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Fantasy Mystery

That day, my friend was sucked into the ground. I didn’t know when I would go in. The scientists and police officers came to the site.

They took samples of the ground to check what had caused it. I knew the reason but they didn’t know the seriousness of the issue that was going to happen. I was sad as well as happy.

The ground was barren. No trees and no water. It had been years since it had rained. The pale looking scientist with his glasses slowly rubbed on the floor and said, “This is not normal.” The commissioner looked at the large hole through which my friend disappeared.

“Yeah,” he said with concern.

It was all because of a man who had brown hair and curly black hair. He was an ox of a man. He worked so hard to save the trees.

*****

Meanwhile, the weather commission was called for. There wasn’t any weather change anyways.

They scanned the underground with their underground scanners. But, what they saw was unbelievable. A man, raging with fire, was sitting on a throne made up of twigs. I wondered how the twigs were not burned, because he was covered in fire.

“What is this, commissioner?” the scientist asked.

“I wanted to ask you that,” the commissioner replied, rubbing his head in confusion.

“Let’s go and check out,” another blond police officer whispered to the commissioner.

The miners were called and in minutes a large hole was dug. The police officers put on their headlights and went in. They had never been to a place like that.

Then too it was unlikely that anyone would go underground. The next second I was sucked in. I thought I was destined to see those events. I didn’t know who was going to come next.

*****

The man spent all the time talking with me about the effects of deforestation and asked all humans to stop cutting trees. But, nobody listened to him. Now, they are going to suffer under him.

*****

I was happy to see all my friends standing in a row. However, the fact I was stuck in the mud dimmed any joy I felt initially at the sight of my friends. The police slowly glided through the mud and followed the compass. Finally, they saw him, face to face. Most of the police officers ran away and some trembled with fear.

“Why did you come here?” He shouted.

“Who are you? And why are you causing trouble in our world?”the commissioner shouted. The fire headed man threw a fireball at the commissioner, which he dodged.

“I am the only one who can shout here. So, if you raise your voice, I will make you like a roasted chicken,” he said, standing up from his seat.

“Okay, sir.” Even the commissioner was afraid of him.

The fire headed man, named Flak, was a guy from Dragon planet.

*****

The man was unbreakable. He wanted to save my race. We were close to extinction. He planted trees everywhere. But, every time he planted, they cut it.

Now, he is dead, only for our sake.

*****

Dragon planet was already in pieces and thank god that this guy was here. We trees didn’t want to fight with humans, but, Flak was the one who said that all trees will come underground and be underground.

“How many trees did you plant yesterday?” Flak asked. The commissioner didn’t answer.

“Answer,” Flak hollered.

“Zero,” the commissioner replied, hanging his head down.

“How many did you cut yesterday?”

“Five.”

“Okay, I will do the same thing with you. I will kill five humans daily. Is that okay for you?”

“No,” the commissioner said and took out his gun.

“Sir, your weapons don‘t do anything to me.”

“I’m not going to hurt you, I am gonna shoot the trees,” he said, pointing the gun towards me. I cannot move, I couldn’t talk. So, it was up to Flak.

“No, stop. Don’t do that,” Flak said. I bet that he was not afraid.

“Then listen to me. Pack up all your trees and come to the above world,” the commissioner said.

Then, Flak started laughing. “Then you will use them for your sake.”

*****

The man never wished anything for himself. His only wish was that our race should not get extinct. I really loved him. Though I couldn’t talk, he was my best friend. I gave him shade and he gave me water and food. I was stupefied when I knew he was killed.

*****

“What’s the matter about that? They are born for our use,” the commissioner said which angered Flak very much. What he did was really wonderful.

He gave life to every tree over there and I was able to talk.

“How could you use us?” a tree asked.

“We are already on the verge of extinction,” another tree said.

I didn’t know what to say. So, I remained quiet. Then I realised. I could move. I moved towards the commissioner, who still had the gun in his hands and whispered, “Flak has completely no mercy. Go up and start planting your trees.”

“Will you guys come up?” he whispered to me.

“We work under his orders,” I replied.

But, this time Flak heard it.

“Hey, Greens. Come here,” he said. I moved my roots in the direction he was standing.

“Yes, master,” I said.

“I think from now on, you should lead this pack,” Flak said. I was rejoiced. He never lies.

“But, why? We love you so much,” I said.

“The dragon warrior has called me. He is expecting something big to come,” Flak said.

The dragon warrior, he is another guy from dragon planet. He has a key chain which can change into anything. I thought he was forming a team. After some time, everybody grew quiet.

*****

The man was shot dead right in front of me. They were rogues. But, I was sure that they were sent by someone. And all these things are happening for him. My friend never wanted didn’t revenge.a

*****

The commissioner immediately called the media. He gave a talk to them.

“From today onwards, everyone should plant a tree every day,” the commissioner said in between the camera flashes.

“But, why, sir?” a guy asked.

“We have cut trees and they are on the verge of extinction. We are having no rainy season because we don’t have trees. Global warming is also increasing,” the commissioner said and got into his car. He waved me a goodbye and I waved too, and the press couldn’t believe what they saw. So, I acted in front of them. Then I was sucked underground again.

It was the first death anniversary of my friend and the hardworking man.

So, they chose that day for my coronation. The crown was made of twigs. It was the best honour I could get.

*****

Now, if he was present, he would have been the happiest man in the world and hugged me tightly. Oh, how I loved his company! But, this was my time to save the trees and make up for his sacrifice. Flak was the man’s friend and he offered to help.

*****

I prayed that my head wouldn’t catch fire and it didn’t. Flak gave me a slight smile and that was the first time I have seen him smile. Suddenly, he fainted and some other guys with police uniforms came.

I couldn’t bear it and wanted to fight them.

“Uh uh,” the police officer said, taunting me. He was a handsome guy. But, it didn’t matter.

They caged Flak and lifted him. They approached their car and threw the cage on the front seat. I wanted to see him smile again. We were standing helpless.

They had arrested him for completely no reason.









September 19, 2020 02:47

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723 comments

14:15 Dec 08, 2020

Wow! Very good story; I love your writing style!! <3 I love how the MC was a tree, and your ending was awesoeme!

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The Cold Ice
17:54 Dec 15, 2020

Thank you so much

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Fern M.
21:41 Nov 25, 2020

𝐻𝑒𝓎

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The Cold Ice
16:36 Nov 26, 2020

Wyd

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Fern M.
07:15 Nov 16, 2020

Hi!

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The Cold Ice
08:02 Nov 16, 2020

Hey

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21:50 Nov 10, 2020

I upvoted you to 1474 points! Hope you enjoy -Lemon

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The Cold Ice
03:30 Nov 11, 2020

Thanks.Ya I enjoy it.So much.

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The Cold Ice
03:30 Nov 11, 2020

I will also upvote you

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05:00 Nov 11, 2020

Thanks

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The Cold Ice
05:24 Nov 11, 2020

Umm we Can became friends

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03:42 Nov 12, 2020

Oki! :>

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The Cold Ice
05:59 Nov 12, 2020

Hi

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The Cold Ice
05:44 Nov 20, 2020

Hi

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21:43 Nov 10, 2020

Hi, this story was super interesting! I just read ur bio and I feel so bad that people would try to take points away from someone :( Some people on here really suck.... I'll go on a small upvoting spree for you, rn ur at 1314 I'll update you later! -Lemon

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The Cold Ice
03:29 Nov 11, 2020

Thanks

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Bianka Nova
21:00 Nov 05, 2020

I guess we all agree that making your main character a tree was a great idea! Keep up the good work! :)

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The Cold Ice
03:32 Nov 06, 2020

Thank you so much.

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Skyler Grey
16:45 Nov 05, 2020

This is a really cool story. I love your characters, especially the tree. It was very unexpected for the main character to really be a tree!

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The Cold Ice
03:34 Nov 06, 2020

Thanks.(would you mind liking my story)

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00:46 Nov 05, 2020

Wonderful piece.

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The Cold Ice
03:07 Nov 05, 2020

Thanks.(please like my story

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The Cold Ice
05:47 Nov 20, 2020

Hey are you Aerin

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Sia S
05:44 Oct 28, 2020

Nice twist of the tree! Good job!

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The Cold Ice
05:44 Oct 28, 2020

Thanks.

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Autumn Williams
20:35 Oct 26, 2020

Sahittian, I loved this. I read it twice! I was very blown away when you finally reveiled the main character as a tree, and I had to go back and re-read it. I'm sad that they took away Flak, but I'm excited to see what you're going to do with this. Sorry it took me so long. Really though, good job!

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The Cold Ice
04:26 Oct 27, 2020

I am glad you loved this.Thanks. Yes. It’s ok.Thanks for reading.

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The Cold Ice
07:15 Nov 23, 2020

Hi

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B. W.
20:22 Oct 24, 2020

I made a new story, could you check out 'A strange night' and leave some feedback?

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The Cold Ice
10:20 Oct 25, 2020

Sure.

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B. W.
16:01 Oct 25, 2020

thanks ^^

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The Cold Ice
17:17 Oct 25, 2020

Welcome.

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B. W.
17:51 Oct 25, 2020

:)

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The Cold Ice
04:17 Oct 26, 2020

:)

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Laiba M
15:00 Oct 23, 2020

I love the story! The end was great and added a lot to the story~ There are some grammar issues, but those are easily fixed with grammar editors :) Great job!

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The Cold Ice
04:13 Oct 24, 2020

I am glad you loved my story.Thanks.I will work on it. Keep writing.

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Laiba M
13:16 Oct 24, 2020

No problem! You keep writing as well :)

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The Cold Ice
13:46 Oct 24, 2020

You also Keep writing ✍️

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B. W.
21:41 Oct 22, 2020

10/10 :)

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The Cold Ice
02:18 Oct 23, 2020

Thanks.(would you mind liking my story)

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B. W.
02:28 Oct 23, 2020

i think i already did?

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The Cold Ice
04:30 Oct 23, 2020

But you didn’t .Please like my story.

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B. W.
04:32 Oct 23, 2020

alright alright i will

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The Cold Ice
05:09 Oct 23, 2020

Thanks for the score.

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Tina Laing
01:21 Oct 11, 2020

Very nice story

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The Cold Ice
04:59 Oct 11, 2020

Thank you.(would you mind liking my story) Would you mind reading my story “The dragon warrior part 2?”

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Rose CG
19:00 Sep 27, 2020

Interesting plot. I like the tree characters. Nice basic story. Some parts are a bit confusing, but I understood most of the storyline. Take care and keep writing ~Rose

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The Cold Ice
02:14 Sep 28, 2020

Thanks.I am glad you liked the tree characters.Thank you for reading. Keep writing.

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Autumn Renee
18:35 Sep 26, 2020

Hey, Sahitthian! Just finished your story. I had to read it twice when I realized the main character was a tree. It was a brilliant concept. I also enjoyed the way you wrote it, putting specific memories or flashbacks in different font. It was a pleasure to read, and it is very asthetically pleasing to look at. Good job!

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The Cold Ice
03:14 Sep 27, 2020

Thank you so much.

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Autumn Renee
15:26 Sep 27, 2020

It was my pleasure! I don't know what happened to my profile, but someone in charge of this forum took down my story and all of the comments, also they took away all of the authors who were following me, and the authors I was following, erased my bio, and took all of my karma points. I didn't unfollow you, they did that. I tried to re-follow you but the site won't let me. I'm waiting on a response from the team. I don't even know if you noticed, but I just wanted to let you know that as long as they let me, I will support you. I think you ha...

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The Cold Ice
15:51 Sep 27, 2020

Oh,This is really bad.Thanks.

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The Cold Ice
05:10 Nov 07, 2020

Hi

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05:45 Nov 20, 2020

Hi

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Jane Andrews
20:48 Sep 24, 2020

Hi Sahitthian. Thanks for asking me to read your story. I enjoyed the unusual perspective and I think you made some valid points about how we should care for our environment. I like the way you also allude to your Dragon Warrior story - it’s sometimes good to mention other characters we know in passing as you then provide a link between different stories. Overall, well done - and keep writing.

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The Cold Ice
03:46 Sep 25, 2020

I am glad you enjoyed the unusual perspective . Yes,some valid points about how we should care for our environment.Thank you for reading. Keep writing.

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The Cold Ice
09:26 Sep 25, 2020

(Would you mind liking my story)

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09:22 Sep 24, 2020

Very good. Nice story wih a social outlook. You can still improve a lot. You will improve. Keep writing.

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The Cold Ice
09:25 Sep 24, 2020

Thanks.I will improve.Thank you for reading.

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Orenda .
07:11 Sep 19, 2020

dude, this was so impressive. A man, raging with fire, was sitting on a throne made up of twigs. I wondered how the twigs were not burned, because he was covered in fire. this para was really innovative and I love how the trees turned out as the narrator, so creative! i love how both of you brothers excel at writing:)) keep writing!

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The Cold Ice
07:28 Sep 19, 2020

Thanks! Thank you again! Thank you for reading!

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Orenda .
08:18 Sep 19, 2020

he he no problemmm

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The Cold Ice
08:27 Sep 19, 2020

Ha ha

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The Cold Ice
05:03 Nov 18, 2020

Hi

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Orenda .
05:09 Nov 18, 2020

hey

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The Cold Ice
03:29 Nov 19, 2020

Hi wyd

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