Follow Your Dreams (Part Two)

Submitted into Contest #58 in response to: Write a story where the power goes out on a spaceship or submarine.... view prompt

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Science Fiction Drama

Alissa Robertson was in her space-shuttle, nervously piloting her ship to the moon. Her hands were sweaty, and she was wondering if she could make the three day trip. She would have co-pilots, of course, managing from the ground when taking her naps, but she was always wondering what would happen if she would suddenly fall asleep or faint.


Alissa communicated with the people, occasionally just asking if she was on the right track. Her ship was meticulously planned to meet the moon at just the right time.


She concentrated on remembering her training. It was hard, because there were so many switches and levers she could press. One wrong move, and her oxygen levels would drop or the emergency abort system would be activated. 


Alissa knew the dangers of flying. She also knew it was a low chance of her making it back. But she took the chance. It was the opportunity of a lifetime. It was her dream.


So far, it was smooth sailing. No bumps or obstacles yet. But, she knew no space ship had ever gone to the moon and back without problems. Something wrong was sure to happen.


Alissa also knew that her parents and other friends were watching her on television. In tiny corners of her spaceship, there were cameras. The television channels were occasionally switching angles, seeing all what Alissa was doing.


She knew they were watching her, but she ignored it. She stopped her brain from thinking about all the pressure that was on her.


“Hey guys. Everything okay?” Alissa asked into her microphone headset.


“Everything’s fine, Alissa!” The person on the other end answered. “I think every⎯”


Static. 


The lights suddenly went out. There was no noise.


“Hello?” Alissa asked. “Is anybody there?”


Static. No answer.


Alissa stopped her brain from having a panic attack. Keep calm. She thought. You got this.


Her spaceship was still running, because it was run on gas. Her power, however, was blocked or disconnected. 


Deep breaths. Deep breaths. You got this.


She could still pilot the ship on her own; she wouldn’t be able to communicate with the people on earth. She would have to do it all by herself with absolutely no help from earth.


I can do this.


She also knew that it would be hard to pilot in the dark. She had all the levers memorized, but it was still complicated.


You trained for this.


First, Alissa made sure the power was really and truly cut. She made sure it wasn’t a problem that she had made for herself. 


Nothing. It was all an antenna issue, or some weird connection.


She made sure nothing else was wrong with the ship; checking the fuel levels, and looking at the engine. There weren’t any problems.


Now, she checked her course. She was right on track, heading straight for the moon. No obstacles were blocking her way.


Now, she needed to adjust the liquid hydrogen levels, as the atmosphere was getting thinner and thinner. She pushed the right levers, and made sure it was at the correct level.


Okay. That’s done.


The rest of the trip should be smooth, unless something else comes up. Hopefully nothing else happens.


Alissa had a habit of talking to herself, so she started to do it now.


“Let’s see, the liquid hydrogen levels are set. Nothing else is in the way now, I think.”


Suddenly, she heard something else in her headset.


“Alissa!” The person on the other side exclaimed. “We are trying to get you connected to us again! Somethings wrong with the ship! Abort now! I repeat, abo⎯”


Static.


Alissa gasped. What was wrong with the ship? All of her levels were normal, at least, from what she could tell. She checked and rechecked. Nothing was amiss.


What should I do? Abort?


No. She had worked too hard on this mission to abort. She couldn’t just leave. Walk off. Do nothing about it.


She checked all the levels on her screen. Everything looked normal.


What should I do?


Her hand floated near the abort button, but she quickly snatched it back.


No. NO. You got this.


“I got this.” She said, talking to herself. “Just remember your training.”


She took a deep breath, then focused on getting to the moon. She adjusted the ship, because it was veering off course. 


She looked at the levels on her screen again.


Wait. Wait.


Her oxygen level needle was stuck in the same position as it was a few minutes earlier when she checked it. It should have risen or fallen.


She checked her heart pulse. It was beating slightly faster than normal.


Alissa realized her head kind-of hurt. 


Uh oh. People can die from lack of oxygen. Alissa thought. 


But wait. If I could find out the problem, maybe it will adjust back to normal.


Alissa decided on that thought. She would try to fix it.


First, she tried to remember when her head started hurting. How much time until she passed out? She couldn’t recollect when.


Then, she tried to adjust the oxygen level. No luck. The needle stayed exactly where it was.


She sighed. She would have to leave her seat, and go back to where the oxygen tank was. It was not that far, but she would have to be careful not to disconnect any major wires. Also, she had to do it in the dark.


She got up, took off her headset, and slowly walked toward toward the door. She opened the door that said:


DANGER! DO NOT OPEN UNLESS ABSOLUTELY NECESSARY.


Well, I guess it’s absolutely necessary.


She opened the door and saw all the wires and stuff that she had to get through. Her eyes had adjusted to the faint light around the tanks.


You can do this.


She got to the tank and carefully fiddled around with it. She made sure all the wires were connected. They were.


She looked around the tank and checked to see if anything was blocking the tank. Nothing. There was absolutely nothing wrong!


Alissa cursed under her breath. What was she missing?


Wait. Wait.


She looked at the front of the tank. The tank had a needle that showed how much oxygen was in the tank. Alissa gasped.


The tank was empty.

September 11, 2020 23:46

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Sunny 🌼
20:03 Sep 12, 2020

Ooooooo~ nice! That was a really nice cliffhanger, can't wait for part two!

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Avery G.
20:08 Sep 12, 2020

Thank you so much!!!!

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Megan Sutherland
17:47 Sep 12, 2020

Oh My Gosh AVERYYYYYY WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEE This was so amazing! I loved the fast paced storyline and how short and sweet it was. Part 3 better be out soon!!! You're torturing me! 🤣🤣🤣

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Avery G.
18:51 Sep 12, 2020

Thank you so much! I know, I know! I will get a part three out once a good prompt comes up!!!

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Megan Sutherland
21:14 Sep 12, 2020

Okayyyy! :) :) :)

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Avery G.
21:44 Sep 12, 2020

:):):)

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Yolanda Wu
06:46 Sep 12, 2020

Oh no that cliffhanger, how dare you! This was such a wonderful story, and you wrote Alissa's nervousness so well. Your descriptions throughout were to the point and effective, you captured the panicky atmosphere so brilliantly. Right from the first sentence you grabbed my attention and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Alissa was such a well-written character, her internal dialogue was extremely relatable. Would love to know what happened afterwards. :) If you have the time, I would love to hear your feedback on a story of min...

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Avery G.
18:49 Sep 12, 2020

Thank you so much! I would love to check out your stories!

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Jade Young
00:04 Sep 12, 2020

Omisoul, love it. From beginning to end, it was so relatable, from her panicking to her self-reassurance, and how hearing scary news from other people makes you panic more. You perfectly described everything to the point where I was taken on a roller coaster of emotions while reading this. I think you did a fantastic job. This is going in my list of favourite stories on the site. I can't wait to read more from you ;)

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Avery G.
00:05 Sep 12, 2020

Aww, thank you so much!

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B. W.
23:55 Sep 11, 2020

Okay i liked it and ya did a great job with it :) i honestly don't know much about space so i'm not sure if you got anything wrong or anything, maybe some one else will tell you. I also really liked the ending for it, are you maybe gonna make a part 3 for it later on? and imma give this a 10/10 :)

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Akshara P
08:09 Dec 25, 2021

WHY THAT CLIFFHANGER AVERY?! Part two better come soon!! :) Do you mind giving my new story a read when you have the time? Thanks. ❤

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B. W.
17:52 Jul 10, 2021

Hey

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Arwen Dove
06:33 May 06, 2021

Brilliant story!

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B. W.
04:54 Mar 09, 2021

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Aman Fatima
17:54 Mar 07, 2021

i came here after i read part 1. Part 2 is amazing!!!:)

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03:14 Feb 02, 2021

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Megan Sutherland
03:36 Dec 26, 2020

Hiiiii Averyyyyyyy I just submitted a few new stories... would you mind reading them? MERRY CHRISTMAS REEDSY BESTIE -Megan S.

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04:37 Dec 22, 2020

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23:34 Dec 18, 2020

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13:32 Dec 15, 2020

NEW STORY OUT SO SORRY I DIDN'T TELL YOU SOONER!!!

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Avery G.
15:11 Dec 15, 2020

YESSS I'LL CHECK IT OUT! IT'S OKAY

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22:01 Dec 11, 2020

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