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Crime Suspense Thriller

This story contains sensitive content

Definitely sensitive content, themes of murder, stalking, mental health etc.



1 - Target Selection:

  • Identify target: Emily Thompson, 28, lives alone, works late nights.

Emily Thompson, a fleeting stranger in a crowded coffee shop, etched herself into my consciousness like an unsuspecting muse. Her silhouette, slender and unassuming, beckoned me to delve deeper into the mystery of her existence. In the dim glow of the café, I observed her solitary habits, the way she sipped her latte, and the rhythmic tap of her fingers against the keyboard as she lost herself in her work.

I couldn't resist the allure of unraveling her life. Late nights, solitary walks, and the predictable rhythm of her routine—a software engineer burning the midnight oil to meet the demands of a relentless profession. The darkness seemed to embrace her, and it was in that darkness that I found opportunity.

Emily, with hazel eyes that mirrored the vulnerability I sought, lived alone—a key detail that solidified her fate in my meticulous plan. The absence of a significant other, the scarcity of social ties—she was the embodiment of isolation, a canvas upon which I could paint my darkest desires.

Note to self: Emily Thompson—etched in the shadows, soon to be erased.


2 - Surveillance:

  • Study her routine: Monday and Wednesday gym sessions, Friday grocery shopping.

The art of surveillance requires patience, a skill I've honed to perfection. Emily's life unfolded before me like pages in a novel, and I reveled in the meticulous study of her daily routine. Mondays and Wednesdays marked her gym sessions—her dedication evident in the way she briskly walked towards the fitness center, a determined glint in her eyes. I became a silent observer, blending into the background of treadmills and weights, noting the nuances of her workouts, the rhythm of her breathing.

On Fridays, she ventured into the local grocery store, navigating the aisles with purpose. I watched from a distance, hidden behind the stacks of canned goods, as she carefully selected her groceries. It was in these mundane activities that I found the patterns, the vulnerabilities that would guide my approach. The gym sessions left her fatigued, the grocery shopping predictable—an exhausted routine that presented the opportune moments for me to strike.

Note to self: Emily Thompson—cadence of vulnerability, a composition to conduct my malevolent narrative.


3 - Collection of Tools:

  • Assemble the essentials: latex gloves, a silenced pistol, and a dark hooded jacket.

Precision is paramount in my preparations. The tactile embrace of latex gloves ensures that my presence remains elusive, leaving no trace of my identity behind. The silenced pistol, a cold embodiment of finality, is chosen for its efficiency, a means to execute the inevitable with clinical precision.

A dark hooded jacket becomes my cloak of invisibility, a pragmatic choice to blend seamlessly into the night. Its purpose is practical, concealing me from the prying eyes that may glimpse a fleeting figure in the shadows. It's not an ensemble of theatrics; rather, it's a calculated selection aimed at ensuring my actions are swift, unseen, and devoid of unnecessary flourish.

These tools are not symbols but instruments, and my intent is singular—efficiency in the pursuit of my goal. The gloves, pistol, and jacket are not accomplices in a sinister symphony but silent partners in the execution of a predetermined fate.

Note to self: The tools are ready—mechanisms of consequence, devoid of unnecessary theatrics.


4 - Location Scouting:

  • Scout her residence from the dimly lit alley behind her apartment building—minimal security, no witnesses.

The labyrinth of the urban night conceals secrets, and within its shadowed folds, I find the canvas for my sinister masterpiece. The target's residence, a nondescript apartment building, and I, concealed in a seemingly inconspicuous alleyway, dimly lit by flickering lampposts and obscured by the encroaching darkness.

I tread quietly through this hidden passage, a ghost in the urban tapestry, drawn to the minimal security it affords. The uneven cobblestone beneath my feet bears witness to my reconnaissance, guiding me toward the perfect vantage point. Here, in the hushed corridors of this secluded alley, the outside world fades away, providing cover for my observations.

The minimal lighting is a calculated advantage, shrouding my movements in obscurity. The absence of witnesses becomes a silent accomplice to the unfolding drama, ensuring that my presence remains an enigma. I haven’t chosen her apartment for its theatricality; rather, it's a pragmatic decision to minimise the variables, and the ally provides an environment where I can discreetly study the rhythms of her life.

Note to self: The city awaits—a silent accomplice in the theater of darkness.



5 - Alibi Planning:

  • Attend a local bar during the act—alibi supported by surveillance cameras and witnesses.

Crafting an alibi is a delicate thing, a meticulous weaving of threads that must hold up under scrutiny. For this act, a local bar becomes the backdrop—an establishment filled with the murmur of conversations and the clinking of glasses, a symphony that will drown out any suspicions.

I'll enter the crowded space, a mere shadow among revelers, becoming a face lost in the crowd. The choice is deliberate, not to blend in through anonymity but to cloak myself in the mundane rhythm of human interaction. The bar's strategic placement, monitored by surveillance cameras, offers an irrefutable timeline to validate my presence.

Conversations will swirl around me, faces will blur into a collective mass, and I will become a transient figure within the bar's chaos. Witnesses, unwittingly drafted into my narrative, will recall the night's events, unknowingly becoming guardians of my alibi and bringing my coital companion, Alana, home for the night and secretively feeding her some Xanax laced tea will all but cement my innocence.

It's not a theatrical performance—a flamboyant display of deception—but a calculated maneuver to render myself forgettable, an unremarkable presence lost in the ebb and flow of a Friday night. The bar is not a stage; it's a canvas where I paint the illusion of normalcy, a stroke in the grand composition of deception.

Note to self: The bar awaits—a refuge in plain sight, a shield against suspicion.


6 - Disguise Preparation:

• Craft a generic disguise: hooded jacket, hunched back, and a deliberate alteration to my stride to avoid identification.

The metamorphosis begins with the careful donning of a disguise—a veil that shields me from the prying eyes of recognition. A hooded jacket, pulled low to cast a shadow over my features, becomes the first layer of anonymity. Its nondescript nature ensures that it doesn't draw attention, blending seamlessly into the fabric of the ordinary.

This subtle adjustment in posture, a noticeable hunched back, becomes a shield against prying scrutiny—a calculated maneuver to meld into the shadows and navigate the cloak of darkness undetected.

The deliberate alteration of my stride becomes the final touch in this disguise—a subtle shift that, combined with a hunched posture, reshapes the recognizable contours of my movement. It's not a theatrical performance; it's a practical deception, a nuanced approach to elude the grasp of familiarity as I navigate the shadows with calculated anonymity. As I affix each element, I become an enigma—an entity detached from the identity I temporarily shed.

Note to self: The disguise is complete—a shroud against the recognition that lingers in the realm of the ordinary.


7 - Timing Considerations:

  • Strike on Thursday night, between 11:00 PM and 1:00 AM—minimal foot traffic.

Time, an ally in the art of subterfuge, becomes the conductor of this macabre symphony. Thursday night emerges as the canvas for my dark performance—a strategic choice governed by the ebb and flow of the city's heartbeat. The veil of the approaching weekend brings a lull, a momentary hush that I exploit.

The window of opportunity narrows, and my focus sharpens on the delicate balance between timing and chance. Between 11:00 PM and 1:00 AM, the cityscape transforms into a quieter realm, where the pulse of life slows, and the shadows deepen. It's not an arbitrary selection but a calculated calculus that minimizes the variables—fewer witnesses, reduced chance of intervention.

The city's nocturnal rhythm will become my accomplice, and within this temporal space, I carve out a niche for my calculated intrusion.

This is not a reckless plunge into chaos; it's a meticulous alignment with the cadence of the night. This is not an arbitrary moment; it's a calculated juncture where the ordinary world momentarily turns a blind eye, providing the cover I need to orchestrate the inevitable.

Note to self: Thursday night—the stage is set, and the city becomes a silent witness to my calculated intrusion.


8 - Breaking into Emily's Apartment:

   •A night shrouded in quietude carefully chosen for solitude.

Exploiting knowledge of her routines, a silent entry into her realm.

A ghost in the shadows, entering her space unnoticed.

Embracing surprise, a calculated move without a whisper of warning.

Precision in every step, sealing her fate with meticulous intent.

Blurring the boundary between ordinary and malevolent.

Transforming her apartment into a covert stage for a sinister encounter.

Shadows as allies, concealing secrets and magnifying her unwitting participation.

Note to self: The task at hand—a choreography of actions leading from the quiet of her apartment into the chilling embrace of orchestrated darkness, executed without a trace of awareness on her part.


9 - Execution of the Act:

  • Approach quietly unnoticed, swift and controlled—silence her before she reacts.

The night unfolds, and the orchestrated pieces fall into place. Clad in the calculated disguise, armed with the tools of inevitability, I become a phantom in the urban tapestry—a silent figure navigating the shadows.

The city is my accomplice, the symphony of its sounds masking the subtle cadence of my footsteps as I approach the designated location. The night, pregnant with the weight of anticipation, becomes the stage where the act will unfurl.

Emily asleep, a pawn in the carefully constructed game. Her silhouette, unaware of the impending encounter, I move closer to the predetermined fate. It's not a random convergence but a collision of orchestrated destinies—an intersection where the threads of our lives entwine.

Note to self: The act awaits —an intricate tapestry woven in shadows, a predestined step into the realm of the unavoidable..


10 - Post-Act Cleanup:

  • Wipe down surfaces, dispose of the weapon in a nearby river, and vanish without a trace.

The aftermath is a canvas marked by the ghostly residue of my actions. In the muted glow of the alley, I methodically proceed with the post-act ritual. Latex-clad hands meticulously wipe down surfaces, erasing any tangible trace of my presence. The apartment to become a sterile chamber, cleansed of the macabre ballet that unfolded moments ago.

The silenced pistol, a tool devoid of purpose, is disassembled with a practiced efficiency. Its components, cold and indifferent, find their way into the unforgiving current of a nearby river—a liquid abyss that will swallow the evidence, leaving no vestige of the instrument that orchestrated the inevitable.

Each step in the cleanup is not an act of panic but a deliberate orchestration of control. The night air will become my accomplice, whispering secrets of concealment. The shadows embrace my movements as I vanish, leaving behind a scene that betrays no hint of the sinister ballet that transpired.

The city remains undisturbed, the river will carry away the remnants of my actions, and I retreat into the enveloping darkness—leaving behind nothing but the fading echoes of whispered secrets.

Note to self: The canvas is clean—vanish into the night, a wraith in the shadows.


11 - Reflection and Satisfaction:

  • Relish the satisfaction of another successful execution—revel in the power.

In the aftermath, the darkness becomes my confidant, and the solitude of the night offers a moment of reflection.

The satisfaction is not a crude celebration but a quiet acknowledgment—a sip from the cup of control, a taste of the power that courses through the veins of the orchestrator. The echoes of the silenced reverberate within, and the sensation is intoxicating—a heady cocktail of dominance and conquest.

The shadows that once concealed will become an accomplice in the celebration. The city, ignorant of the sinister ballet that unfolded, continues its rhythmic slumber. The satisfaction is not just in the act but in the meticulous execution, the successful navigation of the delicate dance with fate.

Note to self: Reflect in the shadows—savor the moment, for the city slumbers, and the echoes of whispered secrets are mine alone.


12 Evading Authorities:

  • Monitor news reports, stay ahead of the investigation, and avoid routine patterns.

With the act complete, the city awakens to the realization of a silent intrusion—a phantom that slips through the grasp of comprehension. In the ensuing hours, news reports emerge like ripples in the still waters of the night, carrying the weight of the unexplained. The authorities, heralds of order, scramble to decipher the enigma that lingers in the cities dark embrace.

Evading the tendrils of investigation becomes a calculated dance—one performed with the precision of one who has traversed this labyrinth before. News articles become fragments of a narrative written by those who remain unaware of the orchestration of shadows. Each report is a step closer to exposure, a whisper that threatens to amplify into a cacophony.

Staying ahead of the investigation requires an artful manipulation of shadows. Routine patterns, the Achilles' heel of the pursuer, must be avoided. The city becomes a vast chessboard, and every move is a strategic calculation to outmaneuver those who seek to unravel the veil of anonymity.

Note to self: Evade the pursuit—remain a phantom in the investigator's narrative, a shadow eluding the grasp of scrutiny.


13 - Future Planning:

• Consider a break before the next act—less predictability, heightened impact.

In the aftermath of the orchestrated symphony, the orchestrator retreats into the contemplative shadows. The city breathes with a quiet unease, and the wraith, momentarily satiated, considers the next move in the malevolent dance.

Planning becomes a calculated reflection—an examination of the delicate balance between visibility and obscurity. A hiatus, a pause in the cadence of malevolence, emerges as a strategic consideration. The city may forget the phantom, lulled into a false sense of security, only to be awakened by the unexpected return.

Less predictability becomes the cornerstone of the next act. The orchestrator, a phantom that thrives on the element of surprise, contemplates the shadows from which the next narrative will emerge. A hiatus is not a retreat but a strategic withdrawal, a respite before the next crescendo in the symphony of malevolence.

The future plan is not just an act of evasion but a calculated decision to amplify the impact. The city, accustomed to the whispering secrets, will be unprepared for the resurgence—an unexpected encore in the chilling performance that unfolds within the shadows.

Note to self: Plan the next act—less predictability, heightened impact, a resolute return to the city's symphony.


14 - Maintaining Normalcy:

  • Attend work, social gatherings, and interact normally—avoid arousing suspicion.

As the city grapples with the aftermath, I must seamlessly reintegrate into the tapestry of normalcy. Work becomes a stage, and the routine of daily life—a meticulously crafted facade. The phantom dons the mask of the ordinary, attending meetings, engaging in water cooler conversations, and becoming a shadow amid the bustling corridors of professional life.

Social gatherings morph into a performance, a dance where laughter conceals the echoes of whispered secrets. I, a chameleon in the social fabric, am to interact with calculated charm, blending into the tapestry of mundane interactions. Each smile, each handshake, is a brushstroke in the portrait of normalcy, a canvas painted with the colours of deceptive ease.

To avoid arousing suspicion is an art form—a delicate act where I navigate the fine line between obscurity and visibility.

The city will continue its rhythm, and I will become a phantom in plain sight—an entity that thrives in the ordinary, a whisper in the symphony of everyday interactions.

Note to self: Maintain the illusion—be the phantom within the ordinary, a silhouette concealed in the city's bustling anonymity.


Final note: Tomorrow, Emily becomes more than a name on a list; she becomes the final note in the chilling symphony I've composed.

December 23, 2023 00:38

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Emily Lozano
07:42 Jan 01, 2024

This list might get you put on a list.

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N Martin
08:07 Jan 01, 2024

Yeah had the same thought. So seems to have had the desired effect.

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