Zio sat across from me on an old couch nearby, which I'm surprised was even still standing and hadn't collapsed yet. Why do I even keep that? "You and me? You're saying we're siblings?"
My "brother" nodded at the question and then spoke, "Yes, I've been trying to find one of my siblings for the past couple of days. Now that I managed to-"
I put one of my fingers up to shush him while staying where I was (No way am I gonna go near or touch my so-called "brother") and then proceeded to ask, "Hold on. Why have you been looking for one of your siblings?"
"Well, I was honestly hoping that we could-"
"You planning on trying to kill me or one of the others when you have our trust??"
While I wasn't looking in his direction anymore, I managed to hear what was probably him falling off of the couch. "Huh?...no no of course not! I'd never try to do any of that, I promise."
There were light footsteps after he said that (I honestly thought it was just the old floorboards creaking at first.) as a cold and light hand was set on my shoulder. "Now, if you would please just let me explain and-"
"Don't. Touch. Me." I quickly slapped his hand away from my shoulder, then backed up a little bit. What does he think he's doing? Also, why was his hand so cold?
"Oh gosh, I'm sorry I didn't..."
"Whatever. You can still explain whatever it is you wanted to explain, but just don't touch me."
He put himself back onto the couch and patted the other side of it like he wanted me to come and sit down. It's not that close to him, fine...though he better not try anything.
It didn't take long for him to start explaining after that, I swear he could explain for over twenty-four hours if nobody stopped him. I didn't care that much though, so I was zoning out a lot.
"...And I was thinking that if me and some of my siblings went together, we'd have a little chat with our father and maybe stop him? All of the children of Zeus get treated like they're just like him, I hate it."
Alright, he's probably crazy. Going and trying to take on your father, who is one of the most powerful gods, what could go wrong? This idea in general is a bit crazy...I like that.
I'm not sure how long I was zoning out for again, though he was still going. "...Well, that's all that's happened to me when others figured out who I was the child of...has anything happened to you?"
Even though the last part was in a mumble, I managed to hear him say, "Wait no, why did I ask that?! That was stupid. Who would want to talk about it?" he had probably said some more, but I didn't care or manage to hear the rest.
"I...I don't want to talk about it."
"Did I-"
"Shut it. Though you really want to go and do and do that?"
He nodded a little bit and then asked, "Yes, it would be for all the children of Zeus! I'm sure you must have thought about doing it sometimes, so what do you say?"
"...Sure...let's do it."
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I think it's been about twenty minutes since I've been walking through the forest, though I had a little feeling that I'd find someone soon.
Luckily Lia or none of the others had decided to come with me, what if they got hurt? Or what if they got killed? Who knows what Zeus would do to them, wait actually...
"Hah! Finally!"
Without much thinking after hearing the voice, I started to head towards it. Maybe it would be someone I was looking for? Or maybe it was someone that could help me find someone I was looking for.
After going through a couple of large trees, I finally spotted someone. There was a girl standing in the center, a tree was on its side in front of her. Was she the one I was looking for?
Wait a minute...was that tree struck by lightning? Huh, could she have done that...?
"Wow..."
"Huh? Who's there?!"
***
"Hey, I didn't actually get your name yet."
"My name? It's Zinaida."
He had this certain look on his face (I think I know what he was thinking when he heard that...) as he then started to ask, "Wait a minute, doesn't that mean of Z..."
"Yeah yeah I know, now shush."
It was probably about an hour of silence between the two of us (at least that's what it felt like to me though, it could have been a few minutes.) while he awkwardly coughed.
"So, what do you usually like to do?" we had asked in unison.
"Ah jeez, I've never really done that much stuff. I just hang out with my friends and wife when I can, what about you?"
"Train."
He got off of the couch and began to pace around me, or at least that's what I think he was doing. "What else do you do?"
"Nothing, I just train."
"Wait, are you serious?"
"Why would I be lying?"
He sighed and sat back next to me, he was a bit closer but luckily he still wasn't touching me or anything. "You know what? I'm going to make sure you relax, you're not gonna train for a while. It's quite nice to just have some fun..."
"But what about the whole thing we just talked about? Going to see our father and try to stop him? Shouldn't we be training instead? You definitely need to..."
"Listen, you'd still need to be feeling well and rested when we eventually do it. You might just push yourself or something if you always do this."
"But-"
"How about this? If you relax and just have some fun with me for a while, you can help me train if you want, or just really anything you'd wanna do. Your probably correct about me needing to do this anyway..."
"Fine..."
"Good, now come with me, please. I have the perfect idea on what we could do first."
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I really loved this story! Glad to see the list of names I gave was useful! I loved the conversations between Zio and Zinaida, and Zinaida's personality. Great job! Can't wait for Part 5!
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Thanks ^^ What's something you'd wanna see happen in part 5, and any guesses on why Zinaida doesn't like to be touched?
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Hmm, I probably want to see the shell around Zinaida loosen (if that makes sense?) Basically, have her loosen around Zio. I think something may happen whenever she touches something, idk what, but possibly something she can't control.
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Hm? Why do you think something happens whenever she touches something?
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Idk it's a far fetched idea, but she's very hesitant whenever someone gets close to her. I might be wrong though.
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Do you maybe have any other guesses? Though that idea is a little interesting.
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This was great!! I think the relationship with Zio was sooooooooo good. I would like Zinaida to talk more though, maybe be more snarky than she already was.
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Thanks, and I'm glad that you liked it ^^ I can try to do that stuff at some point then, did you have a favorite part and is there something you'd wanna see happen in the next part?
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Great!! My favorite part was in the beginning and how mean she was, and I would like her to warm to him over time.
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As you could probably tell, she doesn't really like being touched. Ya have any guesses for why?
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I would guess that she was either kidnapped at a young age or distrusts everyone.
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Your kind of correct in a way with those, though there's a lot of reasons for why she doesn't like being touched. I might go into it at some point in one of the parts, but I'm not sure.
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Now, would it be bad if I start reading the series from here instead of the first part?
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You should still at least check the other three parts out at some point, I don't want ya to get confused or anything. Though I don't really see a big problem with you reading the series from this part. Did you maybe have a favorite part or anything like that?
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Yeah, I have parts 2 and 3 in my library, I'll read them when I get the time :) Yeah, actually, I haven't read it yet :/ We had to go somewhere in such an abrupt notice earlier, I only got back now. I'll probably start from the first part of the series until I get here so I won't go asking useless questions lol
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I'll go check it out later, after dinner, maybe.....for the meantime..hush, hush, no spoilers (im building up suspense for absolutely no reason lol)
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Well with this part since you already read it and stuff, did you maybe have a favorite part or anything like that?
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Probably when he goes to touch her, it's interesting as to why she didn't wanna be touched (probably a preference? but since its a fantasy the possibilities are endless)...or maybe the reason was mentioned in the previous parts? idk
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This is the first part that his sister appears in, so it's never been mentioned in a previous part or anything. You can guess the reasons why she doesn't want to be touched though if you want? I'm not sure if I'll ever say the reasons in an actual part though.
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Heyloooooooooo!
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How are you doing?
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New thread! And no, the show ended after the seventh season. I really, really like the show, but the last season was not very good.
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Why wasn't the last season good?
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They got rid of most of the main characters and the storyline was kind of weird, which was a disappointment, but that's just my opinion.
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Wait so when did the show even end?
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It ended in 2018 I think.
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whats another good show?
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New thread? The other one was getting long :/
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yeah sure, what do ya wanna talk about now?
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Hmm, I read this joke yesterday.. Pressing F5 is so refreshing lol
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Where'd ya find that joke?
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On r/one liners.... But you know like.. they could've gotten that from anywhere else and reposted it :/
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did you find any other ones?
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I thought this downvoting was over, but someone decided to start again for me... T-T do you want to do an upvote spree?
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Eh? I don't think its really even a big deal anymore or anything, I kind of forgot about it all. How much did ya even lose though?
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Yeah, same here. I stopped paying attention to my points a few months ago but only realized when I was going through one of my threads with you to respond and notice all of my comments were downvoted T-T I think I have an idea who it is, but I'm not going to say who :)
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It also still just feels really empty or lonely on here for some reason, at least just for me :/ barely anyone has still been talking with me and its only you and a few other people, is that the same with you?
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I've been really busy recently, so I've basically only talked to you and a few others occasionally T-T But today, since I finished my last exam, I reached out to a ton of people and most of them responded. So it's been pretty social for me :D Hmm, I don't know why that's happening. It might be because this is the time where a lot of people have to apply and go through a lot of processes for certain programs/schools/etc. for the next year. Or because a lot of people have left Reedsy or stopped checking it as often TT_TT which is really sad....
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Eh, its fine and yeah, unfortunately I still DO have writers block and i really just don't know what to do :/
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Yeah, I'm actually still pretty bored and I don't really mind what we talk about. Uh, ya got any favorite songs?
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I've always loved a lot of sad songs for some reason as well, I kind of have a play-list of them. A few of them are "Hold on" "Let You Down" and "Before you go"
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Yeah they are, so do you have any favorite movies or something?
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If you want to play Skribble at 3:30 EST I'll put the link at the bottom of my bio. :)
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I never felt like playing today, though was it at least fun?
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Aw that's fine. We actually didn't end up playing, I had to do something else last minute. Oop XD
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Oh alright, also have you maybe seen the new prompts?
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Yeah, I did! I like them! I think I'll continue my reedsy-cast series, cause I have a ship in the story. Hehe (Don't worry, I'm not gonna start a war like Brooke did) How about you?
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A ship? Well did ya ask the two people if it was alright at least? and eh, I'm not really sure. I think I might have writers block and I've had it for a little while, I could use some help.
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Reedsy-cast out! :D
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I'll go check it out ^^
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If you would like to play at 3:30 EST I'm going to put the link in my bio (at the bottom XD) :)
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that one person hasnt shown up recently, right?
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Nope, thank goodness. XD
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Have a lot of people been playing though recently?
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We're playing Skribble again at 3:30 EST, and if you want to join the link will be at the bottom of my bio. :)))
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I'm not sure if I will today, though I'll think about it.
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Okay, that's fine! :)
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Was it fun?
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Yeah! A lot of people played and the spammers didn't come. :)
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when are you playing next?
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If you would like to be in the first part of my new reedsy-cast series could you fill out this form? :) https://forms.gle/GYJ6V5zaU7mQct5v5
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I'll do it ^^
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Yay!!! Thanks!
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So i did it, did you find mine yet or something?
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Yes, I did! I'll probably start writing for this week's prompts. :)
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When do ya think it'll be finished?
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Hi B!
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Hey how are you doing?
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Pretty good; I added a new story. How about you?
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I want to make a new story and stuff, but I just can't think of anything with these prompts. I don't like them that much.
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Maybe next week will be better.
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Maybe, also do you maybe wanna hear a joke or something?
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The skribbls now have a doc for chatting (kinda like Aerin's doc) and if you want to be on it the link is in my bio! :)
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Aerin's doc?
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It's similar to Aerin's doc of randomness (if you've seen that in her bio) Also, I made a writing quiz if you want to do it! https://forms.gle/KhviFKES3ZoNo6bs7
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Alright I'll check both of those out soon, so how are you doing today?
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Great! I'm so happy it's Friday! You? :) Also, I love the new prompts! Do you like them?
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Eh, I don't really like them that much
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We're playing skribble again at 3:30 today, if you want to join the link will be at the bottom of my bio. :)
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Eh, I'm not sure if I'll play it today. I'll probably play it next time though ^^
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That's alright!
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can you play scribbl today?
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I think I might be able to
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If you want to play skribble at the same time today I'm putting the link at the bottom of my bio. (So it's less visible to he who must not be named) XD
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Eh, I don't think I'll be playing it today, though don't worry I'll play it next time if i don't show up today.
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Okay, we finished playing, but that's okay. You can another time! :)
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Did that one person ever show up?
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Yeah, but this time they were "Luke" so we all thought it was Luke until we realized it was Ayy.
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How do they even keep finding it??
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I got a new story out!!
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You did? I'll check it out soon ^^
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:)
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Sorry I haven't been able to read it yet or anything, I've just been doing some other stuff
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Its okay
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https://skribbl.io/?WiwlzjGzBwuU
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Yay ^^
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