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The cold air flowed in through the open door of Biblio Phile. Mr. Murton, an old man dusty from age and tomes of days past, peeked over the stack of New Arrivals to see who was letting in "that infernal draft". To his surprise, opposite the top of the stack, stood a young gentleman. Now, you and your ilk have no idea who this person is. None of you have a clue or a guess or a thought or an inkling. But I, yes, I know this man, and Mr. Murton did too.


"Hey, Max! What the devil are you doing here? How's college treating you?" Mr. Murton spoke in a slow voice of sticky molasses, letting the words slop off of his tongue. Well, you get that type of speech only after a Monday of reading Chaucer.


"Ah, is that Mr. Murton? How are you still alive??" Max threw his arm around the shoulders of the old man, patting his back in a delicate manner. To Max, there was nothing different about the store. The shelves seemed to be in order, only a couple of obvious careless placings by customers. The Classics aisle was still strong as ever, boasting all the books one would ever need to read. Murton was conquering the Solzhenitsyn section at the moment*.


"Ah, well, you know what they say. A reader lives a thousand lives and dies but one!" Always full of wisdom.


"I'm... looking for a specific book."


"What's it called?" For a moment, Max was silent and looked at the floor with disdain. "Well, out with it!"


"I need to find my old Lord of the Flies." Murton's face contorted in some foreign expression that I can only describe as nostalgia.


"Really? After all this time? I'm not sure we even still have it." Creaking away from the back of his chair, the old man stretched to reach the ebony cane next to the cash register. Max lent an affectionate glance to the copy of Remembrance of Things Past lying next to his foot. What a great stepstool that book was.


The small specks of fuzzy light that clouded the store felt like fireworks at a welcome home party to Max. The rows of shelves were gigantic punch bowls of knowledge and wonder that were yet to be spooned into cups. If only he'd been around more. If only he'd read at all.


"Right this way!" Mr. Murton stood next to the Island Adventure aisle, scanning the sections for the name GOLDING sticking out from the spine.


"Where are you, my pretty... no, Ballantyne, not you, no no no... Ah, there you are!!" With a sigh of fulfillment, he retrieved it. The pages were crisp and clean-cut, seeming the same as when Max had given the book away so long ago.


"Ah, yes, I remember when I got you..." Mr. Murton's voice trailed off the side of a cliff, leaving the world stranded behind. The adventures of Ralph and Piggy and Simon... his heartstrings felt a little twang when reminiscing over the old memories.


"Max? Where'd you go?" The world around seemed quiet. No sounds echoed through the door, no drafts. Where had that boy gone off to?

***


As Mr. Murton closed up for the night, the sign on the door waved a solemn goodnight. No customers had come today besides that Max, who'd left as soon as he came.


"Night, Moe!" The tabby cat on the corner of Rosemont Road squeaked a reply as it wandered its ways through the streets. That cat was never claimed, no signs of any kind put up around the city. Moe was better off that way, though. He didn't like the warm of the house.


Where was I? Oh yes, Mr. Murton. Our old dodger waved to the incoming cars as he hobbled across the street, throwing wide open the door to his car. An old 1960s Bentley, he could never bear to part with it. He appreciated the car in a way more true and pure than any other thing. It was his own. His way of saying "I might be old, but I can still be free". However, Murton's cane told otherwise.

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"Max, can you hear me? Max, it's Georgia. Please come back." The strands of wire that hung to the old man's heart were a maze that Georgia Murton made no attempt to make sense of. She hung by her partner's side without caring for a medical solution. Emotions would solve everything, she believed, and so it shall be.

***


When our kooky senior reached the edge of his street, he felt a sharp pain underneath his arm. The jutting edge of a cover was sticking into his flabby underarm, and he reached out to retrieve it.


"Lord of the Flies. Well, I'll be..."

***


Ralph was sitting in the corner of the platform, looking across the triangle of logs to his friends. Jack was sitting in a corner with his choir, laughing about something with Maurice. Simon, well, Simon was simply there, there was no two ways about it.


"Max?" A face looked up at him through the din of childish humor and games. Ralph laughed for a second, trying to catch on to whatever joke he might've missed. In another life, Ralph would've ignored it. This, however, is not that strand of life.


"Max, it's Georgia. Please, if you can hear me, please come back for your wife."

***


Moe was a solitary cat, never caring for the company of others. People bothered him, made him antsy to get away. There was never a way around them, though. Humans were just always there.


The train station was brimming with life at the late hour of night. Voices and intercom mixed into a slushie of sound that seeped through Moe's feline earlobes. He hissed for a second, hoping that the sounds would go away. Well, that's humans for you. Never caring.

***


Georgia Murton was a stout, loyal woman. She stood by her husband in all of his antics, all of his eccentric quirks. There was never an instance where she thought of unfaithful acts. Betraying her husband was simply not in the scope of possibility. We are called here today to commemorate her horrible, painful journey, and to respect the battle she waged on life. May we all grow to be as resilient as she was and to love another as she did Max. She can be with her husband again. Thank you.


*Thanks Zilla heehee


February 16, 2021 23:33

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698 comments

Juniper Zeta
22:52 Feb 17, 2021

The story had a well written plot, keep it up. Is the answer to the emoji puzzle The Graveyard Book by Neil Gaiman?

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20:09 Feb 19, 2021

Oh sorry yep it is!!!

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Mira Caplan
20:18 Feb 17, 2021

I reeeeally need to teach you how to make an argument without insulting the other person...

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20:24 Feb 17, 2021

Sorry... but I just try to tell you and you don't listen...

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Mira Caplan
20:32 Feb 17, 2021

and you also need to learn how to let people do what they want sometimes and have their own free will- even when it comes to something like writing. And I did listen to you. That's why I have a specific type of name for all the characters, instead of Imryll right next to a Gale or Rowan. Everlys, Therin, Vatra, and Calder all sound like they fit together. It doesn't have to have the same root, just the same general sound.

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20:59 Feb 17, 2021

Well, to each their own I sorry I was harsh tho

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Mira Caplan
21:07 Feb 17, 2021

It isn't a matter of whether you were harsh or not, you just kinda said it in an insensitive way ... is ok

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21:18 Feb 17, 2021

Okkkkk

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The Manticore
17:36 Feb 17, 2021

Luke. The Manticore is curious. Would you consider writing with us?

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17:55 Feb 17, 2021

Ofc!!

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The Manticore
17:57 Feb 17, 2021

Okay! Sounds good. We will discuss the best way to continue chatting with you.

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17:58 Feb 17, 2021

Ok!! I might not be able to comply with all of the rules or anything, so no absolute guarantees.

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The Manticore
18:15 Feb 17, 2021

No worries! We've always known you to be a rebel, Mr. Litlover.

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18:15 Feb 17, 2021

Aw, well no denial on my end XD

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17:23 Feb 17, 2021

LUUUUUKEEEEE! YOU GOTTA TELL ME WHEN YOU HAVE A NEW STORY!!! XD Anyways... I LARBED IT! Moe. Larb it. XD

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17:23 Feb 17, 2021

I didn't tell anyone XDXDXD Thanks so darn much Ginger it felt real confusing writing it... did you get that Max in the bookshop was a reflection of mr. murton's younger self?

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17:25 Feb 17, 2021

Oh. XDDD Yep! Well, it took me a little while to figure it out, but now it makes sense! :D

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17:25 Feb 17, 2021

Thanks you!!!!

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17:26 Feb 17, 2021

XD

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17:26 Feb 17, 2021

XD

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17:21 Feb 17, 2021

LORD OF THE FLIES! WORST BOOK EVER! XD JK, but that’s one book I seriously don’t like...

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17:23 Feb 17, 2021

NOOOOOOOOO WHY?????

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17:24 Feb 17, 2021

XD I DUNNO...? SOOO WEIRD... XD

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17:24 Feb 17, 2021

... I forgive just this once.

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17:25 Feb 17, 2021

...Hehehe...

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17:26 Feb 17, 2021

... i trust it will not happen again :)

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Mira Caplan
16:46 Feb 17, 2021

You know what I can't stop singing? MAGO, MAGO DADADADADADADAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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16:53 Feb 17, 2021

YAS I KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Mira Caplan
16:57 Feb 17, 2021

IT IS SO CATCHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!

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16:58 Feb 17, 2021

I KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Mira Caplan
17:01 Feb 17, 2021

YEEEEEEEE!!! And 4x4ever. (I literally did a presentation on Mamamoo for music...4x4ever was playing for the first three minutes of class, and then i just...talked about k pop. It was awesome.)

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17:04 Feb 17, 2021

I KNOW ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BUT YOU ARE NOT EXPERIENCED ENOUGH IN KPOP TO TALK FULLY ABOUT IT XD

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Amaya .
01:15 Feb 17, 2021

lord of the flies!

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12:50 Feb 17, 2021

Yerp!!!

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Amaya .
02:49 Feb 18, 2021

yaaaay i have two correct guesses now :)

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18:31 Feb 18, 2021

Yay!!!

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is your emoji puzzle lord of the flies?

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12:50 Feb 17, 2021

Yerp!!!

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14:51 Feb 17, 2021

:D

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Danny -
00:47 Feb 17, 2021

Oh wow- I've been having too much of sad stories lately.. This was sooooooo sad :(( I swear, I'm running out of adjectives to describe your stories, they're amazing! Always paying attention to detail, and well...plot! So, that's great.. Wonderful job, Luke! :DD

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12:51 Feb 17, 2021

Thank youuuuuu!!!!!!

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Danny -
13:38 Feb 17, 2021

Nooooooooo problem :DD

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Kate Reynolds
00:23 Feb 17, 2021

My heart just died... THIS WAS SO SADDDDDDDD I loved the whole tone of it, and the details were amazing (not surprising) Great job!

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00:25 Feb 17, 2021

Thank youuuuuuuuuu was it a little too confusing???

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Kate Reynolds
00:26 Feb 17, 2021

Noooo not at all!!! Btw, do you mind leaving a comment on my latest story? :)

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00:32 Feb 17, 2021

Tomorrow I will!!! It’s late here

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Kate Reynolds
00:34 Feb 17, 2021

Oh alright! Thanks

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23:47 Feb 16, 2021

You really made me fall in love with the characters here; they were so heartfelt and earnest that it was impossible to like this story. Also, that tone is amazing!

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00:25 Feb 17, 2021

Thank you so much!! Do you mean not like it? Aewww thanks

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00:37 Feb 17, 2021

AAHHH Sorry, lol, I loved it. Unless I just love it so much that it’s impossible to just love it...

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12:52 Feb 17, 2021

XDXDXDXD

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Sunny 🌼
12:49 Feb 26, 2021

AAAAAAH! HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY LUKE! Sorry, I missed it but I hope you had a great day! And congrats on another trip around the sun! (And being one step closer to death :) )

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13:14 Feb 26, 2021

THANKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Yesh death is closer now!

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Danny -
13:12 Feb 25, 2021

Happy birthday, Luke! Enjoy your day :))))) 🎂

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13:18 Feb 25, 2021

Thanks, Danny!!

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Danny -
13:20 Feb 25, 2021

:))

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21:32 Feb 24, 2021

Don’t mind me, just breaking the perfect 500 comments (Cuz, c’mon, I just finished destroying the perfect 200 comments on Mira’s story, and since I’m on a roll, I decided to comment here too 😈 Lol I am so extra...) Oh, also, HAPPY PRE-BIRTHDAY! As in, I know ur birthday is tomorrow but I’m 40% sure I’m going to forget so I’m wishing you a happy birthday early just in case :3 Bye!

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22:24 Feb 24, 2021

HA LOL and you did my other one too XD THank you!!!!!!!!

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22:26 Feb 24, 2021

Hehe yes, because destroying perfect numbers is what friends do >:3 Yw!!!!!!!!!

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22:27 Feb 24, 2021

YERPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

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<inactive> .
16:54 Feb 24, 2021

Flappy birthday!! 🎂 🎉 Here’s to another year of existence! (Idk if it’s your birthday yet where you live but it’s like 9 pm where I live so nearly there-)

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16:58 Feb 24, 2021

Welp its Mira's bday right now, but mine's tomorrow!!!!!!! Awwww thank you!!!

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<inactive> .
06:46 Feb 23, 2021

Alice through the looking glass? Your emoji riddle thing I mean qwq

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12:14 Feb 23, 2021

Nerp!

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<inactive> .
18:13 Feb 21, 2021

LUUUUKE THIS IS AWKWARD BUT JENNIE ISNT REPLYING DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHO SHE SHIPS ME WITH AND NO I RESPECT YOUR AND MIRA’S FRIENDSHIP AND DON’T SHIP Y’ALL AAAAAAAAAA I’M DESPERATE

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18:28 Feb 21, 2021

NO I HAVE NO IDEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AND YAS THANK YOU FOR BEIN MATURE XD

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04:50 Feb 22, 2021

AT THIS POINT I CAN ONLY PRAY THAT IT ISN’T ISSAC YOU’RE WELCOME!

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12:07 Feb 22, 2021

XDXDXD

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Sunny 🌼
14:02 Feb 19, 2021

OH WAIT! Is the emoji puzzle "The Book Theif"? Or maybe "The Graveyard Book". Those are my guesses.

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14:04 Feb 19, 2021

The graveyard book!!!

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Sunny 🌼
14:08 Feb 19, 2021

ayyyyy!

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14:08 Feb 19, 2021

:D

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20:12 Feb 18, 2021

I'm going to take a guess at the emoji puzzle. The Death of Ivan Ilyich??

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20:12 Feb 18, 2021

I tried lol

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21:06 Feb 18, 2021

XD I love that but noooooo its a Neil Gaiman book.

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21:13 Feb 18, 2021

ummmm oh oh oh oh oh The Graveyard Book?

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21:20 Feb 18, 2021

Yerp!!!!

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21:21 Feb 18, 2021

:))

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Sia S
05:34 Feb 18, 2021

Death book? Book of death?

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12:36 Feb 18, 2021

SIAAAAAA NO THE BOOK IS RIGHT BUT ITS TWO WORDS AND THE FIRST IS A PLACE OF DEATH

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Sia S
13:31 Feb 18, 2021

THE GRAVEYARD BOOK!!!!

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13:37 Feb 18, 2021

YERP

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Sia S
13:48 Feb 18, 2021

BOOMSHAKALAKA *bteakdancss*

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13:54 Feb 18, 2021

YASSSS YOUR FIRST ONE I THINK

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