Authorโs Note: Hello! This had to get out before the contest ended so Saph may or may not have written the last bit because I was at school. Also random fun fact: I wrote the ending before we even formed the plot :)
Who knows, maybe Iโm at school while typing this :3
ANYWAYS, I wrote Aliyahโs POV for the first โ ish, and Saph wrote everything for the rest. BEFORE YOU GO ROASTING ME ABOUT MY WRITING ABILITIES, letโs say that Saph writing the rest saved this from being thrown in the fire XD. I edited the part that she wrote, so that counts for something, right?
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Okay, never mind. We spent lots of (uncoordinated) time on this, & I hope youโll like it!!
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Aliyahโs POV
I was reading Anne of Green Gables while lying down on my towel. A cool breeze flowed through my hair, along with laughter from the surfers nearby. The warm summer sun heated the white sand under my feet, and my umbrella-shaded my face from the harsh sun rays so I didnโt have to put on sunscreen.
Ew, I thought as the mention of sunscreen crept into my brain.
โWho wants to try and dunk Logan?โ a voice said, drifting from the direction of the water.
I sat up, placed my bookmark in my book and took off my sunglasses to get a better look.
A group of boys near the shore were surrounding one of them, one with dark blonde hair and mesmerizing green eyes.
โI do!โ said one with dark hair and tan skin.
I stood up, leaned forward and squinted my eyes so I could see.
โThree points to whoever gets Logan first!โ said the first one.
The dark-haired one grinned wickedly as everyone backed up and let him get close to Logan.
He rubbed his hands together and jumped on top of him. Logan struggled against the dark-haired one, refusing to let his hair touch the water, even though it was already wet from surfing. They wrestled back and forth until the dark-haired one pushed Loganโs head into the water and yelled out in victory.
Loganโs POV
Andrew dunked me in the water as I got out, shouting โAYYYYY, THREE POINTS FOR GETTING LOGAN!โ Shaking my head, I shoved him away and shook the water out of my hair.
โAnyone want hot dogs?โ
Actually, that was probably a silly question. What was I expecting to hear from a group of hungry guys staring at me like a pack of wolves waiting for food?
โOF COURSE, DUDE! HOT DOGS ON LOGAN!โ
The guys cheered as I rolled my eyes. I think half my money went to feeding them.
As I was heading to our spot on the beach, I didnโt notice the girl standing nearby, and accidentally brushed against her. Her dark blonde hair swayed as she looked up at me with startled blue eyes.
โSorry.โ
โItโs- I- Okay.โ
It was adorable to watch her face turn red. So I made it redder by shooting her a smile and a wink.
The blush crept up her neck.
Grinning to myself, I grabbed a drink from the cooler and joined the guys who were ordering food at the stand. I took a sip as I watched Jake flirt with the girl next to him. He didnโt stand a chance with her.
Looking back at the girl I just brushed, I smiled as I watched her quickly look away after meeting my gaze. She looked familiar, one of those quiet girls at school.
โWhatโs your name? Aliyah?โ
She jumped and looked at me, nodding her head yes.
โWanna join us?โ
Her eyes widened. The blush was back.
โS- sureโ, her voice was high-pitched and nervous.
I shot her a grin and motioned her to come closer.
What was it with this girl and blushing?
Aliyah POV
I think my face was on fire.
Logan Kiergan asked me to join him.
I walked over to his table and stood in front of him, not knowing where to sit.
โUm, Iโll just sit over here. . .โ I said nervously, raising my leg to sit at the furthest seat of the table.
โNo, come sit here!โ Logan exclaimed, pointing right across to where he was sitting.
I didnโt know what to say so I just walked over, placed my palms on the table and sat down.
โSo, how are you doing?โ He asked, his green eyes sparkling in sunlight.
I had no idea where to put my hands. Or my legs. Or my eyes.
Especially my eyes.
My vision darted from him to his surfboard to his lips and back again. I settled on each for about a second and rotated through all of them, in some sort of a daze.
โAliyah, are you okay?โ
I shook my head and came back to my senses. โYeah, Iโm good. What about you?โ
Logan laughed, running a hand through his dark hair. โDonโt you try and change the subject on me. Everyone says theyโre good but thatโs probably not true. How are you, actually?โ
I met him 30 seconds ago and now heโs asking me personal questions, right off the bat.
โIโm. . . good.โ
He raised his eyebrow skeptically. โWell then. What are your hobbies?โ
I fiddled with my necklace, a habit formed when something made me really nervous.
โUm. Studying. Playing piano. Writing.โ
โHmm,โ said Logan. โCool. I like surfing, I come here almost every day in summer, Iโm the quarterback in the school football team - cliche, I know - and I hate writing.โ
I blushed real hard then, my eyes going back to their race on who could look at all of Logan the fastest.
He smiled, revealing bright white teeth that he mightโve had to scrub for 2 hours with whitening toothpaste to get THAT white.
โUh, so. . . what school do you go to?โ I asked nervously, my feet pivoting on its ball in boredom of nothing else to do.
โWestwinds High School, Iโve seen you around before,โ Logan said, clawing my attention to his eyes as he said this
My eyes popped open in surprise.
โWhat?โ he asked.
How have I never seen him before? Itโs not like heโs that hard to notice. Actually, he would be the only thing I noticed.
โOh, I didnโt know I went to the same school as you. Anyways. . .โ
โStop trying to change the subject Aliyah,โ He said, grinning. โWhose class are you in?โ
I mightโve thought he was a private investigator, from all the questions he was asking me.
โMs. Peters.โ
It was his eyesโ turn to pop open. โMe too! How have I never seen you before?โ
โOh, probably because you jocks sit in the back talking about whatever you talk about.โ
OH MY GOD DID I JUST SAY THAT?
I clamped my hands over my mouth while Logan laughed.
Warmth shot up my cheeks, turning me so red I couldโve been mistaken for a tomato if you hadnโt looked closely.
โHey Logan! Weโre gonna go out for another run, wanna come?โ a boy near the edge of the waves called.
โSure Iโll be right there!โ He yelled back. The boy near the waves made a thumbs-up sign with his hands and jumped into the water with his board in his arms.
Logan turned back to me, his eyes locking with mine.
โSchool starts tomorrow, doesnโt it?โ he asked.
I just nodded.
โHmm. Bummer. Well, youโll be there, so itโll be less of a bummer. See ya!โ He said while getting up, grabbing his board and ran into the waves, joining up with other boys in swimsuits.
I just waved pathetically and thought, Wow. I- Wow.
Loganโs POV
I ran out the front door as soon as I heard Chaseโs car pull up in the driveway, shouting a quick goodbye to my mother.
โThanks for the ride, manโ, I said as I got in. If it wasnโt for the fact that my car was at the mechanicโs because of an unfortunate accident caused by a squirrel jumping out of a tree onto the windshield, I wouldโve been able to drive to school myself.
โNo problem, dudeโ, Chase grinned.
Then he became annoying.
โSooooโฆ..you and Aliyah huhโฆ.โ
โWeโre not together Chase.โ
โYeah sureeee.โ
โIโm not kidding.โ
โNah itโs fine man, sheโs cute.โ
โWEโRE NOT TOGETHER!โ
โWell, you better ask her out soon.โ
โDude, I just met her.โ
โBut sheโs cute!โ
โTHAT DOESNโT MEAN IโLL JUST GO UP TO HER AND BE LIKE โHEY, WANNA BE MY GIRLFRIEND?โโ
Chase just laughed and focused on the road.
โWell, a great time to ask would be at Daniโs party.โ
โDanielle? Since when are you guys on a nickname basis?โ
He grinned and ignored the question. โSo are you coming?โ
โWeโll see.โ
He pulled up to the school and parked the car.
We got out of the car and ran inside to our lockers. Then Chase nudged me.
And then nudged me again.
โWhat?โ
Then I looked over to where his gaze was fixed at a girl by her locker. He looked at me and grinned as I saw what he was smiling at.
Aliyah.
Aliyahโs POV
I was standing near my locker, gazing at Loganโs face, when he saw me looking at him. My face went up in flames and I smiled while looking down at my feet awkwardly.
Logan smiled back and then poof!
Danielle Baker.
That self-obsessed snob.
Appears out of nowhere like the fairy grandmother, but sheโs more like Cruella DeTorture.
โHeeeeyyyy, Logan! How are you doing sweetie?โ She asked, strutting up to him in her disgusting pink tank top and purple skirt so that she looked like she appeared out of Willy Wonkaโs chocolate factory.
โUh, Iโm doing good,โ Logan replies. The fact that he doesnโt ask how sheโs doing made me smirk.
โIโm throwing a party on Saturday at 9 pm and I canโt wait to see you there! What colours do you have in your wardrobe? We could be matching, like blue and pink, grey and pink, green and pink . . .โ
Danielle hooked her arm with Loganโs and with a final glance at a giggling Chase, Logan let her drag him away to who-knows-where, torturing him with the descriptions of matching ties and slippers.
I looked at my feet and fiddled with the edges of my folder for a few minutes until someone tapped my shoulder. Harriet- my unfortunately only friend- was always bothering me by tapping me, so I turned around and began,โ Harriet! Could you stop-โ
It was Logan.
I looked up at him and started to apologize. โOh! Oh my gosh, Iโm so sorry-โ
He just grinned and said, โItโs fine. Iโm just happy that I got away from that Barbie doll of Danielle.โ
I giggled and asked him, โWhat class do you have first?โ
โHomeroom.โ
โMe too!โ
Loganโs eyes lit up and he said, โYou said you like writing, whatโs your favourite genre?โ
โI like horror and-โ
I paused because he was now suddenly holding my hand. He squeezed it and after a pause, I squeezed back.
โGo on.โ
I smiled. โI like horror and science fiction because . . .โ
And then I jabbered off about writing genres while we walked to Homeroom together.
Loganโs POV
There was something about this girl.
Maybe it was the way her eyes shined as she talked about all things nerdy.
Or the way she would squeeze my hand whenever she got excited.
Or maybe it was how she would blush every time I looked at her.
We got to homeroom and I took my usual seat in the back, and rolled my eyes when I saw Chase wiggling his eyebrows like a maniac and looking at Aliyah then me and then Aliyah and me again.
โAliyah! Come sit here.โ I shoved Chase out of the seat next to me and patted the chair for her to sit on.
Chase just laughed and sat in another chair, still wiggling his eyebrows.
Unfortunately, now it wasnโt just him.
The rest of the class was giggling and the guys were grinning at me. Rolling my eyes once again, I looked back to Aliyah whose face was red. Like usual. She slowly sat down in the spot Chase had- ahem- vacated and started getting the things out of her bag.
Class was boring as usual. Only this time, I could sneak glances at Aliyah.
I brought out my phone underneath my desk and mentally smacked myself for not getting her number. Then I got out a pen and paper and wrote-
Can I have your number?
Aliyahโs POV
โHEASKEDMEFORMYNUMBERHEASKEDMEFORMYNUMBERHEASKEDMEFORMYNUMBER!!!โ I squealed to Harriet that afternoon after school.
We were at my house sitting cross legged on my bed as the radio played. Our mouths were stuffed with brownies and the room was filled with squealing- caused by me gushing about Logan.
โOH MY GOD GIRL WHAT DID YOU DO?โ
I took a deep breath. โI GAVE IT TO HIM!!!!!!โ
We burst into giggles as I thought about how he had stuck with me for the whole day, and I turned red as I remembered his text.
Harriet noticed of course.
โWHAT DID HE TEXT YOU??โ
โHe- HE ASKED IF WE COULD GO TO DANIโS PARTY TOGETHERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!โ
Thatโs when the room exploded in giggles and squealing and screaming. I was so glad my parents were still at work.
Then Harriet turned serious.
โWE HAVE TO GET READY, THE PARTY IS IN TWO HOURS!โ
โWHAT?โ
She dragged me to the bathroom and the next two hours flew away in a cloud of perfume, blush, and arguing about outfits.
It was perfect.
Loganโs POV
Holy cow-
Wow.
Daniโs party was a rager, but it was pretty boring, and it was like most parties.
Drunk guys, loud music, everyone wasted.
Then the front door opened.
And in walked Aliyah.
Harriet left her at the door for her boyfriend, and Aliyah caught my eye and gave me a shy smile.
Her long golden hair was down and she looked pretty casual, yet dressed up.
I think- I think I blushed.
I put the red solo cup in my hand down and walked over to her.
โHey.โ
โHey.โ
โYou look uncomfortable.โ
โWell, parties are not my thing.โ
โAnd yet you still came?โ
โYeah, for you.โ
Yep, I was blushing.
How ironic.
Running a hand through my hair, I took her hand and led her to the quieter part of the house.
โWhat do you even do at parties?โ she asked once we had achieved solitude.
โPretend you're having fun. Watch your friends go crazy. Talk with cute girls.โ
Now her face was on fire too.
I grinned at her and she smiled back.
โSo . . . what now?โ
โI have an idea.โ
โOh really?โ
And with that, I kissed her.
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Aliyah sat on the beach where she had seen Logan almost a year ago, when her crush had sprouted. The faint music of the party was drifting in her memory, the feeling she had received when he put his hand on her cheek and kissed her.
She fiddled with her moon necklace, the silver shining in the moonlight.
Aliyah whispered, โI wonder what it's like to love someone who stayed with you forever.โ
She looked up at the stars, looking for answers as they twinkled their bright eyes back, listening, wanting. . .
Wishing.
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SHEEEEESSHHH!! This story straight bussin! It felt like each one of them had real personalities. Can't say that you didn't get me to smile once or twiceโฆ Or twenty times. ;))
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thank you!!! XD
lol :)))
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heheeheheh im going through your stories and heheheeh
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hehehehe shanks :)
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heheheheeh np hehehe
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:DDD <3
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the full story was AWEsome, it was like zooming across a novel!
and by the way, your profile pic is cool XD
Happy today, amuh!
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thank you!!!!
thanks :)
you too! :D
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Nice! The whole thing was adorably cute! No grammar mistakes either, so good job! But, I think the romance felt a little rushed, so you should probably talk yo saph about that. Hood job though!
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thanks! yeah it was, as the writing was WAYYYYYYYY more than just a little bit rushed XD
thank youuuuu!
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Welcome! Yeah, loll XD
:))
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XD
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Hehe
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im frustrated :/
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wow! Great job guys!I thought the title was an interesting choice since the star part was at the end. I would love to be in Aliyah's situation...i mean who wouldn't! I think a better name for this story is On Fire, because you mention their cheeks on fire half the time. Anyway, super job!
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thanks!
hmmmmm okay ill ask saph :)
THANKS (even though my part was like........idk but NOT THE BEST)
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but it was still okay!
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thanks!
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:))))) np!
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romance is not really my tHiNg so at least I tried it out :3
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Fluffy and adorableee :)
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Thank you! <3
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wowwwwwwwwww
this is such a cool story!!
and really great for your first try at romance!!
the characters felt very realistic and were quite interesting
and the titleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
aahhhhhh idk why I love it so much
but I dooooooooooo
amazing job Ame & Saph!
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lolllllll
thank you!
yes they were QUITE interesting (cruella detorture XD)
:D which one do you like better?
:DDDD thank you so muchhhhhhhhh
tHaNk You ImA tElL sApH :D
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XDDD
hmmmmmmm probably Aliyah....she just feels very relatableXD
:DD
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yay!
I was asking about the title lol but :D
almost done storyyyyy about to posttttttt
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oooohXDDD
I'm so clueless tbh
titleeeeeeee hmmmmm
I think "On Fire"
It seems to show up throughout the story:)
yayyyyyy!!!!
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oh ok I'll change that :)
:DDDD
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Please don't leave me forever...
If you have to go for a reason, please come back :(
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oh noooooooooo
I'm not leaving
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Oh. Well, there were some rumors that you were thunking about leaving for good and I wanted to make sure that you knew people cared :)
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rUmOuRs?
whos started them?
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I'm not sure... Sia? Maybe she heard it from someone else
OH NO WHAT IF A DOWNVOTER OR BULLY STARTED THE RUMORS SO WE'D ALL GET SAD?
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hMmMmM siahereIcome
THAT WOULDN'T BE GOOD-
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Ps. Heyyyy!! Mind saying how you think of me (personality) and like, describing me in a sentence, and how do you think I look like?
Its for my new biooo!!
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hi!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay!
Personality: kind, outgoing, a bit wEiRd (i am truly sorry)
Looks: black hair, dark eyes (brown?) . . .
I remember when you made your pfp your face so um. Can't get that outta my head XD
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Hello! Really great romance story๐XD
When it says " I just walked over, placed my palms on the table on the table and sat down. I think you meant just one on the table and not two.
Anyways a great story! I know you and Saph have been working on this. So good Job! For getting this done in like the last min! ๐๐งก
-Ruby
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thanks lollllll
yeah, i didnt have time to edit so thankssss!
YES done in the last minuteeeee XD
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It' Ok! Sometimes we got to go fast XD.
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yeah XD
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ยฃ-ยฃ
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Y-Y
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Wow.
W o w .
That story was FIRE!!! (Get it? Because their cheeks were ON FIRE alot? Ok ok ok I'll stop. XD) I especially loved the characters. Aliyah, the awkward mess; Logan, the (mostly) smooth guy, sweeping Aliyah off her feet; and even Chase, the one friend that ships those two people together. Sure, it might be cliche-ish, but I love when a typically boring cliche was done beautifully. This was an example of that. I applaud you for that :)
MINOR ERRORS POLICE, OPEN UP! *smashes door*
โOF COURSE DUDE! HOT DOGS ON LOGAN!โ --> "OF COURSE, DUDE!
โThanks for the ride manโ, --> "Thank for the ride, man",
"I didnโt know what to say so I just walked over, placed my palms on the table on the table and sat down." --> [...] placed my palms on the table and sat down."
I absolutely LOVED this story. Great job!!! :)))
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THANKS (most of it was saph because I'm trash at this :) )
yeah its waaaaaaaaaay too cliche lol
i didnt really get to edit it so thanks for that! :D
THANK YOU(i didn't really do anything tho LOL)
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XDDD
It was cliche, but it was amazing nonetheless :D
Iโm sure you did some things :)
Yw!!
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thanks!
it wouldve probably been way better if i hadn't been in it but like ITS A COLLAB SO :)
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Don't say that! You contributed to the story as well, and I'm sure you added things that Saph wouldn't have thought of.
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maybeeeee but idk lol
how are you?
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