I stared at the street waited. And waited. What was I waiting for? My friends. It was book night again, and I was the host.
โCeleste! Iโm here!โ
It was Luke, decked with books in his arms and clutching a bulging backpack. I already knew he had Ayn Randโs โAltas Shruggedโ.
โCome in! Oh, is Mira coming?โ
โSheโs behind me! And Jennie, Nainika, and Kate!โ
I felt relieved that they didnโt forget. I would be weeping if that happened.
Everybody arrived with books and papers, and we settled down on the carpeted floor. Then my annoying sister comes in.
โCELESTE! DID YOU DO IT?โ
โI didnโt make waffles.โ
โDONโT TELL YOUR FRIENDS!โ
โGo away to Victoria Gardens.โ
โDONโT GO ON THE CARPET!โ
โWhatever, Sam.โ
She stormed off.
Rose, despite her name, is very bothersome. With bubblegum pink hair, dark brown eyes and tan skin, she was very pretty on the outside. On the inside, she was a nasty brat. Even if she was one year older, she should not be bossing me around. I could never understand what came out of her mouth, even if I was an interpreter.
โWhy was she so hyped about the floor?โ
โSapphire!โ We all shout
I hurry to open the screen door. She comes in, goes to our circle, and sits in the recliner. I think about her question. Why was Rose so upset about the floor? She had ignored me for the better part of a month now, so....?
โEveryone! Get off the rug!โ
Luke starts grumbling about โlosing his spotโ and Jennie quickly stops goofing around with a book on her head. Mira cleans up the knocked over pile of books, and Nainika speedily goes to stand with Sapphire, who is causally eating chips. I chuckle at everyoneโs reaction and try to pry off the carpet. Itโs heavier that it looks.ย
โHelp?โ
Mira rushes in to help, Luke tailing her and Sapphire following.
โGuys! Why are we doing this-โ The words barely left her mouth before we pull it up and-
Black shapes come out and smack us in the face.
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ย I scream as a sliver-eyed person stares at me.
โCeleste! Itโs me! Luke!โ
He looks so different. His normal boring black hair has become flamboyant brown. His sweatshirt and pants are shiny and slick, and his aura is sliver, like his eyes. Luke hands me a mirror. I yell.
I have a head of purple hair, and rainbow irises, and my hands are a stunning purple too. I have a purple-pink adventure dress on, with a lot of pockets, and boots with high heels. I felt confused and excited. Confused as to where we are. Excited as in I LOOK AWESOME.
โAre you the only one here in my...โ
I realized we are not in my house. And all my other friends are gone.ย
Luke is about to respond when I here a sound.
โLuke! Celeste!โ
โMIRA!!!โ
I run towards her but stop to looke at her breathtaking beauty.
She has super long wavy black hair, with a hint of blue on the tips and a braid, inverted style. Mira has eyes that change from black to brown continuously.ย She has a short dress, and black combat boots. Her sapphire blue aura makes her very pretty.
I hug both of them. I donโt like losing people or friends.
โJ..Jennie....a....and..Kate...are..coming!โ Mira says, panting.
I glance up and see a maroon and mint figure. When they get close I run up to them.
Jennie has light magenta hair, deep and shiny. She has soft grey eyes and a magenta aura. Her flannel and tights looks very handsome. She cracks a smile at me. I return it.
Kate has chestnut hair tied in a ponytail, piercing blue eyes.ย She also has a watch. It stores all her clothes, convient for anything. She was wearing a tank top and sweatpants, perfect for this humid weather. I envied her; even in this strange world her still has the perfect invention.
Sapphire appears out of nowhere and I gasp again for the third time.
Her black hair has many sliver streaks in it, and she had glowing icy white eyes that look deep in my soul. She is wearing a cloak, like me, but has a hood and shadows around it. Sapphireโs menacing black aura clings to her. After she reunites with us, Mira speaks.
โWhere is Nainika?โ
We all gasp and immediately start looking for her.
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ย โNainika! Na-โ
I pause to wipe the sweat off my head.
Luke grimaces.
โANY LUCK?โ Jennie hollers to us. She and Kate are busy chopping down trees. We were sent to a fantasy world with deserts and forests. Naiki could be anywhere. Luke and Mira were scouting the desert, but came back, and me and Sapphire are in the river part.
โNO JEN!โ
I bend up and help Sapphire up too. Then I do what I do best: think and wonder.
I think that my other friends are going to miss us.
I think that Rose would be angry for using my big brain.
I wonder what the aura are for. Powers? Fashion? Just an aura? I let my mind wander, and it wanders so far that I only come back when I hear Kate screeching in my ear.
โI found her!โ
I follow Kateโs gaze and find a young woman. I can not believe that it isย
โNainika!โ
She looks up from her flower-picking. Her brown-gold hair hangs around her back and she has a hazelnut eye and a eye-watering green one. Naiki has a flannel on, like Jennie, jeans, and a pair of cute converse shoes. Her aura is bright cream, like ice cream. It mixes nicely with her eyes and hair.
We all go to hug her.
โDonโt get lost again!โ
She laughs.
โWhen the weird shapes came out, I was thrown here and landed on this!โ She points to a box. As I get closer, I read what it says:
This is the propriety of Ms. Rose.
We all gasped and everybody looked at me. I looked at that word.
R O S E
Hi guys! So this is the first story of a very long series! I will expand on the characters and their personalities sooooon! And sorry if you didnโt get featured, but you will def be in the next one! Peace โฎ๏ธ!ย
Also, can you figure out what me and Rose said?
Ps. Sapphire is a shade she can use shadows and teleport and turn invisible hehehhehee
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474 comments
Tell moi if you wanna be in thisssss
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Omg, it is so cool how you include fellow writers into your stories!! <3
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Yeah, Celeste does have that talent! ๐
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IRIS I AM SO SORRRRRY I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LATE THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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You're welcome! ๐
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I love your name!
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Who?
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You both! Iris Greyfeather and Celeste Shin Bu. They are beautiful!
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Hey Celeste!! Loved the story so much! Also, I am so happy that you liked my story Celeste! Means so much to me!! :)
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Np :DDDDDDDDD
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hellloo..i neeeed hallpp plss. i wass downvotedd, (not that i had much karma to begin with) but AHHHHHH i didnt even have much and they still downvoted meee. wanna trade upvotes?? i got you to 6379, btw. P.S. i read your demon slayer fanfic, totally unrelated question, do you also watch steven universe?
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YES I WILL HALP Yes, I do!
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I am Marshmallow. I will up vote.
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I am also marshmallow. I upvoted :DD
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Omigoshhh thank youuu.. AND YOU WATCH SU, GASP ARE WE BEST FRIENDS NOW??
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YESSSSSSSSS
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Yayyy :DD
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:D
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WHY ARE ALL MY FRIENDS BEING DOWNVOTEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Hey, Celeste...if you don't mind, do you have time to help me with the points? Thank you!
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YESsShHhh
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Aww, thank you so much Celeste!!!!
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:DDDDD
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:)
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=D
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OMG IM HERE AFTER THE EDIT ABOUT ME AND- GIRL YOU MAKE ME LOOK EXACTLY HOW I WANT TO I- I LOVE YOU CELESTEEEEEE THANK YOUUUUU
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HEHEHEHEHEH SISISISISISSSSS YESSSSSS NO PROBLEM ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD XDDDDDDD
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*HAPPY DANCES*
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*dances like a crazed animal ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ*
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O. M. G. I AM AN AMAZING PERSON YASSSSS THANKS SO MUCH YOU CAPTURED ME SO WELLL!!! Just one thing: Atlas Shrugged was written by Ayn Rand, John Galt is the main character XD
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XD Iโll change it NPPPp
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XD
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XDD Wot power you want? (Element)
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MIND OR WATER
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MIND/PSYCHIC IS TAKEN SO CAN YOU HAVE A POWER THAT IS THE SAME AS YOUR COLOR? Sorry.......
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Awesome story and playful characters. It was such a friendly = and lovely story. I loved the goofiness and the magic between the friends. I would love more series like this.
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There will be more! Thank you and stay safe!
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By the way, I have submitted a new story would love your feedback on it.
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This was a great story, can't wait for the others.... Also, could I be in it? ๐๐๐ฅบ I love stories that involve others and the supernatural.
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O F C Do you wanna be the person we save?
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Yes, I would love that! Anywhere you can fit me I'm okay with. And thanks for the likes and follow! :)
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awwwwwwwwww alright fill this out: Hair: Eyes: Clothes you wear all the time: curse: (this is only for you!): color: evil laugh: thing that possesses you:
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lol, I've had a character like this in my head for years, ever since I watched supergirl. Thanks. Hair: Black with golden tips, Spiked/shaped like lightning Eyes: Grey with specks of gold Clothes you wear all the time: Black sleeveless button-up, blue jeans, black combat boots, and blue beanie. curse: (this is only for you!): Everywhere they go lightning follows color: Gold evil laugh: A dry chuckle the thing that possesses you: Zeus' Enemies
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Y E S okie imma wok on it nowwwe
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I think that is wonderful that you turn your followers into characters, and even better, you make them just as they would have wanted to be portrayed! Love your work! ๐ค
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Would you like to play skribble again at 2:30? :) Megan and Riddhi are playing today.
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YES
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YAY!!! :D Can you tell me when your collab with Brooke comes out so I can read it?
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IM TYPING IT NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Okay! I can't wait to read it! :D
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Celieeeee Don't you have a sibling or another account that's on Reedsy?
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YEs
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Upvote time!
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Me too-
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Nonononono, YOU were DOWNVOTED. I was NOT. YOU NEED NEED NEED NEED NEED NEED NEED NEED NEED NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED TO BE UPVOTED
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REeeeEeEeE TOoO LATE UPVOTING MACHiNE HaS ACTIVATED
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Nuuu YoU N E E E E E E E D to be UpVotEddddddd
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OKE NOW LEmmme-
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IT'S A NEEED
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just because I read this...cried AGAIN bc I have such amazing online friends...REREAD AND AJNAJSNFLASFNLAJSNFJSA CRIED AGAIN imma upvote you a ton!!
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OMG Thanks but you really are an amazing friend I wanna show the world THatTtTt Also next one you have a power. What do you want? For power?
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Awww Uhm gimme options
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;D Maybe Iโll randomly give then.... HMmMmmMmMmM
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HMmMmmMmMmM gimmmmee themmmmm :D
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What color is close to cream...? Orange or gold?
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Hehheheheee I was thinking a power for each color......
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New story!!!
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YES
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You are weird
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Just stopped by to upvote you!!!
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AWWwwWwwwww
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This was so amazingly awesome and I cant wait for more parts!!!!!!!!!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww ๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป
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I love your descriptions of the charactersโ transformations. They sound ethereal and Iโm looking forward to seeing where the adventure takes them!
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Yay! Iโm really glad you like it! ;D
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AFTER ANOTHER EDIT ABOUT ME- GIRL I LOVE YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU I NEED TO FIND A WAY TO REPAY YOU. LIKE, RN.
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Hehehehhehe XD SIS Maybe a story with me and you as da main characters? XD or-
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YES I ALREADY HAVE AN IDEA HEHEHEHEEH
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REaLLLy? wWwWwOooOwwWwW XD
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HEHEHEHEHEHEEHEHHEHE
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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HERE AFTER THE THIRD EDIT ABOUT ME AND- I THOUGHT YOU WERE AT MAXIMUM AWESOMENESS BUT YOU PROVED ME WRONGGGGGGG!!! THANK. YOU.
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NO PROB SIS
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:DDDDDDDDDD IM SO HAPPYYYY
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LASt EDIT YOu SEE
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OMG
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