ATRG#6: The Battle of Traitors and Star-Crossed Lovers

Submitted into Contest #94 in response to: Write a story about two people who need each other, but are too stubborn to admit it.... view prompt

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LGBTQ+ Adventure Drama

โ€œWe broke up after...some events happened.โ€

I gaped at her. Sasori shook his head.

โ€œWhy the fucking hell is he here?โ€

โ€œHow am I supposed to know?โ€

I butted in.

โ€œIs Gray okay?โ€

Konan opened her mouth, but Itachi cut her off.

โ€œWe are here. Letโ€™s go.โ€

He looked grim, angry, and sad. Sadder than he always is. Kisame didnโ€™t even say anything, he just followed Itachi.

โ€œUh...Is it just me, or is Itachi being more of a depressed princess than his usual dumb self?โ€

โ€œSasori, it isnโ€™t only him, Kisameโ€™s also acting strange. Letโ€™s just go.โ€

I mentally prepared myself, shaking my nerves off. I had trained my jutsus almost everyday, and I hoped that I could at least survive.

As we opened the door, rushing out to greet six ugly corpses. They had stopped banging the door awhile ago. The least ugliest stepped towards Konan.

โ€œKonan.โ€

โ€œNagato.โ€

It was clear at once that they still loved each other, but they didnโ€™t say it. They just stood there, staring at each other.

Then I felt a sword slice my shoulder.

K-Kisame?!

He prepared to slice me again, and I ran, tried to dodge my ex-teammate's sword.

โ€œWhat the fuck, Itachi?โ€

Sasori had taken out one of his puppets, and was dueling with Itachi. I couldnโ€™t comprehend why they would turn on us. Konan was slicing the corpse that had talked with paper, clearly not hurting him, though.

โ€œKISAME. WHAT. THE. HELL!โ€

I gripped his sword, and tried to wrench it from him. He tugged it back, shouting โ€œYou wouldnโ€™t get why!โ€

โ€œFine then! I thought that I could trust you!โ€

I kicked him in the face, jumping on his sword and punching him again. He stumbled and then slashed me with his sword, getting me in the ankle. I uppercutted him, and he fell unconscious. I felt tears in my eyes, partly from the pain, but also because I thought that Itachi and Kisame would help us. Itachi had joked with me, talked with me, and was just a really cheerful and helpful person.

Or so I thought.

โ€œARGH!โ€

I glance over at Sasori, who was holding his broken arm, the puppet limp on the floor. Itachi stood over him, really to land the final blowโ€ฆ

โ€œNOT MY BOYFRIEND, YOU BITCH!โ€

A familiar blondie rushed to Itachi, and threw an explosive on his face.

โ€œDei..?โ€

โ€œHi, Sasori.โ€

Deidara turned to Itachi again, and began yeeting bombs at him, Itachi managing to dodge most of them, but getting his robe caught on fire.

โ€œDamn-โ€

โ€œYou should focus on yourself, girl.โ€

I looked into the eyes of another corpse.

He smashes me in the stomach, and throws aโ€ฆ a cage over me. Clutching my stomach, I wheeze out โ€œLet...Me...Go!โ€

โ€œSorry. Girls like you need to stay in the cage.โ€

Helpless, I could only watch as he ran to Deidaraโ€ฆ

Suddenly, I blacked out.

***

Hello, Kama Hatake. Or Master, shall I say?

Who are you?

I am the one who can awaken The strength of one hundred seals on your forehead, and give you immense power. My name is Chomei, the seven tails.

How do I know that you can be trusted?

I made you black out. I can control you when you are on the brink of failure. Here. Let me show you.

***

I awoke with purple chakra flowing across my body and strange, swirly lines across my body. Immerse power was flowing through me.

Time, it seemed, had slowed down. I raised my glowing fist, and punched the cage.

โ€œHAAA!โ€

The cage shattered, and I ran towards Mr. Ugly, ready to tank the blow for Dei, even if it meant getting critically injured.

A giant yellow shield surrounded me.

โ€œKama!โ€

Gray arrived, along with a pretty blue-haired lady that immediately punched one of the corpses, an older man who sended three giant red fists at another corpse, a third boy, who was shielding me, and an old woman, โ€œKAYY-YAAA!โ€-ing an enemy.

Dei was looking at me with surprise as he hugged Sasori. I gave him a โ€œDonโ€™t worry about it.โ€ look.

The boy who saved my life was now shielding the redhead and the blue woman.

Just then, Zetsu appeared, heading towards Sasori.

I thought : Oh, heโ€™s healing him.

But Zetsu flung a dart at Sasori, who blocked it.

Shit. Zetsuโ€™s a betrayer too!

Konan looked horrified as she โ€œdueledโ€ with her ex. She had a desperate look on her face, and clearly needed her ex. But she still didnโ€™t tell him.

The blue-haired woman (whose name was Allegra) rushed towards them, and started healing, which Zetsu was supposed to do.

Three people that betrayed us.

Three people that were once people I thought I could trust.

Threeโ€ฆย ย 

I rushed towards the corpse that trapped me, clutching my hand into a fist.

โ€œYou may have trapped me last time, but nowโ€ฆโ€

โ€œIโ€™ll do it again!โ€ He snarled, leaping at me.

Those were his final words. I screamed โ€œGo to hell!โ€ and smashed him with everything I had. He got obliterated.

Suddenly, Chomei pulled me into a memory.

***

โ€œHello! My name is Rin Noroha! This is my husband Kakashiโ€ Rin pointed at Kakashi, who was reading a book, โ€œand his boyfriend, Might Gai!โ€

It cuts to Might Gai flashing a smile at the camera, and holding a thumbs up.

โ€œWe all hope you will take care of Kama!โ€

Then it cuts to blackness.

Why did that make me so happy?

***

The battle rages on. Two of the corpses are down (One by Deidara and one by me.) Three traitors. Itachi. Kisame. Zetsu. Only Itachiโ€™s fighting, though. Kisame was knocked out by me, and Zetsu is doing nothing.

The Four Masterโ€™s that Gray found are very helpful, but the battle is taking its toll. Allegraโ€™s constantly healing people. Armando keeps swinging. Abdonis puts up numerous shields. And Guru Andma slices enemies.

Just when I think it canโ€™t get any worse, a fourth person arrives on their side, at the same time as another person on our side. These new arrivals startle everyone, and the battle stops for a few precious moments.

Kakuzu, surrounded by black mist, and Hidan have arrived at the scene.

Unedited and Awesome - (Thank you Sia)

EEEEEEEEEEE TRATIORS AND LOVERSSSSS HEHEHEE

Andddddd I don't own these guys, I only own Kama and Gray

Drama Kween~

May 19, 2021 05:24

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WHAT? YOU LEFT ME WITHOUT TELLING ME? UNFAIR! I DECALRE A JURY THING OR WHATEVER!! WHERE DID YOU GOOO?๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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im so sorry I hope i will hope back sorry that I did not tell you you are a really good friend thank you for caring stay safe โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ

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Oh mah gawd-I didn't mean to sound rood or anything! It's okay to take a break <3 I mean, I took one. I understand completely. If you quit Reedsy forever, I won't protest, I respect all your decisions. Aww, thank you <3 You're an amazing friend, too! You too-make sure to stay safe. (I'm pretty sure) You asian, so please stay safe from asian hate. Ciao <3

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you not rood :) ofc not forever! ty to you too awwwww same! Protect urself <3 Stay safe <3

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Fiijeiwjhduiewkjhedjewhedjuehrd Dwble tankz <3 You protect even MORE otay? Tple stay safe๐Ÿ’–

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TJ Squared
04:14 Jul 11, 2021

:DDD Hewo Celeste! How ya doin?

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TJ Squared
04:16 Jul 11, 2021

Datโ€™s great :D Iโ€™ve been pretty good I suppose Missed ya too <333

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TJ Squared
04:26 Jul 11, 2021

You too <333 On a road trip headed home so not really lol hbu?

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Graham Kinross
02:55 Jun 12, 2022

Another great story Avi. โ€œZetsuโ€™s a betrayer too!โ€ Traitor?

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Graham Kinross
09:39 Jun 16, 2022

Working on any new stories at the moment?

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Graham Kinross
23:49 Jun 17, 2022

Yeah, I want to finish the latest arc in my series and one of the prompts, the one with repeated dialogue, looks ok for that.

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TJ Squared
16:03 Aug 21, 2021

Heyyy Celeste! Ivy Carter is coming back sometime next week along with Abigail Cross, spread the word!

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17:49 Jul 20, 2021

TBHHH AS SOON AS I SAW THE โ€œSTAR-CROSSED LOVERSโ€ IN THE TITLE MY MIND JUMPED TO THE HUNGER GAMES LOL

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Sia S
06:09 Jul 20, 2021

Chiaroscuro, Pt. 9! Your part ;)

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Sia S
10:04 Jul 18, 2021

gimme an unusual/mysterious phrase/sentence, thank you

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Dhwani Jain
14:06 Jul 18, 2021

The man turned around and saw a squid trying to squish an octopus.

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Sia S
16:41 Jul 18, 2021

XD God, the things I could make with this-

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Dhwani Jain
03:10 Jul 19, 2021

Ah! Haha! This was just impromptu. I'll read your stories soon....they're on my reading list. Where are you from?

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Sia S
04:09 Jul 19, 2021

Haha, it's fine :) Aw, that means so much!! *Honestly it does <3* I would tell you, but the internet- so ill just say Asia :)

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Dhwani Jain
04:13 Jul 19, 2021

:) :D Nice, from your name, I'll just guess India (I don't care if it's wrong)... ;)

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Sia S
04:39 Jul 20, 2021

Ooooh, thats niiiice!

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Sia S
05:45 Jul 15, 2021

Chiaroscuro Pt 8!

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Sia S
15:11 Jul 11, 2021

New story (involving hilarious grannies) ;)

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Sia S
04:23 Jun 21, 2021

You left without telling me? D: :'(

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IMSOSOWWWYBUTDOESTHISMAKEITUP? <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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Sia S
04:06 Jun 24, 2021

*CRYING NOISESS* AREYOUBACKNOWWWWW?????????????????????????? <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS *TEARSOFJOY*

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Sia S
02:18 Jun 25, 2021

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYรYYYYYYIEEEEEEEEE *party poppers*

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TJ Squared
19:14 Jun 16, 2021

well, if you do come back, just wanted to say I miss ya. Reedsy seems to be dying, probably cause of summer, but still <3

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TJ Squared
17:32 Jun 24, 2021

Yayayayayay! Glad you are :DDD

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14:49 Jun 10, 2021

I'm so sadddd You were one of my first friends. We used ti talk in hashtags, remember? And you were a big heroine in my first Reedsycast. You saved my character. I'm gonna miss you. Not sure if you still get notifications, but I'm going to say this: write a book. You're good enough. Praying for you and missing you, Em.

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Vera Vuscoe
14:11 Jun 06, 2021

Wait are u leaving? Please don't! I saw your bio I care! Don't leave I cry :(

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15:29 Jun 02, 2021

YOU'RE LEAVING?!?!!!!!! NOOOO CEL YOU ARE LIKE THE AWESOMEBEST BUTTERFLY HERE ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ I'll miss you :( <3

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TJ Squared
13:26 Jun 01, 2021

Aw, Celeste. I'll miss you. The role-plays where fun while they lasted, but sometimes taking a break is best. <3

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OMG YOUR LEAVING NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! :( I'LL MISS YOUUU ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Well ty for mentioning me in your bio reedsy won't be the same without ya heh heh.. I'm not crying.............

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11:44 Jun 01, 2021

Celeste-- You were my first friend here, I think. You were always there with a funny story. We used to talk with hashtags. Your stories inspired me. I love your writing, so please, someday, publish a book. Gonna miss you. Maybe come back someday? --Em

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