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โWhat are you going to do for your birthday?โ Emily asked as we walked into my room.
I shrugged and responded, โWhat do you like to do?โ
โKeara, itโs your birthday, so itโs your choice.โ
โI know, but I donโt know what to choose.โ
โDonโt you like haunted houses?โ
I nodded.
โSo why donโt you do that?โ
โItโs the middle of March.โ
โWho cares?โ
โOkay, fine, Iโll do a haunted house for my birthday.โ
Emily grinned with satisfaction and laid down on my bed.
The walls were a soft pink with little stickers placed inexpertly when I was 7. The desk was white with organized shelves with colourful pens inserted in them. My bed was also pink, with fluffy decorative pillows and little cherry blossoms on the duvet. Emilyโs black hair was stark against the calmness of my room, her light skin gleaming under my fairy lights.
I sat down next to her and the bed made a little squeak.
โWhere do you get haunted houses made for you?โ I asked her.
She sat up and told me, โYou donโt know? The Jerrinsons are the best haunted house makers in the world. Just say โI want a haunted house on this day at this time for this many peopleโ and then youโre done. Oh also, you say if you want mildly scary, medium or scare-your-eyeballs-out-of-their-sockets scary.โ
I nodded and slid up to the top of my bed, where little pink fairy lights wove around the headboard. I wrapped a few around my hand, letting the warm light soak into my skin.
โWho are you gonna ask to come?โ Emily said, breaking the silence while fiddling with one of my pillows.
โThe cheerleading squad?โ I suggested.
โThatโs it? You canโt only have girls at the party Keara.โ
โFine, Iโll just invite the whole class.โ
Emily nodded.
โSo,โ I started, โAre we gonna study for the math test or not?โ
โNo one ever studies with their friends,โ Emily said. โLetโs just talk about stuff.โ
โWhat stuff?โ
โAnything!โ
โUh, okay.โ
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โHereโs an invitation,โ a girl I think was called Emily said.
โTo what?โ I asked, looking at the envelope.
โTo Kearaโs birthday. Itโs gonna be in a haunted house.โ
The envelope was a black and pink gradient, with a somewhat scary picture of a ghost on the front. It said โYouโre Invited!โ in light pink letters. The address just said The Jerrinsons House. No one needed an address because everyone already knew where they lived.
โLike a lame one or an actual scary one?โ I asked.
Iโd been to many lame haunted houses with cardboard jump-scares and slippery โbloodโ that was actually fruit punch. I didnโt want to go to another one, not in 11th grade.
โA scary one. The scariest option,โ Maybe-Emily said.
I nodded, tucked it into one of my jean pockets and walked over to my locker.
โHey dude, who was that?โ
It was Andrew, my best friend.
Well, you could call him that.
โI donโt know, I think her nameโs Emily,โ I responded, pulling out my textbooks.
โWhat did she give you?โ
โAn invitation.โ
โTo what?โ
โBro, why are asking so many questions?โ I asked, shutting my locker with a loud bang.
โYouโre not the one to ask that,โ Andrew said. โWhatโs the invitation for?โ
โA birthday party.โ
โWhoโs?โ
โUgh,โ I grunted, speed-walking away from Andrew. โCould you stop?โ
โYou didnโt answer the question!โ
โMaybe you wouldnโt have had to ask me if you got one! Maybe if you were nicer, you wouldโve got one! Maybe if youโd actually been to any parties, you would understand and wouldnโt have to ask.โ
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โHow did it go?โย
Emily shut my bedroom door with a little click and sat down beside me.
โWhat do you mean, how did it go? I handed out 20 papers, thatโs how it went.โ
Emily pushed me off the side of the bed, making me land hard on my backside.
โWhy are you so grumpy today?โ
โWell, maybe some people were asking me for invitations that werenโt in our class. Maybe I had to say I didnโt have any left and that they werenโt allowed to come without one. Maybe they punched me, maybe they glared at me, maybe they acted like I was a spider they wanted to crush. If you didn't ask me to hand them out, if you just did it yourself, I wouldn't be the embarrassment of the class. Or the school. But who cares?โ
Emily stood up with great irritation and stormed out of the room, closing my bedroom door with a loud slam.
I laid down on my bed and while I twisted my fairy lights around my hand, I thought, Well, there goes my only friend.
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As I walked to Math, I wasnโt accompanied by Andrew. Or Steve. Or any of the people on the football team. It was a bit lonely, to tell the truth.
I found my seat at the back of the classroom and set down all my stuff. I looked around in silence, taking note of all my classmates.
โHi, youโre Hadyn right?โ
A girl sat down on the desk next to mine, pulling out fancy pens and shiny notebooks.
โUm, yeah. Whatโs your name?โ
โOh, Iโm Keara.โ
โYour birthday is coming up?โ
She nodded.
โThe one with the haunted house?โ
โYes.โ
โWho was the girl that was handing out the invites?โ
โWhy are you asking so many questions?โ
I blushed, realizing she repeated what I had said to Andrew.
โUm, I donโt know?โ
She giggled and said, โItโs fine, I like answering questions. Emily used to be my best friend, but Iโm not so sure now.โ
โOh. Me too.โ
โYou have a friend named Emily?โ
โNo, just- I mean, well- like-โ
Keara smiled and just said, โI get it.โ
โClass! Get out your textbooks and turn to page 394. Do not forget, we have a quiz on Monday. DO NOT FORGET!โ
I smiled at Keara, and she smiled back.
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I heaved all my books onto my desk and ran downstairs, the smell of spaghetti sauce wafting through the house.
โHi sweetie! Did anything interesting happen today?โ my mom asked.
โNot much. Hmm, actually, I think I made a new friend.โ
โOh how nice! What is her name?โ
โTheyโre a boy. His name is Hadyn.โ
โOh ok, what does he do?โ my mom questioned.
โWhat does that mean?โ I said incredulously. โHe does school.โ
โObviously. What else?โ
โFootball, I think.โ
My mom nodded and set down a steaming plate of spaghetti in front of me. I grabbed the parmesan cheese and dumped a whole truckload onto it, just how I like it.
โKeara, you always put too much cheese,โ my dad said, looking at my pile of cheese, noodles and sauce with concern.
โNo, I donโt! Everyone should eat it like this because itโs the best way,โ I responded, and dug into my pasta.
After dinner ended, I went back to my room to study for our math test. I rolled my fingers over my pens, reading the colour labels on the sides.
Red
Orange
Gold
Yellow
Grass Green
Forest Green
Sky Blue
Ocean Blue
Violet
Lavender
Rose
Grey
Chocolate
Waffle Cone
Black
I slipped my phone out of my pocket to check the time, but I got distracted by something else.
สแดแด สษด 6:03 แดแด
Hi! What r u doin?
How was he texting me?, I thought. I didnโt even give him my number!
I texted him back.
แดแดแดสแด 6:37 แดแด
How did u get my number?
He texted me back almost instantly. The three little dots beside his profile picture were rolling up and down as if taunting me.
สแดแด สษด 6:38 แดแด
Um, a post-it note fell on ur chair in Math and it had ur phone number on it soโฆโฆ..
Aha.
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Its fine. Do you want to go to the park tomorrow?
สแดแด สษด 6:40 แดแด
But we have school
แดแดแดสแด 6:41 แดแด
We can go there after school
สแดแด สษด 6:41 แดแด
Ok. see u tomorrow!
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Bring!
โDonโt forget your paper about the American Revolution is due tomorrow!โ
Ugh, I thought, Teachers are so annoying.
Once I had put everything back in my locker and my backpack was next to empty, I walked out of the school doors, a brisk early spring wind biting my cheeks.
Kids milled about in groups, a few strays caught here and there. They were gossiping, making plans for after school, talking about the latest filter on Snapchat. I used to be one of them, so I felt a bit awkward walking to the park by myself with no one to talk to.
Snow crunched beneath my feet and birds chirped in the distance. The trees looked oddly bare with no leaves on, as if they had forgot to change into them.
โHadyn! Over here!โ
Keara was sitting on a bench next to the pond, her dark brown hair flowing in the wind.
I ran over to her and sat down next to her, and time seemed to stop.
The pond had a thin blanket of snow covering it while a finch tiptoed on it carefully. The wind seemed warmer now, whipping at Kearaโs hair and my face. I looked down to my feet, where I observed that Kearaโs shoes were a similar size to mine. I looked up to her and she asked . . .ย
โWhat school did you go to when you were in Grade 3?โ
Not the question I was expecting.
โWhy?โ
โI feel like Iโve met you before.โ
My eyebrows arched up in question.
โDid you go to Harrowood Elementary?โ she asked.
โYeah! Whoโs class were you in?โ
โMs. Smith! What about you?โ
โMr. Luigi.โ
โYour teacherโs name was Mr. Luigi? That mustโve been fun.โ
โIt was,โ I said, laughing my heart out.
โDid he like Mario?โ
โI donโt think I asked!โ
Keara buckled over with laughter, spilling out of her like paint.
Never would I thought I would be talking about Mario and Mr. Luigi with a girl from History class.
โWhenโs the party again?โ I asked.
โOn Saturday at 6 pm,โ she recited.
โWhat day is today?โ
โFriday.โ
โSo tomorrow! What do you want me to get for you?โ I asked.
โNo one asks what to get for their birthday Hadyn.โ
โWell, I want to get something you like!โ I protested.
Keara said, โA cat?โ
I laughed. โI canโt get you a cat.โ
She pretended to pout. โAw. Fine, what about a onesie.โ
โYou like onesies too?โ
โYes! I didnโt expect boys to like onesies. Also, who gets a birthday present one day before the party?โ Keara asked.
โWell I do,โ I said. โDo you know why I didnโt recognize you before?โ
โOh right. I think that I bit you and then your dog bit me so our parents said not to talk to each other. So I think we slowly drifted apart from being best friends to strangers.โ
โHow do you know that?โ I asked curiously.ย My parents never said anything about a girl biting me.
โI remember,โ Keara said.
โYou have a good memory. Oh yeah, what type of onesie do you want?โ
โA cat one.โ
โOkay. so-โ
Buzz buzz
I pulled out my phone and opened it up to a text from my mom.
โUgh, my mom needs me at home. See you tomorrow at your party!โ I said.
โOkay! Bye Haydn!โ Keara responded.
I got up and ran towards my house, thinking about what store had the best onesies that were not $40.ย
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I looked over to my clock to check the time.
5:45 pm.
15 minutes โtill the party started, so I ran downstairs and slipped on my raincoat.
โMom! Dad! Iโm going to my party now!โ I called out.
โOkay, sweetie! Have a good time!โ my momโs voice said, floating down the stairs.
โDonโt get into any funny business!โ said my dad.
He always said things like that.
โBye!โ I called out.
I turned the door handle and stepped out into the cold, walking a few blocks to the Jerrinsons house.
A crowd of people were gathered around the door, shivering and mumbling about who-knows-what.
I found Haydn and asked him, โWho told the Jerrinsons that I had a party?โ
โI did. It was on my way to my house anyway, so I thought Iโd stop by,โ he said.
His black hair curled around his forehead, framing his blue eyes. They looked like ice but felt warm like a campfire, warm and inviting. He was much taller than everyone else so it wasnโt hard to pick him out of the crowd.
โYou should go up there and announce that the party is starting,โ he suggested.
โBut itโs not time yet.โ
โYes, it is.โ He turned on his phone that blared 6:00 pm is bright white numbers.
โBut-โ
โThere are no โbutsโ,โ Haydn protested and pushed me up in front of everyone.
Everyone slowly quieted, looking at me expectantly to say something.
โUh, so hi. Iโm Keara. This is for my haunted house party, and-wait. How many people are here?โ
โ34,โ a quiet male voice peeped out.
โThatโs way more than the people in my class though.โ
โPeople invited other people to come with them because having a haunted house party in March was like the best idea ever,โ a female voice answered. Everyone shuffled in agreement.
โOh ok,โ I said, beaming. โCome in!โ
And then I got trampled underfoot by the crowd like a herd of elephants.
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After everyone had dinner, Keara and Hadyn led the crowd to the entrance of the haunted house.
There were three entrances; one on the right, one on the left and one in the middle.
โItโs kinda like a maze,โ Keara said. โChoose the way you wanna go. I think you should stick together because being alone in a haunted house isnโt the best idea.โ
Everyone started talking and organized themselves off into groups, people slowly flowing into the three different entrances.
The last group was a group of five: Emily, Danielle aka the girl who had spoken up during Kearaโs mini-speech, Hadyn, Joey aka the boy who had said โ34โ, and Keara.
โWho should pick the way?โ asked Hadyn.
โKeara,โ said Danielle and Joey.
Emily just shrugged.
โOk,โ Keara said, โLetโs go in the middle one.โ
They made a single file line with Hadyn at the front and slowly walked into the darkness.
It was pitch black, and they couldnโt see anything. Emily looked around and thought she caught a glimpse of an evil red smile peeking out from the darkness, but then it vanished.
โIs everyone okay?โ Haydn asked cautiously.
โYeah,โ they all responded.
Emily started saying, โThis is a little bit boring, is something interesting gonna happen-โ
Her voice was cut off with a scream, one that only appears when someone is in real danger, one that could pierce the air like a nail.
Danielle swirled around and flailed her arms. โEmilyโs gone!โ
Haydn and Keara locked eyes, worried about the rest of them.
They kept going, and Joey remarked, โDo you guys see that face?โ
โWhat face?โ Haydn, Keara and Danielle asked.
โYou really canโt see it? Itโs really obvious-โ
His voice got strangled by someone, and Joey was gone.
โGuys, I normally like haunted houses but this is getting actually scary. . ." Danielle said.ย
โStay close,โ said Hadyn, so they inched across the hallway glued together.
โAre the Jerrinsons haunted houses always this good?โ asked Keara.
โWell, people donโt normally disappear. . .โ responded Hadyn.
โGuys, I see someone smiling at me . . . โ said Danielle.
Keara snatched Danielleโs hand and her hand turned cold. A subtle breeze brought a foul smell, one of rotting flesh and dried blood.
An ice-cold hand wrapped around Keara and Danielleโs hand, causing both of their nerves to freeze.ย
โCome with me, you wonโt be disappointed.โ
Danielleโs hand was ripped away from Kearaโs, pulling away with a final scream.ย
And then there were two.
***
Keara and Hadyn walked together in the darkness, spotting a few splatters of maybe-fruit-punch on the floor.ย
โWhat is happening? People are disappearing,โ Keara asked.
โLetโs forget about that,โ said Hadyn. โRemember that time it snowed in the middle of summer?โ
โYeah, that was weird. Also, that little girl was on the news talking about how she saw fairies,โ said Keara.
โProbably just her imagination.โ
โProbably.โ
They walked along the endless hallway in silence, Kearaโs flats clicking on the floor.
Click click click
โI see something,โ said Hadyn.
โWhat?โ
โA red grin.โ
โOh no. Oh no. Oh no oh no oh no.โ
โDon't worry, nothing will happen.โ
โYouโre gonna disappear.โ
โ. . .โ
โHadyn? Hello?โ
Silence.
Haydn turned his back on Keara, staring emptily into the darkness.
โHello?โ Keara asked again.
ย She tried to reach for his hand, but it was occupied by something else.
A knife.
Haydn turned around slowly and when they made eye contact, she realized he was different.
His pupils were white like snow, with little red veins trailing out from it. He smiled, but it wasnโt warm or inviting. It was crazy, dashed with insaneness. He looked like a clown from one of those horror movies.
โHello, Keara. Want to play a game?โ
She just glared at him and he walked slowly towards her, raising his knife higher and higher.
โNo response? Oh well, I guess that means I win.โ
He brought the knife down and Keara screamed.
And then there was one.
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so I TRIED to make it a funny horror story (sia's challenge), but that obviously didn't work :/ title suggestions please if one doesn't fit the story the best horror is fun to write lol XD did anyone catch the harry potter reference? comment if you did! hope ya like it!!!!! ~ Amethyst
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Wow. The end tho! It was really nice story. You should be really proud๐คฉ๐คฉ Good job! -Ruby
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:D yea ikr???? thanks!!! I am, because its pretty long and was fun to write :) thank you!!!!!!
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AMeS THE PROFILE IS ADORABLE
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THANK YOU SO MUCH CELESTE :D
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:DD NP
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:)
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Ames Ames Ames do you wanna be in my TSD series??
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:O YESSS I WOULD LOVE TOOOOOOOOOOOO i just finished commenting on it lollllll
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Could you answer this please: Name in the story: Hair(anything from just a vague description to every detail is fine): Eyes(anything from just a vague description to every detail is fine): Skin tone(anything from just a vague description to every detail is fine): Clothing preferences(anything from color preferences to exact outfits is fine): Personality: Fav Color(if you want multiple, please choose up to two): Power (please choose one of the below): Elemental: Weakness: restrictions based on area Mental: Weakness: will always tell...
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Name: Emeryn Hair: light blue hair that fade the dark purple that is shoulder-length Eyes: lavender Skin tone: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/8b/b5/0b/8bb50be5a80ea11ff84ffaff95be1311.jpg the 'limestone' one clothing: always cozy and comfortable, neutral colours except for ice blue and dark purple. ALWAYS wearing white sneakers and a purple bracelet. hoodies are her favourite :) personality: kind, caring, shy with meeting people and has really bad people skills fav colour: ice blue and dark purple power: shapesifter. can I choose my a...
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AHAHAHAHAHAHA I HAVE THAT SAME IMAGE SAVED TO MY COMPUTER
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HAHAHAH wow cOiNcEdEncE
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Also, shapeshifters can shift into any animal they study but you can choose your prefered animal.
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okee my animal will be an . . . arctic wolffffffffff i love arctic animals :D
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New threaddddd I bet you'll like it!!!! um probably just some cookies:D
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heyo sorry for not responding quickly oooh what kind???
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hi! that's ok:D um I'm not sure lol, maybe just chocolate chip!:D
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ooh okay!
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Oh wow, I donโt even know how I didnโt catch that plot twist. I mean... โhow did you get my number?โ Combined with a haunted house? Still though, amazing job!
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Thank you! It was a random idea but I liked it, so I went along with it XD
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PLOT TWISTTTTTTT!! I love this sooo much. Canโt wait to see what else you come up with. Keep writing! -Mj โ๐พ P.S. Could you check out my newest story if you have a chance?
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YESSSS :D thank you!!!! actually, i've already read it but I forgot to comment! I'm heading there right now
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Okay thanks!
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Okay thanks!
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OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT ENDING!!!!! This was so good!!!! It was an amazing mix of humor, and a bit of *teen romance* Ig and then the horror got AMAZING at the endddddd You're horror stories always blow me away bcuz I never expect it!!!! This was probably my fav story you've written!!!! IT. WAS. AMAZING.
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:D THANKS SO MUCHHHHH yeah i know a tWiSt XD *teen romance* didn't really mean to do that but yAy!!! horror is fun to write :) :O wOwEeE!!! thanks! this is also one of my favourites too it was another long one lol XD
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XDDD lol I mean...until the end I saw a connectionXD long ones are the besttttttttt:DDDDD
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hahah yeah yessssssssssssss they take a long time though I have a lot of time so I like it XD
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XXDDDD ALSO, YOU HAD THE PERFECT OPPURTUNITY TO WRITE, "TURN TO PAGE 394"!!!!!!!! XD
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WAIT XD should i add that????
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2 new stories would love your feedback on it.
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ok!
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PART 18 HAS BEEN PUBLISHED
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OK
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Oh My Gosh. This was a GREAT story! ๐ฑ I loved it! Especially the ending, and how you only gave certain clues leading up to the end, giving a suspenseful air and filling us readers with dread. โค๐ฅ Amazing story! I can't wait for more! ๐คฉ Also, I don't know if you meant to do this, but the perspective changed from 1st person to 3rd. Honestly, it made the story better, but I was wondering if you noticed that. ๐
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thank youuuuu!!!! ahaha yay :) oh yeah i did mean to do that, just so you could see what was happening instead of the person perspective :D
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I think it's great! Can't wait for your next story!๐
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:D thanks! HOPEFULLY itll come out today but that's if I write like lightning XD
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๐คฃ Typing like lightning is hard! I'm also writing a story, but am only like a 3rd of the way thru!๐ I actually can't wait๐๐
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im almost done! :D
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WOWWW THIS IS SOOO GOOOOOOODDD! CONGOOO! BTW I LIVED TJIS SO DANG MUCHHHHH Just a little something, maybe make Danielle's death a little later, and maybe make the object different, so it wont be a lil cliche. Like..... Scissors? Or a red smile? Just my 2 cents!!
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THANK UUUU SIAAAA ok, I like the smil idea, Iโll change that :)
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WELCOMEEEE OKAIEE
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:D i changed it
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Much better!
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:D
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Ohmigosh this was so fantastic, and the ending was perfect! I have goosebumps! XD It was interesting how the story started out with a happy unthreatening tone with them planning a birthday party and ended in MURDER. XD I think you had a good amount of characters and their personalities were well developed. The casual dialogue made the story flow really well. In the end, when they were walking through the haunted house you built up suspense well by having the kids be picked off one by one. I loved how you had them each see a balloon before th...
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thank you so much!!!!! yeah, tWisT XD thanks! yeah, picking them off was also really fun >:D :DD I used generators XD they are REALLY helpful though THANK YOU!!!!
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No problem! XD Oh yeah generators are great! Of course! :)
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:D
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OwO wow, that was...iNtErEsTiNg on many different levels... I like how you referenced your other stories XDDDDDD but geez... lkjhgfdrtyjkhgfghjkjhgfdfghjuhgfdfghuytrdfghjkijhgvghjkl I can't think of anything else so good job with the bone chilling excitement XD L.W.
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lol YES eheh thanks!! kakshdfjasd IK XD tysm!!
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XD mhm :) you're very welcome :)))
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<333
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So freaky. This is a great story Amethyst, you should be very happy! For reals! You're so talented! Would you mind checking out one of my stories and giving me some feedback? i'd really appreciate it.
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Awww thanks Keya!!! yes, you're on my list but I have so many things to do, it might take a little bit of time for me to get there, but I promise I WILL :)
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Thanks so much, Amethyst, ur a sweetheart.
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๐Np!!!!!!
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DONT LEAVE D:::::::::::::
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New thread XD
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yay XD mmm, they're not the best for me cause I don't love science fiction wbu?
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Aw alright. Um, I don't like them much either. But I do have an idea to continue my reedsy-cast series. :)
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ooh okay
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:D Were you doing a collab with Luke?
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well hes not responding so idk
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AAAAAAAAAAAAND Hadyn was evil (called it!).
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well, not before he got possessed but YEAH
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Hi Amethyst just posted part 2 of THotF!!!!:DDD
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:D yayyyy ill check it out after school :)
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yay!! Thank youuuuu:DDD
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Hmmm, new thread here? :D
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:) yea
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how are you? :))
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almost done my logbook for the science faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaair oop sorry, I'm good :) wbu?
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Ohhhhhh, that's great! I'm great! But omigoshhhhsdhfhhd, my 40 second video presentation sdlksjdlfkdjslfk lol Anything fun happening to you? :D
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ksjfksdjfkj40secondvideosnsjkdfjSKNFDSKJFJDS um . . . not really XD
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