘'Wait Nali, I will take you. Please sit down.” I catch her wrists and give her an apologetic look.

She positions her back upright and takes her sword because the underwater bandits were habitual in the river.

I start rowing my boat, pushing the water away with my paddle, and watching Nali. She never has requested such rampant wish; there is a strong reason behind it.

But her behavior and words stung me like a poisoned arrow. I never even imagined in my dreams that Nali will take me for granted due to my ranking.



“I am sorry.” I hear a faint voice. "I know I have hurt you Rekti, but it was not my intention. It's necessary.”

“What is necessary, Nali? There is prohibition over the hunting of the Golden Deer in our kingdom and finding a one is also not easy.” I scan her expressions. “You are the daughter of the most powerful King; you are brave and courageous, yet what you are craving for?”

She slides towards me, “I want to avenge the death of my mother. That is the only goal I have in my life.”

“Your father already had avenged your mother's death, right when she died. Don't you know that?” My pitch unfurls; the step which Nali is taking is far more dangerous than anything.

“If I drink its blood, then I will be able to travel time.” I guess her next words. “Maybe, I can travel back when they were in the temple and save her before she gets attacked.”

Her response stuns me, and a strange confusion hovers over my thoughts.

“You know time does not stop for anyone. You can't change your past or future. All you can work on is present; speak logically Nali.”

“I promise you, it will work. Today I read it in the library, and I guarantee you that no harm will happen.” She assures me by squeezing my wrist gently.

In the distance, we hear a howl; we have arrived at the northeast shore. We both look at each other and promise with our eyes.

I take the boat on the side of the bank and gather my knives. I first come out of it; I have to inspect any area where the princess arrives. I run my eyes at each corner, there are trees and poisonous ivy. In the deep silence, we can hear the wolves howling and the trees rumbling. The wind flirts with my hair, and a cool breeze kisses my neck. I see no danger.

I signal the princess to come behind me.

“So, what we have to do next?” Her madness will ruin me one day.

She snatches a knife out from my hand and throws it in the dark void.

“Nali, we are short on weapons, use it wisely..” Before I could complete my sentence, she shuts me by placing her palm and points her eyes to a trail.

A golden trail appears with sky blue wasps. She smiles at me and marches forward.

The trail leads to a den, a big boulder covers its entry. On it was my sharp knife, standing on its small point.

“I think we have reached the site.” She utters it with utmost gratification.

“What and where?” I question her knowledge.

“To the den of the Golden Deer. They are the only species of Deer that live in natural caves, and can you see the boulder?” I shake my head. “It means the mother deer has shut her children inside to protect them from the predators.”

“Like you.” I taunt her with a smile.

“Yes like me. Now we have to remove the boulder and just grab them. I will see the rest of it.”

“The thing which looks easy; has a lot of hidden secrets," I say aloud.

“I know father says it a lot. Let's leave that and do our work first.” She takes few steps towards the den when I hear a sharp twang.

It is the noise of a bow. I cover Nali immediately, but the arrow pierces my arm.

“Rekti.” I hear Nali shout.

But then I hear the faint yet fast winds through which the arrows reach towards us. I cover her immediately and face my back towards them. They pierce my back, and a stream of blood flows from my mouth. I have to protect her at any cost.



March 14, 2021 14:31

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113 comments

The perfect part 2! Now it makes more sense:) Again, I loved this so much! Great workkk! Can't wait to read more!

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Kate Reynolds
22:33 Mar 15, 2021

WOWWWWW THEY ARE SO BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLL OMGGGGGGGGGGFSGKSFJHLFNHLSFNHS

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Sapphire ~♚
16:53 Mar 15, 2021

Oh wow. Your avid descriptions of the scene, and the DETAILS were absolutely amazing! I think Skybelle covered most of the grammar details, lol. The names of the princesses and the added in details of your culture make the story unique and interesting to read. I also like how you're adding in pictures to help the reader out with imagery. The plot line is capturing and suspenseful, and really cool to read! Great job on this!

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Radhika Diksha
17:11 Mar 15, 2021

Thanks. Your comment made my day.

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Sapphire ~♚
17:26 Mar 15, 2021

No problem, any time! You deserve it :)

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Angel {Readsy}
07:26 Apr 06, 2021

Oh my God , the end scared me, but story empowered my senses I am breathless too, clapping for the writer

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12:01 Apr 03, 2021

You're leaving now? After just coming back? I support you on your writer's journey even if it takes you away from Reedsy, but please leave your stories up, they make my day. I was hoping there would be another part, but I guess I'll just imagine it. Goodbye, good friend! (Don't be april fools-ing me like Ari, please)

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Kate Reynolds
20:29 Apr 01, 2021

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Kate Reynolds
15:17 Mar 31, 2021

Hey Radhika, I feel like we shouldn't be focusing on the downvoting right now, but instead focusing on how to make Reedsy a writing platform once again. Everything would be so much better if they could just remove the downvoting and upvoting options, maybe we could make a petition for that?

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Frances Reine
15:54 Mar 28, 2021

Hi Radhika. Checking in because you haven't been super active. (I mean, neither have I but you usually are and I saw your bio.) The karma's pretty useless, isn't it? Oh well. I hope you're doing okay and I can't wait till you post again :)

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Radhika Diksha
17:06 Mar 28, 2021

Yeah a lot better. Thanks for asking. How are you?

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18:44 Mar 26, 2021

Okay, just... You can do what you want to do. Just promise me that if you leave you'll keep great stories like this up for people to say "see? This is good stuff." Also, I would be lonely since I cannot do watt pad.

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Upvotey Girl ✨
18:11 Mar 26, 2021

Okay, I just finished upvoting you 50+ points! :D

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Did you see who downvoted ya?

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Radhika Diksha
04:54 Mar 25, 2021

I kinda know, why are you asking though?

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21:21 Mar 24, 2021

If you need to talk, I'm here.

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Felicity Anne
15:21 Mar 24, 2021

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Radhika Diksha
16:54 Mar 24, 2021

Sure

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Radhika Diksha
16:56 Mar 24, 2021

Sure, i did it.

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Felicity Anne
17:42 Mar 24, 2021

Thank you so much!!!

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14:49 Mar 24, 2021

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Radhika Diksha
15:02 Mar 24, 2021

Thank you so much Ari. The comment made me happy.

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Ari Berri
15:05 Mar 24, 2021

No problem, you deserve it.

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18:32 Mar 16, 2021

... Oh man. REKTIIII

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Nainika Gupta
15:54 Mar 16, 2021

Ok Radhika, I really enjoyed this series. I'm really excited for more parts, and I like the way you've gone with this! amazing work!

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Akshaya Sutrave
15:14 Mar 16, 2021

Hi Radhika! Wow, this second part really adds on to the plot line! Again, the picture in the beginning is awesome and I loved the story!! The Golden deer was a great addition, and I like how you wrote this through Rekti's perspective! I really wanna read the third part now!! Are you going to post it soon, because you said it's ready?

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Writer Maniac
14:36 Mar 16, 2021

Hey, can you see my message on Hangouts?

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Radhika Diksha
14:36 Mar 16, 2021

can we talk here?

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Writer Maniac
14:40 Mar 16, 2021

I feel like Hangouts is easier to chat on

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Radhika Diksha
13:26 Mar 15, 2021

Your response made my day. Thanks

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npppppp but fr tho I NEED MORE YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT AKSSADKJNXXSNNS

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Radhika Diksha
13:28 Mar 15, 2021

Sorry, I am a lot depressed today. Just weird thoughts.

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aw :( I'm sorry to hear that, I understand what you mean it's a hard thing to deal with <3

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Kate Reynolds
01:22 Mar 15, 2021

This is the PERFECT sequel to your series!!!!!!!!!! The blood-drinking thing makes sense nowwwwwww Wonderful job, can’t wait for the next part!!!

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Radhika Diksha
01:37 Mar 15, 2021

Thanks so much, Kate.

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Kate Reynolds
01:42 Mar 15, 2021

That's what I'm here for!

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Radhika Diksha
02:00 Mar 15, 2021

You are great.

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Kate Reynolds
22:28 Mar 15, 2021

Awww thank youuu You toooo!!!

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