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Fantasy Drama

“THIS BLASTED ELEVATOR IS GOING TO GET US ALL BEHEADED!” The young boy hollers, kicking the sleek metal walls of the elevator. Worry and fury wrestle for control of his face, and it comes out as a yell while salty tears stream down his cheeks.

“Ow, ow, ow,” he whimpers, his blue eyes swimming with more tears as the kid holds his hurt foot. “That door was too hard….” 

“Then don’t kick it,” the only other passenger suggests. His blond hair partially covers his chocolate-chip eyes as he stares down at the child.

The younger boy snarls. “But we’re going to die!”

“Who are you?” The first boy asks, studying the other person’s face. The kid looks like a tween, with shaggy dark hair and tear-stained, flustered cheeks.

“I’m Miles,” he says, his voice shaky, “and this elevator is cruel.” He starts to pace. “Okay. Okay. The power went out. We’re stuck here. The Queen’s marriage starts in ten minutes. She ordered the whole Kingdom to be there. Even the River goddess will be there. If we’re not….” he gulps then shoots a look at the older boy. “Who are you?”

“I’m…Chase,” the blond replies hesitantly. Nobody knew the Queen had a son, so he was safe from Miles figuring out his true identity. “But my friends call me Ace.”

Not like he had any friends. Only his family, the Royals, knew he existed. And his baby cousin Bri didn’t count.

“Why the pause?” Miles asks, wiping more tears from his face with his robe’s sleeve. “And why aren’t you wearing the designated outfit? The Queen ordered all citizens of the Kingdom to show their loyalty to the Royals.”

Prince Chase inwardly curses as he scans Miles’ robe. It’s scarlet fabric draped over the small boy’s frame, embroidered with the silver outline of a star—the Symbol of the Kingdom. His own robe has a purple star in the center of the silver one, as a sign he’s a Royal. Chase’s not allowed out of the castle, as he’s a secret to the Kingdom, but he snuck out to watch the ceremony between the Queen and her fiancé, disguised as a Citizen. Chase couldn’t very well have worn his robe, because that would’ve given away his identity of a Royal, but he should’ve had a Citizen’s robe tailored to him. Citizens who don’t follow orders—in this case, to wear the Kingdom’s robes with the Symbol—would be beheaded, and disobeying an order didn't blend in very well.

“I have my Citizen’s robe under this,” Chase says, gesturing to his tunic and pants. “I’ll maybe sure the Symbol of the Kingdom is showing by the time we get to the ceremony, don’t worry.”

“I’m worried,” Miles says nastily, “because we might not ever get to the ceremony.” The young boy musters up his angriest face before it dissolved into more crying.

“I don’t want to die,” Miles says between sobs.

Chase pats his back. “How old are you?”

“Ten.”

“I’m fourteen.” The words fly out of Chase’s mouth before he can consider what to say.

Miles’ glistening blue eyes dart around the stalled elevator. The glossy elevator buttons of the Citizens apartment building are superstitious—they go 𝟏𝟏, 𝟏𝟐, 𝟏𝟒, no 𝟏𝟑 in sight. The entire Kingdom is packed in the one, huge apartment building, with the equally large castle for the Royals a courtyard away.

Miles slumps on the floor. He seems to realize he couldn’t do anything but wait for the power to go back one. “So, um…hi.”

“Hello.” Chase shifts his weight.

The word hangs in the air as an awkward silence covers the elevator. Miles’ tears have dried away, but his eyes are still watering as he inhales and exhales slowly. “Why aren’t you scared?”

“Of what?” says Chase.

“Of this elevator not hurrying up. If we’re not at the ceremony soon, we’ll be killed.”

“Oh, I am scared,” Chase says, “just not for that reason.”

Miles gives him the side-eye. “What reason is more important than life?”

Chase inwardly curses. He can’t very well say, “My mom is the Queen, I won’t die because I’m a Royal, but I’ll get an insane scolding and a grounding for a year”, but his mind comes up blank with new ideas. “Um….”

“Yes?”

“Urm….”

Spit it out, Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace!”

“I don’t know,” Chase admits truthfully.

Miles’ hard gaze fixes on Chase’s face. “You’re hiding something.”

“No, I’m not!”

“Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace, you most definitely are.”

“First, please stop calling me that. Second, why are you so barky all of a sudden?!” Chase snaps. “You were sobbing and sad a moment ago, and now you’re accusing me of something that’s completely false.” True, true, false. ⅔ wasn’t bad when your existence is a secret.

Miles’ mouth opens then shuts. “Sorry. I’m just a little…worried? I mean, did the power have to go out right now?”

“It’s okay, buddy,” Chase says, patting the boy on the head. “I’m sure the elevator will get moving soon.”

“And if not?” Miles sniffles.

Chase hesitates. “I’ll protect you from the Queen’s rage.”

“How would you do that? And why?”

“I like you, and nobody deserved to die because of a power outage that wasn’t their fault, much less a ten-year-old. And about how…I don’t know.” ….a way to protect you without revealing myself to my mom and the kingdom, Chase silently added.

“Thanks,” Miles says. “I feel much safer now.”

Chase cocks his head then realizes Miles is joking. The small boy sniggers. “But seriously, thanks. I just really hope it won’t come to that.”

He jumps up. “STUPID ELEVATOR!”

A moment later, Miles is back on the floor, not having enough hands to put pressure on all the places that were injured. “ARRRRRRGH!” was the attack with his foot. “I WILL DIE BECAUSE OF—” was him punching the elevator wall. The continuation of that sentence, “—YOUUUU!”, was Miles ramming into the wall at full speed, with his full body.

“Ow,” Miles moans. 

“Sorry,” Chase winces. “How much does it hurt?”

“I’ll be dead soon, so that doesn’t really matter.”

“Don’t say that,” Chase says. “I’m sure the power will be back on soon.” He glares at the sleek walls, like, Power, you better be on soon. 

“You know,” Miles says, his gaze fixed on 𝟏𝟒 taking the place of the button 𝟏𝟑, “It’s funny to imagine there’s a building that is completely made of all the level thirteens, and it has awful luck.”

“Funny indeed,” Chase nods, “but not possible. The other buildings don’t have levels. The school, the library…they’re all flat.”

“Yeah, but the castle has floors,” Miles says.

“Maybe so, but no level thirteen.”

Chase immediately regrets his words. Miles will find out he’s the unknown prince before the end of the elevator ride. He tries to swallow the hard lump in his throat as Miles glares. 

“How do you know that?” Miles asks, his brows furrowed and a frown painted onto his pale lips.

“Just a guess,” Chase lies, hoping the cover-up would be enough. “Anyways, urm, you must be pretty smart to think of that level-thirteen thing.”

“Really smart, or loves to daydream.”

“Hmm. What else do you know?”

“Digits and digits of pi, way too much mythology, and an insane amount of random facts and ideas, among others. But I know—”

Chase’s face flashes white. That sentence could definitely end “I know…you’re the prince that’s a closely guarded secret from everyone other than the Royals”.

“What?” Miles says, interrupting his own sentence as the sight of Chase’s paled face.

“Na…nothing.”

“Were you nervous about how I was going to end that sentence?”

Chase nods. “Yes.”

“How did you think it would end?”

“How was it going to end?” Chase counters.

“Hmm,” Miles says. He was going to say, “I know how to write in Hebrew, too”, but all of Chase’s behavior had given him a hunch that he needed to test. “The end starts with a ‘p’. Is that what you were afraid of?”

That could mean anything, Chase tells himself. “Yeah.”

“Then ‘r’.”

“Um….”

“‘i’.”

“Yeah….”

“Next is ‘n’.”

Chase takes a deep breath. “Yes. So you, know, don’t you?”

Miles smiles. He thinks he did, but he doesn’t know, and he was making his fast-friend-in-the-making nervous. “Yeah. I know how printing works.”

“Thank the Royals,” Chase burst.

Miles smirks. “What did you think I was going to say?”

“That. Exactly that.”

Miles sighed and glanced at his watch. “Well, it was nice knowing you, Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace. We’re dead. Very dead. Extremely dead. In fact, we’re so dead we’re—”

Creeeeeak.

Miles jumps with joy as the elevator starts moving. “YES! The power’s back on!” He raises an eyebrow at Chase and says, “Why aren’t you celebrating?” before going back to hollering, “YES!”

Chase starts to celebrate too. He wouldn’t die anyways, but he was afraid Miles would. Besides, Chase’s cover would be blown if the Queen said she was going to kill them.

Miles’ face fell as he glanced at his watch. “We’re out of time.”

“Huh?”

“We’re out of time—the ceremony started a while ago—and we’re out of time as in, we’ll die because of that.”

Miles looks like he’s holding back tears as the elevator doors ding! open.

Guards, dressed in shiny armor fitted over red jumpsuits and armed with sheathed swords, stand in front of the way out. Ahead of the guards, the giant courtyard is packed with thousands of Citizens, staring ahead at the stage in front of the castle on the other side of the courtyard.

The guards grab Miles and Chase as they try to bolt out of the elevator. The men hoist the boys in the air. “What do you think you’re doing?” one of the guards demands in a deep voice.

“Trying to get to the wedding,” Chase answers, nodding towards the music coming from the stage.

“You’re late,” the other guard says. “Also, why aren’t you wearing your robe, young man?”

Chase winces and Miles whispers, “P-p-please spare us.”

“No,” the first guard says. “Actually, it’s the queen’s judgement.”

“Chase-my-friends-call-me-Ace,” Miles whimpers, “what are we going to do?!”

The boys struggle to get loose as the guards march towards the stage just as the wedding is ending. People are just started to disperse, and the Queen and the new King are still on the stage.

“What do we have here?” the Queen booms as Miles and Chase are dropped into the floor.

One of the guard bows. “These Citizens refused to attend your wedding. They were very, very late. Also, the older one isn’t wearing his robe!”

“The power went out in the elevator!” Chase protests. “And my robe isn’t on because—” 

The Queen pointed to the ground. “Bow before your Queen!”

Chase and Miles kneel on the stage for a full minute. Chase wonders when he should rip off his hood and reveal he’s a Royal—not yet, not now.

Eventually, the Queen says, “Rise, so we may address your punishment.”

The boys silently get up. The entire crowd has now returned to watch the sentencing. The tall Queen, dressed in a white robe with the Symbol of a Royal and draped in expensive accessories, glared down at the late kids. “You’ll die,” she decides after five minutes of sweat trickling down Miles’ neck.

Chase and Miles both scream and flail as the two guards pick each of them up and start in different directions. Miles freaks because he’s about to be killed, and Chase screams because Miles feels like a little brother by now. No. A friend. 

“STOP!” Chase roars.

Both guards stop and stare at the Queen. Her eyes focus on Chase, who thumps to the floor as the guard drops him. “Twice now you’ve spoken out of turn. Citizens don’t—”

“I’m not a Citizen,” Chase snaps.

He rises and pulls off his hood, smiling at the Queen. “Hi, Mom.”


There's a pause as Queen’s jaw drops, and the crowd’s jaws drop with it. Chase turns to the whole Kingdom. “Hello, Citizens of our Kingdom! I’m your prince, Chase. But my friends call me Ace. Anyways…yeah, hi!”

He beams at the shocked people then twists back his mom.

“You didn’t,” the Queen says in a hushed voice.

“I did.”

Miles’ eyes bug out as he looks from the Queen, to the guards, to Chase. 

“Well….” the Queen struggled for the right words. Finally, she points to the young boy on the floor. “That one will still be beheaded!”

The guard picks up Miles again and Chase says, “No.”

The guard stops again as the Queen says, “What?” 

“No. I said, no,” Chase repeats. “Miles stays alive. It wasn’t his fault the power went out and he deserves to live. You’re not killing him.” 

“Why aren’t I?” the Queen says innocently. 

Chase tosses his blond hair as he rushes over to the vacant guard. Before the metal-clad man can react, the prince grabs his sheath.

Chase takes the sword out and matches over to the Queen. He holds up the blade, then puts it at his own neck. Chase knows his mother doesn’t care if a Citizen dies. But a Royal? The prince? Her son?

Oh, the delicious way Chase’s action takes effect on the Queen.

“N-no,” the Queen stammers as she stared at the sword resting on Chase’s throat. “You wouldn’t.”

Chase doesn’t break eye contact as he presses the sword a little harder. “I would.”

“What—”

“Let. Miles. Go.” Chase says, gritting his teeth in determination. 

The prince’s brown eyes lock with his mother’s as she spits out the words, “Fine.” She motions for the guard, and the brown-haired ten-year-old drops to the floor. “We’ll discuss this later,” the Queen sneers.

Chase nods and Miles sprints over to him. The crown, once again, starts to disperse and the Queen and King leave the stage.

“I can’t believe you did that,” Miles breathes as he hugs Chase.

“Neither can I,” the prince admits.

“Thank you.”

“No problem!” Chase smiles. “Will you be okay?”

Miles’ features tighten. “Yeah.”

“I need to go now,” Chase says. “My mom will literally kill me and I need to be early for that. Goodbye, Miles,” he says as he starts walking towards the castle.

Miles sets off towards the apartment buildings, but not before pausing to say goodbye. He’s about to say “So long, Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace”, but his own words surprise him.

“Goodbye…Ace.”

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1508 comments

Akshat .
10:54 Sep 29, 2020

Hey, so, I made a quiz, and I was wondering if you could take it? The link is in my bio!

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13:14 Sep 29, 2020

Sure!

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Akshat .
13:52 Sep 29, 2020

Thank you!

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Amany Sayed
17:59 Sep 28, 2020

Y'know, I sorta want to smack Shannon Messenger right now. I just finished book threeee btw.

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18:46 Sep 28, 2020

Wow! You read fast! I KNOW, RIGHT? Hold on...is that THE CLIFFHANGER... Okay, I checked. Hey, that cliffhanger isn’t that bad! I’m sorry to say any KotLC-er on Book 3 is in for a LOT worse... Lol. Book 4 is when stuff gets REALLY good.

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Amany Sayed
18:54 Sep 28, 2020

Yes. Yes I do. It's a problem. I'm not kidding Aerin seND HELP. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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B. W.
16:06 Sep 28, 2020

Hey Aerin, i'm working on another novel (probably the fourth one or third one i think) so i was wondering if i could maybe tell ya about it?

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16:15 Sep 28, 2020

Suuuuuure!

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B. W.
16:17 Sep 28, 2020

I don't have everything but here's the basic thing, tell me what you think: Theres a group of four friends, 2 boys and two girls. One of the girls is a 'guardian' (I first thought of her being a guardian angel but i wanna change it tbh) who hides herself as a regular human and protects the others while also being friends with them but she can't really reveal herself because a lot of bad things would happen and probably because scientists would wanna do something

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Amany Sayed
21:23 Sep 27, 2020

i have a guess about your bio- are you seeing how many people notice? is that the number? ugh this was downvoted 😑

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D. Shikha
16:59 Sep 27, 2020

What's up with your bio, sis??

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17:55 Sep 27, 2020

😏

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D. Shikha
18:03 Sep 27, 2020

I know!! I know what is in your bio!!! It's the number of Reedsy-ers who joined Allpoetry, right??

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18:12 Sep 27, 2020

Oooh, it actually could be that! But no 😆

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D. Shikha
18:15 Sep 27, 2020

Then what is it?

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18:38 Sep 27, 2020

Hehehehehe not sayingyet This is an EXPERIMENT...I’ll have my reg bio back at the end of the day 😆

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B. W.
15:09 Sep 27, 2020

Aerin, i know that you've probably been having trouble and all that with making some stories lately, maybe because of how the prompts are or maybe another reason. If it's alright with you, maybe i could go and help you with it? Not the entire thing, maybe just to help you with some characters or a small bit of the plot? It's all up to you though if you want me to help you and if you don't, that's completely fine and i'd understand ^^ either way if i did or didn't help you with the story i know that it would still be really great just like al...

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17:59 Sep 27, 2020

Haha, thanks, but I’m good. I mean, the prompts ARE kind of bad, but it’s mostly because I have tons of homework, my free time is spent doing AllPoetry, aaaand now I have another dilemma: Amazon messed up CQ! You got a paperback copy, right? I’m sooooo sorry. Amazon ended up fitting the PDF to the trim size, which means the indents are wonky and the font is tiny. It’s awful and I’ve spend at least 3 hours today fixing it with my dad. So yeah, for the next couple of days I’ll be making CQ much, MUCH better. I even took it off Amazon. Isdneidn...

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B. W.
18:22 Sep 27, 2020

Well alright ^^ wait, if your on the other thing a lot now are you still gonna be on here or are ya gonna just move to allpoetry? With the CQ thing yeah i'm pretty sure i got paper back, but that's fine ^^ i hope it'll get fixed though

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18:39 Sep 27, 2020

Oh, yeah, I’ll totally be on Reedsy! Just, like my first week of Reedsy, I’m currently OBSESSED with AllPoetry. You should join!

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B. W.
18:40 Sep 27, 2020

I suck at doing any type of Poetry tho :/

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Akshat .
07:30 Sep 27, 2020

Joke: Me: What do you call the security outside a Samsung store? Person: What? Me: Guardians of the Galaxy. Lol 😂 PS. What happened to your bio?

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Amany Sayed
00:56 Sep 27, 2020

What's with the bio sis?

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00:57 Sep 27, 2020

🙂

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00:58 Sep 27, 2020

Oh! And hey! I was gonna message you anyway so glad you’re here. Do ya think you’re going to join AllPoetry? It’s kinda like Reedsy but for poems and now I’m addicted. Lol. Like, I thought I was obsessed with REEDSY my first week...AllPoetry is so fun 😆

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Amany Sayed
01:02 Sep 27, 2020

Oh come on that's not an answer lol I don't know, I'm thinking about it.

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01:37 Sep 27, 2020

😏😏😏 You shall understand soon enough, young girl... Lol. Hehe, what’s to lose? Besides hours of your time Cuz you’ll love it so much MUAHAHAHAHAHA Lol Here’s an ode to finish spinners I wrote earlier for a contest: “Ode to Fidget Spinners” Prompt: “fidget” in 22 words Oh glorious fidget spinners, You fill kids’ days with glee Maybe your prime was last year, But there’s still room in 2020! Aaaand a random one for another contest (both has to be 22 words exactly), “Tonight” Prompt: “sigh” in 22 words Bursts of glitt...

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Amany Sayed
01:49 Sep 27, 2020

ughhhh lol I love em both!

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21:38 Sep 26, 2020

OMG, 900+ COMMENTS! SO CRAZY. BY THE WAY CAN YOU CHECK OUT SOME OF MY STORIES? THEY ARE ALL FLOPPING (>-<). Oops it was in caps, but i ain't rewriting it. BTW, I SAW UR STORY ON AMAZON! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!

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21:40 Sep 26, 2020

Huh? Lol, you have 80, and I have 4,000. I’m confuuuused Surrre THANKSSSSS

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20:06 Sep 26, 2020

Hey Aerin! Just joined all poetry, here's my account. https://allpoetry.com/Suhani_W

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21:05 Sep 26, 2020

Yaaaaay!

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Solace Reinhart
23:37 Sep 25, 2020

Hello! (And AHH! I really need to read Color Quest.) How are you? I'm hungry.

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02:07 Sep 26, 2020

Ohhhhhh so YOU’RE Julia! Well, helol!

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Solace Reinhart
13:50 Sep 26, 2020

Hellooooo Aerin

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D. Shikha
14:00 Oct 01, 2020

Hi Julia!!

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Zilla Babbitt
20:57 Sep 25, 2020

Hey, Aerin! Can you tell me a little about AllPoetry? I joined because a) you did and b) I need to refine my poetry skills, but I haven't posted anything yet. I also notice on your profile there (yep, I followed the link) that you have quite a few views, more than 100. Did you go around and ask to be read? Followed a ton of people? Are there lots of people who browse around and read everything?

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21:38 Sep 25, 2020

Hi, Zilla! Sure! And yay, glad you joined! I’m not even that into poetry but I’m already obsessed. Oh, and now I AM into poetry. Haha, actually, 100 is small. See, AllPoetry is HUGE—thousands and thousands of active members. It’s been going for ten years now! With all of those people, even poets like me, who joined two days ago, have a decent amount of views. Every time you post a poem, you need to comment on two from a page. So I get comments that way. Plus, you can do ‘trade comments’—a place where you comment on other’s stories in order ...

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Zilla Babbitt
21:47 Sep 25, 2020

Thanks so much! I just put up two poems and like the site already. Thanks for explaining, that was really helpful. I love poetry but I can't rhyme to save my life, and I write poems only when I'm overwhelmed with emotions. It's a way for me to calm down. Here's my baby account: https://allpoetry.com/Zilla_Babbitt

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22:05 Sep 25, 2020

Haha, I saw :D Oh, god, yessss! I can’t rhyme at all. I prefer freeverse or haikus, and my freeverse is REALLY weird. I definitely write from the heart as well, sooooo they usually end up visually looking quite different. Like, my poem about a valkyrie (fairly recent) is shaped like a sword. Lol, mine is still a baby, too. Some people have been on here for, like, 10 years, are on level 233, and have won SO many metals...I’m just like “wow”. Oh, and Kendra is also amazing...she’s been on for quite a bit and has won a lot. I literally got on...

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Zilla Babbitt
22:07 Sep 25, 2020

Yeah, I saw Kendra's been on there at least a year. How many levels are there?? I'm definitely looking forward to juggling Reedsy and AllPoetry :)

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22:36 Sep 25, 2020

Wow, cool. Um, endless, I think! Well, the highest I’ve seen is hundreds up...there’s no end as far as I can tell! Yurp 😆

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17:46 Sep 25, 2020

I'm joining allpoetry! I love poetry and reedsy! yay!

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17:48 Sep 25, 2020

Yaaaaay! I’m already obsessed, lol. Send me a link to your page when you get an account!

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17:49 Sep 25, 2020

Oh and here’s MY page: https://allpoetry.com/Samara_Atkinson

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17:54 Sep 25, 2020

Sure!! But I'm really busy with my book right now so it'll probably take a week. I am a super procrastinator lol

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18:43 Sep 25, 2020

Oh, and my new sequel is finally out for she who holds a universe!

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D. Shikha
17:16 Sep 25, 2020

Hey Aerin, Read your poem(s). I loved them!!! Never knew you were a poet too.

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17:37 Sep 25, 2020

Thanks!

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04:56 Sep 25, 2020

Hey, Aerin would you be kind to watch the first video it's on Harry potter. https://youtu.be/KxfnREWgN14 Sorry for asking your time, This my first time to edit video

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12:51 Sep 25, 2020

Haha, you’ve already asked me this, and yeah, I’ve watched it!

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14:12 Sep 25, 2020

Sorry

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22:32 Sep 24, 2020

Hey Aerin! Have a question for you. How many words does a novel/book have to be? How many is CQ?

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22:41 Sep 24, 2020

Hi Rachel! Well, something classifies as a novel 40,000, but that’s suuuuper short. 70,000-90,000 words is the sweet spot. CQ book 1 is 75,000.

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00:40 Sep 25, 2020

Woah... Okayy!! That's a lot. Thanks!

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B. W.
16:13 Sep 24, 2020

You know whenever you have that feeling whenever you have a lot of things to say someone and you really want to but ya just can't? sorta like a rant. That's how i'm feeling about Mia tbh because there's still a chance that she IS the down-voter and she's just lying and i really wanna say some things but i also don't want to and i dunno what to do. Still though even if she wasn't, what she did to Brooke and the others was terrible.

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21:18 Sep 24, 2020

🙂

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B. W.
21:19 Sep 24, 2020

hm?

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21:20 Sep 24, 2020

Idk that’s what I was asking Hmmm

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B. W.
21:21 Sep 24, 2020

wait, what about that Zombie story ya said youd do?

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21:22 Sep 24, 2020

Idkkkkk

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Akshat .
03:44 Sep 24, 2020

The world's quietest place is in Minneapolis Aerin, not Minnesota.

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13:04 Sep 24, 2020

Ummmmmm I just got that fact off the internet oki

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Akshat .
13:44 Sep 24, 2020

Oh okay. PS. Same! The only reason I got to know its in Minneapolis was because I searched YouTube lol

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Keerththan 😀
02:25 Sep 24, 2020

Hey Aerin, posted a new story. Mind reading it?

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13:04 Sep 24, 2020

Um, sure, but like I told your brother, please comment on one of my own stories before you ask me to read yours. Thanks.

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Keerththan 😀
13:14 Sep 24, 2020

I think I commented on this story. I was too lazy to search for it. I even liked it.

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Keerththan 😀
13:19 Sep 24, 2020

Okay, as you ask i will read another of yours... I thought this was your newest one. So I commented on it.

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Keerththan 😀
13:33 Sep 24, 2020

I read and commented on the story," The life sentence." Sorry again. 🤐😌

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14:51 Sep 24, 2020

Lol it’s fine, thanks, I’ll drop on by to your new profile after school!

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Keerththan 😀
14:52 Sep 24, 2020

Lol, thank you.

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01:55 Sep 24, 2020

So you were Samara! Knew it!! Also that makes a lot of sense why you were concerned that Ashley Summer was copying Your (Samara's) Account!

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01:57 Sep 24, 2020

Lol yurp

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