My eyes fluttered open, then immediately shut at the sudden bright light. I moved my hand to cover my eyes, but found it strapped down. I opened my eyes again and tried to move my arms and legs, but couldnโt. My breathing came in quick, short gasps as panic threatened to surface. I couldnโt be back. I couldnโt be back in that horrid room with the scientists and the tranquilizer darts andโฆ
I felt vibrations on the floor, footstepsโฆ I tried to see who it was, but the blinding light would not allow me to.
โWhere did you find her?โ
โThe scouts came across an underground prison full of them.โ
โAzazelโs prison?โ
โNo, the governmentโs. Poor things were experimented on and abused and tortured.โ
โWhere are the rest?โ
โThey were on the boat, but prison guards found it and burned it. Thankfully, Max, Liz, and Ethan werenโt on the boat, but the ones that wereโฆโ
โOh my. Is she the only survivor?โ
โYes, she is. Poor thing. Felicity, will you close the window? Itโs way too bright in here.โ
The blinding light disappeared, revealing two very strange people standing in the room. One had light brown skin and dark brown hair, her large, black eyes giving an innocent sort of look. Her freckled cheeks were flushed, as if she spent too much time in the sun, and she shifted on her skinny hooves. The other girl, with honey gold hair and eyes just about the same shade, had white wings emerging from her back and thin, yellow talons replacing her feet. Her tall and slender figure dwarfed her short partner in comparison. A small birthmark in the shape of a dove peeked out from under her sleeves.
The room itself was nature-like, full of vines and roots, sunlight slivering through the gaps in the walls.
I glanced back at the two people, bewildered and overwhelmed, unsure of what to do.
โWho put her in straps?โ mumbled the dove-girl, walking towards me. I immediately reacted, thrashing and screeching, refusing to let her harm me. The deer girl in the back jumped, her hooves positioned towards the door, as if she will bolt at any moment.ย
โHey, calm down,โ said the dove-girl. โIโm going to take the straps off, I just need you to stand still.โ
I hesitated. I learned never to trust anyone, not even those who seem like they want to help you. But before I could protest, the dove girl sighed.
โFelicity, can you take the straps off? Someone decided to strap her with vines, and I donโt know if Iโm strong enough to pull them off.โย
The deer girl, apparently called Felicity, slowly walked towards me, her hooves lightly tapping the ground. Once she was close enough, she lifted her hands, and the vines around my wrists, legs, and wings disappeared.
As soon as I was free, I jumped up from the table and bolted for the window. I clawed at the leaves covering it, flapping my wings in mad panic. Realizing my plan was futile, I backed into the corner, wrapping my wings around my body. I frantically glanced around the room, trying to find another escape route.ย
โSo t-thatโs why they had her strapped down,โ said Felicity, backed up in a corner opposite from me, trembling.
โGreat,โ mumbled the dove girl. She bent down in front of me, reaching her hand out.
โItโs okay,โ she said. โMy name is Zoe, and we are here to help you, okay? You have a nasty bump on your head, and we want to see it. Is that okay?โ
I had barely noticed the pain on my head, too preoccupied with trying to escape.
Zoe moved her hand a little closer, being careful not to make any sudden movements. โWhatโs your name?โ she asked.
I stayed quiet, still unsure if I should trust her.
โCan you talk?โ she asked sweetly. โDo you need paper and pencil?โ
โExperiment 15,โ I whispered.ย
โ...what?โ she asked, tilting her head to the side, looking more and more like a dove.
โExperiment 15. Thatโs my name. Thatโs what they called me.โ
โOh,โ she said, unsure how to respond. โWell thatโs not a proper name. How about we make a proper name for you. You seem to be an eagle of some sortโฆโ
โHarpy eagle,โ I responded.
โHarpy eagleโฆ how about Harper? Felicity, is Harper a good name?โ
Felicity nodded, emerging from her corner and bending down next to Zoe.
โHarper,โ I whispered, trying out the new word. I kind of liked it. Very simple.ย
โNow, how about seeing that bump on your head? We may have to apply some bandages, but after that you should be-โ
She was interrupted by someone bursting their way into the room, shoving aside the leaves that covered the doorway.
โThat stupidโฆ jerk! Idiot! Who does he think he isโฆโ
The person stopped, surprised. Her yellow and purple wings fluttered behind her, thin and delicate. Long, thin antennas peeked out from her purple hair, her celestine necklace and butterfly earrings shining in the sunlight.
โWrong room,โ she mumbled. โWho is she?โ
โShe is a survivor from one of the recent rescue missions,โ answered Zoe. โAnd we are in the middle of something, Celeste, so could you please leave? Youโre scaring her.โ
I didnโt realize that my wings were flared, so I tucked them back around my body, flushing with embarrassment.ย
โWhy would I leave?โ answered Celeste. โIโm a healer just like you. Let me help.โ
โWe got it,โ answered Zoe, glaring at Celeste. โRight Felicity?โ
โIโฆโ stuttered Felicity. โUhโฆโ
โWhatโs so bad with letting me help? You always have something against me, Zoe. Now, where does it hurt? Ooo, thatโs a nasty bump. A little pollen will do.โ
โCeleste,โ growled Zoe. โI said we got it.โ
โOh please, if you โgot itโ, why was there such a racket in here, hmm? Now, stand still eagle-girl, a little pollen will fix up that bump.โ
โZoe, wait!โ shouted Felicity as Celeste pulled out some yellow dust from her bag and blew it onto me. The dust clouded my eyes, temporarily blinding me, and I frantically flapped my wings. I burst through the doorway, not knowing where I was going. I flew through a hallway and into an open space. I rubbed my eyes, trying to clear the pollen from them, but made no progress. I bumped into people and walls, causing me to panic more and more, then flew straight up, hoping to escape this strange plant place and into open air, but instead crashed straight into the ceiling and found myself tumbling towards the ground.
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I flailed my arms and wings, still blinded, when a sudden force hit me from the side. I rubbed my eyes, finally beginning to clear the pollen, and looked up to find myself in the arms of the cat-boy from before. His orange ears twitched, his pupils a small black sliver.ย
โAre you okay?โ he asked, setting me down. I nodded, looking around to see everyone staring at me. The sudden attention made me blush, my wings wrapping around me once again.ย
โHey,โ he said, lifting my chin to look into his eyes. โAre you sure youโre okay?โ I just noticed the bandage circling his wrist, and I fingered it.ย
โOh, that?โ he asked, lifting his hand. โIโm fine, that was just from the mission when the roof collapsed.โ he looked back at me, his orange tail twitching with concern. โWe need to get you back to the medical ward. The healers can help you, okay?โ
I shook my head. I didnโt want to go back there. I didnโt want them to strap me down again, or experiment on me, orโฆ
โThey had her strapped down, Ethanโ explained Zoe, walking towards us with Felicity beside her. โJust like she was back at the facility.โ
Ethanโs pale skin turned pink, his cat ears folding back into his reddish-brown hair. โWhoโฆ why would theyโฆโ
โI donโt know,โ said Zoe. โBut that doesnโt matter right now. What matters is that Celeste scared her and now she doesnโt want to go back.โ
โHow did Celeste scare her?โ asked Ethan, helping me up.ย
โShe blew pollen in my face,โ I whispered.
โYou.. you talk,โ Ethan said.
I nodded. Itโs not that Iโm just quietโฆ I simply didnโt have a reason to talk before.ย
โHow about we take her to her room?โ piped up Felicity. โInstead of the medical ward. Itโs much more comfortable there.โ
Ethan turned to me. โWould you prefer that?โย
I slowly nodded. He took my hand and began to lead me to my room.
โWhatโs your name?โ he asked.
โHarper.โ
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Omg this was the best of the three! For some reason, I love the way you say dove-girl hehe and jeez this gave me quite a laugh โThat stupidโฆ jerk! Idiot! Who does he think he isโฆโ something I'd def say lol XD Anyways, can't say much about it but it was damnnnnn goooodddd XD ~ Inara
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XDDDDD tysm!!!!!!! read the next few I think you'll like it ;) turns out she was talking about Ethan later on in the story (idk if I've featured them yet) but shhhhhh that's a spoiler ;)
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haha ofcccc I will....can't wait for it
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yayyyyy Parts 3 and 4 out planning to write Part 5 maybe today... #speedwriter XD
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OMG! going there right away! and btw YOU WRITE REAL FAST!!!
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tyyy and yesssss XDD
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This story features: Felicity Williams (as Felicity) Celeste (as Celeste) Ivy Carter (as Zoe) Ethan (as Ethan) If you are not in this story don't worry you will be in future parts I can't put too many characters in at one time! :)
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Poor Harper had a rough go of it at the beginning, didn't she? Celeste certainly didn't help matters much. Anyway, I kind of like Zoe and Felicity; they seem like really good. . . er, creatures. I can't get enough of cat-boy Ethan, either! Excellent job, Abigail!
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lol- tysmm! u think harper's been through a lot? HAH. Wait until u read part 12... apparently i made ppl cry XD
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I'll get there soon. And if you made people cry, that's how you know you did it right. ๐
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XD i didnt even mean to lol it was just a ~little~ trauma and love
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I guess sometimes, that's all it takes. Will there be a thirteenth part?
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ehehehe... i left them on a MAJOR cliffhanger on part 12 and im debating leaving it at thatr just to kill them on the inside with suspense XD lolololol ehehhehehheheh im so nice :)
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Just slowly catching up. Love this ending so I had to comment! Ethan sounds so sweet lol. Onward :)
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tyyyy lol
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So it's like animal hybrid vigilantes...very cool!
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yup! ty!
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ze end ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ this plot I love ittttttttt :DDDD your descriptions are really good, GRATE ๐ง๐ง๐ง job!!! ~ Amethyst
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XDD tysm lol -snatches cheese-
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np! hehehe
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HI, Abbie!! This was an amazing story, I love the way you illustrated all the characters, especially the uniqueness revolving around them and their animal parts. It was easy to read and extremely enjoyable the whole way through, onto part 3!!
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tyyyyy!
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This is great Abbie! I like how you only put a few characters in this story rather than all of them at the same time. It helps the readers understand characters much better when we only have to keep track of a few at a time. I thought that Harper's emotions were portrayed really well and that you ended this part on a good note. The only critique I'd give is a minor thing about your dialogue. I notice that you put phrases like "I am" and "we are." Just to make the dialogue sound more natural, I'd suggest putting them together like, "I'm" an...
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tysm for the feedback! I will! :D
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OOh! I think out of all the reedsy cast versions of myself, I like yours the best. I mean, that's kind of the case with all of them. All your characters are so well developed, but you don't spend time doing an info dump on them; you make us slowly learn about them. EXTREMELY GREAT JOB
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tysmmmm!!!! I'm so happy :') did you read part 1? You're featured in that one as well
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Yeah I read that one where i was like literally the opposite of the me in Maya's story, lol
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XD lolll
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This is so good!! Thank you so so so so so much for featuring me in one of your stories!!! You had a really good mix of emotion, description, and dialogue, which made the story really interesting! As far as grammar corrections go, I didn't catch anything. :) Please let me know when the next part comes out! I'm so excited to see what happens next!! :D
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tysm for the feedback, I'm so glad you liked it! Don't worry I'll let you know! :D
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No problem!! Yay, thanks!
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this is nice! I sometimes feel like Harper, scared, shy, timid. It's cool that i know some people in this :) How have you been?
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tysm! :) Don't worry she won't stay like that for long lol, she's just like this while recovering from her trauma I've been doing good, ty for asking! Hbu?
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pretty good, i suppose, kinda a lot happening right now :)
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aww I felt that Btw is there any stories of your stories you want me to read? I'm bored lol :)
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idk...i did post some that I really like called Snow/Wind/Imagination/The Observer and Relatable/One/Why Can't There be Purple?/Ash you just gotta srcoll down a little :)
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ok tyyyyy :) Ill go read them rn
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this was amazingggggggggggggg all of it is illustrated very well and everything going on during the story is moving the plot forwards. Totally hooked on this series and I'm going now to read the other partsssssssssssss great job Abbie!!!
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omggg tysm! <3
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Great work Abbie! I love where this is heading! Super fun :)
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tysm! :D
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NP!
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