“Just give him a second chance!” Paxton pleads.
“Never!” I cry. “Mark will die in those chains tomorrow!”
I dramatically point to the left floor, where Levi sits, hunched over his bound limbs.
Paxton approaches me. “But why?!”
“You know why! He killed my sister, my beloved Isa. Now he will pay the price!”
“It was an accident!” Paxton exclaims. “If you give him a second chance, Mark’ll fix this, I swear!”
I snarl. “You can't fix dead, Vayd. Mark’ll be done for in a day, and you’ll join him if you don’t leave!”
Paxton’s eyebrows pinch together. Then his mouth curls into a smile as he unsheathes his sword. “I’m not leaving without a fight, Arya.”
I smirk as the sound of my own sword scraping against its sheath fills the cavern. I twirl my sword as I gracefully jump off the giant rock I’ve been perched on. “Okay, then.” I toss my head back and throw my hands up as I cackle as loud as I can. A moment goes by and I regain my posture, staring coldly at Paxton. “Let’s fight.”
*
“CUUUUUUUUUUT!”
The producer’s voice booms out of the speakers as bells ring, signaling the end of the scene. Smiling, I place my plastic blade on the fake rock in the center of the black box—although, with the fantastic skills the staff have, it’s a jungle where the evil Lady Arya (or as everyone on set calls the character: Loony Lordess Arya) avenges her sister’s death.
“That was amazing, sweetheart!” Micheal Garcia, my dark-skinned, incredibly kind producer, says as he discards his microphone. He pushes open the door, the one that's part of the clear wall separating the filming part of the theater and where the staff sit, and hugs me. “Terrific acting, Miss Wren.”
Let me set the scene of where we filmed our TV show (Second Chances) for you: there’s a giant room, daily the size of a gym. Two thirds of it is for filming, and the last third is cut off by a giant, clear wall. In the filming section, there are props and stuff, but also a fake wall—a black stretch of thick plastic leaving a five-foot gap in between the filming space and the back wall. Behind the fake wall are a couple chairs for the special effects people, who control anything overhead—it’s their job to pull the right ropes to release bags of leaves or something. There’s tons of funky stuff lying around back there, like sacks of strange props or things connected to the ceiling in advance like my harness (attached to cables) for later.
I swat his arm. “Micheal, for the millionth time, don’t ‘miss’ a seventeen-year-old. I’m a teenager! Not an unmarried woman!”
He just winks at me as he strolls over to congratulate the male lead and my tall, sporty best friend, Paxton Jones.
Jolie Claremont strides onto the stage, her blond ponytail whipping around as she jogs to her friend, Levi Strong. Levi is also my friend—although he’s more like a nice little brother (same as he is to all of us), a twelve-year-old afraid of messing up.
The second after Levi’s bonds are on the floor and he’s received a ‘nice work’, Jolie walks over to Paxton. The two hug as Jolie showers him with praise, and she pecks him on the cheek before everybody trots over to me.
I cringe. Jolie and Paxton have been dating for almost two years, but I still don’t appreciate when they kiss. Blech.
“So,” Paxton says as he walks up to me, “how long of a break do we have?”
I shrug as his green eyes stare at me expectantly. “I dunno. Ask Micheal.”
Jolie sighs, as she always does when my friend and I interact. Jolie and I have never been that close, but as soon as she and Paxton started dating the most she ever did was tolerate me. She seemed to be offended any time Paxton even spoke to me, which was extremely stupid considering we had been best friend since kindergarten, when we both hatched dreams to become actors.
Paxton hugs me and starts off. We’re both very affectionate with hugging, and, like usual, Jolie’s gray eyes bore into my matching ones after the embrace. “Quit it.”
“Quit what?”
“Wren, you know what.”
I laugh and glance at her. “Jolie, stop it.”
“No, you stop it.” She seems genuinely annoyed so I laugh even more.
Levi snorts and pats his bestie’s blond head. “Come on, Jolie. Let’s go get some chips.”
He grabs her wrist but Jolie breaks away. She sends me a look before walking off, saying, “Take Pax or something.”
Levi shrugs and strolls over to Paxton.
I turn around to meet them at the vending machines, immediately walking into Micheal.
“Oh! Sorry,” I say, jumping back.
His eyes crinkle as he smiles. “No problem. Are you ready for your big flying scene, sweetheart?”
I grin. “Totally.”
“Good, because it’s starting in a moment.”
I nod and start to migrate towards the stage as Micheal’s voice comes over the speakers once again: “Guys, the flying scene starts in two minutes!”
I pull my harness around from the fake wall. Levi helps me fit it on before he races back to his original spot. “Where’s Paxton?” I hiss.
“In the bathroom,” Levi says.
Paxton arrives and ties the ropes onto Levi again then grabs his sword and dashes a couple yards from where I pose, sword in hand and harness and cables attached to my waist and chest. Paxton seems surprised to see me. “Wait, Wren, you’re doing this scene?”
“Yeah.”
“I thought it was Jolie.”
“No, her auditions are next week.”
“Let me help you with your harness.”
He starts walking towards me but I signal him off. “It’s fine. My harness is already on.”
I pull over my cape to cover the equipment and listen as Micheal’s voice says, “Show ‘Second Chances’, Scene forty-four, take one, go!”
“Lordess Arya,” Paxton begins, “I’m prepared to fight you.”
My mouth curls into a smile as I flip my brown curls with streaks of hot pink. “You have a sword and a temper, but you’re not aware of my power.”
He squints at me. “Uh, you have a power?”
I smile. “Exactly! Clueless! Now watch, puny mortal, as I fly!”
I try to calm my rattled nerves as the cables start to lift me up, up, up, until I’m yards above my co-star’s head. I grin and release the breath I didn’t know I was keeping bottled up. I’m flying! Not actually flying, but flying! Of course, I’ve flown before in rehearsals, but it still terrified and exhilarated me every time I did it again.
“No freakin’ way,” Paxton breaths as he gazes up at me.
“Yes freakin’ way, puny mortal!”
“Stop it with that nickname. You’re human, too.”
“But I have powers!” I flounce around in the sky.
“That doesn’t change your species, idiot!”
I place a hand in my chest and huff. “It’s Arya, you nincompoop!”
“That’s what I said.”
Fake laughter recordings pours out of the speakers and my hands clenched into fists. “You will pay, Vayd!”
I’m starting to glide down when my dissent is sped up by my harness breaking.
I shriek as I start to fall the twenty feet between Paxton and I.
“AHHHHH!” comes out of my mouth as I crash to the floor, where Paxton is trying to catch me. I smash into him and we both collapse to the ground.
*
Am I dead? My brain wonders.
No, I don’t think so.
Wait, why am I not dead?
It was seven yards, not a mile, stupid.
You’re stupid, stupid!
We’re the same person, weirdo!
I smack my head in an attempt to rid the little voice I’m arguing with. Sadly, the voice is my conscience, and you can’t knock your mind out of your skull.
I wince when my palm connects with my head. Ouch.
Wow, that hurt, I think as I instinctively reach my hand up to rub my head, before jutting my hand back as I remembered the last time something connected with my head—aka five seconds ago.
I lift my head up to take in my surroundings. I’m still on the floor, apparently. Jolie is by my side—nope, wait, she’s tending to her boyfriend, who’s to my left.
I roll over and ask Paxton, “You okay, buddy?”
He groans and pulls himself to his feet. “I’ve been better.”
Jolie glares at me as she also stands up.
“How long was I out?” I glance at Levi, who hauls me up.
He shrugs. “You weren’t ‘out’. Your harness snapped and you fell, bashing heads with my buddy Paxton before you both tumbled to the ground. You shut your eyes, then opened them, and here we are. This all happened ten seconds ago, by the way.”
I dust myself off and fumble with my harness. The literal lock connecting the cables to the straps is lying on the floor, not completely closed. I peer up and spot the cables swinging up high.
“You okay?” Levi asks me.
I nod and turn to Paxton. “Sorry about that.”
“Don't sweat it, Wren,” he replies. “I’m sure the lock just broke.”
We all nod to ourselves, me thinking it was a wonder I stayed in the air as long as I did with a broken lock, before…
“The lock didn’t break,” Micheal announces from behind us.
We all jump. “You scared us,” I blink as he held up the lock.
“Don't be startled, sweethearts,” he says.
“Anyways…” Paxton swallows, “you were saying?”
“This wasn’t a mistake,” Micheal says. “The lock. It wasn’t broken, it was unlocked. Somebody obviously wanted this to happen, to hurt Wren.”
“Duh,” Jolie rolls her eyes, “but who?”
“We don’t know,” Micheal says.
“Duh,” I add, smiling.
Jolie rolls her eyes again and I chuckle before wincing and rubbing my tailbone. “Ow,” I complain to myself.
“Don’t be such a crybaby!” Jolie says. “Woman up, weakling.”
I want to smack her. “I’m not a ‘weakling’, Jolie.”
“You’re not very strong.”
“I don’t play sports! Besides running races, I mean. I’m an—”
“Artist,” she says in unison with me. Just, she pronounces it the right way but in a mocking tone. I glare daggers.
She grins at me. “Yeah, I know.”
“You guys?” I turn to my friends. “I’m pretty sure Jolie ruined the lock.”
She gasped and looked super offended. “What? No! I would never hurt you!”
“Mmmhmm,” I gave her the side-eye.
“Wren,” Paxton says, “I know Jolie doesn’t like you that much, but she would never try to hurt you. Right, Jolie?” He turns to his girlfriend, who kisses him on the cheek (again) before saying sweetly, “Of course, babe.”
I mime barfing and glance at Levi. “Lev, do you have any ideas for suspects?”
“It could be anyone,” he says. “Your harness was attached to the cables, lying behind the other fake wall in this theater, this whole time, so anyone could’ve unlocked it.”
“Nope,” Micheal shook his head. “I checked during the scene before the train wreck one, and it was fine. It was securely locked to the cable. When Wren put the harness on, the lock would’ve already been unlocked. And nobody went behind the wall after I checked—at least, I didn’t see them. But even if I didn’t see them, there’s only one key to the lock on the harness. That key is hidden behind the vending machine, as only you guys and myself know.”
He gestures to the vending machine, beeping by the supply room door.
“Wait,” Jolie says slowly, “that means it has to be one of us four.”
“Why do you say that?” Pax frowns.
“Because only we know how to get into the room.”
“Also Micheal,” Pax protests. His face melted into a gasp as she turned to our producer. “Did you do it?!”
“I would never want to hurt Wren, sweetheart!”
I nod. “I know.”
Levi shrugs. “We have to consider all possibilities. Maybe Micheal is mad at you or something…?”
Micheal frowns. “Of course not.”
“You did get mad when Wren messed up the same line seven times,” Jolie remarks.
“I was amused, not annoyed. And definitely not mad.”
“Besides, I’m one of his lead roles,” I say. “Micheal wouldn’t want to hurt me purely because of his show, but that doesn’t even matter seeing he cares about me.”
“Completely true, sweetheart,” he smiles.
“I think this investigation with Micheal is over,” I tell my friends. “Which means it has to be Pax, Levi or Jolie that unlocked the lock and sent me falling.”
“Again, it’s not me,” Jolie says. “I don’t like you, but I wouldn’t hurt you. I don’t do that. My boyfriend, on the other hand…”
Paxton protests loudly before turning to me. “I’d never try to hurt you, Wren.”
I smile. “Duh. Sorry. I know.”
“Again, we’ve got to consider everything,” Levi says. “I mean, Paxton definitely didn’t do it, but we should still check.”
“What would I do it for?” Paxton throws his hands up. “Wren is my best friend and I would never want to hurt her.”
I hug him. “You’re definitely out of the conversation.”
Jolie looks like it's taking all of her willpower not to yank us two besties apart. “Who else could it be?”
“Levi,” Paxton offered up.
I shook my head. “No. He’d never do it, either.” Paxton nodded.
“Really,” Jolie’s eyes narrow. “He helped put on your harness, remember? He could’ve easily unlocked it while assisting you.”
“No,” I say, a little more forcefully. “Right, Levi?”
I turned to my friend but he’s shaking, his eyes somewhere off in the distance. “I…I…I didn’t,” he mustered quietly. “I really didn’t, Wren. Please believe me.”
I take my young friend into my arms. “Of course, Levi. I’m sorry.”
“Okay,” Micheal sighs, “we’re back where we started.”
“We could just let this be,” Jolie offers, “and forget this ever happened.”
“Are you okay with that, Wren?” Micheal says.
I shrug. “I’m fine if we never find out who did this to me. As long as it doesn’t happen again, it’s okay.” I wasn’t exactly a forgive-and-forget kind of girl, but I didn’t even know who to forgive-and-forget, so…so be it.
Paxton sighs—with relief or exasperation; I can’t tell. Then he says, “I’m going to go to the bathroom. Bye.”
“Again?” Levi frowns.
“Yes! Geez, Levi!”
He strolls off and I squint at Levi. “Wait. Didn’t you tell me he was in the bathroom earlier, but right after you guys got chips?”
“At the vending machine, yep,” he nods.
“And…” I turn to Micheal. “The key is hidden in the vending machine, right?”
“Taped to the back,” he confirms.
I take a deep breath then let the air drain out the side of my mouth. “Is it possible that Paxton snagged the key while getting a snack with Levi, then faked a bathroom break so he could sneak behind the fake wall and unlock my harness?”
There's a silence as everybody thinks about my theory.
“Dang, Wren’s right,” Levi holds his forehead in his palm.
Micheal sighs. “It appears Paxton tried to hurt Wren.”
“No,” Jolie says. “No, I really don’t think Paxton would do that. I don’t like Wren, but my boyfriend’s best friends with her. Besides, wouldn’t the special effects crew have seen him?”
“They were on break, same as you guys,” Micheal says.
“He didn't do it,” Jolie repeats.
I bit my lip. “Jolie, I think he did.”
Just then, Pax walked up. “What’s up?”
“You tried to kill me.”
“No!”
“Yes,” I insist. “All the evidence points to you. We know you got the key from the vending machine then faked your bathroom break.”
“I think you’re jumping to conclusions without all the evidence, Wren. I would never try to hurt you!”
“Well, you did!”
“I. DID. NOT. TRY. TO. HURT. YOU!” Paxton grits his teeth. “Bye.”
He starts to walk off but Levi kicks his foot out and trips him. He tumbles and lands in a heap.
“Levi, don’t trip my boyfriend!” Jolie protests, bending down to help Paxton up. She freezes. “Pax, what’s that?”
“What’s what?” He says nervously, his eyes darting around as he shifts his body.
“That,” she says, grabbing a copper key out from under her.
Micheal snatches it up. “This is it! The key to the lock!”
“The lock that caused me to fall twenty feet to the ground,” I snarl. “Pax. I can’t believe you. WHY?!”
“I didn’t try to hurt you.”
“Well, Jolie, Micheal, and Levi sure didn’t. You did it, Pax.”
“I know.”
I blinked in surprise. “But you kept saying you didn’t try to hurt me…?”
“I didn’t. I tried to hurt Jolie. I thought she was going to be using the harness.”
Jolie’s jaw drops and I muster, “Why?”
“She’s Jolie! She’s been driving me crazy for the past year, and I hate how awfully she’s been treating you, my best friend!”
His words hang in the air before…
“I’ll have to ask you to leave,” Micheal tells Pax, his voice low but with a thick coating of anger underneath it.
He just nods and walks away. Levi says, “I’m going to go talk to him,” before going after him.
Micheal patted me and Jolie on the shoulders, says “We’ll talk about this soon”, then walks off.
“Well,” Jolie says slowly, “I’m furious with Pax.”
“You didn’t get hurt.”
“But he was trying to drop me.”
I nod. “Maybe you could be a little nicer to me? That’s the reason for all of this.”
“I’ll try. But I hate him right now.”
I think. I don’t like Jolie, but she and Pax looked so happy together. If she tries to be neutral towards me, I could definitely see them together again. But Jolie has to do one thing in order for this to work. “You know, Jolie…”
“What?”
I smile. “Just give him a second chance.”
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223 comments
It's amazing story! The start was really good.
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Yay, thank you!!
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Im way too tied to write an actual sounding review so uh... Nice story! I really enjoyed it! I'll be back later when I have more braincells...
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Haha okay thanks
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Nice story. I like the twist that Pax was the one who did it... but not for the suspected reason of hurting Wren! Also, I love Wren’s character and how she has her friends’ back, defending them from the beginning. Keep up the good work! :)
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Thank you, Cara!
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Aerin, I love this story! Its like a little mystery and I really enjoyed it. I think you had a great number of characters and expressed their unique personalities perfectly. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
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Thanks so much, Jessica!
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Great story!!! One's the answer...
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Thanks! Yep!
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This was an amazing story! The comedic mystery really made it very enjoyable to read! I love the names you use in all your stories, there very unique! Do you just make them up, or have a website you use? WOnderful submission, great job!! Keep writing!! -Skylar Rose
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Aw, thank you so much!!! I’m so happy you liked it. Thank you; I try to pick unique names. I don’t have a website in particular, I mostly just get the names from books or real life (like, Jolie is from KotLC, Pax is from a fox book, Wren is from the FANTASTIC book Wild Bird, and Levi...I dunno, it was on my mind) but occasionally I look up some names. Thanks again, Skylar! (Love your name!) ~Aerin
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OMG, YOU READ KOTLC?!?! Sorry, just had a fangirl moment😅
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YESSSS I LOVE KOTLC! I cannot WAIT for book 8.5 to come out. Did you see the new cover? It’s so pretty! Oh, and Unlocked is told from Sophie AND Keefe’s POVs! I’M SO EXCITED! Keefe is by far my fav character. Also, I’m on team Sokeefe all the way. BOO, Sophitz! What do you think? *sorry, more fan girl moments*
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Omg, same, go Sokeefe. I haven't seen the 8.5 cover, and I'm sad to say, I'm only on book 6. *sighs in shame* but I'll get there soon enough! I CANNOT WAIT for a Keefe perspective! I like Keefe, Biana, and Marella!! AAHHHH I'M DYING, KOTLC FOREVER!!!
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YESSSSS
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This is an awesome story!
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Thanks!
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Aerun,I think this is your second story I'm reading.You haven't read mine,Breaking in.Read and comment it but very honestly.
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Thanks? Um, okay? 👌
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Great story. Wonderful beginning to the story. Great job and fit to the prompt. Would you mind reading my new story "secret don't remain buried?"
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Thanks! Sure!
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10/10 i don't really know what else to say besides that all of your stories you make are always so good, i haven't read all of them yet but i will soon and i'm sure the other ones are still really amazing like this one and the other ones ive went on and said things about
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Thanks!
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no problem :) and i was wondering that maybe you could tell me what you think about my new story 'we know, do you know?' i know ya liked it but i just like seeing your comments telling me about the things for it and maybe some other advice with it
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Creative take on the prompt, and an engaging plot with all the twists and turns - I think this is nicely done. I particularly like the beginning where you allude to the fact that the characters are acting by the fact that their names don't match in the dialogue and narration - this draws the reader in. For some constructive feedback, I think you could make your characters more lifelike if they had more complex/conflicting traits - for example, if you showed a softer side of Jolie. Obviously this is difficult to do in a short space, and it's ...
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This story is incredible. I especially like this part: "Am I dead? My brain wonders. No, I don’t think so. Wait, why am I not dead? It was seven yards, not a mile, stupid. You’re stupid, stupid! We’re the same person, weirdo!" It rings true for a conversation that happens in one's head. I should know...
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Haha, thanks so much! I personally love writing conversation when a person is talking when themselves...especially when their inner voice is sassy!
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Wow, nice job with this story! I think it's funny that the Latin word "pax" means "peace", and the character Pax's intentions were not peaceful. Enjoyable story, though!
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Haha, that’s cool! Thanks 😄😄😄
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I totally love the double meaning you put in this story: It's literally about a show called "Second Chances", and it's ultimately about someone giving someone a second chance. Great mystery story too. I'm not very good at solving riddles, but here's a joke: Why did the road cross the chicken?
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Haha, thanks! Um...because it was sick of being walked over???
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No, but close: Because the chicken wouldn't get out of the paver's way.
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Thank you!
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I think I just figured out the answer to the riddle for today😂. If I’m not mistaken, could it be your legs?
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Yesssss! Tehehehehe...
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Nice 😎😂😂!
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🤣🤣🤣 Actually, a new daily riddle is up, if you want to check it out!
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Sure😂. I’ll be glad to. Whenever I have an answer, I’ll let you know.
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Ooh, I love this story and all the characters are so great! The dialogue was also so fun to read. Amazing work!
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Thank you so much!!!
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I absolutely love this one. I didn't write for this prompt be cause I couldn't think of anything, but yours is amazing! 2 thumbs up! 😮😍😊
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Yaaaay thanks so much!
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Of course! :D
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Heya, Aerin!! Great job on the leaderboard!!! BIG HUGS (/^U^)/ Also, what if we had a Hunger Games, but for Reedsy? Like Hunger Games for writers and so twenty-four writers from Reedsy would be chosen, and every week is a different round. Every round, you can write on any prompt but it has to be of a specific genre. People would step out of their comfort zones in writing! So I'm guessing there would be three/five rounds? I mean it's an idea but it would be so much fun to do. Writer could collaborate, like one would write a prequel and the o...
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Yeaaaah that would be fun! But I think it would be a bit hard to pull off
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Hmmm good point but I really want to have a Writers' Games... Do we talk to the head honchos of Reedsy? Like, the judges?
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I'll do that.
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I thought Jolie did it. But then they found out Lucas did it and I was like whaaaaaat? You formed an amazing story! You are a great writer! And congrats on publishing a novel, I will look for it! Keep writing! Faith
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Yay, thank you!!! (P. S. Well, it’s not published yet—Color Quest will be on Amazon by the end of the month)
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