Wednesday, October 24
~ 8:30 a.m. ~
You walk down Robert Street with your mocha latte in hand. Taking small sips of it at a time, you vigorously stomp across the wet, puddly street; you know your red stilettos were a bad choice of footwear. You feel crappy walking through puddles in stilettos.
A bright yellow taxi honks restlessly at you. You look up from under the pink umbrella and see that the walking light has the red hand. Darn it!
You lightly jog the rest of the way across the street and stop at the sidewalk with a puff. You're not too fond of this bustling, busy, grumpy city. But nevertheless, you have a good office job and a best friend who cares for you. And your fluffy cat named Tickles. Who doesn't love a fluffy cat named Tickles? Come on.
"Bread, miss?" a man at a storefront says to you. "We have rye, pumpernickel, white, wheat, banana, cranberry orange, blueberry zucchini, pita, brioche, baguette, sourdough, focaccia, naan, ciabatta, sun-dried tomato, panettone, tortilla, flatbread, challah, crouton, cornbread, scone, English muffin, Texas toast, matzo?"
Sheesh! Who knew there were so many kinds of breads! You politely decline and are on your way. Only a few more blocks to Hamill Printing. You wish you had a car or had at least waved a taxi...
The rain starts to pick up. You fasten your raincoat's zipper and pick up your pace. Oh, if only you had known it was going to rain this hard! And to think the weatherman said "A light drizzle, folks."
You stuff your phone in your pocket, not wanting it to get wet.
~ 9:00 a.m. ~
You let out a breath you didn't realize you were holding and finally reach Hamill printing. Stepping inside, you feel the maybe-too-warm blast of air. You hear the distinct stomping of feet and sipping coffee sounds you hear five days a week.
"Top of the morning, to you, Clara!" Mr. Borowski, your boss, greets you. You notice he's wearing a black suit with a green tie. Fancy. You greet him back with a small "Hello," and take long strides to your work cubicle.
Once you arrive at your cubicle, you toss your Louis Vuitton purse from eBay under the desk and set your work bag on the floor.
You open up your work bag and pull out your MacBook.
Logging in, you open up your email and sigh. 493 emails. In one night? You delete and mark most of them as spam, and read the important ones. Some from Miles, Grammarly(you roll your eyes at this email), your mom about Thanksgiving preparations, Betty Crocker, and, of course, Mr. Barowski.
Peggy Muller, your friend and co-worker, comes by to say hi. You two chat for a moment and Peggy walks back to her cubicle, coffee in hand. You make a mental note to get coffee during lunch break.
Once you finish with your emails, you open a new tab and type in youtube.com. You find some relaxing spa music and start listening to it as you fill out some surveys, file a few bills, and finish up your resume; you are trying to get a new job as a photographer for Times magazine; you've been applying for months now. After all, your best friend, Miles, works there as a journalist, and it's been both of your dreams to work for the renowned 5-star magazine company.
You hope you get the job.
~ 11:30 a.m. ~
Lunch eventually comes after what seems like ages of typing. you grab your purse, get up, and decide to go to the soup cafe across the street. Better to walk than to have to pay for a taxi in this expensive city.
The rain has cleared up, and you saunter across the street alongside butling strangers. You be careful and hold your purse tight.
Once you are safe across the street, you open the door to the cafe, and a bell rings in excitement.
"Ah, my best customer," Mrs. Rhoda, the owner, holds out her hands and engulfs you in a warm embrace. She slowly pulls back and asks you what you'd like.
"I'd like the usual. Turkey and swiss on toasted rye and a medium tomato bisque, light on the pepper," you say nonchalantly. "And a small coffee. I'll definitely need it for the work I'm doing."
Rhoda chuckles softly and you look around the quaint cafe; it's pretty plain for a New York City cafe. Nevertheless, it's five-star and you don't know anyone who dislikes it.
You notice a mother and two identical girls at one table. The girls are eating grilled cheeses, and their mother is eating a Caesar salad. You make a mental note to have a chicken salad sandwich for dinner.
"Clara?" Rhoda calls, interrupting your train of thought.
you walk over to Rhoda and take the brown paper bag and sturdy disposable cup, pay Rhoda, and head out the door.
"Thanks, Rhoda!" you beam. Rhoda gives a warm smile and takes the next customer's order.
~ 1:15 p.m. ~
Oh great, you think. More work. Mr. Barowski has just assigned to you the worst job that you hate: organizing your file cabinet. Bills in one drawer, files in another, sign-up sheets in another, and vice versa.
You know it's still a nasty mess, but hey? Who cares? Definitely not you. You just like to procrastinate when it comes to cleaning.
you delete the email and click the inbox button: 2 emails.
One is from Times.
~ 3:45 p.m. ~
You have finally finished the dreaded file cabinet to your satisfaction. Now to read the email from Times. Your hopes are to the extreme level. No despair, baby bear, your mother used to say when you were little. How could this be happening to you? It is a dream come true. You sit there in disbelief, unable to process the news. How wonderful!
The email tells you that you have been accepted and your first day of work will be Tuesday of next week. All you need is a camera and some other things. Perfect, you have a Canon EOS 5D Mark III. Oh, joy!
But first, you will need to tell Miles.
Aaaaaaand... your boss.
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Ok, for real, what would you say to your boss? :D
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Your character seems polite so “I got this great opportunity to work at the Times. I’ll be leaving in 2 weeks” would suffice.
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Haha, yeah! Thanks! ps, would you like me to leave some feedback on 1 of ur stories?
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Thank you for doing that! I appreciate that you did!
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Np!
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Thank you for doing that! I appreciate that you did!
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Thank you for doing that! I appreciate that you did!
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Tbh, I'd literally just quit the same day. No use stretching it out, I think that getting straight to the point is the easiest way.
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Hai hai- my Reedsy Cast series is out, ur character isn't in the first one, but I have some good ideas for her. Check it out if u want! :D
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Yayyy!!!! I'll check it out!!! :))))
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Awesome, thank you!
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Np!!
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Hahaha I love your profile picture! I love Cat noir
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OMG YAYAYAYAYAAYAAYYYY I NEED TO START A CAT NOIR CLUBBB
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OMG YUSSSS!!!! I WILL JOIN
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I love this story. The details are amazing. Love the bread part especially. And the street names. Finishing a resume at work - bold. The soup café scene made me remember my favorite soup/sandwich place when I lived in a bigger city. I’d like to hear a little more about Miles. He’s referenced only a couple times so I sometimes forgot who he was. Can you take a look at my story for this prompt if you have a chance?
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Mayve I'll make a second book lol! TYSM for the feedback!!!! Ofc I will!
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You brought me right in with that pure AESTHETIC at the beginning. Your format was really interesting, and I like the creativity. Good story!
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I agree, Ethan!
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Lol I saw that ur new. I LOVE ur profile, but I think it’s a reference that I don’t understand.
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Still working on it; what do you mean?
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OMGGG I LOVE ALL THOSE HEKING NAMESSSSS ofc i put it in my bio cuz its so true like- keeper of the lost cities? never read it, but heard of it. Why? :)
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A lovely look into an ordinary person's life. You are brave writing in the second person. And you have achieved it well. There are a couple of typos, Times magazine (but perhaps that was intentional) and 'butling stranger'. Some sentences don't begin with a capital letter. However, you capture the mundane beautifully, the feeling of walking in the rain and the tediousness of filing and you also leave the reader in no doubt about the joy the email brings. Oh, and the bread reference was wonderful. A lovely story. Thank you for liking my stor...
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Omg, Thanks so much! I feel appreciated whenever people do things like this. You're so kind! -Timber
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You are most welcome. I signed up for another writing competition at the same time. We couldn't have ours read by others unless we commented on the work of three people first. We comment, we get commented on. I thought this competition was like that too, but evidently not. I comment a lot, especially if I can offer a different perspective or suggest grammar alterations. I did grammar in primary school. It comes in handy now. I have to remember to write for the internet. I think my stories might be too blocked up. Best wishes, Timber, from...
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You are most welcome. I signed up for another writing competition at the same time. We couldn't have ours read by others unless we commented on the work of three people first. We comment, we get commented on. I thought this competition was like that too, but evidently not. I comment a lot, especially if I can offer a different perspective or suggest grammar alterations. I did grammar in primary school. It comes in handy now. I have to remember to write for the internet. I think my stories might be too blocked up. Best wishes, Timber, from...
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You are most welcome. I signed up for another writing competition at the same time. We couldn't have ours read by others unless we commented on the work of three people first. We comment, we get commented on. I thought this competition was like that too, but evidently not. I comment a lot, especially if I can offer a different perspective or suggest grammar alterations. I did grammar in primary school. It comes in handy now. I have to remember to write for the internet. I think my stories might be too blocked up. Best wishes, Timber, from...
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Ooooooohhh I like this! The perspective is cool, and I love all the different breads lol!
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Thanks, Juliette! Maybe, we can do a collab soon, since you're new? :)
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Ooooh, I'd love to!
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For this prompt? I like the saving city one.
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K, I'll share a doc with youuuuuu
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Yayyy ok
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Actually can we do one next week? These prompts aren't really my vibe...
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I HEARD YOU LIKE MIRACULOUS LADYBUG- but uh, not more than me. ;) whats ur favorite episode in season 4 so far?
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omg nooo i stopped over the summer... i am so sorry!
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oh my gosh! why though? too busy? :(
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nah, i just felt like i should move on bc i am getting a little old forit, yk? it also got sooo boring ik everything that was gonna happen yk?
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Season 4 was everything but boring... Adrien found out Shadowmoth was his father... he got akumatized again. There were 2 identity reveals, Alya and Luka know that Marinette is ladybug. but i understand, yk? :)
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ohh yeah
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Hey Lucia! :)
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heyyy
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what do you really, think about reedsy?
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what do you mean?
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idk. there are some good people, and the- not so good ones. all the downvoting, hate, what you you think about it? why'd you leave? if you don't mind me asking...
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i left bc i was frankly tired of the drama and downvoting... it was all so silly. i also left bc all my good friends left as well.
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Hello! Were you Timber before? Jaggger thinks you left.
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Read my bio! :)
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So you are?
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Yup!
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Yay!
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Lovely story! But also...how could she say no to all that bread. I've never had blueberry zucchini but NOW I NEED IT.
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"gurl go getchu some hawt diggity dawgs from the dam snack bar-" I don't even think I'm breathing properly after this one^^^ 😂😂😂 It sounds like something my gRaNnY would say on tha real😂
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Ty~
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heyloo
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yuhhhh what's poppin aerin
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lol um uh school???? (Don’t mind me, just ignoring my homework in my free block and logging into Reedsy on meh school iPad...) XD Wbu? Hru?
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omg sameeee XD i'm so tired ahhhh oh i have a computer for school ;) anyways-
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So glad you're feeling better!!!!
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Tyyyyyyyy :DD
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Heyo!! Can you read my story "Sign of a Haunt"? It was the first story last week that I threw out because I had HORRIBLE Writer's Block😭. I think it turned out pretty great and I'd love to get feedback :DD
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Yaassssss ofc :D
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Tank yous!!!
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Love your bio! Me too!
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Im sorry wdym 'me too'? TYSM THo!
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I agree with it :D
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Hahahahaahaaaa imma tater tot
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Yepppp
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Heyo!!! Bucky Barnes told me to shout you out in my bio so I did. Congratulations!! She also said that you are one of the best writers on Reedsy. YAY!!! I also heard that you've been down in the dumps lately. I cannot say that I am sorry as I don't know what's going on in your life. I can say that I hope everything gets better. Just... don't give up. It may not seem like it but you are here for a reason and someone needs you. I need you :) You rock!!
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Aw yay! Carla... your bio says your in hs, right? well, I'm younger than you, older than 12. i feel like lots of people my age are going through this, but this is really unusual for me. ttytytytytyty for your support. i really have no idea how to talk to my parents about this :')
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YAYY!!😊 Yes I'm in hs... so you're 13? How to talk to your parents about Reedsy writing?
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Heheh, yeah. You got me! Nonono about the weird feelings. I'm feeling better as i listen to some uplifting Christian music and talk to these strangers here on Reedsy. Tysm for your kind actions, Carla!!!!
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Teehee XD Ohhh well soon it may get better. You just have to be patient :) No problem!! Just a overthinking Libra over here :DD
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Hahaa, yeah just a question-hating scorpio over here ;) once again, Tysm!
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I love the way that you have written this story and the take on this prompt Great profile pic btw Could you please read my latest story . Thanks :)) ~Palak Shah
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Ty, ty, and ofc! :) -Timber
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