The Vampire
Freezing earth.
Howling wind.
The air is fresh
And full of sin.
I stalk the alleys.
I know what's coming.
Through the corner of my eye
I see her running.
The child is screaming,
Cold and white.
And now she's fleeing
Through the night.
Not a chance
This small girl has.
I'm stalking her,
And moving fast.
My feet lift up
Above the ground.
And from my shoulders
Two wings sprout.
I'm growing smaller,
Furry and black.
And now I see her
Turning back.
"Oh, where'd he go?"
The small girl stutters
"He must be in my head"
She quietly mutters.
I'm gaining speed now
And gaining fast.
I zoom through the air
I've got her at last.
I change back form
To my human self
The small girl screams
Despite herself.
I grasp her hand
So pale and slim
I bite down hard
My teeth sink in.
The smooth red liquid
Drips down my face
It's pooling up
All over the place.
The girl starts running
With the speed of a car.
She's mine now,
She won't get far.
I turn away.
I see a flash of blue.
I know what it is.
It's victim number two.
It's a boy this time,
That I can see.
What I don't understand
Is that he looks like- me?
Quickly I hide
Behind a door.
I listen
But can here no more.
The Child
Boy, how I love trick-or-treating. It's probably the best way to grab hold of an unhealthy amount of candy without making your parents mad, and just about every kid on the planet knows this. I'm no exception. I won't go home until I've raided every single house in the whole town from all its goodies. I walk up to the next house and knock on the door.
The Vampire
"He must be gone"
I hear myself say
There's a knock on the door
I think 'just go away'.
Shaking slightly,
I open it a crack
The boy is there,
holding a green party bag.
"TRICK OR TREAT!"
He shouts aloud.
I stare at him,
And give a frown.
The blood-red lips
and pale white skin.
It must be true,
I know it's him.
"Hello my son"
I sharply rasp.
He stares at me
And starts to laugh.
I glare at him
My eyes are ablaze.
Does he really think
That this is a game?
"TRICK OR TREAT"
He shouts again.
This arrogant boy
Will soon be dead.
I reach for his hand,
He pulls it away.
I sigh to myself,
It'll be a long day.
I grab again
And bite down hard.
Blood fills my mouth,
Delicious and tart.
He stares at his hand,
in a state of shock.
I stare back at him,
Still a rock.
He starts to cry
Then starts to run.
"Oh great", I sigh.
"Well, this will be fun".
I chase him through
The quiet town
Past parks and alleys
All around.
The wind is whistling
In my ears.
And drying off
The young boy's tears.
He's wailing now,
It's a horrid sound.
I hope that
No one else is around.
He's shaking like a motor
As he stumbles down the road.
"HELP" he calls out,
His voice crackling like a toad.
I chuckle to myself,
Does he think he will be saved?
It's no late for him now.
There's no way he can escape.
The Child
"What. The. Freak." I think as I run down the alley, my legs moving faster than they have ever moved before. Well, this is a total mess that I've gotten myself into. Since when had a VAMPIRE moved into our town? I didn't even know those things existed North of New York, since when had they gotten all the way up to Vermont? Sure, I had dressed up as one for Halloween, but the last thing I had expected was a REAL one to come trotting along and distrusting the serene calm of our small town. Also, did he think I was his SON because of my costume? As I looked around for possible escape routes I thought how nothing looked familiar anymore. The bright sweet cherry trees had turned into ominous giants, and the wide gravel paths had turned into narrow, dark passages. I screamed for help as I ran past my friend's house, but my voice was so streaked with fear that it came out as a weak squeal. I turned around, but the vampire was nowhere in sight.
The Vampire
He's not stopping,
That's not good.
I've chased him around
The whole neighborhood.
However,
I am not quite peeved
I still have one trick
Up my sleeve.
I'm in the process
Of transformation.
It's a vampire trick
Used across the nations.
I'm a bat now,
Small and furry.
Dashing through the air
In a hurry.
The boy is confused
He slows to a walk.
He doesn't see me.
He comes to a stop.
I land on him
He starts to shriek.
I bite him with
My small sharp teeth.
The Child.
I look around for the vampire, but he's gone. Or so I think, until I feel a mouse-sized animal on my shoulder. I want to slap my forehead. Of course. He's a vampire. He turns into a bat. He's a bat-man. WHY did I not think of that before? He bites me hard, and suddenly my blood stops flowing. I can't breathe, it's like he has my in his evil grasp and won't let go. Which, now that I think about it, is exactly what is happening. My brain feels like jelly and I can barely see. My blood is pumping ferociously as if it was trying to escape my body. My head is swirling and my eyes are burning. The last thing I remember as I slip of consciousness is the vampire transforming back into a human, his evil, smirking face is something I will never forget.
The Vampire
Well, that's that.
The end of the game
He's mine now.
He'll never be the same.
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41 comments
I LOVE WHAT YOU DID WITH THE PROMPT! I wasn't really here for this prompt bc I'm not into crazy vampire and werewolf stuff. But the poem idea was really great and I never really thought people did poems, but now that I think of it, writing a poem is allowed! I love this, it has a simple flow and the POV switch is very cool!
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Thank you! I once read a book called Because of Mr. Terupt (you should read it, it's really good) and ever since then I have loved the idea of pov switch.
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HOLY CRAP YOU READ BECAUSE OF MR TERUPT I READ THE WHOLE SERIES AH WHAT
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Yeah, same! I loved that book, it was sad but so gooooooooood.
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Yeah I really liked how dramatic it was lol. The whole Alexia thing and then Peter and then Daniella and then uj9fw0egpo
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Wow I felt so bad for Peter.
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H e n l o
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Hi lol :)
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You also never break through your rhyme scheme, it goes at a very steady rhythm
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I was afraid that the rhyming would cause it not to make sense. Like, sacrificing clarity so I could rhyme.
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lol yeah that happens a lot in poems
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I like how the whole thing isn't a poem, it makes it stand out
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Honestly, I was going to write the whole thing as a poem, but the date was getting really close and I knew I couldn't finish a poem in time. That was the main reason I did it lol.
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WOW!!!!! This poem was beautiful! I really enjoyed this! I loved the POV switch; it seems so creative! Great job!
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Thank you!
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Nice, I love this! Good job, I loved how you turned your story into a poem, it was very creative. The vampire is definitely my favorite character, he's so sly and he keeps tricking these children. Good job! :D
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Thank you! Hey just wondering for the future: did I sacrifice clarity for rhyming or does it still make sense?
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Clarity was fine, and your story makes sense, so good job :)
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Ok, thank you!
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No problem! :)
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;D
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Hey Aine! Arham asked me to upvote you, and I saw that you upvoted me, so I looked through your comments and stories and everything for stuff that I didn't already upvote :P Hope you enjoy your new points, but I couldn't find enough for you to get to 100, so I'll keep looking.
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Thank you Raquel- I think Arham misunderstood, I wasn't asking for more votes, but thank you anyway! Also- you are moving up the leaderboard FAST! Keep it up!
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Oh, lol. He said you had a down-voter and everything, so yeah. Thank you so much, I really want to get better at writing, because I'm definitely not as good as Zilla, but I'm trying, so thank you! :)
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sure thing, you're a great author!
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:D
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Lol, rn my number is 3535
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this was a really great poem/story and I hope that you will continue to make more stories on here ^^ ill give it a 10/10 :)
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From now on, I'm just going to go around upvoting people's comments because I appreciate them! Thank you!
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Thanks! I can try and help you get more comments for more points?
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Sure! tysm!
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Hey, so i made a new story ^^ could ya maybe check out "Otherworldly repairs" and then leave some feedback on it?
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Absolutely!
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Great story! Smooth rhyming and perfect clarity throughout. It was a cool idea to use this poem/story style for a thriller, lets you read at a breakneck pace.
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