βWanna try again?β
βWhy not? We have nothing to lose.β
Blythe and Katharine stepped out of Blythe's car to get to school on time. It was a chilly October morning, the leaves on the trees were bright flames like the tops on a candle. It was the 49th day of 7th grade as theyβve both been counting. Blythe and Katharine both have gotten bullied many times, together and separate. They made a resolution to try and overcome that, to stand up to the year-long bullies that had ruined their lives. They tried every day, so far they have only failed, but they kept going, just in case some miracle happened.
βWhere do you think they are?β Katharine asked, shivering in the brisk October air.
βI donβt know, maybe near their lockers. Theyβre always there,β responded Blythe.
βYeah, or maybe in the bathroom.β
βOr the cheer stadium.β
βOr the staff room, stealing all the food and getting away with it!β They both shouted, giggling and smiling at each other.
It wasnβt funny at all, but they had just made it into a joke to make it easier to shrug it off.
No matter what Blythe and Katharine did, the bullies never could get caught. They were the teacherβs pet, probably so the teacher would favour in their opinion, even if they had done something wrong.
The bullies had a quite interesting definition of wrong.
Once, Blythe had witnessed a 2nd-grade girl named Sarah get bullied by Julia and her crew of girls. They were teasing her about her clothes and her hair, about how her little pigtails looked babyish. One of Juliaβs crewmates almost punched Sarah, until a teacher came by and asked what they were doing.
You what their answer was?
βWe were just giving her fashion advice,β Julia had said.
Her girls just nodded along, and the teacher walked right away.
Julia had sneered at Sarah and sashayed off, leaving Sarah with tears welling in her eyes.
Blythe had went over and asked, βI saw what they did. Did you know that I get bullied too?β
βYou? A big kid like you?β little Sarah had asked, little streams of water flowing down her face, to her chin and dripped on the granite floor.
βYeah, Julia is one of the meanest.β Blythe had responded, brushing the tears from Sarahβs face. βYou should be proud, you survived them and didnβt get hurt. The first time Julia bullied me, I got a big bruise on my forehead.β
βIβm sorry,β Sarah said. βIβm gonna tell Mommy that I survived a bully, a monster, a giant big dragon with pink lipstick and a ponytail!β
βOkay, tell your Mommy that when you get home,β Blythe had answered.
Sarah had nodded and skipped away, a newfound happiness woven into her step.
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Another time, Katharine was in Grade 4 and just went to the bathroom during class when she got ambushed.
βOh hi, Katharine. What a basic name, the alphabet is shaking.β
It was Elizabeth, and this time, she was alone.
Katharine didnβt understand how Elizabeth called her name boring when Elizabeth was like the most commonly known name ever, but she stayed silent.
βHaha, not responding huh?β Well, if you donβt say anything, things will have to get rough,β Elizabeth threatened, balling up her fists with an evil grin on her face.
βWhat should I say? Thereβs nothing for me to say, you said my nameβs boring and thatβs fine by me,β Katharine answered, swallowing the other words down her throat.
βWhat should I say? Oh, why donβt you change your name then, to something prettier?β
βMom said my name was pretty. . . β Katharine murmured, looking down at her feet.
βWell, guess what? Your mom lied to you, Katharine. Itβs not pretty at all. Itβs so ugly a caterpillar wouldβve won a name contest even if it was named Smurfy McCuddlepants,β Elizabeth said, advancing onto Katharine by the second.
βCaterpillars are cute though, they have little legs and-β
βCute? Youβre a nerd Katharine, and an ugly one at that.β
Smack
Elizabeth slapped Katharine across her cheek, long and hard. It gave off a strong sting, like when you cleaned an open wound with alcohol. Katharineβs breath caught and she almost started to cry when Elizabeth walked out of the bathroom and slammed the door.
Click
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This memory was recent and fresh in both Blythe and Katharineβs minds.
It was about a month ago after the bell had rung and everyone was tired, exhausted and ready to get home.
βKatharine, can you carry my backpack for me? My arms are getting sore from the dodgeball game earlier,β Blythe had asked Katharine.
βOkay.β
Blythe slipped off her grey backpack and stretched out her arms while Katharine bent down and hoisted it up onto her back.
βBlythe, the one who gets tired after a dodgeball game. Isnβt that so lame girls?β
Giggles swarmed the air around Blythe and Katharine, making them stiffen up.
Kylie stepped up, as the leader and said, βWeak Blythe, how are your legs? Youβve been sitting so much today that Iβm sure they must be sore.β
Hyena laughter found its way into Blytheβs ears, twisting her emotions.
βBlythe is the weirdest name ever right! It has a βthβ and βyβ in the same word and none of your teachers know how to spell it right,β Kylie exclaimed, clearly having a good time.
Blythe looked at Katharine with pleading eyes.
Katharine knew for a fact that none of Blytheβs teachers could spell her name on the first try, but she ignored that and spoke up.
βSheβs tired because she has competitive swimming before school for 2 hours. Thatβs why sheβs tired,β Katharine lied, trying to undo the mess that Kylie made.
βOh. Well, swimming isnβt that tiring, all you do is wave your arms around and bring your head up to breathe every few seconds. I bet you I could race against Blythe without any practice and win,β Kylie said.
Katharine looked over to Blythe and saw her normally calm cheeks a bright red, with her body vibrating as if trying to shake Kylie away like she was a dream.
But she was not, and nightmares donβt normally end with a happy ending.
βStop it,β Blythe forced out, the words rolling out her mouth like a trail of marbles.
βStop what?β Kylie asked obliviously.
βLeave us alone now or else I will hurt you,β Blythe responded, her hands curled into fists so tight that her knuckles were white.
βItβs not like youβre gonna hurt me. Youβre too weak.β
That was it for Blythe.
Her right fist shot out from her side and aimed for Kylieβs chin, followed by a strangled cry from the leader of the gang.
Blythe had just punched Kylie, and it looked like she knocked out a tooth.
βOh my gosh oh my gosh thereβs blood, THEREβS MY TOOTH someone help me! Nurse! Principal! ANYONE?!β Kylie called out in desperation while her gang helped her up from the floor.
βWhat seems to have happened here?β
A teacher appeared at the exactly wrong time, in the wrong place with the wrong people.
βBlythe punched me!β Kylie called out, pointing a shaky finger at Blythe.
βNo, she didnβt!β Katharine started. βWell, Kylie was-β
βWhy did you do that Blythe?β the teacher asked, her hands on her hips and an eyebrow raised.
βKylie was bullying me! I said to stop, but she didnβt so I punched her.β Blythe said simply.
βOh Blythe, Iβm afraid Iβll have to send you to the principalβs office.β
βBUT-β
βThere are no buts. Kylie, go to the nurseβs office. Blythe and you there, beside her, follow me to the principalβs office.β
And that was the end of that.
***
βWhat about all the others? Standing up to one of them wonβt stop all of them,β Katharine stated, the fall wind whipping at her ears.
βLetβs try once first, one is better than none,β Blythe responded and looked up to the front doors of the school.
They looked at each other and yanked open the door and walked inside, confident that today was the day that they would succeed.
***
Katharine followed Blythe to her locker near the bathroom, aka the bully hotspot.
βHahaha look at this, Katharine is hiding behind Blythe cause sheβs scared. Whatcha scared of Katharine?β
It was Julia.
Perfect timing.
βIβm not scared,β Katharine said confidently, βI was just gathering my fists in case Iβll have to use them.
Julia looked a little taken aback but bounced back quickly. βHoney, itβs fine if youβre scared, youβre just a little girl anyways.β
βLittle girl? Youβre only 2 years older than us!β Blythe spat out, coating her words with hate.
β2 years can be the difference between babyhood and maturity,β Julia scoffed.
βFirst of all, could you explain that to us? Second of all, we should be older than you guys, since you act as if youβre five,β Katharine said with a satisfactory grin.
βHoney-β
Someone cleared their throat.
Click clack click clack
βStudents, who started this brawl?β
A teacher.
βJulia!β Blythe shouted before anyone could interrupt her. βJulia came out of the bathroom and said Katharine was a baby.β
The teacher gave Julia a look, not of sympathy, but of disgust.
βCome with me Julia, the principal would like to speak with you.β
βBut you didnβt even ask my version of the story-β
βFollow me please.β
The teacher strutted away and beckoned Julia to follow.
Julia hesitated but finally followed the teacher with her head hanging low.
βKatharine,β Blythe said. βI think we just did it.β
βI think we just got Julia in trouble.β
βIs this a dream?β
βOh, I hope not.β
Katharine jumped into Blytheβs open arms and as they hugged each other, the whole world seemed to melt away.
Mission accomplished.
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You should stand against bullies. Both online and offline. I loved the concept of the story and how you incorporated bullying in it.
It is a good school story that portrayed courage and friendship.
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yes i agree. Thank you!
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New story out, would love your feedback on it.
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ofc! i'll read it right after I'm done my homework :)
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nice one! I've always found bullies interesting because well...i just have XD I also like the mission part of the story cause I'm just weird lol. it should always be our mission to spread love instead of hate, cause violence is never the answer :)
PAWfection ;)
L.W.
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TYYY <3
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ywww
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:D
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GET JULIA IN TROUBLE HAHA
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>:D
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That was fast, I just commented.
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yeah i comment fast
well, not when I'm writing. then it takes much longer
I am writing rn, but I'm taking a break :)
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When i write, I am on another planet and can't be reached, but I too am taking a break
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hahaha yeah
i was a bit disappointed with the new prompts because I dont like romance, but maya, nainika and bill helped me think of an idea :)
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Loved this story.. I actually felt like I was there while reading..!
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:D thank you, I'm trying to get my descriptions better :)
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The dialogues in this story is well written and sounds really like someone bullying. Well written @CHESHIRE CAT
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thank you!
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A new story is out would love your feedback.
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Ok!
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Hi amethystttttttttttttttttt
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hiiiiii
do u like my name?
if you zoom into my pfp, i tried to get a non-scary pic of the cat.
did that work?
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yesssss it's so cuteeee<33333
U wanna know something I found out today?!
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what is it?
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so yesterday I got downvoted by like 700 points, and I was curious, how do those ppl downvote so fast?? Because I would reload and my points had gone down by 50 in like 30 seconds. Anyways, I went into my comments and looked for one of my own comments and downvoted it. It went down by two points!!!!!!!! Downvotes make a deduction of 2 points and upvotes only bring you up by one!!!! I stopped by experiment there because I was upset and needed to step back before I got crazy abt points, but I totally didnt know that!!! It gives the DV's more power!! Did you know that and I'm just oblivious?
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OHMG D;
wait WHAT?! that makes no sense!!!! reedsy should get rid of the points all together, its causing wayyyyyyyyyyy too much drama :(
I did NOT know that
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Shout out writer
IVY HATHERALL
https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/ivy-hatherall/
FRANCES
https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/frances/
Shout out story
https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/contests/78/submissions/52220/
{This story is amazing. A must read}
This week's list. Please do read their stories and give them feedback. It will boost their confidence and give them a nice moral support
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:D
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Nice story!
It fits with the prompt good π Good Job!
- Rubyπ
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thanksssss
this was the first thing I thought of when I saw the prompt, glad u like it! :DDDD
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Blythe is such a pretty name.
I love the brimming personality and satisfying ending :)
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yes i know right? i searched up unique names and found this one :D
thanks!!!!!!!
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βOh hi, Katharine. What a basic name, the alphabet is shaking.β
Um... but Elizabeth's a good name? The outrage I feel towards 4th-grade girls is probably pretty justified, but surprisingly strong.
Very realistic style!
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thanks!
i didn't mean to say Elizabeth isn't a good name, I just kinda wrote it as if I was Katharine :)
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OOOOOooooooooOOOOOOOh
The end was literally perfect, the words "mission accomplished" were like, the two words that ended it perfectly and brought it all together.
I can kinda tell Sarah is based off you!
I think the fight at the end was a bit...blank. A bit....idk. I guess what I'm trying to say is that considering how good of a writer you are, I think you could have made it more...intense. Like how fights are when you're experiencing them. We've had our fair share, so maybe you could have used your own take on fights, your own perspective and emotions and fueled them into the story? I'm talking about the fight when Julia entered, maybe more back talk, alot of sneering, and maybe bile in her mouth, etc.
You know I'm a confusing person lol.
Anyway, I think there's only one proper way to end this comment.
Mission Accomplished Ame.
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:DDDD
yay thanks
but actually it was because - nvm ill tell you in private chat
oh ok, just how do i do that? ahhhhh
hahahaha yessss
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Oh my! What a fun, touching and inspiring story!
I'd like to leave my review on this story:
--> THE TITLE ~ It was cool, gave me the 'Mission Impossible' vibes, but I was totally amazed when I got to read that it was about school and bullies.
--> THE CHARACTER NAMES ~ Nice and inventive.
--> THE BEGINNING ~ Really liked the way you gave the anecdotes related to the bullying incidents in the past.
--> THE PLOT ~ The incidents were surely well thought of and were not repetitive, something that most people would have done.
--> THE ENDING ~ I appreciate the fact that Blythe and Katherine (I believe they are lovely names) faced off the bully and everyone got what they deserved.
--> ANYTHING I LIKED/ DISLIKED ~ Nothing to dislike, everything was so good!
--> RANDOM THOUGHTS ~ Would you mind giving me your feedback on any of my stories (except the latest one, it is still in the making)? Also, please do suggest some of your other stories to read.
Thank you for this fabulous story!
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Thank you Dhwani!!
ehehe thanks!
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tysm!!
<33 ahhhh tyyyy
yes ofc! I will read them as soon as I catch up~ I'm a bit behind on some :c
I have a list of my favourites in my bio, so you can take a look at that :DD
THANK YOU!
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Welcome!
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Thanks...a feedback on my latest, 'First Look at the Tower' will be appreciated.
I'll check that list
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<3
Will do!!
thanks!
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=D
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<3
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Hi, Ames! I really love the concept of this story, it's great how you wrote something almost to speak against bullies. You gave the reader a great grasp of the background of the characters, too, great job!!
L. Brooks
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hi!
thank you, that was my first thought after reading the prompt, so I'm glad you liked it!
well, "first thought" actually means like 9 hours AFTER I read the prompt, but who cares bout that :)
thank you!!!!
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Hahahaha writers have weird minds
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yeah we do XD
my next story will only confirm that more lol XDDD
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Lol can't wait to see it!
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ooh yayyyyy :D
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:DDDDD
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Hi Amethyst!! I just posted my reedsy cast story!!!:D Would you mind checking it out?!
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AHHHHHHHHH IM GOING THEREEEEEE
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tysmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDDDD
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Amethyst I looooveeeeeeeeee your pfpppppp it looks so yummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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thanksss i actually don't like marshmallows much but this pic looked so good so that's why I picked it :DDD
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lolXD
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I got a new story out!!
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YAYYYYY ill read it when i get back from school :)
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:DDDDD
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Heyy! I really enjoyed this story! THUMBS UP! So I was thinking, I could have a discord to connect with ya'll. What do you think???
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thank you!
oop i dont have discord D;
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