Hey all, hope your day has been going well. This is a really short poem I wrote. It doesn’t apply to the prompt, and it’s under the word limit, but I kind of felt like posting it so I did. I have a feeling it’s pretty bad, so if you choose to continue, proceed with caution. Also, feel free to tell me what you think.
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I have high expectations for myself,
For what I’m meant to do.
Then I see how small I am,
And wonder if it was ever possible at all.
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When I hear of all the sorrows of our world,
I dream of changing it for the better.
When I see all those who have suffered,
I want to save them all.
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When I hear of all those who have succeeded,
I dream of being the next.
When I see the light they have given us,
I want to thank them for helping us all.
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When I listen to music at full volume,
I dream of dancing through the clouds.
When I stare at the world outside my window,
I want to see it all.
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When I forget about all that holds me back,
I dream of living the life I always imagined.
When I tell myself this isn’t false hope,
I want to allow for it all.
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When I look up at the wide-open sky,
I dream of breaking free.
When I feel the wind in my hair,
I want to rise above it all.
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When I stare up at the starry night,
I dream of the galaxies above us.
When I hear of all this world has to offer,
I want to experience it all.
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I have high expectations for myself,
For what I’m meant to do.
Then I see how small I am,
And wonder if it was ever possible at all.
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Okay, quick random poll: 1. Would you rather travel to space or the bottom of the ocean? 🚀 2. Would you rather be a vampire or a werewolf? 🧛 3. Would you rather fly or be invisible? 🪄 4. Would you rather have burritos or tacos? 🌮 5. Would you rather the whole world be in warm colors (red, pink, orange, yellow) or cool colors (green, blue, purple)?🌈 My answers are: Space, werewolf, fly, burritos, warm colors What are your answers and why? :D
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heya!!! I would... 1) ocean 2)werewolf....theyre hot :D...most of the time 3) invisible - THINK OF ALL THE STUFF YOU COULD DOOOOOO 4) Tacos....easy short and delicious 5) cool colors ... they suit mah mood XD
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Nice!!! Lol you could do so much stuff being invisible! :) XDD
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yaass you could!!
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:DDD
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hellooooo 1. space causeeee jellyfishes :< 2. werewolf...floofy puppies...ehhh what's the difference? (I mean Nainika wasn't wrong when she said werewolves are hot most of the time ;)) And also, if vampires are iron defficient... can't they take multivitamins lol (pls. dont come for me vampires) 3. flyyy, if you had wings what would you do? 4. burritos, cause i never had tacos before 5. cool colorssss :)
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Lol good idea, vampires should take vitamins. XD
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Yeah, so much better than blood, it's gooey and sometimes there are chunks (I think I can hear a faraway vampire saying 'but that's the best part') lol
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Ewwwwwww XDDD
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Lol I didn't realize where I replied from, but yesss, ewwwww
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1. both are equally mysterious, but I'm more curious about space. are or are not aliens real?? 2. vampire, 110% 3. fly, but it's gotta be on comand 4. haven't tasted a proper taco yet so *shrug* 5. Can't answer. I love all colors too much! Cool and warm colors each have their own vibe, cant live without one. Art would be less cool too.
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Good choices! XD
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God has high expectations of you too. Let the Holy Spirit help you make anything possible. Phil 4:13
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Thank you, David!
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1. CAN'T CHOOSE!! 2. Hmm wolf 3. Be invisible, I've been wanting to do that my whole life lmao 4. I CAN'T DECIDEEEE I LOVE FOOOD 5. Cool colours
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Yayyyy!!! Wolf group! :D
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Haha
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Lol I honestly don't get why people say vampire, who would want to drink blood and always be in the dark? XD
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XD I dont mind the dark but its the blood part thats kinda creepy
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Yeah. :)
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I loved this poem! I really enjoyed the way that at the end of each stanza, you ended it with the word "all". The moral to this poem was also a very relatable one for me, amazing work!
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Thanks so much, Cookie! :DDD
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Yw! :D
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Loved this short poem. The hidden meanings were prefect and the simplicity was amazing. For your poll: 1. Space. I hate ocean 2. Vampire 3. Invisible 4. Tacos 5. Cool
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Thanks, Blue! Yay, more answers for the poll! :D Btw a bunch of people from Reedsy are playing skribble (an online pictionary game) today at 3:30 EST if you want to play. :)
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I can't sorry because I would still be in school
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Oh, okay. :)
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Hey, Maya! This poem is told in such a simplicity, such an accuracy, such a magnificence. It is adequate, calm, quiet and inspirational, meanings hidden beautifully. Marvelous job! This was utterly spectacular! As for your pol: 1. Would you rather travel to space, or the bottom of the ocean: The bottom of the ocean. Scuba diving is on my bucket list! 2. Would you rather be a vampire, or a werewolf: A werewolf. I mean, they’re awesome. 3. Would you rather fly, or be invisible: Given the fact that I could easily escape a murderous colony ...
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Thanks so much, Nora! Lol XDDD Btw people from Reedsy are playing skribble (an online pictionary game) at 3:30 EST if you want to play. :)
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amazing
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OMG! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING, BESTIE! Everything you said reigned true, and it was absolutely beautiful. I could never write poetry, especially like this! :DDDDDDDDD Your bestie, Brooke
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Thank you so much! Aww, I'm sure you could! :DDDDD Your bestie, Maya
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You're welcome so much! I doubt that, but thanks! :D Your bestie, Brooke
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I don't doubt it! ;))))))))) Your bestie, Maya
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Aw, thanks, bestie! :DDDDDD Your bestie, Brooke
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:DDDDDDDDDDD <333333333333
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Hi, Maya! I love the poem, its beautiful and elegantly written. It's also super relatable and touching. Amazing!
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Thank you so much, Lily! :D
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Hehehehe ;)
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NEW STORY
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Heyaaaa, how are you? How long do you think the fruit names will last? Idk when to change it back...maybe when everybody changes theirs as well?
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Good. :) But I can't work on my story cause I don't know what should happen. :/ Lol I was just about to change mine back, once I find a cool profile picture. :D
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Ohh, I can't choose a profile picture either, but I found one with muted colors and I love it.... Oh, I can't work on mine either lol, I was supposed to post it yesterday, hoping I would've finished by then, buttttt......eh
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I changed mine. :D What the story about? (if you can say) I wish I could finish mine, who knows, maybe if I concentrate. My brain isn't really working, though. XD
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Oohh I'll probably change mine as well, lol it's getting awkward to pull it off since everybody's been changing theirs as well... Hmm, it's in the form of a letter, the story....that why I don't think it can reach up to 1000 words
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Oooh, that sounds really interesting! :D
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Poll- 1. Travel to space chause its cool:DD 2. Werewolf!!!! Love wolves<33 3. Invisible! I could do so much... 4. Tacos! 5. Cool colors.
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Yay!!! :DDD <333
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<333 :DD
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I forgot if I did this or not?? 🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓
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Lololol thx idk if you did
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Ha lol
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I don't believe it when you say it's your first time writing a poem. They sound kind of like Edgar Allen Poe's. Awesome job Maya, keep writing more poems!! :)
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Thanks so much, Haripriya! Want to answer the poll? Lol :D
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Yessss. 1. Space 2. A vampire who doesn't suck blood...lol 3. Flyyyy 4. TACOS ALL THE WAY 5. Cool colors Fun poll!
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Yesss, vampires are cool and immortal but it would be gross to drink blood. XD Thanks!
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Your welcome Maya, and yes, you're totally right. But I just wouldn't wanna be a wolf...that's all. :)
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Vampires can't go in the sun. though.
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Okay... so maybe this is just absolutely astounding because I was listening to 'little miss perfect' (exact same vibes) in the background, but... wow. So many people need this, yet the same people ignore the problem that's always been there. Lol, time to answer the pol below too, bc I have literally nothing to do rn. 🍓 1. I have agoraphobia and hate water so... neither. 2. Lol... both 3. Invisible. But on and off. 4. Tacos 5. I'd want them to change depending on the season. Maybe cool in spring and winter and warm in summer and fall.
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Thanks! I agree. Yay, someone did the poll! XD Btw we're playing skribble again at 3:30 EST if you want to play. :)
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I'll try to join if I can! I used to have an entire custom list with my friends a year ago, but covid made us stop (and teachers, lol)
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Yay! Lol :D
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What's the link?
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I'll send it in like 20-30 minutes, at 3:30. Maybe we're in different timezones?
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Who is Ayyyyyyy?
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Someone that was coming on all of our Skribble games today and saying "AYYYYYY" and offensive stuff. We think he's either a hacker or more likely a troller/ spammer/ downvoter on reedsy (which might have been how he got the link) He was awful! :/ Ugh
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Like bad words? He sounds terrible! ImsorryIhateHim UGHHHHHHHHHH
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Like rude stuff, kinda like "Edward Cullen" did. I do too. XD
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Wow...D:<<<<<<<<<< XD SHIP WAR XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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XDDDDDDDDD
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Just a suggestion, maybe don't ship Isaac with anyone cause he's younger. Also, he would get upset maybe. XD
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