Tying The Thread, A Story of The Undead

Submitted into Contest #64 in response to: Write a ghost story where there’s more going on than it first appears.... view prompt

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Horror Sad

You wanted a ghost story

With a twist?

Here’s the twist-

I’m the ghost

You can laugh

Shake your head

Take a bath

Go back to bed

I’m not lying

Not a bit

I’m here sighing

I can’t even sit

If I don’t concentrate, 

Things go through my skin

I don’t have any weight

My ‘bones’ are papery thin

How am I writing?

Well I just keep fighting

These worlds that I create

I live in them you see

Bouncing from state to state

The characters are my family

So I’m a ghost

Sorry for keeping it from you

Not like I can boast

About being in the undead crew

You still think I’m lying

That this is all fake

You’re not buying

Think it’s a story I make

You can think what you want

You can scoff all you want

You can shake your head in disbelief

Take a sigh in some relief

I’m just a spirit

I’m pretty dead

Call me an ‘it’

I can’t even eat bread

Let me tell you something

It’s nothing like TV

They have nothing

Us you can see

We’re a little transparent

A little tainted white

But there’s nothing about us to fear

We don’t haunt the night

I’m just like you

But I’m really not

I don’t say boo

But I don’t get hot

I don’t need to eat

I don’t need to shower

I don’t feel the heat

And I don’t have any power

I can go where I please

But I don’t age at all

I don’t feel the breeze

And I can’t play with a ball

I don’t get sick

I can’t fall in love

Or get hit with a brick

I don’t feel a shove

And my blood isn’t thick

I have friends

They live in my head

Our fun never ends

When we tie our thread

Pulling and tying

Making sure to think hard

Forget about crying

Do you see a guard?

Are you confused now?

Even more than before?

Can you not see how?

I’ll tell you more

I have lots of thin thread

In all different colors

My favorite is red

I find that it covers

All the blood

Once it falls out

It covers the blood

And I muffle their shout

Who, you wonder

What do I do?

Outside, booms the thunder

I’ll tell you

Listen to me closely

Do you hear?

It’ll seem very ghostly

But there’s nothing to fear…

Nothing to fear, 

Though it seems scary

Nothing to fear

Even if you think it very

I’m just like you

You’re just like me

I do what I do

And I do it with glee

See I do what I feel

And I do what I please

Sometimes it leaves me with a meal

Other times with fleas

Am I making no sense once more?

Are you still confused?

You’ll get it soon for sure

Though sorry if you end up bruised

I told you I don’t eat

But that doesn’t mean I don’t get hungry

Sometimes I just want a treat

Yet no one wants to feed me

I must get food myself

But it’s a different hunger

A hunger in my soul

I feel much younger

I have but one goal

I take my long red thread

And I snip it with my teeth

They all end up dead

Their souls underneath

Ripe for the taking

Lovely and sweet

Still think I’m faking?

Then come watch me eat

I tie the thread tight

And pull the head off

I don’t take a bite

That would make me cough

I press my hands down

I close my eyes

Don’t give me that frown

I still hear your cries

This is just what I must do

Please don’t judge me

Not like I’m doing it to you

You don’t have to agree

But just leave me alone

If you won’t listen

Leave me alone

It’s my own decision


I wish I could cry

I feel so hurt

But I can’t even die

My body’s under the dirt

My soul bears the agony

My heart feels the pain

I’m losing my sanity

Again and again

Why should I spare everyone

And let the people live

It’s all in good fun

You have nothing you could give

For I’m just a spirit

I’m just air

Can you hear it?

The sound of my sweet despair

I feel like I’m dying

But I’m already gone

In my heart, I am crying

My body’s moved on

I know I’m doing wrong

I know it’s mean

My will isn’t strong

My conscience unclean

Sometimes I regret it

Sometimes I’m ashamed

And yet I never quit

Instincts be blamed

If this makes you shiver

Makes your skin crawl

Makes your lip quiver

Can’t hear more at all

Then I suggest you leave

Because it doesn’t end now

I don’t know how you’ll receive

When you hear how

I bury the body

Without cleaning the blood

It gets quite soggy

As if it’s covered in mud

It’s black and red

And other colors too

It spews from their head

It’s quite the view

It stains my hands 

And my clothes too

Ruins my plans

Gives others a clue

Of what I was doing

During the night

Give them a reason to keep booing

At my sorry sight

But don’t think for a minute

That I even care

I have quite the limit

And it’s really rare

To see me snap

To lose my cool

Maybe slap

It’s a personal rule

I let others have their own opinion

Think what you want about me

But I’m not your minion

And my will is free

I’ll keep killing 

You do you

I get my filling

Though I can’t undo

Families hate me

All of them do

So, you see

I kill them too

All alone

Is how I’m left

Future’s set in stone

And it’s not the best

You could say it’s my fault

And maybe it is

Soon I will bolt

Stop doing the biz

For now, just remember

That I’m a ghost


Remember remember, I haunt the night

Deeply sorry if I give you a fright...


October 22, 2020 01:21

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263 comments

15:52 Oct 22, 2020

Amany!! This poem was so great!! You are SO good at poems and I wish I could be half as great as you!! This was so creepy and it sent chills down my spine! Great job!!

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Amany Sayed
15:53 Oct 22, 2020

Thank you so much, Kylie! Aw, you definitely could be! Thanks!

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15:54 Oct 22, 2020

Haha, I wish!! Great job! :)

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Orenda .
13:34 Oct 22, 2020

henyloo, as a person who loves horror, i think you nailed it! Horror is actually difficult to write with fewer words and especially, in poetry. I loved it! And ya know, I was actually reading it like a rap song, trying to make a quick rap verse out of it and it fit so well. You probably should write more poems on here, you're great!

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Amany Sayed
13:43 Oct 22, 2020

Thank you SO much ORenda! This means a whole lot to me. Yeah, when I read my poetry to proof read and stuff, I often read out loud, it's more fun. It read like a 'song'. Aw, thank you so much! I will! :D

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Orenda .
13:46 Oct 22, 2020

Anytime, A! whenever i listen to songs and read the lyrics, i often wonder how'd they look like as poems :n

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Amaya .
02:20 Nov 14, 2020

hey hey

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B. W.
22:11 Nov 13, 2020

heya, how are ya?

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Amaya .
21:32 Nov 13, 2020

1.) you better write that romance story missy *shakes finger* 2.) new bioo check it out :)

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Fern M.
01:47 Nov 13, 2020

This was soooo goood! It was instantly engaging from the start!!! I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee poetry so this is wayyyy up my alley!!!!!!!!! That's all thanks -Dizzier Lemon

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Fern M.
01:45 Nov 13, 2020

I love poetry so this is wayyyyy up my alley!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was super interesting and written in such a marvellous way. It was so engaging from the start and it was well sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! Thats all. -Dizzier Lemon

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B. W.
22:55 Nov 11, 2020

heyyy

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Orenda .
16:46 Nov 11, 2020

tis me, dear lady. Don't want to take up the title if it was someone else TOO. But, i guess, i took you to a rank higher. You're welcome. Gosh no, please don't flatter me.

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05:11 Nov 11, 2020

You are such an amazing author and poet! Your works make me want to laugh and cry at the same time, and they are filled with so much emotion! You are also an amazing friend and person, and you deserve every (good) thing that comes your way! :) - Kylie

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Amany Sayed
05:27 Nov 11, 2020

Tysm Kylie! <3

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19:16 Nov 11, 2020

Aww, you deserve it (which I already said before haha!)

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B. W.
04:24 Nov 11, 2020

I got a new story out ^^ could ya check out "Sweet revenge" and leave some feedback?

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Amany Sayed
04:31 Nov 11, 2020

You've got to be the fastest writer I know...Teach me your secret! Also, of course

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B. W.
04:32 Nov 11, 2020

I dunno- i dont think im that fast with all of that. and thanks, I'm excited to see what ya think ^^

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Sunny 🌼
22:46 Nov 10, 2020

*Ahehhehehehehehehem* I say in ur bio that you were looking for other people's opinions of you, so... (this is basically me being bored and wanting to be a part of SOMETHING so here we go) I think ur cool, an amazing poet (like seriously it SCARES ME how good you are at poetry), THE most talented romance short story writer I know, and very creative and good at what you do! (k that's it. Later!)

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Amany Sayed
23:34 Nov 10, 2020

Thank you so much Sarah! Means a lot ^^

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Sunny 🌼
02:12 Nov 11, 2020

yw!!!

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B. W.
10:21 Nov 07, 2020

hey, im not sure if ya asked ya or anything, but do ya think you could help me with a prompt? its the alien one

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B. W.
18:10 Nov 06, 2020

hey, so what do ya think about the new prompts that came out today? do ya like them?

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Sia S
02:48 Nov 06, 2020

Hiyaa I guess I'm the flute or viola lol

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Amany Sayed
02:54 Nov 06, 2020

:)

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B. W.
00:59 Nov 06, 2020

Hey, are ya there? i need a bit of help with something and I was wondering if ya could maybe help me?

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Amaya .
19:20 Nov 05, 2020

I love ur biooo

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14:27 Oct 30, 2020

I LOVE poetry and I love your poetry! It is truly amazing!

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Amany Sayed
14:35 Oct 30, 2020

Thanks!^^

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B. W.
00:18 Oct 30, 2020

Hey, i finished with one of my novels ^^

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Amany Sayed
01:30 Oct 30, 2020

Oh my gosh!!!!!! THAT'S AWESOME! SO HAPPY FOR YOU GIRL!

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B. W.
01:32 Oct 30, 2020

aw thanks ^^ if i published it, would ya read it?

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Amany Sayed
01:42 Oct 30, 2020

I don't know, maybe, I don't buy books that often.

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B. W.
01:50 Oct 30, 2020

Oh

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