There's a First Time for Everything

Submitted into Contest #81 in response to: Write about a first date that surprises both people, but in different ways.... view prompt

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Dedicated to Emerald and โ—ฆโ€ขโ—โ—‰โœฟ ๐“‘๐“ต๐”๐”๐“ฒ๐“ฒ โœฟโ—‰โ—โ€ขโ—ฆ


Okay, it has been wayyyyyy too longย 

Soooooo

FINALLY

NEW STORYYYYY

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Enjoyyyyy!!!!!

(Also I need title suggestions)


Aurora


I brush my hair impatiently, glancing at the clock every second or so. Looking in the mirror, Iโ€™m pleased to see that even with my shaky hands I could manage a braided bun with loops and swirls. My dress floats above the ground, the pink and blue hearts glimmering. I look at the clock again. 7:45, it reads. Oh no! 15 minutes left! Grabbing my best lipstick, Loving Hearts Red, I hurriedly grab my purse, stuff my phone and wallet in, and sprint off to Cozyโ€™s Cafeย  to meet my first date.

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Apollo


I stride down the unfamiliar street, glancing at the stores and houses. This place isnโ€™t bad, but it could be better. Scanning the street for a coffee shop, I straighten my tie and stride forward. Hopefully my date will look as good as her profile picture in that dating app. Finally, my sharp eyes catch a sign reading: Cozyโ€™s Cafe! 40 percent sale for Valentines Day!

At a booth, there is a young woman, bouncing in her seat and scanning the crowd. She sees me and smiles, her lips a bright happy red. I try to return it, but Iโ€™m too bothered by the top of the booth, with a mismatched pattern.ย 

โ€œHi! You must be..Apollo, right?โ€

โ€œWhy would I be meeting you if I wasnโ€™t?โ€

The woman, Aurora, laughs. Iโ€™m surprised; I hadnโ€™t meant to be funny. Taking a seat, I glance at the menu and immediately utter a silent groan; it was way too pink and had too many hearts.

โ€œYou picked a good day for a date,โ€ Aurora said, shyly smiling at me.

โ€œOf course! Valentineโ€™s day is perfect for meeting dates.โ€ I answered, straining not to blurt out how terrible the menu is. She smiled at me again, but now I was focused on finding a place in the cafe that wasnโ€™t pink.

โ€œHello, may I have your order?โ€ A young blonde girl wearing a pink dress suddenly showed up, grinning.

Aurora ordered a Strawberry Latte; I ordered a Coffee.ย  No sugar, no milk, just plain. Besides, I had lost my appetite long ago, when I saw the menu and the top of the booth.

My date happily chatted to me about how nice this place was and how handsome I am; I was trying not to find another thing to worry about.

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Aurora


I had arrived early, at 7:50, waiting for my date to arrive. When the sharp gentleman, glancing at me, had arrived, I felt like throwing up; it was my first date! I didnโ€™t have experience, only a sense of humor and a nice dress. We both said hi, then he walked in the booth I had picked, and sat down.ย 

I hope I chose a good place to have a first date.

I really hope so.ย 

The sign on the front said 40 percent off for today, right?

Apollo really is smart, picking Valentines day for a date.

This place is really pretty, and the drinks are good too. I hope that this can convince him to stay with meโ€ฆ

Letโ€™s see how nice he is.

Wow. I was so, so surprised. He was so funny! With his clever quips, he almost rivaled me for my humor and jokes.ย 

We would fit together so well! Like peas in a pod. Inseparable.

I lost myself, dreaming about our wedding, when I was dressed in a long, white gown and he was the handsome, charming man, and how he would lift my face to meet his, and say: โ€œYou are my everything. I love you.โ€ Then he would embrace me, and we would-

Iโ€™m getting ahead of myself. Snapping myself back, I laughed again at his pun about coffee.

So strikingโ€ฆ

And his name, Apollo, said it all. He was just like the Greek God, attractive ย and charming. I was in love with his easy moves, and stunning face. I hope he feels the same for me.

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Apollo


Okay, I have had it with this place. The workers were so slow in making the drinks, taking ten minutes just to send it out. The young waiters stumbled all over the place. And the cafe itself...

Ugh.

Worn chairs sat over a brown floor that looked like it had been burnt and scratched by an angry cat dipped in cheese. Most of the booths had terrible taste in color. And they were dirty. The table begged for a wipe.

I thought of just-ย 

Walking out. Actually getting up, ignoring the girl before me, saying:

โ€œSorry, this place is terrible, Iโ€™m leaving.โ€ Bypassing the shock on her face. And resuming my search for a girlfriend.

If I do that, I have ruined another date, lost another possible wife.ย 

But I just couldnโ€™t stand it anymore! I couldnโ€™t stand this place! I-

Wait. So what if the chairs are ugly? Or if the booth had terrible colors? Iโ€™m here for a date. A date with a beautiful girl. And I need to focus and actually get to know her.

โ€œUm, why are you standing up? D-do you need the bathroom? Or-โ€

โ€œActually, Iโ€™m fine. I just want to get to know you more.โ€

โ€œUm! U-uh-Sure! I want to get to know you too!โ€

Sheโ€™s nervous. I feel guilty. After being ignored for ten minutes, suddenly the person who just prepared to walk out asks you a question. You probably would be stunned. I would be too.

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Aurora


โ€œWhere should we meet for our second date?โ€

WHAT. After enjoying being in Apolloโ€™s presence, mostly his sudden warmth towards me, I had never thought that he would ask me for a second date!

โ€œHow about this,โ€ I said, pointing at a fancy steak restaurant.

โ€œSounds good! Iโ€™ll see you, then.โ€ I gave him a shy little wave. He smiled. Then he reached over and kissed me. I was too stunned to speak. Apollo then walked onto the streets, and I lost him in the crowd. I really, really canโ€™t wait to meet him again.

February 18, 2021 06:47

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AwwwwwWWwW Apollo X Aurora = Apurora? Ohhh btw do u mean when instead of why when you said-I mean when the story said: Besides , I had lost my appetite long ago, why I saw the menu and the top of the booth. Why I saw the menu on top of the booth or when I saw the menu on top of the booth๏ผŸ ReEEEEeEE My NaME iS iN TheRe SDRTFVGUIKJNJIIJHBVFDEWQWEDCVNJKL<MNHGFDSAQWTYUIOIKJUHYGTRFEDWEDFHGJIOUYTREWDFGHJUIUJHGBVGYUHNJIKJM I'm soooo honoredddddd (is that how you spell it?) EeEee :D

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Awwww this was so cuteeeeeeee<33333 Aurora being super nervous abt it and Apollo just done with the dateXDDDD they're a cute pairing thoooo:))))) idk why but I read this line: "The young waiters stumbled all over the place." As, "The young writers scattered all over the place." XDD amazing story Celesteeeee!!!!

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Awwwwwwwwwww Lunaaaaa <3 XDDDD LOLLOLOLOLL :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD That-That works? XD AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3333333 (I'm just sooooooo happy rn XD)

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<33333 lolllllXDD yayyyyy anything rly exciting happening? Or r u just happy?!:DDD

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Nainika Gupta
13:36 Feb 18, 2021

Awwwwww so cute!! Celeste, i loveeee ittttttt I would say ONE thing tho... wait, TWo actually 1) is he ACTUALLY apollo???!!! bc then *whistles* wowwwwweeee (hehe) 2) I would liked to have seen more INTERACTIONS between them, like maybe cliche first dates stuff where they discuss their actual lives (like getting to know one another) but other than that??? *swoon* fantastic <3

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW thanks GoL QUEEEEEN 1. Mayyyyybe 2. maybe part two :DDDDDDDD AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that means A LOT coming from you <3

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Nainika Gupta
18:41 Feb 18, 2021

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW NO PROBLEM CELESTEEE *ahem* gwynnestri XD 1) LE GASPPPPP WHAT??!?!!! AHH THAT MAKES SENSE IF HE WAS AND IF NOT HIS PARENTS JESUS THEY MUST HAVE LOVED GREEK GODS TOO MUCH 2) YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PART 22222222 plEASE <333 no problem girl!

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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD XD 1. BAAHHAAHAHHAAHAHAHAH*dies of laughter* 2. HMMMMMMMMMMM Maybe and if i do it i dedicate it to you <333333 :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Nainika Gupta
18:43 Feb 18, 2021

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW XDDDDDDDDDD BAHAHAHAHAH YASSSSSSSS (yesssss) <3333

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XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD (XD toooo many emojis XDDD) (also next Trap the dragonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn)

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Perfect love story here! Your characters were so easy to love, especially because you split them up, writing in both views. Lol the only critique I have is that you kind of did that cliche thing where they decide on JUST A PLACE for a date. Like... that's not realistic. Still, great job!

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15:01 Feb 24, 2021

This was a really sweet muffin!, tho the characters sounded a bit, hm, too pretty XD. And I would be disgusTED if I had to sit in an all pink place XD. Suchhhhhh a cool read!

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Amel Parvez
12:16 Feb 19, 2021

SWEEEEET! loved it.

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16:41 Feb 18, 2021

I love the characters and the plot, Apollo is so funny! The angry cat bit... still giggling about it. Thanks for the dedication!

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Maya -
20:31 Mar 12, 2021

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ViCtoRy Is OuRs! Apparently its a challenge where you say it to someone and then have them pass it on. I got it from luna who got it from sapphire who got it from kate who got it from jade who got it from emerald sorry this is really random XD

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00:51 Feb 19, 2021

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