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Adventure Fantasy Urban Fantasy

As I’m sliding on the snow, swerving between trees and hoping the mountains towering above me doesn’t decide to shed more pebbles on my helmet, I can’t help but panic.

Not because I’m skiing. No, I’m experienced enough in it that I’m all the way in Colorado for a skiing tournament—which starts in two hours.

Hence the freak out.

To clear my head before the final race, I’d decided to check out the area by grabbing my equipment and going out alone. The trail is completely empty, the sky a crystal blue, and I try to concentrate on the scenery racing by.

But then a sound echoes around me—shhhhhkkboom.

My eyes go wide and fix on a mountain far too close for comfort. Snow is raining down, like an avalanche, but it doesn’t look like a normal avalanche—

“Arrrrgh!”

The next thing I know I’m slamming into the snow, toppling head over skis as the noise sizzles to a stop. Rule number one of skiing (and most sports, honestly): don’t take your eyes off the ground. I must have tripped over a rock and now I’m…falling on a girl

“Ahh!” she helps, pushing herself away for me in the snow.

“S-sorry,” I sputter, my head spinning. I glance around me. The snow had cushioned my fall, and the mountains are quiet again. “I, uh, didn’t see you there.”

“It’s…okay,” she says, standing up.

The first red flag is her arms—which aren’t covered. She’s wearing a tank top in below freezing weather? How is she not an ice cube?

I look at the rest of the girl’s outfit. She’s really pretty, with her wide ice blue eyes and full lips. She looks to be a bit older than me, maybe seventeen. She has skin so pale it’s almost the color of the snow, and her hair is literally white. It seems to glow from where it’s shoved into a messy bun, almost incandescent as the spare hair strands catch all the colors of the rainbow. She has a shimmery white crop top on, and what look like the most jazzed-up ice blue sweatpants on that looks like it’s sewn with crystals. She has silver earrings to match her silver belt and boots.

The second red flag is that now that I’m regaining my senses again, I’m pretty sure I didn’t see her in the middle of the trail because she wasn’t there.

She offers me a hand and I take it, managing to stand up then look her dead in the eyes. “How did you just appear here?”

“What do you mean?”

Great. Now she’s gaslighting me. Or maybe I hit my head too hard.

“You weren’t there. Just snow was there. Unless you randomly kept in front of me, or you were buried under the snow, or, like, you were the snow…”

I’m rattling off fictional possibilities when the same sound from earlier draws my attention back to the mountains—shhhhkBOOM!

I watch snow topple down the mountainside. I’ve seen enough small avalanches while skiing, and this one is far away enough that we’re safe. But…it doesn’t look like a normal avalanche. All the snow commotion seems to be hiding some sort of moving snow.

Like a giant white figure is tramping through the mountains.

I turn back to the girl, and now her face is even paler than before—is this her reaction to my speculations, or to the not-an-avalanche, or both? Either way…

“Who are you and what’s going on?”

“I’m Ciara,” she says, eyes still on the mountain. “You can call me Cee.”

I laugh. “No way! I’m Conan, and you can call me Cee.”

“How’d you get Cee from Conan?”

I don’t answer that because now I’m realizing she still hasn't answered my second question. “Okay, that’s not what we’re talking about. Sorry for crashing into you and all, but you look fine and—gah, how are you not cold?”

She turns back to me, her lips playing into a smile as she reaches up to rub her bare arms. “Uh, high cold tolerance?”

“You’re not playing this off very well,” I say, gaining confidence. “Something is up and I want to know.”

“Yeesh, slow down, Mr Cee,” she says. She throws a look back to the mountains behind me, curling her fingers like she’s anxious to get going. Something is definitely up.

“No no no. I’d like to know how you’re the first person I’ve crashed into, thanks.”

Now she seems to be actually considering it, her hands fidgeting more. She carefully looks both ways, like she’s hesitant—or nervous. “So your theories?” she finally says.

“You jumped in front of me from absolutely nowhere, you were buried under the snow, or you were the snow,” I repeat.

“The last one is correct.”

What?” 

Her body disintegrates into snowflakes until where Ciara was just standing is just more snow.

I scream.

And then suddenly she’s back as a human (if she even is a human—I’m so confused at this point), clamping a cold hand over my mouth, which I hope doesn’t make me break out in blush. Why is she so otherworldly pretty?

“Shhhh!” she whisper-yells. “He’s going to hear you!”

“Who is?” I say, but as I watch her eyes go back to the mountains behind me, I get it. “So those definitely aren’t normal avalanches.”

“That’s a frost giant, and he’s on the move,” Ciara says, then sighs at herself. “Ugh, I guess I’m telling you everything. Oh, and I’m an ice spirit.”

“You’re a what?”

“Did you or did you not just see me transform into snow?”

I self-consciously reach up and ruffle my wild black curls. “I mean, I dunno, do something all ice-spirit-y!”

“I can’t,” she says, a shiver creeping into her voice, “since that frost giant just stole my magic!”

“But you just turned into snow.”

She sighs again. “Okay, dude. We’re running out of time, but— I can always turn into snow. My usual magic includes more snow and water manipulation, and I’m normally really strong, and—well, like all ice spirits, I get all of those powers from a magic crystal that’s usually right here.” 

She fingers a golden thread necklace around her neck. Now that I look closer, it definitely looks like a pendant was yanked off.

“So…the frost giant took your magic? Can he even use the magic?” 

“If he piles up enough stolen crystals, he can transfer the magic to himself, yes,” Ciara says. “And I was tracking him down to get it back, until you smashed into me as I was hiding as snow.”

I feel red creep up my tan skin. “Uh, sorry about that.”

“It’s not your fault, but I’ve really got to go,” she says.

Suddenly I can’t bear the thought of her leaving. I mean, ice spirits? Frost giants? Magic crystals and pretty people? Sign me up!

“Can I help?” I offer.

She looks at me dead in the eyes. I resist the urge to look away. “Really? Because god, yes. The frost giant will probably sense me before I get too close, and I can’t steal my jewel back while transformed into snow.”

“Yeah,” I say, grinning. “Yeah, I can help. I have, like, ninety minutes until my ski tournament, so…”

“Lovely,” she mutters. “Only ninety minutes?”

“Can…I…still help?”

She manages a smile at me. “Of course. But we should probably get moving.”

*

We follow the frost giant for almost half an hour, weaving our way through the mountains wherever we see more falling snow. Once I get closer, I can clearly see a hulking figure causing the mini avalanches. It looks like the monster Elsa created in the movie Frozen. I don’t know.

Ciara turns into snow to slip down the hills faster and I ski to catch up. Finally we end up at a cave hollowed out in the rock—a cave Ciara confirms to be the frost giant’s dwelling.

“So what’s the plan?” I say.

“You sneak in and grab the crystal. You’re a human. He can’t smell you.”

I blink. “Yeah, but he can see me, and doesn’t he have magic of his own? I don’t want to die before I win my ski tournament, thanks.”

She rolls her eyes and punches my shoulder. Even through my coat, she’s still strong enough without her magic that ouch. “I’m not going to let anything happen to you, Cee.”

I can’t help but smile more. “Okay, so what’s your actual plan?”

“I’ll distract Frosty over here with my reminding magic. That is, if he doesn’t come out in the next five minutes, because we’ve been standing out way too long.”

“Yeah, he can sense you, I know,” I say. “Should I…just…go in now?”

“Mmhmm. Maybe just to peek at first. Report back.”

“On it.”

I try to steady my nerves, but give up, and go ahead and walk into the cave. It’s kind of dark, but there’s weird skylights carved into the rock above me which provide enough light until I get deeper in the cave. 

I crouch behind a rock and glance at the dead end. Five sapphires are arranged in a circle on the floor, their glow almost reaching me. I can’t find the frost giant, but—

I freeze.

Someone else is here.

It’s…a boy. Around my and Ciara’s age, and also unnaturally pretty. He has glinting white hair that looks straight from an anime, falling over his silvery eyes. He’s wearing a white tank top and more sweatpants, almost like Ciara. 

Are all supernatural creatures this freaking attractive?

I want to go say hi to the guy, but if he’s in a frost giant’s cave, I don’t see how that could be good. So I creep back to Ciara and tell her everything.

“Is that Frosty’s lunch or something?” I wonder.

She laughs and brushes back a spare lock of iridescent white hair. “No. That’s…that is the frost giant.” Her smile melts off. “If he’s back in human form, he’s really close to stealing the magic from the gem permanently. You said there were five crystals, yeah?”

I nod, and she curses. “Oh, just wonderful. We need to hurry. Listen—when you go in the cave, grab the crystal as soon as Frosty’s distracted, then get out FAST.”

“Will do,” I say, and take another step back to the cave.

“And wait, Conan?”

“Yeah?” I turn back to Ciara.

“Be careful,” she emphasizes, and I flash a smile and nod as I enter the cave again.

*

I’m about halfway back down the long length of the cave when Ciara’s distraction starts.

Singing.

Except it sounds more like the Greek myths of sirens, their voices taunting you to drop your guard and be drawn near them like a magnet. 

The cave amplifies her song, and I can’t understand the words, just the tone. I know I shouldn’t stop and listen, but now I wanted to, with every fiber in my being, I wanted to go back to Ciara, I’d do anything for her—

I fight against the urge as much as I can, but all that means is instead of going back to the entrance to the cave, I’m sort of stuck in place. But when I hear heavy footsteps coming my way—now the frost giant is back in his magic form and is being lured outside—I duck behind a rock near the wall.

I watch the hulking shape of snowy limbs go past me and, remembering Ciara’s directions to snag her crystal as soon as the frost giant is distracted, take off running to the end of the cave.

I make it to the place where I'd seen the frost giant boy arranging the crystals. Sure enough, five glinting blue gems, glowing like Ciara’s hair or the frost giant’s eyes, are on the floor in a circle. Frosty must have JUST been about to start some sort of ritual to transfer the magic.

The echoes of Ciara’s siren singing start fading. Not the volume, just the magic. I can still hear her singing, but it’s not a hypnotizing pull anymore. If her magic truly is about to be defeated, I just left her alone with a still-powerful frost giant.

I grab the nearest crystal and slip it in my coat pocket, then hesitate. If a frost giant can absorb the magic from an ice spirit's crystal, why can’t I?

So I snatch another stolen crystal which probably belonged to some spirit back in the day. If they can’t have it, Frosty the not-a-snowman sure can’t.

Then I take off running, and twenty seconds later I’m almost to the entrance of the cave. Except I’m blocked from getting to Ciara by one thing—er, person:

Frosty.

Luckily, he hasn’t even seen me, but unluckily, that’s because his eyes are fixed on Ciara. The ten-food figure is standing in the doorway facing the ice spirit, who’s ice-blue eyes are wide in fright now that she’s pretty much powerless.

But she has two things left: cold resistance and the ability to turn into snow.

And snow can't be killed, so suddenly she transforms to a pile of snowflakes on the mountainside.

But almost a second later she pops back up as a human (er, ice spirit), having caught a glimpse of me right before transforming. Her eyebrows shoot up and she’s probably thinking, THERE’S my backup!

But her very obvious looking at me causes the frost giant to slowly turn. I know I can’t get by him, and I definitely don’t want to be cornered in the cave with stolen items in my pockets. So I do a very, very reckless thing:

“Heads up, Cee!” I shout, and whip the crystal under the frost giant’s legs just as he turns to me.

She catches it and her skin seems to glow brighter. Then her face twists in horror because she seems to re-realize I’m trapped in the cave.

“Conan, get out of there!”

Her words distract Frosty just long enough for me to slip by the bulky figure and tumble onto the snow behind her. Paralyzed on the ground, I watch as Ciara promptly reaches up and yanks the top of the cave down.

Her returned crystal returned her magic too and the whole cave promptly collapses on top of Frosty, sending pebbles and snow raining over me.

Then silence.

I stare at the pile of rock and snow, like the frost giant might burst out of the rubble. Built no, the eerie quiet of the Colorado mountains fills the air.

“Well,” Ciara finally says, her words breaking the silence, “that was…something.”

I look up at her. Both of us are relatively unharmed, and Ciara’s shimmering crystal is hanging between her collarbones again. “Yeah. Yay?”

“Yay,” she confirms, and helps me up. “Thanks.”

“Of course.”

She notices the blue shine from my pocket. “What’s that?”

I shyly take out the second stolen crystal. “Uh, I was sort of hoping I could become and ice spirit too and then—”

I’m cut off by a snort. “Sorry, and it’s a sweet idea, but, uh, you can only use the magic of other creatures if you’re magic yourself. This crystal won’t affect you. It will, however, enhance me.” She plucks the gem from my hand. “Thanks.”

I stare at my empty palms, my heart still pounding hard in my ears from the cave escape. Still, I’d rather be terrified by a frost giant than back to…well, like how I was an hour ago.

Ciara notices my downcast expression. “Sorry, Cee, but you’re stuck human. I can still visit, though.”

My face brightens a little. “Really? Yeah, that sounds good. I might actually be able to leave now.”

“Leave?”

“I’ve still got a ski tournament in…” I check my phone, still tucked in the inside pocket of my jacket. “Fifty-three minutes. Yikes.”

“Oof. you should probably get going,” 

“So, goodbye?”

“Goodbye?” She laughs. “Nah. You did me a big favor. The least I can do is walk you back. And cheer you on.”

“Hmm. Sounds good. I’m currently totally lost, though.”

Ciara seems to remember again I’m just a smol human in the middle of Colorado, having been dragged away from civilization by her. And while she was perfectly warm in her glittering crop top, and probably with some superhuman direction senses as well as strength, I’m…well, cold and confused.

“Ooookay. Now let’s go. You’re not arriving late to your ski thingy because I was busy getting you beat up.”

“I’m here by choice,” I argue.

She just laughs a little again and grabs my arm. “Alright. C’mon. We’ve got an hour's walk ahead of us.”

“Sounds good,” I say as we start walking in what must be the right direction, and this time I’m not even being sarcastic.

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00:47 Jan 22, 2022

YEEHAW I MANAGED TO FINISH THIS IN TIME IF ANYONE’S ACTUALLY READING THIS, IT MEANS THEY PROBABLY READ THE STORY TOO, SO THANK YOU THIS MIGHT HAVE BEEN TRASH BUT IT WAS SURE FUN TO WRITE for anyone wondering yes I stole Cee’s name from Conan Gray (I’m not sure why anyone would be wondering but, like, I’m trying to find people who are fans of the same artists as me idk) also yee he’s bi and man I was shipping him with EVERYONE THAT’S IT THAT’S THE NOTE I’LL BE SURPRISED IF ANYONE SEES THIS BUT THANKS FOR READINGGG

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21:53 May 26, 2022

I KNEW YOU STOLE THAT NAME!!!!!! XDXD

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BAHAHAHA I’M AN AVID NAME STEALER

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HOLY HECK CONAN GRAY AHJXZSUHOSUOWDS ANYWAY 1. I loved the whole story, I'm so into element stories rn so this was so G O O D jKSDOJJIWDODW aaaaa now I want to write one 🤯 2. cee is my nickname in another app 🤩 3.Conan in this story might be bi o_O i noticed some hints oUo (edit: CONAN IS BI SJKLDAOIWHUCDOIDCDC) AMAZING FIRST STORY BACK AERIN!!

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ASDKHAKSHDKJASD YES YES CONAN GRAY (And the main male character of the short story I WAS gonna post last week was named Gray…I guarantee some character in the future if going to be names Tay or Swifty or something oop) 1. Alsdjakdshkahsdkahsdkjasd THANK YOU and yes yes yes you absolutely should 🤯🤯 2. HAHA NICE 3. Oh heck yeah he’s bi, I was shipping him with EVERYONE YES YES HE IS I MEAN I’M BI AND I LOVE INFLICTING THE CURSE OF FINDING EVERYONE PRETTY ON CHARACTERS LASDJLASHDFLAHSDFGASDGFAKSFAS THANK YOU CELESTE!!!!!!

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I LOVE HIS SONGS IJDSHOI:QWDHWDE (LMFAO YES DO IT LAKXSIDWISWJS) 1. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤯🤯🤯🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 2. TY LMAO 3, multi-shippers RISE UP HAHAHAHAAH YES ME TOO AND THIS IS SO RELATABLE JSAXHOSHUDWS OFC AERINNNNNNNN

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AKSJAJAHHAGAGAJKALAKJAHAHA omg yes I love shipping something with multiple people because like alksjahabagakalaif they don’t have an OTP yet might shop em around, right?? SOMETHING promising has to come out of one of the fifty people I ship a character with idk KAMAJAHAGAGGAAHKAKAJAHA YISS

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AKXJSODHUQDIACICDHW that's me too like seriously but i don't write it out because like- Gale from the EUTW series was originally shipped with Nela, then i decided on shipping him with a nonbinary character instead because I had a ship idea for Nela and then I scrapped that one and just made her a loner fOr nOw dejwweoiwfhehw and it's the same with TSAU too, i originally shipped lilith with like- four different people at the same time (this actually happened at one point o_O) and it was the same for Lya, I actually made her pan in the end ba...

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ALSKAJHAHAGAHAJAKLALAJAJAA ahaha yesss, that’s about my thought process, although I’m kinda mad at myself for not adding spice to the main characters of my main Color Quest models because I CAN’T REALLY SHIP ANYONE NOW!! Isla and Parker are shipped but out of only 5 people, Parker and Cel are siblings, there’s huge age gaps, and stuff is pretty much just really inconvenient for shipping idk but I made up for it in my NaNo novel because, well, it’s like sorta a love square? So there’s Ash and Ember and Ronan and Riley. And Riley likes Ronan ...

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how the heck do you write this good like g i r l HOWHOWHOW This was aMaZinG f a b u l o u s c:

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ahahaha I donut know I just think of the most chaotic story possible then someone like you seems to think it’s g o o d 👁👄👁 THANK YOUUUU c:

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Shaylynn Skinner
20:34 Feb 02, 2022

LOL!

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Kendall Defoe
03:40 Jan 22, 2022

I really liked this one. You created a very vivid tale and involved me in something I did not expected to enjoy. Well done!

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Yay, thank you so much, Kendall! <3

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ANOTHER CONAN GRAY FAN, HECK YES, AERIN I LUV U EVEN MORE NOW Okay, but like- why was this so good? I struggle with writing short fantasy stories (hence the reason all my stories are FICTON- *angy noises) so I'm actually SUPER impressed with this. Ish really goooooood <3

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YESSSS YES YES YES HE’S AMAZING I LUV YOU EVEN MORE TOO WHAT’S YOUR FAV SONG HOW LONG HAVE U BEEN A FAN BY DEFAULT YOU LOVE TAYLOR TOO RIGHT I HAVE SO MANY Q U E S T I O NS Eeeeee thank you!!!! Ahaha really? I feel like short fantasy is really easy (okay, to be fair, it’s my fav genre, I’m kinda biased) because you can make anything up. Short realistic fiction, on the other hand, seems way more impressive, cuz you have a short amount of time to create an interesting storyline with depressingly non-magical characters (lol). But anyways than...

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OOOO MANIAC BY FAR, YOURS?! I DONT KNOW, MAYBE SINCE NOVEMBER FROM LAST YEAR??!?! ASK THEMMMM XDD (ish mine toooo) of courrseeee <3

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UMMM I HAVE SO MANY WISH YOU WERE SOBER IS GREAT SO IS GENERATION WHY LITTLE LEAGUE IS PROLLY MY FAV AMONG THOSE THO AYYYYYYY NICE

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OMGGG YESSSS LITTLE LEAGUE IS SO GOODDD

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YESSSS AND I DIDN’T EVEN KNOW ABOUT IT UNTIL I FOUND AN ARTICLE RANKING IT #1 BUT IT’S A WHOLE VIBE ALSO OMG HAVE YOU HEARD HIS NEW SONG????? I’VE BEEN LISTENING ON REPEAT AND IT’S AMAZING— THE LYRICS, THE MUSIC, GAH I WISH MY SONGS WERE AS MUCH OF A RUSH AS JIGSAW

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Maraika!!! 😎
19:22 Mar 07, 2022

TIME TO SPREAD POSITIVITY WHEN I SAY "I AM" YOU SAY "LOVED" THEN COPY/PASTE THIS TO SOMEONE ON REEDSY AND CONTINUE THE CHAIN LETS SPREAD SOME POSITIVITY READY??? I AM-

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16:59 Jan 23, 2022

Hey! I read it, its nice, I'll leave a more detailed feedback tmrw? It quite late in my area rn. Okay?

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Heyyyy! Ayyyy ty, of course XD

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Kathleen `Woods
12:21 Jan 22, 2022

First off, Same Prompt! Cause that's always fun to see. The concept you went with was interesting, the 'someone' being an ice spirit was rather fitting. While I'm not always a big fan of first person narration, this was unobtrusive, your dialog was a strong point in any case. This had a surprisingly high letter count, 15310 might not seem high, but it’s something you notice when your audio tells you the stats. It wasn’t anything bothersome but little bits of trivia are always fun for me. Thanks for Writing!

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Haha, fun! Thank you :D Oop, well, I’m a bit obsessed with first person having written 4 novels in it, but I’m glad you didn’t absolutely hate my usage of it ;D And tyyyy! Dialogue is always the most fun for me to write. Oooh, that’s interesting. The word count itself is pretty high (2.7k words after editing, I think?) but I’ve never thought about checking the letter count. Thanks for reading! :D

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Kathleen `Woods
16:38 Jan 22, 2022

Thanks for responding! I almost never either, its just something I end up seeing now. Though I do keep a tally on my word counts just for the self. So, how do you work your dialogue? I'm a talker.

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Hah nice! Not sure quite but you mean that, but when I write my dialogue I mostly focus on it sounding entertaining and/or funny (so by now pretty much all my characters use sarcasm and have the same sense of humor as me XD). Dialogue should always have a purpose, but when some people super-duper streamline it, it doesn’t seem..natural. So I don’t know. I just give a bunch of leeway for my word count spent on dialogue cuz it’s fun to write and fun to read XD

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Kathleen `Woods
09:04 Jan 23, 2022

It's good to make use of ones humor for these kinds of things, people are rarely as static or overt in their discussions as they are in some pieces of fiction. As far as my self description, I just meant as far as methods, I tend to talk it out by myself or with others in the first pass before writing anything down. It's cool to see good results from differing methods though.

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Dhwani Jain
12:35 May 26, 2022

Hey Aerin! I got a question for you How did you publish your books? And WHERE are Colour Quest 2,3 and 4???????????????

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Heyyyy! I published CQ using KDP—Kindle Direct Publishing, which is Amazon’s self-publishing service. You can look it up and get to their website! Sooooo funny story, I happen to hate editing :P I’ve gotta rewrite CQ1 at some point (I wrote it when I was 10, there’s a reason I’m actively discouraging anyone buying it), but CQ2 and CQ3 have also been written, I just need to edit them. However that will probably be much later this year because I’m currently working on my fifth novel which is completely unrelated to CQ so yeah lol

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Ruth Smith
21:55 May 24, 2022

Great story, Aerin! I loved your descriptions of the characters, they are vivid. I've got some questions: “Ahh!” she helps, pushing herself away for me in the snow. Was that supposed to be yelps instead of helps? "Unless you randomly kept in front of me, or you were buried under the snow, or, like, you were the snow…” Leapt instead of kept? The ten-food figure What's a ten food figure made up of? Ham, beef, carrots? Built no, the eerie quiet of the Colorado mountains fills the air. Bet that was supposed to be "but no" instead o...

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Thank you so much! Bahaha yup for all of those! I tend to make so many typos and such that I never catch while briefly editing 😩😩 I swear Reedsy folks pay more attention my stories than *I* do while writing them at this rate lol Thank youuuu omg <33

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23:41 May 22, 2022

🟪🟦🟩🟨🟧🟥

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so true rainbows + gay = slay

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00:48 May 23, 2022

A+

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23:39 May 22, 2022

WHATS YOUR FAVORITE ANIMAL?

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23:39 May 22, 2022

GREAT WRITING SKILLS

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AHAHA

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23:39 May 22, 2022

OMG I LOVED IT

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23:39 May 22, 2022

best story ever

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omg thx

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00:49 May 23, 2022

LOL NP! XD

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23:38 May 22, 2022

"Spam my notifies" Heyyyy here to spam LOL

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BAHAHA TY

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AHEM A SAPPHIC LOVE TRIANGLE?

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MY FAV THING IS PROJECTING ONTO MY CHARACTERS AND MAKING THEM ALL BI, AND THEN THEY HAVE TO CHOOSE BETWEEN A MALE AND FEMALE LOVE INTEREST, BUT IT ALWAYS TURNS OUT TP BE THE GIRL BECAUSE WOMEN ARE HOT thank you for coming to my Ted talk but yeah lol, I have my NaNoWriMo novel with a sapphic love triangle, then I have a webtoon planned w/ a sapphic love triangle, aaaand now I’m writing another sapphic love triangle lol

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00:44 May 23, 2022

Lmaooo

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OMG YES ITS SO FUN TO WRITE AHAHAHAH omg yes- so cute i need it <33

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FRRRRR aksjaakaa ty <3

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I WROTE IT ONCE AND IT WAS REALLY FUNNY AND WHOLESOME ofc ofc <3 AERIN ARE YOU ON MY NOVEL BECAUSE I HAVENT SHARED IT WITH ANYONE ELSE XD

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YISSSSSSSSS SAPPHIC RELATIONSHIPS ARE SO CUTE WAIT YOU SHARED A NOVEL WITH ME?? I DON’T THINK SO BUT IDK

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Laiba M
00:15 Apr 14, 2022

Hii Aerin!! It's been so longg, I feel like everyone's been off Reedsy recently :( How are you?? I loved this story, btw!!~ As always, you're amazing at dialogue and I loved the descriptions :))

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Heyyy!! Omg frrrr, I’m super busy with final exams and I’m writing a novel and stuff and I just never log on lol 😭😭 I’m doing great, more or less, what about you? :D THANK YOUU

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Sunny 🌼 🖤
13:33 Apr 05, 2022

Frosty the snowman~ Was a 10-foot tall murderous ice giant out for blood and magic holy crap- Jokes aside tho- I enjoyed this story a lot. You always write fantasy so well?! Makes me jealous

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yea bahah- Thank you omggg <33 I’m two months late but still appreciate it 😭😭

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Palak Shah
16:01 Mar 20, 2022

This story was great and I really enjoyed reading it :)) You are a very skillful writer. Well done :)) Also, happy late birthday 🥳

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Thank you! :D Thank you so much!!

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