ο»ΏThe white-faced emerged from the docks of the ever-flowing ocean, anchoring as their boots; wet from the splashing sea beyond the enormous skyline, attracting powered sand on their heels as they made their way towards us. Smiling faces, beautiful, attractive blue hues lighting their restful eyes.
Their hushed breathing made my parents edge closer to inspect them further. I remained immobile, clutching my old doll against my chest, backing away until I bumped into my grandpa. His dark brows were furrowed in skepticism, his hands joined behind his back, his dull black eyes met my lively one as he held me near his torso until my parents had information about the new comers
Days drifted, I began to lose fear in the white-faced. They didnβt say very much, keeping to themselves and immediate family members. Using business as a way to communicate with my people, yet only the educated had ideas on what they spoke. Their language varied from ours, but as months passed I began to recognize a few words.Β
I hadnβt gone to school, in our country girls cannot be educated. I thought it was unfair, but I continued to beg my grandpa to teach me everything he knew.Β
He did.
βYou will be a good woman one day, Maya,β He said with his doe-like eyes.
I promised him, saying Iβd help my country the best of my ability, because to me that was priority.
Years later,
I had been very innocent, too naive to connect the dots sooner. The white-faced hadnβt come to India to βjust tradeβ but planned to conquer my country.
My people.
Everything.
It started with meddling in our political affairs, sneaking in money to my people who agreed out of greed to get their work done quicker.
I couldnβt tolerate it, seeing my world being destroyed. Them taking charge, recklessly killing the innocent and appreciating the culprits.
It was like they had stabbed behind our backs while we blind folded thoughts of them as allies, as neighbors, as friends and family even when our bloods were different.
My country welcomed them with open arms, while they had beheaded and punished many in return.
Every day I would take a stroll towards the nearby temple. Seeing widowed women wail, children sitting in gloom, unable to venture outside and play in fright they will be caught. Men in distress over what will happen next.
Β Iβd had enough.
I will avenge every tear shed, every blood poured and every life squeezed out.
Iβd promised my grandfather, and I will honor his words. He died for this country, for his people, for his family, for me.
And I wonβt let his sacrifice go in vain.
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βMy people...β With hands trembled, sweat sliding down my neck from the sun shining from the cloudless sky I stood dumbstruck on the podium amongst millions of people staring with mouths open. I began to lose courage.
What if they laugh?
What if I canβt talk?
What ifβ¦
Stop.
I will do this.
For everyone.
For grandpa.
And myself.
For a second I rethought my action, were they going to listen to a young woman? An uneducated woman?Β
No, I was their only hope. Their only voice in this mission and I cannot back down.Β
My grandfather's words echoing in my mind, I felt a slight breeze and a sudden change in the humid climate. It was as if this was the spotlight, my chance to redeem myself.Β
I spoke, never stopping for questions or mockery, never noticing my crowds reaction as my voice carried over the wind. My grandfatherβs voice was like honey in my ears, always filling in when I stumbled to get the point across.
βDonβt let your fears contain you, raise your voice to the challenge.β
Men mumbled amongst them while women nodded slightly, shielding their eyes from the raging sun.
βOur country needs us, our future generations need us, and weβ¦ we have to save them,β My breath wheezing a little, my legs aching from standing.
βPleaseβ¦β I whispered, my eyes downcast as I started to step down the podium.
βSheβs right,β I whipped my head around, seeing a young girl ball her fists in the air, βWhoβs with me?β
A smile creeped up my tear streaked face as my audience clapped, some patting my back for my courage while others shaking my hand in acknowledgement.
My plan was in action, Iβd revived our spirits back.Β
The moon glistened against the serene bay, itβs reflection rippling as I threw a stone playfully. With my hands joined in a prayer pose I flickered my eyes back to the inky sky, the stars illuminating with flashing glows. I could picture my parents looking down at me, my grandpa smiling at me from a better place.Β
They have given their life to protecting our heritage, now itβs my turn.
And I was willing to take the outcome, however so it may turn out.
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A year later,
The white-faced smirked, a pistol in hand, as he cornered me. I gasped, wincing with the pain jabbing my right knee. Blood gushing out, my clothes stained with crimson, my hands weak from an unmatched fight, I struggled to get up as he pushed me down again in an attempt to convince me to give up.
βIβ¦ I will never let youβ¦ win,β I rasped out, as my bone crunched underneath his massive, strong foot.
βYou sure?β His voice sounding foreigh, Iβd began to understand them more and more as their dominance intensified.
βMyβ¦ country isβ¦β I took a stinging breath, βMore important.β
βSo youβll die then?β He mocked, his gun aiming at me.
I nodded, awaiting to leave for a place Iβd be free.
From sickness.
From pain.
From my country and people who depended on me to show them a path.
I was ready to sacrifice for them.
For the place that held me.
For the place I grew up.
For my mother land.
The last thing I saw before closing my eyes permanently was my grandfather, smiling as ever. His arms outstretched, as he enveloped me into a hug.
I looked back at my homeland, seeing people cheer and exchange smiles for their freedom from the British rule. My heart pounded with joy that Iβd been part of all this.
After all, my first word I learned in this foreign language wasβ¦
Hope.
Hi everyone! This is my shortest story yet and also I decided a different approach. Do let me know if u like it! And suggestions are always welcome:)
So this story has a interior message which is...
Be proud of who you are.
Never, ever give that up.
We are all people, no matter color, religion or gender.
We need to work together, come as one.
Anyway thank you all so much(especially my friends/followers) for reading and supporting my stories!!!
This story is dedicated to....
Maya Emerson for always supporting me and being such a sunshine!!!!!
TY!!!!
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Hi Varsha! (for my reedsy-cast) I LOVE the name Elena, but I want a little more 'elfish' is Ellania ok?
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Hi Nainika!!! Sure:)
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yay!! :) she's gonna be GREAT
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Yess!!! :)
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NEW STORY
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YAY!!!
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Hey Varsha! Happy Birthdayyyy!! I wish you have a nice day today. PS did you read my newest story? Again, happy birthday!
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Awww, thx sis!!! Ur the best, I will:))
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Thank you so much Saph!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDD!!!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY VARSHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA <3333333333333333
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Thank you Nainika!!!!! <3333
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<333 also, if you would like to be in my reedsycast...(elves) there's a form on my bio!! :D
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<333 Yay, sure!
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Just wanted to say, Happy birthday!!!!1
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Thank you so much Karina!!! <3333
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HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYYY VARSHAA! HOPE YOU HAVE/HAD A BRILLIANT DAY! :D π₯³ π₯³ π₯³ π₯³ π₯³ π₯³ π₯³ π₯³
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Aww, thank you Zoe!!!!!!!!!!!! It's been a while since we've talked, how are u?
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Good thanks, you? I haven't been writing much because I'm doing a production at the moment but i'll be writing after ahaha. Eeeee anyway. :D
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Thats nice! oh i see, :)
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We're playing Skribble again at 3:30 EST, and if you want to join the link will be at the bottom of my bio. :)))
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OK!!!
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Yay! :)))
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:))
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Happy early birthday, Varsha!!! :))) <3
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Thank you Maya!!! <333
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:DDD <333 π
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Aww!!!<33 P.S- whats up with bill? why he left?
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Have you seen his bio? It explains things.
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Yeah I did, but its kinda confusing.
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Hi, Varsha. I think this was such an emotional story, played out beautifully and precisely. You did a great job portraying Maya's courage, fear, and dedication, I applaud you, amazing job! -Lillian
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Thank you so much Lily!!!!!!! This means a lot to me<333
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Hey Varsha! I really like the entire plot and outline of this story! One suggestion I would have is make the Author's Note (basically the last part of your story) in italics, because people can get confused. ;)
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Hi Hari! Thank you so much!!! Oh yesh, will do that, thanks!!!
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Hi Varsha! I loved this story, and the message it conveyed! It was so touching, and it had such a deep meaning to it! I really liked your new way of approach, you should definitely write more stories like this, because they are just so powerful! Keep it up!! :))
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Hi Akshaya!!! Thank you!!! This was a new method I took so I'm glad u enjoyed it!!! Waiting to read urs soon!!!
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Welcome!! Yea it was really nice! Thank you! :)))
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:))) NP! and Thanks!
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Thank you so much for the likes and for reading my bio! Stay safe:)
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Hey, Varsha! Since it's almost Feb 14th for the upvoting, I was wondering if u could upvote me and some other people, who recently got downvoted. You don't have to if you don't want to ofc, bc this sounds so desperate (ugh, I hate I have to write this), and I can totally do the same for you. Thank you!
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Hi Jasey!!! Of course:) NP!
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TYSMMMM
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NP!
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YAY U AT 800!
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Reedsy-cast out! :D
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YAY!!!
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If you would like to play at 3:30 EST I'm going to put the link in my bio (at the bottom XD) :)
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Hey maya, sorry i didn't see ur message, maybe someother day. how are u?
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That's totally fine! Sure! I'm great! You? :)))
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I;m good!:))
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That's good! I'm working on my reedsy-cast right now. :)
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NICEE!!! can't wait:)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY VARSHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33333333333333333333333 ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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OMG!!!! Thank you Maya!!!! x 10000000 Ur the best friend I could ever ask for:DD
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Of course, Varsha!!! :DDD You're so amazing!!! <3333
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Awwww, thank you!!!!!!!! U don't know how much this means to me<33
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It's true, I'm so glad I got the chance to get to know you on Reedsy. <333 A question for my Reedsy cast, you said you want to be in the Artist Guild so which type of art would you like to do? Like painting, sketching, sculpting, singing, playing an instrument, etc.
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IK!!! Same<33 Hmm,I prefer painting or playing instrument or BOTH!
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Hi Varsha, how are you? :DD Great story, I loved all the tiny details you've included... The part about how women weren't supposed to be educated and stuff..... But she decides to be part of the war anyway, I love the idea of having a heroine in the story... Everything was well executed, Great job! Also, I read Kate's story, happy advanced birthday! Also, also..... πͺ
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Hi Danny! I'm good, how are you? Aww, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for your wish!!!! Yay, thanks!!!
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I'm great :)) No problem, I loooooved your story... It was amazing :DD
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:), aww, ur the best!!! I added u in my friend group in my bio!!!
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Aww, thank youu :))) what? no, ur the best! :D
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NP!!! aww, we're debating over whos the best LOL!!! (its u)!!!
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Oh my God... THIS STORY WAS SO SAD AND YET SO INSPIRATIONAL And YESSS I LOVED YOUR MESSAGE!!!!!!!!! I did find one small grammatical error though: My plan was in action, Iβd revived our sprites back. I think it should be "spirits" instead of "sprites" But I LOVED ITTTTT GIRL HOW ARE YOU THIS GOOD AT WRITING????????? And that ending... BROKE MY HEART (in a good way, of course)
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Awwww, Thank you so much Kate!!!!!!!!!! Oh, yeah good eye, i will change that. Aww, its because I have so much amazing friends(like u)!!! Ur just as talented kate:) I'm glad u enjoyed it!
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Ofcccc!!!!! Awwww THAT'S SO SWEETTTTTTT <333333 Thank youuuuuu :DD How could I not???
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:) Aww, of courseeeee!!!! Ur the best kate!!!
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:D hows ur day going?
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This was so spectacular, Varsha! :D Your message and the character's emotions were portrayed beautifully throughout the story! Her determination to save her country and make her grandfather proud was shown perfectly, and the ending really illustrated her loyalty to her people despite how sad it was. :((( The beginning really started out the story nicely how you showed them slowly starting to take over. Also, I loved how she referred to them as the white-faced, that was a great detail to add in. :))) I loved the story!!! :D <3 Thank you so m...
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Hi maya!!! Aww, thank you so much!!! I'm really glad it wasn't super short or boring. Thank you again and of course!!! I had to include u for being such a sweet, bff!!! Aww, thank you, ur words mean so much to me<333!!! (love ur name BTW)!!!
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It wasn't boring at all and the length was fitting! :) Aww, thanks!!! <33333333 (Lol thanks :)))
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Yay, I'm glad it was ok! Aww, of course!!! <333 LOL, NP!
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