The secret of power

Submitted into Contest #51 in response to: Write about someone who has a superpower.... view prompt

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Fantasy Suspense

Nobody noticed Jake's absence during the English class in the only college in the city. Jake loved technology. So, he took the computer science stream. 

Mrs. Norwich, the English lecturer for the class, had switched on the television in the class when a college staff member came and whispered something. She was a tall, young woman with black hair and large spectacles.

The news flashed,"The Big Jumper is having another encounter with the Trapshot".

"Wow!", shouted the excited students. The Big Jumper was a hero in that small city and could make large leaps.   

Many times the encounter had happened between The Big Jumper and Trapshot. Nobody knew the reason why they were fighting and who they were. 

The bell rang for the college and all the students ran to witness the fight between the hero and the villain.

Trapshot, though not his real name, looked terrifying with self-made advanced technology weapons. Nobody knew his real name. People thronged in the devastated street to watch this encounter. The Big Jumper in a green-blue attire which he dons all the time while he fights, to hide his identity. Trapshot looks like a cowboy on his brown outfit and black boots.

"Give me that suit," shouted Trapshot.

"Not possible, Trapshot," replied The Big Jumper.

" What…," before Trapshot could finish his sentence, The Big Jumper packed a punch on Trapshot's face which sent him flying. Trapshot escaped on his Superbike which could also fly and the crowd applauded The Big Jumper for the gallantry act. He signed some notebooks and took photos with his admirers. At that time, many police cars came to the street. A bank robbery had happened in the nearby bank. Then The Big Jumper ran into an empty street and touched his chest. Suddenly, the suit started disappearing and there stood Jake. He was a strong man with large fists and the suit made him more powerful. He had silky brown hair with blue eyes. He walked into the empty college to take his backpack, but it was not in its place. He went home, keeping his head down. It was his favourite backpack and he had kept it for five years. He was the only child to his parents and they showered all their love on him. They were very friendly towards Jake and never used to chide him. The teachers liked him even though he barely attended the college nor did he secure good marks but for his socialising attitude. 

Meanwhile, people witnessed Trapshot going into the police station and having a conversation with the police. People living near the police station were afraid that Trapshot had got the police in his hands.

….

The following day, Jake decided to attend college. On that day, a new student came to class.

 Mrs. Norwich introduced her as Jane to the entire class. She had curly black hair and she shone brightly like the moon. No one could take eyes off her, but she saw Jake admiringly. She went and sat on the bench where the academically bright students sat. 

At lunch time, many gathered in front of Jane to get a chance to go out with her. But she didn't seem interested. She found Jake standing in the shade of the tree outside the class and started walking towards him. 

"Hi, would you be interested to accompany me to the cafe?", She asked Jake.

"Sure," Jake said while the other students looked at him in surprise. 

As they were chatting while sipping coffee in a cafe nearby, a woman cried,"somebody catch the thief. He is taking my purse".

Jake thought to himself "this looks like a job for The Big Jumper". He took this as a chance to impress Jane. He put down the coffee glass on the table and went into an empty street where no one could see him. He changed into his suit and started chasing the thief. As he could take huge leaps, he caught the thief in no time. He changed into Jake and handed over the purse to the woman. Then he saw some guys trying to kidnap a small girl. Jake remembered Jane waiting for him in the coffee shop. He called the police station near him to come and save the girl and ran to the cafe. But when he returned to the coffee shop, she was not there. He had missed a nice chance to be with her. As he walked in disappointment he saw Jane talking to the same woman whose purse was stolen. He rushed to talk to her.

“Sorry for leaving you in the middle of a conversation. Do you know that woman, Jane?”

“It's okay. Jake, what you did was awesome. No, I was just asking the route to the shopping mall nearby to her,” she said, trembling in surprise.

“Thank you for saving my purse, young man,” the woman said.

“It’s my pleasure,” said Jake.

“Okay, Jake. I have to leave now,” Jane said and walked away. Jake’s mood got better.

On his way to his house, his phone rang. It was his friend, Collins. 

"Hey, Jake," Collins started.

"What's the matter, Collins?", asked Jake.

"That new girl Jane is going out with your archenemy, Jake Hutchins". 

"What?"

"Yes, I saw them go out".

Jake sighed.

"Don't worry, Jake. You come to college and talk to her again".

"Okay, Collins. Bye," said Jake and hanged the call. His frustration knew no bounds.. He put on his suit and started jumping building after building. Hutchins and Jake were college mates, and they didn’t get along with each other. He was another handsome man.

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On the following day, Jake went to the college and to his surprise saw that Jane was waiting for him. This time he knew he wouldn't miss the chance to go out with her. He decided to reveal his identity to get her attention better. 

"Let's go to the coffee shop again," invited Jake.

"Okay, but before you run away, say the reason to me,” said Jane.

"Okay," said Jake with a smile. They were happily chatting, but this happiness didn't last long. Everyone in the streets started running. They were afraid of something. Jake and Jane went to see what was happening. It was the Trapshot again. 

 She called the police immediately. But, Jake started running away.  

"What are you doing, Jake?", shouted Jane. 

“I am afraid of Trapshot. I am going home,” he replied. But soon The Big Jumper swung into action. This time the police had come on time.  

“ You cannot escape today, Trapshot. The police have come to arrest you on time,” The Big Jumper said, triumphantly.

But Trapshot just gave a wild grin and the police started attacking The Big Jumper. Jake was very confused. 

He fled the scene and found a place on a tall skyscraper to think what was happening around him. Suddenly, he saw a poster saying “Please defeat Trapshot. He has got the police in his hands”.

Jake thought,”that could also be the reason for the police attacking me. Today I will end his story”. Suddenly he remembered some familiar faces. The woman to whom he had given the purse and the thief were among the police force. He was very confused. 

 He thought he had to talk to Jane to clear some of his doubts as he trusted Jane a lot. 

Jake called Jane to meet him in his house.

Jane arrived in an hour and sat down to talk with him. 

"Okay, Jake. What is it?", Jane asked eagerly.

"Who are you? Can you say something about yourself,” Jake asked.

“What is it, Jake? You appear tensed up”.

“I trust you, but, I want to know more about you”.

“Hmm, okay. But do you know that people are talking about Trapshot coming to the police station and having a strong conversation with the police?”Jane asked, to divert him from knowing about her.

“Really! This explains a lot”, Jake exclaimed.

“What does it explain?” she asked.

“Nothing. Just an expression”.

 “Okay, why did you call me, Jake?”  

" I have to say one important thing to you, Jane".

"I am The Big Jumper”.

“What? Are you joking! Jake".

He touched his chest and his suit appeared. 

“Now do you believe? I have to touch this button on my chest to become The Big Jumper,” Jake said, delightedly waiting for her response.

“Wow!”

Jake made his suit disappear and said,” I have to tell you another important thing”.

“You are full of surprises, Jake”.

“Andy and I were childhood friends," Jake started.

"Who is Andy?"

"Wait. We loved technology, but I didn't take any effort to innovate things. But he did. He was an ardent boy. At the summer holiday of 11th grade, he started to make a suit. I was eager to find what suit it was. He revealed it to me and it was a jumper suit, which I use right now. I liked it very much and I wanted to own it. But Andy refused to give it to me. So, I stole the Jumper suit. From then on, I am using his suit to save people and he started to do terrorizing things to get back his suit. He doesn't want to be a villain, but I had made him one. He isn’t the kind of person who blackmails people as I know him. I never shared this with anyone," Jake said with a sigh. 

“It’s okay, Jake. Don’t worry,” Jane said and embraced him. But Jake felt something on his hands. It was a handcuff.

Jane touched her ear and then only did Jake notice that she had an earpiece in her left ear. 

"Confirmed, Sir. You may come.", she said. She stood up and showed her identity card to him. She was a police officer.

" What did you do right now?"Jake asked, panicking.

"I am a spy. Trapshot aka Andy had come to the police station. We were afraid and took weapons for our defence. But he had come unarmed. He lodged a complaint against The Big Jumper. We were surprised when we heard that The Big Jumper had stolen the jumper suit from him. We didn't believe him so we started to investigate it. He also said that every fight was planned by The Big Jumper and that it was an attempt to distract the police and the people to do other crimes like robbery and kidnapping. It was a valid point that he had given and he was not wrong. You were the one who planned the robbery and also the kidnapping of the small girl to distract the police. He said that he had saved the girl from the rogue gang. You are not the hero, Jake. Andy is. He also said that The Big Jumper's name was Jake. He didn't remember the last name so we were a little confused. So I was sent to know about you and Jake Hutchins. The thief and the woman’s purse getting robbed was all our set-up to find out your real identity. Now we have found out the secret of your power and you were right about his character," Jane explained.

“You gave me a big surprise, Jane,” Jake said, ironically.

 Many police cars were standing in straight rows to take Jake to prison. Andy was also there. 

"Come back as my friend, Jake," Andy said.

Jake was taken into the police van with dozens of policemen to make sure that Jake cannot escape.

….

The head police officer decided to say that they had arrested Trapshot so that Andy would continue to win the trust of people as The Big Jumper.

A wild grin came on Jake's face as he knew what was going to happen next.


He knew that from then on he would be a disturbance to the world.



July 23, 2020 14:28

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277 comments

Cynthia Premlatha
16:26 Jul 23, 2020

Kuddos on your second successful leap....good attempt to invention your fictional superhero...keep it up!!!

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Keerththan 😀
16:30 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you for reading.

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Bar Kavi
16:11 Jul 23, 2020

Nice and good keerthu kutty keep rocking

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Keerththan 😀
16:12 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you. Would you mind liking my story?

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Barani Kumar
15:43 Jul 23, 2020

Nice write up keerthan

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Keerththan 😀
15:44 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you.

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Sanjeev Pandian
15:40 Jul 23, 2020

Good 👍

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Keerththan 😀
15:41 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you for reading.

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Chetan Dabhi
15:37 Jul 23, 2020

Awesome Dear Keerthan will be waiting for many more like this 👍🏻

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Keerththan 😀
15:40 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you for reading. Glad you liked my story. Will be writing more.

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14:46 Jul 23, 2020

Lots of good dialogue and a fast paced plot that kept the story moving forwards. Great job 👍🏼

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Keerththan 😀
14:47 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you for reading my story.

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Vikraman Arut
04:35 Aug 23, 2020

Super story .I like it very much . I like the ending so much. Unexpected twist

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Keerththan 😀
05:06 Aug 23, 2020

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Clara D Berry
20:14 Aug 20, 2020

I see your superhero fandom coming out here. Great plot! I was not expecting any surprises from Jane after I knew she wasn't Trapshot, and I never would have guessed that Jake was the bad guy.

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Keerththan 😀
00:44 Aug 21, 2020

I love superheroes. Thank you for reading, Clara.

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JISHNU VEL
11:19 Aug 18, 2020

The story was nice and it was a little predictable for me that the girl was a trap for big jumber to go to jail overall it is definitely worth reading

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Keerththan 😀
11:40 Aug 18, 2020

Thank you for reading.

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09:41 Aug 18, 2020

I like this story. Nice twist. Try writing a novel . All the best .Keep writing.

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Keerththan 😀
10:10 Aug 18, 2020

Thank you for reading.

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Anand Balu
08:57 Aug 18, 2020

The story is a good read. The plot and twists makes it so...Keep writing! I can see a great author in the making!

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Keerththan 😀
08:59 Aug 18, 2020

Thank you for your well wishes. Thank you for reading.

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Amy DeMatt
15:14 Aug 17, 2020

Thanks for the recommendation of your story! I found it entertaining and creative. Keep working, looking forward to more!

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Keerththan 😀
15:51 Aug 17, 2020

I am glad that you found my story entertaining. Thank you for reading, Amy.

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22:04 Aug 15, 2020

Nice story and I love how you seem to write smoothly and find words with ease! That’s the sign of a great writer so keep on. I think we are going to see some great stuff from you! Good job, Keerththan! Victoria :-)

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Keerththan 😀
02:21 Aug 16, 2020

I am glad that you like my writing style. Thank you for your well wishes. Thank you for reading, Victoria.

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14:31 Aug 15, 2020

Great job! I love the plot twist. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

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Keerththan 😀
15:21 Aug 15, 2020

I am glad you loved the plot twist. Thank you for reading, Vicki.

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Syeda Fatima
01:14 Aug 15, 2020

just brilliant, keep improving!

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Keerththan 😀
01:49 Aug 15, 2020

Thank you for reading,Syeda.

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Greg Gillis
15:08 Aug 14, 2020

The story itself has the potential of being a great story, though you may want to improve on your vocabulary and your grammar. Perhaps add in more descriptive words as well. Overall, it was quite creative.

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Keerththan 😀
01:48 Aug 15, 2020

I will improve my grammar and vocabulary. Thank you for taking your time in commenting and thank you for reading my story.

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Kat Stokes
14:54 Aug 14, 2020

Loved this story, very entertaining!

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Keerththan 😀
01:47 Aug 15, 2020

I am glad you loved my story. Thank you for reading.

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Daisy Torres
14:25 Aug 14, 2020

Thanks for the follow, like and comment on my story! This was a very creative storyline!! I loved that plot twist at the end. I didn't see that coming at all. Keep up the good work!!

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Keerththan 😀
01:46 Aug 15, 2020

I am glad you loved the plot twist at the end. Thank you for reading.

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Daisy Torres
04:45 Aug 15, 2020

Absolutely!

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Yolanda Wu
08:20 Aug 14, 2020

This story was so fun to read, I love how it unfolded. Amazing work! Keep writing. :)

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Keerththan 😀
08:23 Aug 14, 2020

I am glad that you enjoyed my story. Thank you for reading.

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Keerththan 😀
14:21 Aug 13, 2020

Thank you for reading. I will definitely improve my grammar.

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