Ambitions Part 3

Submitted into Contest #58 in response to: Write about someone who purposefully causes a power outage.... view prompt

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Thriller Adventure Drama

Mathew Lawrenson


As I and Kiara stepped out of the Rolls Royce when arriving at the capital, we were immediately greeted by an agent of FEAR.


“Good morning Agents Mathew and Kiara, I’m Agent Sean Smith,” he said.


“Good morning,” I replied. I had noticed the change of title from “Councillor” to “Agent.” It wasn’t worrying, but it felt weird to hear me being called that after so many years.


“I’m here to show you your housing,” Smith explained.


We nodded and he led us to a house. It wasn’t like our mansion back home in New Jersey, but it wasn’t that bad either. It had 2 floors and a nice bedroom. It also had a large table, but I’m sure that’s for planning, and not because FEAR was feeling generous.


“You have 2 weeks to carry out the mission,” Smith told us, “At the end of it, you have to escape without being seen, and arrive at this rendezvous point.”


He gave me a small piece of paper. The words “North Gate, The Hammond Hotel, Philadelphia Street.” I quickly tucked it into my pocket.


Smith continued with the instructions, “If you do not succeed in burning down the White House, you will be punished.”


“What’s the punishment?”


“Your memories will be sucked from your brains with a new gadget, which one of our inventors has made for the secrecy of FEAR. It was on the Terms and Conditions on the sign-up sheet actually,” he added while smirking a little.


It wasn’t funny. Our memories wiped? Horrible!


“Okay,” I said, “Is that all?”


“No, I also have to give you this,” he said and pulled out a white sheet of paper, with curious blue lines, letters, and symbols, “This is the map of the White House. It’ll come in handy.”


And with that, Smith gave me the map and swept out of the house.


I and Kiara set off to work. We had already formulated a plan and just had to revise it.


“Okay,” Kiara said, “first things first: We have to cause a power outage. Nothing should work, no telephones, lights, or computers. No way to call for help, unless someone sees the fires. We’ll start by cutting off the telephone lines, which are here, here, and here.”


And she marked places bordering the White House west, north, and east.


“We’ll have to pack some flamethrowers too, just in case, and some guns, luckily, FEAR has given us those.”


“And we’ll break into the House by … grappling hooks. In the dead of night, so that no one can see us, and we’ll have to be standing near a pillar so that anyone looking through a window won’t see us.” I said.


“Good. And we put fire to the whole thing by setting fire to the carpets, and escape the same way we got in.”


“Then we reach the rendezvous point Agent Smith gave us, and just hope for the best.”


“And all of this will be done tomorrow. In 1 day. And hopefully, Elliot won’t give too much information away”


Conan Lawrenson


“Sir! This man is here to see you!” my security officer, Sykes, said. I and about 20 officers were standing in the White House lawn, with pistols in our holsters and MP5s loaded and ready in our hands.


Our job as a part of the Secret Service was simple: Protect the president of the United States by any costs. That included listening to a random guy who says he has information on an attack.


“Bring him here!” I shouted.


Sykes held the man’s arms to his back and led him to me. “What’s your name?” I asked.


“It doesn’t matter what my name is, because I know about an attack on the President,” he said.


“You do huh? Well, if that turns out to be wrong, you’ll be tracked down and kept in prison for a lot of years for distracting us and playing foolish games.”


“I’m not wrong. There will be an attack on the White House.”


“Take him into the interrogation center, but remember to leave a sufficient amount of security at the White House.”


I handcuffed the anonymous man, just in case he tried anything, and kept him in the back seat of the Chevy Suburban, and drove him to the center.


There, he told us everything he knew.


“There will be an attack on the White House this week,” he started, “A man and a woman will come. They will set fire to the whole thing. An organization has given them a lot of money to set fire to it.”


“Which organization?” I asked him. A cloud of fear was looming in my mind. Was it the same organization that my father and mother are a part of? Is it FEAR?


“I don’t know. Even if I did, I can’t tell you that.”


“Fine. How do the vigilantes look?”


“I know how they look but it won’t be of any use to you. They might be masked. But I’ll still give you their looks.”


We brought in a sketch artist and the man gave him the details. When he was done, I peered nervously at the art. It didn’t look like mother and father! So, it just can’t be them!


“Do you know anything else about the people? Like what they’ll be using to set the fire? Or how they’ll enter?”


“Nope. Nothing else.”


“Why and how are you giving us this information?”


“I just want to be a responsible citizen and protect our nation. As for how I got to know. I can’t tell you that.”


“Why?”


“It doesn’t matter.”


“Tell us, or you’ll be going to jail.”


“I heard a group of people talking about in an alley, about … 2 days ago, at midnight, when I was just buying some Cheetos from a convenience store in downtown Illinois Street. The name of the store is ‘Delicious Side.’ They make some killer sandwiches.”


I noted down the street and the name of the store. It could prove in handy if this organization had any more talks in this particular alleyway.


“Is that all?”


“That’s all I know.”


Mathew Lawrenson


Today was the day. It’s the day where we burn down the White House. The day where we attempt the most dangerous mission in our lives. The day where history will be repeated. The day where we regain our status as Councillors. The day where we prove to Elliot (curse him) that we’re better than him!


As night fell, we hopped into our car, a matte colored Honda Accord. We drove near the White House and tried to search for the telephone lines.


There they were! Hidden behind a tall oak tree was a thin wooden pole, with wires hanging to the top of it. “Keep looking for the other poles,” I whispered to Kiara, “I’ll handle this one.”


She nodded and sped off silently. I got to work straight away. I heaved my backpack onto the ground and rummaged inside it.


I felt the cold metal of the flamethrowers, and the smell of gasoline filled my nose. I looked around for about 10 more seconds and found the pliers.


I shoved them into my pocket and started to climb the pole. It was easy enough, despite what most people think. When I was almost at the top, my grip failed and I was dangling with my feet moving around in the air.


I gathered myself up and swung my feet back around the pole. I climbed up again and reached the top. I looked around for a moment and got out my pliers.


I held them up to the wires and presses. With a short “ZAP” the line snapped.


I jumped down and packed my things into my bag and started searching for the other poles.


Within half an hour, I and Kiara had snapped all the poles connected to the White House.


“Alright,” Kiara said, “Let’s get this thing over with.”


We walked silently and reached the White House.


We looked around to check if anyone was there. There were a few officers out in the distance, but, we weren’t in their line of sight.


We crouched down and headed over to the walls. There, right above us, was something that could ruin our plan completely. A window with a head sticking out of it.


I gestured to Kiara to lay down upon the ground, and we waited in tense silence. When I thought it was okay to look up, I found that The Head had gone out. Whew. Imagine if it was the President himself!


We gathered our minds and headed to the nearest pillar. I checked repeatedly to see if there were any windows with people inside near and climbed up. As Kiara ascended up, I checked the nearest window.


Jackpot! It led straight to the main corridor! And no one was present! We clambered in and took out our flamethrowers. “Let’s do this,” I said.


But before we could do anything, a man in a black and white suit came walking onto the scene. We stared at each other for a long moment. Finally, he spoke, “What are you guys doing-”


And Kiara shot him.


“Wha-” I said.


“It has a silencer on it, don’t worry,” she explained, “I thought it would handy in case a scenario like this occurred.”


We laughed a bit and got ready for the fiery inferno that would be in front of our eyes. We pointed our flamethrowers down on the carpet and pulled the trigger.


With a blast, a gust of fire filled the air and caught onto the carpet. But before we could escape, we heard the sounds of rapid footsteps.


A splash of water filled the room and we were drenched. A shout came.


“Who’s there?”


When we shook off the excess water, we were met by about 10 officers, all in suits, with pistols held up. But in the center was … Conan?


“You?”


“You?”

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Hriday Saboo
14:41 Sep 07, 2020

Actually a brilliant story. I totally agree with sia that it should rather be F.E.A.R than FEAR. Im desperately wAitInG for your part 4. Yahoooooo

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Akshat .
14:57 Sep 07, 2020

Thank you! Well, my reason is the same reason that I told Sia. I'll write part 4 when a prompt fits! 😁

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Sia S
14:05 Sep 07, 2020

Good job, I noticed a few mistakes / things like 1. 'With a short ZAAAPP the line snapped' <-- I think it should be with a short ZAP the line cut into pieces. 2. If FEAR is a secret organisation and an acronym, shouldn't it be F.E.A.R ? 3. That's all . Waiting for a part 4 !! ( just suggestions)

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Akshat .
14:16 Sep 07, 2020

Thanks! Okay. 1. I'll change the "ZAAPP" part, but Mathew only cut the line once. So, it wouldn't really cut into pieces! 2. I got the idea from Zilla Babbit. In "Assassin," she wrote "RAVEN" not "R.A.V.E.N." 3. This is actually a part 3! The next one will be a part 4! Thanks for the comment!

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Sia S
14:39 Sep 07, 2020

Welcome! 1. Okay 2. Nice 3. Sorry , I forgot, my head was wrapped around studying. 😬😬😅😅

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Hriday Saboo
14:42 Sep 07, 2020

Hey hey hey 👋 I am desperately waiting for your new story. Waiting a lot. Pls release it fast -to Sia from Hriday

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Sia S
15:42 Sep 07, 2020

Aw, thanks! I got a new one, but it doesn't fit any of the prompts. :((

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Akshat .
14:55 Sep 07, 2020

Haha!

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Sia S
15:42 Sep 07, 2020

lol

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Hriday Saboo
16:48 Sep 07, 2020

Truly a L.O.L THE LAUGH OUT LOUD

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13:09 Sep 07, 2020

Aweeeesome part 3!!!!!!!! WOW THAT ENDING....we need part 4 ASAP. Yay, and Easter egg for me! Thanks! Okay, great job!! Keep writing!

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Akshat .
13:11 Sep 07, 2020

Thank you so much! Yeah, I'll do it when I get a good enough prompt, I'm thinking of switching back to Jake's POV. Haha! Yeah, that Easter Egg wasn't really intended, but since I got to the shop, I'm like, "Why not?"

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01:04 Oct 05, 2020

The descriptions were so amazing, I could practically see the story! Awesome work!

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Akshat .
03:11 Oct 05, 2020

Thank you!

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04:51 Oct 05, 2020

You're welcome :)

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Orenda .
09:00 Sep 16, 2020

Bruhh, the joke section in your bio is hilarious...especially, stand together separately LOLOLOLOL...what'd we do? Divide myself in half? xD

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Akshat .
10:04 Sep 16, 2020

Thanks a lot! Any suggestions, please just comment on any story!

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Orenda .
10:29 Sep 16, 2020

Aight aightttt

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D. Shikha
09:07 Sep 16, 2020

Is someone downvoting your points too?? I'm sorry if it's happening.

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Orenda .
09:10 Sep 16, 2020

Yes they are :// Is it happening to you too?

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D. Shikha
09:13 Sep 16, 2020

Yeah, I'm 200+ points down now. I used to be on the leaderboard but now I'm not because of that downvoter.

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Orenda .
10:26 Sep 16, 2020

Omg yes that's why I couldnt find your name on the leaderboard

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D. Shikha
10:01 Sep 16, 2020

Just upvoted some of your comments. You are like 100+ points up now.

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Orenda .
10:27 Sep 16, 2020

Thanks fam! I'll upvote you too<3

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D. Shikha
10:45 Sep 16, 2020

Thanks!!

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Akshat .
12:57 Sep 07, 2020

Hey! Some things (Again) 1. You'll only understand this part if you've read the earlier parts, so please read those if you haven't! 2. I hope you like my story! Gimme a follow if you liked it! :) 3. There are some easter eggs/references in this story. Like this line --> "just buying some Cheetos from a convenience store": That's a reference to Aerin B.'s 2nd last story! It's awesome! Read it if you haven't! 4. Agent Smith is an easter egg for "The Matrix." 👨‍💻👩‍💻 5. If you didn't get it, the man who told Conan about Mathew and K...

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B. W.
03:35 Oct 04, 2020

I think that i need someone to talk to about a couple of things

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Akshat .
06:40 Oct 04, 2020

Okay, what happened? Need help with something?

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B. W.
07:05 Oct 04, 2020

Well lately i've just been feeling like i shouldn't be on here anymore and that i should stop writing stories. They'd probably get worse instead of better and when i make some novel's people will probably just hate them or forget about me when they check the stuff out. I still LIKE being on here and writing stories but i just don't really understand why anyone likes these stories i do, i normally give my stories like a 1/10 or a 2/10. I also kinda feel like i'm really annoying to everyone on here. Either way when i'm just talking to them a l...

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Akshat .
07:36 Oct 04, 2020

1. You should be on Reedsy! Your story ideas are great! 2. You can only progress forwards, not backwards. You’re getting better with each story you write! 3. You’re not annoying, why would you think that? 4. Just stay, you’re not annoying and you write cool stories!

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B. W.
12:57 Oct 04, 2020

I don't know it just feels like whenever i'm doing something with them it feels like at least with me that they're getting really annoyed a lot

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Akshat .
13:17 Oct 04, 2020

I don't know about others, but I certainly am not getting annoyed!

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D. Shikha
12:04 Oct 04, 2020

I completely agree with Akshat. You don't annoy anybody, every likes you and your stories, we don't want you and your stories to leave Reedsy. And don't hate your own work, you SHOULD love your work, you SHOULD be proud of it. Until you like your work, you don't have to worry about the others...as I told you the other day...if you like your stories and novels, everybody else will also love them. And like everybody else's stories, your stories are also 10/10. Hating your own work is not a way to improve or motivate yourself. It wo...

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B. W.
12:57 Oct 04, 2020

I really don't annoy anyone?

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D. Shikha
13:31 Oct 04, 2020

Yeah, you really don't. I never felt annoyed by you and I'm sure others also didn't feel annoyed. You're just over thinking.

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Hriday Saboo
10:31 Sep 19, 2020

Come on we need a new story

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Akshat .
12:10 Sep 19, 2020

Read my bio.

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Hriday Saboo
13:24 Sep 19, 2020

Hahahahaha

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Megan Sutherland
16:00 Sep 19, 2020

That's not funny

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Akshat .
13:33 Sep 19, 2020

It's not funny dude!

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Hriday Saboo
15:40 Sep 19, 2020

What I am talking abt the murder of English

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Amogh Kasat
15:25 Sep 16, 2020

Hey Akshat! there is a serious drop in my karma points about 300+ so please upvote my comment

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Akshat .
15:51 Sep 16, 2020

Sure

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Amogh Kasat
17:04 Sep 16, 2020

Thanks

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Hriday Saboo
05:19 Sep 15, 2020

Akshatt

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Hriday Saboo
05:19 Sep 15, 2020

Ma’am is calling u

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Akshat .
07:53 Sep 15, 2020

What? Who's Ma'am?

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Hriday Saboo
11:17 Sep 15, 2020

Way before in English lecture You werent responding

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Akshat .
12:12 Sep 15, 2020

I don't understand you.

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Hriday Saboo
12:32 Sep 15, 2020

Leave it

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Akshat .
13:57 Sep 15, 2020

Um, okay ...

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Megan Sutherland
15:59 Sep 19, 2020

Hey, Akshat- you want some upvotes?

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Akshat .
16:16 Sep 19, 2020

Yes! PLEASE! Lemme do yours!

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Megan Sutherland
16:55 Sep 19, 2020

hehe, thanks so much!!

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B. W.
23:46 Sep 17, 2020

I think i've already been on this one but if i haven't then this is really great and this deserves a 10/10 :) i was also wondering if you could help me with something?

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Akshat .
02:54 Sep 18, 2020

Thanks again! Yeah, I'll help you, but could if it's about your demigod series, then could you give me the names of the stories in it? Thanks!

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B. W.
02:57 Sep 18, 2020

Huh? well here are the names of my demi-god series: goddess child the camp not his fault Getting her back and no, its for something else

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Akshat .
02:57 Sep 18, 2020

Okay, thanks! Oh, okay. Then yeah, I can help you!

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B. W.
02:59 Sep 18, 2020

though theres a thing with it, both the characters are girls and i plan for there to be some romance with em, are you fine with that? i've kinda been nervous about that because i know some people don't like that

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Akshat .
03:44 Sep 18, 2020

Oh, okay! Do whatever you want, it's your story!

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Avery G.
21:22 Sep 16, 2020

OMG AKSHAT I TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOU ON THE APPROVING THING!!!!! My story wasn't approved, yet I can't edit it. I didn't even get the 10 points! I mean, what the heck is going on!!!!!!! Sorry, I am just sooo annoyed

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Akshat .
03:12 Sep 17, 2020

YEAH! EXACTLY! SO UNFAIR! What's gotten into them all of a sudden? Same!

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Avery G.
03:42 Sep 17, 2020

I know right???

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Akshat .
03:44 Sep 17, 2020

Yeah!

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Lani Lane
04:03 Sep 14, 2020

Hi, Akshat! I just discovered your stories, and I'm hooked! Great job! I'm looking forward to following and reading of your your. I also saw in your bio that you're a huge Harry Potter fan--I'm actually on my twelfth re-read of the series right now... :) I'm a Ravenclaw, you?

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Akshat .
04:07 Sep 14, 2020

Thank you so much! Same! I just keep on re-reading the whole thing! I'm in Hufflepuff, and my Patronus is an Albatross. What about you?

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Lani Lane
04:09 Sep 14, 2020

That's awesome!! Mine is also a bird--a sparrow! I actually just bought a Christmas tree ornament today that's a little stack of the books... I seriously have a Harry Potter addiction....

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Akshat .
04:13 Sep 14, 2020

Cool! Haha! Lol

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B. W.
00:48 Sep 14, 2020

i'm not sure if i said anything about this story or not but i will soon, i know your busy so its only if you want to and if you have the time but could you help me with something?

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Akshat .
03:09 Sep 14, 2020

Yeah, of course! What is it?

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B. W.
03:38 Sep 14, 2020

Well do you know my Demi-god series? i plan on doing a spin off series for it and i need help with it, like ideas for the characters and i guess plot. the plot generator isn't that good for me tbh

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Akshat .
03:50 Sep 14, 2020

No, actually. I'll go and read it later, then I'll let you know when I'm finished.

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B. W.
04:02 Sep 14, 2020

Oh, alright ^^ thats fine, thanks

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Wow! Nice one!

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Akshat .
04:36 Sep 12, 2020

Thanks again!

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Akshat .
04:36 Sep 12, 2020

Thanks again!

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Anshika Goyal
19:28 Sep 11, 2020

I loved your story, Akshat!! Congrats on the concept. The story is well-written and oh- those dialogue tags make me feel like an observer. I hope I can write like You T_T I am a newbie here, and I would love it if you check out two of my recent stories;)

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Akshat .
04:35 Sep 12, 2020

Thank you so much! I’ll definitely read them :)

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Jena Shah
06:59 Sep 08, 2020

This was a amazing story! Always waiting for the next part!

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Akshat .
07:00 Sep 08, 2020

Thank you!

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Jena Shah
03:28 Sep 09, 2020

My Pleasure! :)

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Akshat .
03:49 Sep 09, 2020

:D

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Avery G.
03:15 Sep 08, 2020

Wow, this was good! I loved it! And that ending was amazing! Great job!

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Akshat .
03:55 Sep 08, 2020

Thank you so much!

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Avery G.
18:46 Sep 08, 2020

You're welcome!

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