βDid you find the flashlights?β I asked, rummaging through some old cabinets, filled with dust bunnies that provoked my sensitive nose to sneeze.
βNada, canβt find a single one.β
βDang it,β I cursed under my breath, βWeβre totally gonna be in the dark, literally.β
βI hate to say this but, βI told you soβ.β
I rolled my eyes, spreading my hands wide to help me navigate my surroundings. The frost biting my neck, my fingers numb that they began to feel useless. My mouth chattering, my breath turned to fog as it exited outside my mouth.
My short, ivory hair fell over my shoulders, draping my neck. The rubber band must have fallen off.
The sun rays were out of sight. The dim light began to fade as time ticked off, my breathing less accurate, my heart palpitating with fear mixed with the unknown factor.
The strands of my eyelashes began to freeze, turning into icicles. One more hour spent here and weβll be ice sculptures.Β
Frozen to death. I could see the headlines of the next broadcasting news, hitting millions of views.Β
Not what I expected on a typical Friday evening.
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βCome on Coco, donβt be so intransigentβ¦ a no-work day can help you,β Akshaya lectured.
βI know, I know,β I held my hand up, facing her in a timorous way. Akshaya was known to throw fits, and always won them too.
βDonβt you dare drag me to the mall,β I spoke, seeing Akshayaβs black eyes twinkled with excitement.
βAww, donβt be so darn tenacious,β She coaxed, batting away at my hands playfully.
βI have to do my job, you know much money means to me.β
She placed a reassuring hand on my shoulder, tousling her long, dark hair with her fingers.
βDonβt fret sweetie,β She faxed a smile.
βIf you let me go, I promise to go shopping tomorrow and actually...,β I pronounced the word with a strain, βTry out new dresses.β
Akshaya squeaked, I was grateful to recall closing my ears before her outburst.
βDone?βΒ
βYeah,β She gave me a sheepish smile, βIβll go with you,β She gave me a βI know your a escapistβ look.
Great. No way to escape 5 hours of boredom.
βHey Co, take my shift will ya?β Kasey; one of my co-workers beseeched, βIβm take the long weekend soon.β
βUmβ¦ fine,β Akshaya gave me a murderous look but I ignored her.
βThanks sweets, I owe you one,β Kasey skipped out the door, putting on a thick woolen coat as she strolled over to a brand new Chevy and got in.
I felt the eyes of my annoying girlfriend on my back as I filled in orders, and managed to please Mr. Fellen; one of the famous designers here.
I was exhausted by the end of the day while Akshaya rolled her eyes at me every time the chime of the door went off, inviting a new customer.
βI think Iβm almost done,β I answered when Akshaya had begun to get on my nerves.
She scoffed, drinking the latte I provided free of cost to shut her up.
2 hours later,
βYou done?β
βYup, Iβll just lock up.β
I walked towards the glass door, trying to budge it open to only discover it to be frozen shut. Akshaya was busy on her phone, tapping her hands in sync to some music she always listened to, not paying attention to our current dilemma.
I tried to shove the door with all my might, but my hands slipped away due to the moisture from the freezing weather.
Rubbing my hands together, blowing some hot air I tried again, my hands felt numb and weak.
I could hear the swoosh of the wind outside the glass window, snow heavily falling on the sidewalks, coating them white.
We were doomed.
A blizzard is coming.
Before I could react to the part where we were definitely stuck inside the overhanging fluorescent lights went off, darkness seeping through everywhere.
βAhh,β I could see the dim light of Akshayaβs phone vibrate as she bumped into me.Β
She flashed the light on my face, blinding me for a moment.
βHey, cut it outβ¦ itβs me.β
βOops, sorry.β
βItβs fine.β
βNo itβs not, weβre trapped inside and Iβm freezing,β She complained,βWait, my phone?! I must have accidentally dropped it.β
I could barely make out her panicked expression.
βWeβll be fine,β I half-lied.Β
βYeah right,β She added sarcastically, βAre there flashlights here?β
βMaybe, I hope.β
We got up feebly, holding on each other for support. Navigating with our hands, careful not to bump into anything.
10 minutes later,
βDid you find the flashlights?βΒ
βNada, canβt find a single one.β
I cursed, careful not to let Akshaya hear how pissed off I was.
βI hate to say this but, βI told you soβ.β
βOk, ok youβre right.β
I could hear her choke a laugh.
βHey, come here.β
I walked towards her voice, almost tripping over the carpet. Some blue light flooded from Mr. Fenβs office, a place he never let me go in. Or as I remembered anyone else who worked here either.
βCome on, maybe there is a phone or something,β Akshaya coaxed.
I nodded, then remembering Akshaya canβt see me.
βFine, but make it quick, Iβm normally not allowed inside.β
We hustled inside, the room was a bit warmer than the rest of the building. I could smell the dust and expired coffee beans.
We shuffled through the messy desk, careful not to disturb anything that could backfire on us.
βWhat are these?β I felt something sharp on my arm, like a folder edge.
βWhat are you doing?β I could see her silhouette shrug, handing me a bunch of folders.
βWhat-β I read the title; Blueberry and basil cupcakes- THE SWEETEST HEAVEN BAKERY- BY. PATRICIA ROY.
βWhoβs Patricia?β I asked.
βDonβt know, why is her recipe here?β
βHmm,β I flipped through the rest of the files, each paper was soiled or ripped as if they were ancient recipes.
βAll these recipes are what we serve here, thenβ¦?β
βI found a phone!β Akshaya exclaimed, tapping away, βLook,β She shoved the phone on my face.
βThe sweetest heaven bakery was out of business because they forgot the recipe, someone stole it?β
My face paled, βYou donβt thinkβ¦β
βYour boss stole all these recipes, none of them was his own, Akshaya finished.
βWeβd better tell someone.β
The sooner I uttered the words, the lights flooded back on. I rubbed my eyes from the sudden exposure of brightness.
βHey, hereβs a crowbar, wow your boss is very prepared.β
βSure isβ¦β I smiled, βHeβd better be ready to get in big trouble.β
βYou sure? Youβll lose your job.β
βYeah, itβs better to not serve a dishonest man than be job-less.β
βYou're a good friend Coco,β Akshaya said, hugging me.
βSo are youβ¦β I added, βIf you wonβt drag me to Macy's.β
βNot a chance,β She said, linking hands.
βWeβd better stop by the police station.β
βOh, we will,β She grinned.
Hi everyone! Hope you all enjoyed this story. This was one of the shortest stories I've written and I kept changing ideas and finally landed on this idea. If you didn't understand or it could have been better please let me know.
Dedications!!!
Akshaya Sutrave for always being there for me and one of my firest and best friends!!! THX SO MUCH AKSHAYA :D
&
Coco Longstaff for being a sweet, talkative girl always full of sunshine!!! THX COCO!
HOPE EVERYONE HAS A WONDERFUL DAY/NIGHT!
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Hey there Varsha! I was very engaged in this story! Glad you put Coco's and Akshaya's names in it! It was a great touch to the story! :)
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Aww, thank you Hari!!!!!!
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Ah! Your welcome!
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Always a pleasure to hear from you!
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Thank you! A pleasure to read your stories too!
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:DD Thank you Hari!
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She faxed a smile? Was tat supposed to be faked? Otherwise, I loved it!
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thank you Emmie!!! I think she was sarcastically smiling.
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Ok!
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:D
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New story out, would love your feedback on it.
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Sure Radhika!
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By the way, I have submitted a new story would love your feedback on it
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Of course! will do:D
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You are getting better day by day. I see a lot of improvements here. The plot was engaging and the characters were very smooth. The overall energy of the story was good. Great job with your writing. Keep writing.
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Thank you so much Radhika!!! This means so much to me!
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Shout out writer Ethan https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/ethan-cavacas/ Thora https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/thora-porter/ These are the writers for the week please do check put then in your free time. They work hard for their stories, they would love your comments.
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YAY! Will do Radhika!
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Hey Varsha...little late, but amazing story! i loved it soo soo much!! and I have a new story out, about ww1 - would love your feedback!!
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Hi Nainika!!! TY!!! Of course:D
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yeah no problem!! AND YAY!!
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:DD
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Hi Varsha! As I'm a part of the group, I copy-pasted that part of your bio to mine. Will that be okay? Thanks! :)
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Yes, of course!!! :D
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:D
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:D
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Also I love ur new profile pic!
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Thank you Varsha! :DD
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NP!
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Shout out writer Fearless Fox https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/fearless-fox/ Rachel Sundar https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/rachel-sundar/ Shout out story https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/contests/76/submissions/50251/ These are the shout out writers of the week. Oasis members please update your bio and give your feedback to these people.
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Sure!
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Heyyy !!I just read ur bio ,can I join the group " oasis "? :(
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Hi Salma! Sure, just let Radhika and Kate Reynolds know.
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https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/radhika-diksha/ This is Radhika's account.
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Sure thank you dear β€
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Of course!!! <33 No problem, thx for the likes!
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Thanksss!! I really liked Trapped and rejection ππ
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Ooo! Great story, Varsha! I loved it! Hehe! Take that, evil boss! XD
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Thank you Ginger! LOL!
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Would you like to play skribble at 3:30 EST (different time than before) today? :D
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Hi Maya! I'll try to come, most likely will!!! Just send the link during that time:D
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Yay! Okay, sure thing! :D
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:D Of course!
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:DDD
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This felt really realistic and easy to read; the energy was calm and understandable; I could really feel like I was there!
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Thank you so much Ethan!
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NEW STORY!!!!!!!!!
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YAY! I'll check it out Cookie!
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Really good!! I liked it.
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Thank you so much Violet!!!
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The story is interesting and the plot is unique. I am really happy with everything in it. You have done a great job writing this story. Found out one mistake, 1)βI have to do my job, you know much the money means to me.β Correction. " I have to do my job, you know how much money means to me.β But overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing and have a good time.
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Thank you Alina!!! I will change that!
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My pleasure! OK ππ»
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I liked the story. It seemed a little rushed to me, but other than that, it was another absolutely amazing story!!!
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Hi Cookie! Thank you so much for taking the time to read! Yeah, I kinda wanted to finish it today so I kinda rushed.
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That's alright!! It was still a great story. Good job!!
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Thank you cookie!
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Cool story idea.
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Thank you Rachel!
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Really cool story!! I loved the added twist of the story, and thought you did a fantastic job with it!!
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Aww, thank you Nainika!!!
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you deserve it, girl!! :D:D
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AWW, *hugs* thx so much girl!
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*hugs harder* YEsSSS
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:DD YAY!!!
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NEW STORYYYY
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YAYYYY!!!:D
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