โAre you kidding me?!โ exclaimed Nainika, her pale skin turning red, her sharp claws digging into the metal table. Her green eyes glowed with frustration as her black tail swished back and forth. Her slick black hair almost hid her small black panther ears.
โCalm down,โ said Nina, her brown eyes wide in worry. Her caramel-colored skin almost blended in with her dark brown hair, except for a flesh-colored birthmark on her right eyebrow. She pushed her black glasses up the bridge of her nose, exposing the scaly skin on her arm. A small snake tongue flicked out of her mouth. โAzazel only wanted to speak with him. Thatโs a good sign, right?โ
โNo, it is not!โ Nainika shouted, her whiskers twitching. โThat was a stupid thing for him to do! Achlys never should have led his army straight into Adapter territory!โ
โHe did say that he saw some Adapter scouts nearby,โ responded Treasure, laying down next to Nina. She was one of the few full-animal warriors in the facility, but her many scars proved she was not to be messed with. A particularly large one reaching from her left eye down to her muzzle often made others keep their distance from her, along with the absence of her hind leg. A sacrifice for her high rank in Azazelโs army. The only thing linking her to her siblings was her wolf origins and her deep blue eyes- of course, nobody really knew about it since her siblings were on the enemy side, the Adapters.
โYeah, he saw some scouts and a harpy eagle!โ shouted Nainika. โHow do you think Azazel will react when Mother Heatherโs daughter is possibly alive?โ
An uneasy silence fell over the group. A moment later, someone burst into the room, his black spider legs stepping with careful precision on the wooden floor. Everyone immediately stood up and saluted him- except for Treasure, who simply sat at attention.ย
โYou all know that harsh decisions lead to harsh consequences,โ said Azazel. โAchlys showed a fair example of that. However, since he provided valuable information, I have decided to let him live- just this once. Take this as a warning. You are not permitted to lead unauthorized missions unless under dire circumstances.โ
He stayed silent, shifting on his large, black legs.
โSergeant,โ commanded Azazel. Treasure puffed her chest and raised her head.
โSee to it that Achlys makes it to the medical ward.โ
He stepped back as several guards thrust a bloodied Achlys on the floor, his black, wavy hair plastered to his face with sweat. His eyepatch had slipped from its usual place, revealing his blind left eye. The rest of his face was hidden behind his hair, dripping with blood and sweat. The dark mane around his neck and chest was spotted with blood, his usually swarthy skin red and flushed.
The group resisted the urge to help him up. Azazel calmly left the room, taking the two guards with him. As soon as he was gone, Nina dropped to the ground, taking Achlys by the elbow.
โGet off of me!โ he snapped, snatching his arm from Nina. As he lifted his head, Nina stifled a gasp. His entire face was swollen and bloody, previous scars on his face reopened.ย
โGet away!โ shouted Achlys, his face flushed with anger and embarrassment.
โA lionโs weakness is getting kicked in the face,โ muttered Treasure. โHe shouldโve seen it coming.โ
โOh yeah?!โ shouted Achlys, painfully getting up. โDid you see your little brother getting killed, huh? Did you see that coming?!โ
Treasure growled, her ears folded back, her tail low.
โYou do not speak of that,โ she seethed.
โOh, why, because he was your weakness? โOh please donโt hurt him, take me instead!โ Remember that, Treasure?โ
A snarl escaped her lips as she lunged forward, knocking Achlys to the ground.
โHey hey, break it up!โ shouted Nainika, grabbing Treasure by the scruff of her neck.
โLet me go!โ shouted a squirming Treasure. โYou know I hate it when you do that.โ
โExactly,โ responded Nainika, letting go of Treasure.
Treasure growled at Nainika, baring her teeth.ย
โWhatโs going on?โ
The group turned to see Draco and Scarlett entering the room. Dracoโs green eyes scanned the room, taking in the scene around him. He rubbed his hand through his red hair, revealing scales on his hands similar to Ninaโs and a large scar running from his thumb to his wrist. A snake tongue flickered in and out of his mouth as the flaps on his neck spread out.ย
โFinally! Where were you?โ shouted Nina.
โOut,โ responded Draco, glancing at Scarlett, who had made her way to the corner of the room. Her platinum blonde hair laid flat on her head, her dark brown eyes almost seeming black. A small birthmark in the shape of a swan marked her wrist, and a variety of scars marked her arms and face. A bubble of water floated above her open hand.
Nina frowned, then stepped back, glaring at Scarlett. Scarlett caught her glare and snarled, turning her bubble of water into ice.ย
Treasure rolled her eyes. โSince weโre all here, might as well tell you the news.โ
โCan we get Achlys to the medical ward first?โ interrupted Nainika, helping him up from the floor.
Treasure growled before continuing. โAzazel has given us explicit instructions to scout the Adapter territory to see if we can find their base.โ
โHavenโt we already tried that?โ asked Draco, shifting his scales from a pale tan to a dark brown.ย
โYes, but we have to try again, this time for a different purpose. Mother Heatherโs daughter may still be alive.โ
Draco fell silent.ย
โSo hereโs whatโs gonna happen,โ said Treasure. โDraco, youโll take the south border.โ
โIโll go with him,โ piped up Nina, raising a scaly hand.
โScarlett will go with him,โ said Treasure, ignoring Nina. Nina frowned before dropping her hand, once again glaring at Scarlett.
โNainika, you take the east border.โ
โBut I canโt see well in the dark,โ retorted Nainika, swishing her black tail in irritance.ย
โThatโs why youโll be taking the night shift. Report back to me at your usual times. If you find any signs of the Adapters or the harpy eagle girl, you are under direct orders from Azazel to capture every single one of them, dead or alive.โ
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This story features: Kayla Lane as Nina Nainika as Nainika Draco (filled by Celeste) Lone Wolf as Treasure Bucky as Achlys Danny as Scarlett This is from the Predator's POV, stay tuned :)
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AH ABSSSSSSS I NEED MORE OF THIS SERIES, THIS IS SUCH A GREAT REEDSY CAST. THE STORY IS AMAZING AND EVERYTHING AHGAHGGHAGH I LOVE ITTTTTTT!!
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AHHHHHH THANKS SO MUCH LIL IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE ITTTTTTT
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:DDDD
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Hi Abbie! It totally slipped my mind to tell you but in case you're interested the last part of my series is posted! (It's called "No Place Like Home.)
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YAYYYYYY
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Heyyyy! Heard that youโre back from spring break. Did you do anything fun?
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Yup! Went to Florida (which is why i didnt have my chromebook), went to the waterpark, visited some family (WITHOUT MY PARENTS HEEEHEHEH), got major sunburn (light skin problems TvT), and got a bunch of new clothes :)
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Seems like you had a lot of fun! Iโm still on break but itโs been pretty dull. Staying at home, reading, struggling to write something, refreshing my Reedsy page XD, some painting, more reading. Floridaโs a cool place to spend a vacation (as long as itโs not for the entire year.) It can get soooo humid.
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yesssss my hair gets so frizzy XD Oof lol if you're ever too bored on reedsy im usually online XD
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Hey Abbie <3 I'm really sorry about your dad, hope you're okay. Let me know if you need anything. <3 I hope he gets better soon. Try to believe he's strong and he'll be able to push through. ๐
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Thank you I really appreciate it <3 on my way to the hospital right now the doctors are doing tests I hope everything goes well, thank you so much for the support. All of you. <3
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This is gonna sound really weird but can you choose a boy's name that you like?
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hmmm... that's a tough one... Adrien, from Miraculous (idk if you've watched it) yeah I like Adrien
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yeah ive watched it teeheeeeeee *runs around working on her evil ideas*
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Ugh this is going to give everything away but I can't do anything like this without approval. So ideal special other?? Eyes: Hair: Skin: Personality: Power: Favorite color: Gender (JIC): Name: Anything else:
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hee hee hee heee... ideal would be Cat Noir, but- WAIT CAN I ACTUALLY DO THAT LIKE HAVE HIM LIKE CAT NOIR
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA YESSSSSSS WILL DO THAT!! He's gonna be a shapeshifter with an emphasis on cats thoughhhhhhhhhh!!
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AHHH YESSS ITS GONNA BE PERFECT ITS MY DREAM COME TRUEEE do you need me to fill in any missing details or is that good?
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ABBY!! ABBYABBYABBYABBY OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG I REALLY WANT TO SHARE A CLIP OF WHAT IVE BEEN WORKING ON WITH YOUUUUUUUUUUU OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
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YES PLEASEEEE SHARE IT SHARE IT OMGGG
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Ooookay...so the thing is...its after your...errr...death?? And Flint is not taking it well... Uhh... Amira gritted her teeth before forcing out, โI think youโve had enough to drink tonight havenโt you?โ โAre you kidding? Iโm just getting started!โ Flint drained his drink and fumbled in his pockets for more money, swaying unsteadily. When Amira didnโt respond, he added, โReally, Iโm f-fine, I know what youโre trying to do here, Ira, and I appreciate it. But donโt waste your compassion on me, I just want to die in peace. Seeing if I can real...
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Amira is a code name for who should this be im still not sure it was gonna be me but then...oh boy i should send you the whole doc
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YES SEND THE WHOLE DOC I NEED TO SEE MORE
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Hey Abbie! Wow, I loved this side of the story! Gives more mystery:DDD Great work!!! I can't wait to read part 6!
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Tyyyy, so glad you like it! Wait until the battle >:) hee hee
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Of course!!! OHHHH, sounds... AMAZINGGGG! Can't wait!
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yessss! hee hee hee ima have fun
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LOL don't have tooo much fun.... XD
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XD hee hee hee might kill off some people
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someone said me here "You are the most negative person here, and I made a mistake to think you as a good person. It's better if you go away rather than spreading hate." Ihc So this is not hated. Hypocrite "So you are talking about me. No, you only talk about me, I know that. Brain cell." Ai So, accusing someone of something they haven't done, then irritating that person every second. If that person gets angry because don't know their life, so if that person outbursts. They go on spreading hate about them to everyone, call for sympathy. This ...
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I NEED YOU BACK
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Oh yes it's a constant struggle I understand Everything that you said is just.... SO relatable. Reason my only friends are on Reedsy TvT How are you?? How have you been doing?
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Wow made my day! Thank you so much I'm so glad your character is to your liking. I did the same thing when I was featured in Lillian's story XD read it over and over lollll
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I like how we're about to look into the Predators POV and meet new characters as well. The plot keeps getting better and better, and I want to know what happens next so badly! Each part makes me love this series even more. In case you're interested, I posted the last part of my "series" and there's another story that I have no idea what happened to it.
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Yay I'm so glad you liked it!!!!! I will read your series ASAP (probably on Monday cuz I gtg) and oooof I had that happen to me once, got super upset TvT
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AHH thanks so much! Amazing job :) AND MOI??!! chef's kiss seriously I love my partttttttt one thing thooo (sorry if you can't change it :) but my skin color's not pale, its warm caramel! other than thatttt can't wait for more :)
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YAYYYYY tysm for the feedback I'm glad you liked it! Sorry lol a lot of people said pale skin color so I might've gotten them mixed up XD thanks for telling me!
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Of course! AHah no problem!
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:D
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fRoM tHe eNeMy pErSpeCtIvE hEhEhe you are so good at endings oml how do you do it XD MANGOOD ๐ฅญ๐ฅญ๐ฅญ job!!! (sorry XD) ~ Amethyst
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lolll eheheh my endings are my strengths TvT EEEEEEE PUNSSS
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:))))) :DDD
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OMG WE HAVE THE SAME DANG PFP AHHHHHH I LOVE MLBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB heh, i'm a little cray cray ;-;
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XDDD YASSSSSS MLB IS LITERALLY THE BEST so am I don't worry XD especially when it comes to cat noir he he
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btw if you wanna make your picture brighter and stuff here is the link to edit the picture: https://www.befunky.com/create/photo-editor/
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OH MY GAWDDDDDDD YASSSSSSSSSSSSSS CAT NOIR MY BOO <3<3<3 I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE SHANGHAI, SEASON 4, AND OMG THE AWAKENINGGGGG AHHHH FJGHDJKFGHLEFJSG hehe you should watch Miraculous Crack vids they're sooo funny XD
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NAHHH HES MY BOO I wishhhhh my parents wont let me watch it anymore since there's gay couples and stuff T^T I haven't gone past season 2 wahhh (i watched cat blanc without them knowing bc apparently it was the best episode and i just had to shhh) lol XDD are they on YT?
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Awwwww nooo- wait there's gay ppl? i- aww cat blanc is the bestttt YESSSS AGGH THEYRE ON YTTTT ;DDD oh well, at least I found another person besides all my CRAZY AS HECK friends-
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Apparently Rose and Juleka were an unannounced couple, plus there was Marc, who looked to be either transgender or just a guy wearing girl's makeup and my parents didn't like that :( I don't mind it because that's just how life is, there is people like that, but my parents are kinda negative on those topics and they forbade me from watching it anymore :( Unfortunately my parents watch my YT very carefully and I have the school blocker on my school chromebook, the only device they don't keep track of. YESSSS Do you follow Jay? They are a Mi...
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Addd a funny nickname plssss Abbieeee XDD
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XD THE CAT I CANTTT Lol ok XD want me to make one for you or do you have one in mind? :)
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Make one :)
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Alrighty!
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hehe your bio
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Ooooooh I love how you showed us the evil side of the story!! That throws so much interesting conflict into the mix!
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Yesss! Don't worry the Adapter/Predator battle will be here soon >;) hee hee, its gonna be so interesting, especially with the sibling and relationship mixes
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Ooooooooooh I'm so excited!!!!!!!!
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sameeee!
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! super duper job with the characters, the plot, E V E R Y T H I N G !!!! LOVED IT!!!! I C A N ' T E X P R E S S M Y L O V E F O R T H I S S E R I E S ! ! ! ! ! Really love it tons :)))))
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OMGGG THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHH I C A N ' T E X P R E S S M Y A P P R E C I A T I O N <3
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:))))))))) You are welcome <3333
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<3
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AHAHAHAAHAHhahAHHHAHA I CANT WAIT FOR THE BROTHER/SIS SHOWDOWn (hopefully lol)
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LOLLLL Me neitherrrrr!!
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:DDDDXD
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Oh, so these are the villains? Interesting... I canโt wait to see what you do next!
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yess, I had to make sure those on the Predator's side were featured so I took a break from the Adapter's side :) tyyy!
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The worldbuilding in this series it just- aaaahhhhh it makes me so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyXDD amazing story Abbieeeeeee!!!! totally hooked on to this series;) and wow you're fast with these parts!!! cant wait for pt 6!!!:D
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Tysm for the feedback I'm so glad you like it! :D #speedwriter for ya :P
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:D
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thank you! :D
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