Finally, after three horrid hours of that AJR, we crossed into Nevada.ย
The highway twisted through a canyon with the Truckee River on one side.
Miles tapped his hands on the wheel, in sync with the pitchy trumpets. He hummed along.ย
โSo, ex-god.โ Cailen said. โWhere to?โ
โI donโt know.โ I said.ย
She had been in a much better mood since Fairfield. They wouldnโt tell me what had happened, I could only see what was visible from the car.
โWe could go find H-โ Miles started.
โNo!โ Cai said. โI will not go to her for help.โ
โCai, please. I havenโt been able to make the trip up and see her for months.โ
โI will not see her.โ
โThen wait in the car! We need her help. She knows Reno better than we do.โ
Cai sighed.
โWait, who?โ I felt like I was missing something. I always felt like I was missing something.
I hated that feeling.
โNo one.โ Cai said, at the same time Miles said, โA friend of mine.โ
I sighed.
โCanโt wait to meet her.โ I said.
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We rolled into a cul de sac. All the houses looked the same, other than that they were painted different colors.
Miles parked in front of a gray house with white trim.
โCome on, Loki. If Cai doesnโt want to come.โ
She rolled her eyes and pulled out a book.
โFine, then.โ And we walked towards the house.
I had to do a double take when the young woman opened the door.
I may have even uttered a small โWhoa.โ
She looked exactly like Miles, except for her eyes. One of them was green, and the other was blue. Her hair was the same ginger orange, but had bleached tips. They had the same nose, same smile, same glimmer in their eyes, same freckles. They even looked the same age.
โMiles!โ The girl said, and rushed forward to give him a hug.
โHey, Hunter.โ He said, giving her a hug.
She saw me. I had tried to look as inconspicuous as possible. My hands were in my pockets, and I was trying to make it look like I was staring at the sky.
โWho is this, primo?โ
โAh. This is Loki. Loki, meet my cousin, Hunter Gil-Aguilar, daughter of Hades.โ
โHow does that family tree work?โ I blurted. Darn this impulsive mortal mouth!
Hunter laughed. โMilesโ dad is Apollo. His mom is my momโs sister. Hades is my dad. Not that difficult, if you think about it that way.โ
โOh.โ
โMiles, you stopped by just in time. Iโm leaving tomorrow.โ
โWait, where are you going?โ Miles looked confused.
โYou didnโt hear?โ
โHear what?โ
She sighed. โYou better come inside. I see Cai out in the car, tell her to come in as well.โ
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โYouโre going to be a Hunter?!โ Miles said, his eyes wide.
โA Hunter named Hunter?โ I said, and Cai rolled her eyes.
โYeah, Miles. Itโs my destiny. Tomorrow theyโll be here, then Iโll accept immortality and join the Hunt.โ
โSo what is the Hunt?โ I asked. โI didnโt pay close attention to other pantheons when I was a god.โ
Cailen spoke for the first time since the car. โArtemis, or Diana for Romans, is the goddess of the Hunt, and the Moon. She has a group of maiden hunters called the Hunters of Artemis, or Diana, whichever you prefer. Members of the Hunters have to swear off romantic love forever, but in return they get to travel the country and hunt monsters. Oh, and immortality. Unless they die in battle.โ
โExactly.โ Hunter said.
โWhy now?โ Miles asked.
โI couldn'tโฆgo through heartbreak again.โ She looked to the ground.
Cai blushed and looked at the ground.
My godly senses perked up.
Why did Cai blush and look at the ground when Hunter said that?
I narrowed my eyes. โCai-โ
โAnyway.โ Miles said, his eyes glancing from me to Hunter to Cai. โCan you give us directions? A god spoke in Lokiโs head, said to come here, to Reno. But we donโt know where in Reno. Any mythological hotspots?โ
โWell...I have been meaning to check out Peavine Peak lately. Somethingโs up. Random fires have been starting all week. Clouds swirl around the peak.โ
โWell, then, let's make it a last hurrah before you join the Hunters.โ
She sighed. โLet me get my weapons. Get the car started.โ
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โWhy did you not want to see her?โ I asked when Cai, Miles, and I were in the car.
โNo reason. Stay out of it, Doyle.โ
She was telling me to stay out of it? I was an (ex) god. We didnโt stay out of things. How absurd.
Before I could say anything, Hunter climbed in the backseat with Cai. Cai turned, and pretended to look out the window.
Something had to give.
We pulled on the interstate, all of us quiet.
โLook.โ Hunter pointed.ย
There was a mountain to our left. The peak had clouds swirling around it, but they werenโt regular clouds; they were dark grey.
โWhat theโฆโ I said.
โI know.โ Hunter said. โSomethingโs happening up there.โ
Lightning flashed in the distance.
โThis wonโt be good.โ I said.
We rolled up onto a gravel road, northwest of the city. Miles stopped the car.
โIf we throw out the axle, weโre screwed. Therefore, we will hike the rest of the way.โ
Cai and I groaned.
Hunter just hopped out of the car and grabbed her weapons. Maybe she was hyping herself up for all the hiking she would do with the Hunters.
I studied her weapons. She had a sword, and that was it.ย
โYouโre not starting to practice with a bow?โ Miles asked, shouldering his.
โNah. I donโt have a bow. I doubt Iโll be much good at it, anyway.โ
โIโll help you get the hang of it.โ Miles said. What a helpful little son of Apollo.
โThanks, cuz.โ Hunter looked at the summit of the mountain. โWeโve got a hike ahead of us.โ
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Curse this mortal body!
Had I been a god, I would have teleported to the top. Or transformed into a wolf, or an eagle!
But no. I had to drag myself up on these feeble noodle legs, tripping and cursing like a fool.
โAre we there yet?โ I complained.
โLoki, does it look like weโre at the top of a mountain?โ Cai said.
I muttered some curses in old Norse.
โWatch your mouth.โ Miles said.
I turned to look at him. โYou understand old Norse?โ
โYep. I learned it a few years ago, because I knew there were Roman demigods. If they existed, why wouldnโt Norse demigods exist?โ
Fair.
I sighed, wishing my crush would cease to exist, and kept climbing.
Finally, my legs feeling like the weak noodles they were, we reached the summit.
โWhoa.โ Cai said.
The whole city spread out below us. You could see the towers of the Row, and all the other various casinos in Reno. I tried to imagine what it would be like at nightime, when there were lights. Then I decided I wouldnโt want to be here at nightime, because the collegeโs mascot was Wolf Pack for a reason.
We turned. The grey clouds had started to spin faster, surrounding the very top peak. Antenna and a radio station were caught in the middle.
โAre there mortals in there?โ Cai wondered aloud, as we all drew out weapons.
โI guess weโll find out.โ I said, and we walked towards the building.
The clouds didnโt act like a barrier, so we just walked in, weapons drawn.
Luckily, there didnโt seem to be any mortals. Just blinking lights on the control boxes.
As we made our way down a hallway, Hunter motioned with her head. Someone in here.
We all peaked in, and it was a blonde lady, with blue eyes, wearing a dress.
The hard thing about the dress is that it looked black, but then the color would shift to blood red and then back again.
She was not mortal, I decided that.
She noticed us, and turned her head.
Miles jumped backwards five feet. Cai went pale, and Hunterโs eyes widened.
The other half of the woman's face, scratch that, body, was a skeleton.ย
She grinned and gestured to us to come inside the sound booth. I went first, because I knew who it was.
โHel.โ I said.
โDad!โ She said. โYouโre looking...young.โ
โYou wouldnโt be the first to tell me that.โ
She looked at my companions, then zeroed in on Hunter.ย
โYou,โ She said. โYou are a child of death?โ
Hunter nodded. โDaughter of Hades, uh, maโam.โ
Hel smiled. โYou can call me Hel, or Lady Hel.โ
Cailen gulped.
โI see you are all nervous to be in my presence.โ She said. โBut I will not be taking any of your souls today. I merely come with a warning.โ
She turned to me. โFather, my brother, your son, his bonds are weakening. Soon, he will be unleashed on the world, and Ragnarok will begin, and we will all die.โ
โWait, who?โ Cailen tightened her grip on Tide.
โHe knows well that you are coming to stop him.โ Hel continued. โAnd he will eat anyone who tries to bind him again. You included. You must cage him again, but survive. That will be the way back to your godhood.โ
โLoki, who is she talking about? What do we have to do?โ
I swallowed hard.ย
โShe means we must find my son, whose bonds are weakening.
โWe must bind the Fenris Wolf.โ
End of Part Five.
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Link to Miles and Hunter together (photo): https://picrew.me/image_maker/399481/complete?cd=GVIjQIDjia Link to Hunter character design (photo): https://picrew.me/share?cd=j8KpzjQAZW So, whats the tea between Hunter and Cai? heres an image describing it! https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Fnewfastuff.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2019%2F07%2FGrKDWNS.png&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fnewfastuff.com%2Fmeme-generator%2Fwouldnt-you-like-to-know-weather%2F&tbnid=udSGuQFv1qHpoM&vet=12ahUKEwjoz4rw0pnwAhXLn-AKHSvaB0IQMygCegUIARCYAQ..i&docid...
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Hello!
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hola!
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How are you!? I'm trying to start random conversations! LOL!
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OOOHHHHH!!!!! OMB It's just like what Magnus had to do!!!!๐ฒ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ OMB I CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 6!!! I've actually climbed up like, half a mountain, but in AZ, so I feel you, Doyle! I like the way you introduced Hel, and Loki's quest!!!! That was really cool!
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Thank you so so much! I've never climbed a mountain, but I live near a lot of them. Thank you thank you!
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Of Course!!! ๐ค๐ค๐ค I don't live near any, but when I go camping, we always have to hike.๐ When I was in AZ, I hiked like, halfway up one, but we didn't go to the peak๐ it was only like, a three mile walk ๐ But yeah, you got the feeling right๐๐๐ camping/hiking songs always make it SOOO much better ๐๐๐
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I camp a lot, and I mountain bike 6 miles to school and back every day, i just pulled the feeling from that XD We have a lot of campgrounds near us (we live close to a national forest). I've never sang a campfire song, though. My aunt and uncle like to go to yosemite (its a 7 hour drive from where i live). Luckily, we live in some pretty scenery and (aside from the nasty fire season & scariness of wildfires) its really nice
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๐๐NICE!!! I wish, but we only have hills here. XD Ooh! Maybe we'll have to come camp there sometime! I've actually gone to Yosemite once and we tent-camped with another family last summer, and are coming out west again! XD Seven-hour drives are never fun, unless you get to stop every five minutes to get away from your carmates! XD I love the scenery out west!!! Yeah, when we went, lots of places had extreme wildfire warnings, so... :/ We could TOTALLY come to one of the campgrounds! If you have any suggestions... {wink, wink} I do have quit...
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haha, hills are cool XD XD, only child perks. Headphones go on, book comes out, and i'm in my car ride happy place. I don't want to be too location specific, because privacy, but the tahoe national forest has a loooot of nice ones! (if you don't mind 30ish degree nights)
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XDXD lol that's cool, tho!!! Well... glasses can become contacts, right?! you would totally fit the part!!! [btw... I started a new comment thread bc that one was getting reaaaalllllllyyyyy loooooooooooonnnnnnnggggg XD]
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(yeah, XDD) yeah, i guess! or i could just stumble around blindly during filming XD
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XDXD That wouldn't be too out of character, would it?!?! XDXD
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:0 XDXDXD True
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:DDD Chapter 15 is out on this account, if you were wondering ๐ ๐๐
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ohhhhhhhh ok! Awesome!
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I challenge you, Doyle!!! ๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐กโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ โ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐กโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ
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๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก i've got to tie up a stupid wolf first
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Hey Lina! I laughed out loud several times. I love this series SOO MUCH! My favorite lines: -โHow does that family tree work?โ I blurted. Darn this impulsive mortal mouth! -โA Hunter named Hunter?โ I said, and Cai rolled her eyes. -She was telling me to stay out of it? I was an (ex) god. We didnโt stay out of things. How absurd. -โAre we there yet?โ I complained. โLoki, does it look like weโre at the top of a mountain?โ Cai said. A single critique: -Me and Cai groaned. I think you meant "Cai and I groaned."
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haha, thanks! i'm glad! oooh, i'll fix that. thank you!!
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and predictions for what happened between Hunter and Cai?
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Hey Lina! I'm writing a story that I don't think I'm putting on Reedsy, but would really love your opinion! I would also appreciate feedback. :) Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/109W9Fd1cFJ6l5jLGoz2S6FslbAB14qb_UK2W3we38AE/edit?usp=sharing
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i'll check it out!
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the tree puns i'm dying
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Lol I'm glad you like them! I had so much fun writing that part! :)
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Its sooooo good!
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Thanks- I really appreciate it! Just curious- what's your favorite part?
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totally the tree puns! they were so awesome!
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Lina this was amazing! You nail the humor in here, and I felt like you didnโt rush or force the introduction of Lokiโs quest. Canโt wait for part 6! :D
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Thank you so much!
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I find it funny that there is already a Hunter named Hunter in the books. (She appears in The Dark Prophecy; she's one of the people Commodus had imprisoned.) I'm getting extreme ex vibes between Cai and Hunter. There. That's my theory. Cai and Hunter were a thing, but Cai broke up with her. Either that, or Hunter liked Cai, but Cai didn't like her back. Ooh, Fenris Wolf! This whole quest such a great idea. Lightly hilarious and enjoyable to read. I can't wait for the next part! My only critique is that you sometimes have dialogue that ends...
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I guess i did my job well if you're getting those vibes ๐ Thank you so much! Ohhhhhh, i did not know that! I will totally try to remember that, tysm!!
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So I was right??? No problem!
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Yes! :D
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Yay!
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Empathy buddies :DD
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:DD
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:) *gasp* Sokeefe or Sophitz?
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SOKEEFE all the way its funny when i first read your comment i thought it said "Empty Buddies" and i was so confused XD what about you? Sokeefe or Sofitz?
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XDDD :P Sokeefe for lifeeeeeee
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:) *gasp* Sokeefe or Sophitz?
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PART 1 OF MY NEW REEDSYCAST IS UP! GO CHECK IT OUT! It's a lil different than what I'm used to but STILL ITS SO COOL GO SEE IT.
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OK
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hey carolina, hydrokinesis is still taken. You dont have to take the form again, just asking to choose another one :)
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oh uhhhhhh is Pyrokinesis taken?
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yes, unfortunetely. Atmokinesis, Elektrokinesis, Gravitakinesis, and Geokinesis are available tho
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wait not elektro sorry
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darn! uh, well...geo i guess? XDDDD
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darn! uh, well...geo i guess? XDDDD
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you got it! :)
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Hey Carolina- about the form you filled out for my reedsycast, all other Amator spots are taken. You can choose to be an Imperium (we need more of those), a Neutral, or a side mention. Also, hydrokinesis is taken (a list of those taken is in parenthesis in the question on the form)- and I can do the bigender, just please correct me f I use the wrong pronouns :) don't worry, you won't be the only one Link to adjust kinesis and character side: https://forms.gle/EVB113ktSeorhgBB9
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oh, sorry abbie! awesome! i'll go retake that right now!
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tyy!
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How do you write so awesome? so awesome that I can't say just awesome so I'm saying awesome awesome, like it's so awesome! eh....
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:D thank you so much!
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