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“Listen” by Daniel Fernandes

Language Warning: A few expletives. Listen with your heart not your head. Understand these words like the lyrics of an artist that's dead. Ain't asking for much just forgiveness that ain’t ever said. Exposing thoughts as I tolerate empathy with lead. Read this o...

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“The Lightness of Heavy Objects” by Delbert Griffith

“If it weren’t for cilantro, I’d be completely happy,” Lenny said.The other members of the HOOD (Helping Others Overcome Depression) therapy group stared at Lenny. Some had looks of amazement on their faces, some nodded knowingly. Dr. Angstrom cleared his throat and popped an Altoids into his mouth.“That’s some bullshit, Lenny. Nothin’ wrong with cilantro,” Rudy stated.“Shut up, Rudy.” Belinda glared at Rudy after she spoke. She didn’t like Rudy; he was a pudgy, sweaty splodge of a man who always arrived at the HOOD m...

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“The Chipmunk” by Kevin Broccoli

Harriet Bowson would have had the perfect yard if it hadn’t been for the chipmunk.She had taken great pains in creating a wonderland for nature. Native plants and flowers sprouted throughout her little, fenced-in paradise. Consultants had been brought in when she first purchased the house to advise her on how to construct a sanctuary for both herself and whatever miniature wildlife might grace her with their presence.As the yard was taking shape, she found herself dreaming of butterflies. Monarchs and s...

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“Gabriel's Horn” by Jack Kimball

The old man knocked tobacco out of his long-stem pipe. “I would like you to solve the mystery of happiness,” he said, pointing his white eyebrows at me.The only thing I hoped to solve was finding my way out through the labyrinth of corridors in my uncle’s estate. Hell, I barely graduated from State three months ago. And the only thing my Creative Writing major did was land me a waiter gig at The Ram’s Head Steakhouse in town. Solve the mystery of happiness? I knew Uncle Clarence was some industry titan—but really?...

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“Chaos at the Cryptocurrency Conference” by Scott Christenson

[TW: all 5 prompts + multiple douche bags + Toxic Positivity]“So, what’s the catch of the day?” I ask the waiter, already knowing I’m going to reject it as I like to screw with people–be oppositional, as they say. I’m also desperately trying to impress Monique.“Glad you asked. The catch of the day is line caught Hogfish Snapper,” the waiter says all in one breath, because he trying to take his share of orders from the 200+ attendees of Blockchain Overdrive's VIP dinner in Palm Beach....

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“The Shaman’s Apprentice” by Viga Boland

It was another glorious day at the Revitalizus Resort in sunny Barbados. The shaman’s young apprentice took his time trimming the bougainvillea bushes in the lush gardens surrounding the resort’s sparkling “adults only” pool. There was no need to rush. Islanders conserved their energy especially when it was well past noon. It was too hot to work fast.The apprentice worked slowly. He liked to listen to the tourists to learn their language. Perhaps one day he might go to North America. It would be wise to be able to speak ...

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“The Tree of Knowledge” by Rama Shaar

Trigger warning: The story contains sensitive material that some readers might find disturbing and/or triggering. “Now who is this?” Zoe said squinting at the laptop screen. It jolted me out of my engrossment in yet another horrific local news story. Something about someone who destroyed the lives they were supposed to protect. Just what is wrong with human be...

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“True Beauty” by Helen A Smith

Figures differ depending on where you live, but here I’m one of the 1,300 born with a cleft lip. A genetic fault caused part of my upper lip to split on the right side reaching to my nose in the early stage of my mother’s pregnancy. ***It could have been the perfect lesson. If it weren’t for one thing! Or one person, to be precise.If I’m going to talk about this, I should at least be honest. It was more than one person, but she was the kingpin; the skittles would not have fallen...

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“Drug of Choice” by Nona Yobis

They’re all the same. At first, you feel invincible, at one with the universe, so Zen that you’re certain you’ve found Enlightenment. The high reaches to the stratosphere, and the feeling is so warm and calming, it’s like being engulfed in the very essence of love itself. But it doesn’t last. I’ve tried so hard to find the perfect drug, but no matter what I try, I can’t find one that gives me a lasting high. I’m not picky, either....

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“The Perfect Murders?” by Lily Finch

72 Hours AfterAnd that is how an everyday All-American Boy who, as a man, formerly Barry, now Rolph, grew to hate his mundane life, wife and kids, both of whom were ungrateful wretches he loathed. He dealt with those despicable down and outs the most straightforward way he knew how. He simply, methodically planned and orchestrated their deaths, faked his death, and disappeared, toothache and all.24 Hours BeforeHis kids and his wife, he never truly understood. He ...

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“The English Lop” by Alexey Williams

And among the ruins were the cages of the English lops. The house had burned, yet the lop cages had been spared as they sat in a shed some fifteen feet from the house. The lops made not a sound as I approached. They all appeared unharmed in their cages. I'd settled on setting them free as it was a terrible thing to be unfree, and they had earned their liberty as far as I was concerned. Their metal cage doors were opened, and I simply coaxed them out with a hand. The lops were so docile that in spite of all that had passed some of them did...

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“SIX LETTERS TO ILLUMINATION” by Kajsa Ohman

SIX LETTERS OF ILLUMINATION I didn’t really think much about happiness until I had the opportunity, in a Scrabble game, of adding ‘piness’ to the existent ‘hap’. Indeed, the act of putting ‘piness’ on the board would have brought happiness to almost anyone, and it certainly made my opponent’s day, my opponent being my fifteen-year-old nephew. “Piness! Ha ha ha!” The very f...

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“Miracles Happen” by Stephanie Stevens

Miracles happen.The daffodils bloomed before the snowdrops fell this year, making the churchyard a veritable carpet of yellow. However, in late March,primroses blossomed among the graves, and some late daffodils put theirdelicate heads on the northern facade of the church. Together they replenish the yellow hues in time for Easter. On Good Friday morning, I turn my face to the sun. The weather is unseasonably warm, and the sun’s golden rays reach the rich earth, encouraging growing plants to bud forth. Birds twitter in the trees, n...

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“Just a Piece of Paper” by Ali Anthony Bell

Aziz Bellali is checking his mail at home.“Hey love, come and check this out! The Muhammad bin Ali al-Haj University wants to give me an award! And it’s even on my 65th birthday!”“That’s great, you deserve it!” his wife Aisha responds cheerfully.“But I can’t accept. Come and read the mail.”Aisha comes over to his side and reads: ...

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“Stay hungry” by Ash Egan

She says, "Why don't you look like that?"I stop scrolling. It's some glistening, rippling torso with a haircut. Stripped to the waist. Almond skin pulled tight over solid muscle.I look down at my stomach, bulging amiably over my waistband. Lightly dusted with sugar from the half-eaten donut in my other hand.She looks back to her phone again and strokes our cat, Belle, sitting in her lap.Back to the gym.For the next two months, I'm there every day, 6a...

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Write about a character who would have complete happiness, if it weren’t for that one thing.

Submissions are closed

✍️ 69 stories

“Listen” by Daniel Fernandes

“The Lightness of Heavy Objects” by Delbert Griffith

“The Chipmunk” by Kevin Broccoli

“Gabriel's Horn” by Jack Kimball

“Chaos at the Cryptocurrency Conference” by Scott Christenson

“The Shaman’s Apprentice” by Viga Boland

“The Tree of Knowledge” by Rama Shaar

“True Beauty” by Helen A Smith

“Drug of Choice” by Nona Yobis

“The Perfect Murders?” by Lily Finch

“The English Lop” by Alexey Williams

“SIX LETTERS TO ILLUMINATION” by Kajsa Ohman

“Miracles Happen” by Stephanie Stevens

“Just a Piece of Paper” by Ali Anthony Bell

“Stay hungry” by Ash Egan

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