Hello! Try and see if you can find the part where I got inspired by the prompt...
I remembered nothing. All I knew was that I had powers of the earth, or in fact, was earth. I had been asleep for some time, evidently. I blinked a few times and saw nothing but darkness. I felt drowsy, and sluggish, but not uncomfortable.
I realized I was IN the ground. With a grunt I pushed myself out of the ground.
Where am I?
When am I?
How long have I been asleep? Then suddenly a great pain to my forehead nearly knocked me down. A swirling of leaves and grass surrounded me, and a voice that was not my own floated out of my mouth.
“The man blessed with elements of this fair land
Shall unwisely silence the ferine strand
Trouble's descent upon all alike
Seven will save you, seven will strike
One whose father turned to the west
A peasant with powers of fire hence blessed
A third warrior with opposition abound
The two sisters of which no ones like can be found
Sand forges the girl who will be tried
And the daughter of Earth ceases to hide
Find them you shall, and unite them you must
For the fate of your land lies in their trust
Each holds power uncorrupted by vice
The seven shall serve the image of paradise
Each power extracted and forged into one
The pain of elements and sins to be undone
Time cannot be disregarded
The quest is not for the weakhearted.
The seven shall rise if you succeed
And bring about a newer breed
Your world will be transformed anew
But all depends on your hearts beating true.”
I shivered silently in shock. While the voice had been going, a warmth and glow and filled me. Now that it was gone, the forest was eerie silent and dark again. It wasn’t my voice, but it came from inside of me. I could only guess that it was a prophecy or warning from moth earth. She was the mother of all elements, and the one who bestowed the powers of the elements upon men. I knew not what she was talking about with wars and greed, as I had no memory of my past.
I knew how to walk, and I knew about the world, but I didn’t have any memories.
When you don’t have memories, you don’t yearn for them either. So I wasn’t disturbed at all, since to my knowledge I didn’t love anybody, or had loved anybody.
All I knew know was that I needed to find these seven children. Oh my, what a fate had descended upon me. What war? What greed? How was I supposed to find them? What was I supposed to do? Unite them?
“O, Mother Earth. Send me a clue right now, if you do want me to succeed!” For several seconds, nothing happened and I felt desperately alone and tiny in the great world. Then, a gust of wind lifted me off my feet. I circled the air several times and hovered above a clearing. I could make out five figures that were gathered in a huddle way down below. The wind gently floated me down and I descended upon the ground in a light landing.
“Ahhhhh! They’re coming to get us!” Two girls shrieked in fright at the sight of me. The scurried behind the other three who looked equally frightened. Then a ring of fire surrounded me as I gazed upon them in bewilderment.
“Who are you and what do you want?” The girl with sapphire blue eyes and wavy, shoulder length brown hair pointed a sharp sword at me. Although it was mid-summer (don’t ask me how I knew that; I just knew) she looked cold. Not that she felt cold, she was cold. If I touched her, I was sure her skin would be cold as ice. She didn’t look mean or particularly frightening, but she had a fierce look to her; of one who had seen bad times.
I raised my hands to show I was weaponless.
“I’m Brooke.” I blurted. I didn’t even know that was my name. A name. What an interesting thing. I was Brooke.
“From what kingdom?”
“Kingdom?” I knew what a kingdom was, but I didn’t know I had one. I thought I came from the earth.
“Oh, ignore her, Kate. She’s obviously from the Air kingdom coming to take us back. They’ve definitely discovered that Celeste’s escaped.
“Ooh! Fun! Shall we fight her?” So the cold, fierce one was Kate. The two girls who just spoke were evidently sisters. One was pale, but overly energetic looking with golden locks of hair and a musty black robe. The other was nicely tanned wearing a silk pantsuit gilded with gold and lace with her abundant mass of hair pinned neatly on top of her head. Another word: Royalty. Meaning both were the children of rulers. Except one didn’t look exactly like it.
“No, Celeste. She doesn’t look harmful-”
“Aww come on, I’m one day out of confinement and y’all won’t let me do anything!”
“As I was saying, what kingdom are you from?” The one called Kate pointed her blade at me again, except this time I noticed it was clear and the sides were frosted. It was ice! This one was from the Ice Kingdom. I suddenly remember the prophecy.
“Two sisters!” I locked my gaze on the two bickering girls, one pale and one tan.
The two sisters of which no ones like can be found
Yes, certainly they were a unique set. Two out of seven!
“I told you! She’s looking for two sisters! She tracked us, and flew here." "She's gonna kill us next!” The one dressed in silk wailed in desperation.
One of fire... I surveyed the group again. A boy who had been lingering behind the others caught my attention. His eyes were gold with a fiery characteristic to them. His dark brown hair flapped across his eyes. But best of all, His hands were outstretched and I saw that he was controlling the ring of fire surrounding me.
“Powers of fire hence blessed!” The boy looked startled and the circle of fire disappeared for a second. It soon returned, meaning I was trapped again. But that was of no matter! Three out of seven!
“Who here is a warrior?”
“I am, and if you won’t stop spouting nonsense, I will certainly use my warrior powers against you.” Kate was the warrior. She slashed her blade through the air and sharp pellets of hail and snow rained down upon me. The circle of fire ceased and instead a ice wall enclosed me, inching up slowly by the second.
“A prophecy! I’m fulfilling a prophecy! Um, the elements are at war, and the uniting of the seven elements is the only way to stop it.” Sensing that Kate wasn’t going to kill me just yet, I hurriedly continued.
“There are seven children who have the seven powers, and so far we have four, uh, and they’re Kate, the warrior, um you two sisters, and also the fire guy.”
“Hold up. What prophecy? Can you tell us it?” This time it was the girl wearing a circlet on her head. A sign of royalty. Her clothes would’ve been extremely regal looking if not for the fact that they were splattered with mud and tattered by the twigs and branches in the forest.
“Not the full prophecy, but I’ll tell you about the seven children.
One whose father taken to the west
A peasant with powers of fire hence blessed
A third warrior with opposition abound
The two sisters of which no ones like can be found
Sand forges the girl who will be tried
And the daughter of Earth ceases to hide.”
“So... basically we need to find all of them, unite their powers somehow and save the world.” The ice walk encircling me died down and I could tell I had earned their trust.
“I’m Princess Mira of the water kingdom. And I believe that the prophecy is reffering to my father who’s just been kidnapped.” The girl with the muddy gown stuck out her hand and smiled at me.
“I’m Priya and this is my twin sis-”
“Hey! I can introduce myself! I can still talk after five years of confinement, you know. I’m Princess Celeste of the air kingdom, but I have powers of light.”
“I’m Luke of the fire kingdom, but as the prophecy says, I’m just a random peasant that somehow has powers.”
“I’m Kate, and I serve in the Seventeenth imperial army of the Ice Kingdom. Battalion eight, cavalry.” She sheathed her ice sword.
“Great! So that’s five. We just need the other two to stop the war. What war, by the way?” The five of them exchanged glances.
“It’s a long story-” Luke started.
“It all started with Jean Valjean, of the darkness kingdom who came to ask my hand in marriage.”
“He then kidnapped her father apparently, and she had to run away.”
“And?” I prompted them.
“Well, uh, let me continue.” Kate gestured to a log for me to sit on, as everybody sat down.
“Then, Jean Valjean and his army made their way to the Ice Kingdom and asked for our Alliance. Obviously, due to his great strength and power, we had to accept and I’m a warrior in the army. We were to fight against the water kingdom which had waged war as soon as their king was taken. I was fighting them, that is, until I got knocked out and ended up here.”
“After that, he started attacking the air kingdom because we were alliances with water and light. Luckily we escaped.” Priya and Celeste exchanged glances as if there was more to the story. But they didn’t spill.
So, like that, with each person relaying a part of the story, I was able to figure out that Jean Valjean, an evil prince from the Darkness Kingdom was planning to take over every single kingdom and have darkness be the only element left. He had been recruiting other empires to join him to fight off the others. So far, his allies were fire and ice. The opposing side was water air, and light. The earth kingdom and sand kingdom were still undecided. I was rather surprised at how well everybody was getting along.
Kate was supposed to be an enemy of Mira, but as Kate explained to me, she hadn’t joined the army to kill people anyways. This only reinforced the description of the prophecy, ‘Each holds power uncorrupted by vice’.
“Guys, there are two more people left we need to find. The daughter of earth and the girl of sand.” Kate gazed at me thoughtfully.
“You said you have no memory of anything since you were asleep in the ground? The daughter of earth ceases to hide. You’ve been hidden all these centuries. And this morning you ceased to hide by breaking out of the ground.” She smiled triumphantly.
“There’s only one left after all, Brooke, you are the daughter of earth.”
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Nainika’s POV
Jean Valjean had sent me in search of the Water Princess.
“She’s been missing for three days, my spies report. This is unacceptable if we wish to conquer the world. We must find her and kill her.”
“Yes, lord, but how-”
“Every person holds darkness and sadness in their heart. Her especially, since her father has just been kidnapped.” He flicked a speck of grime off his finger. Sensing I still had no clue what to do, he rolled his eyes.
“Goodness. I can travel anywhere that is dark, yes? But I don’t want to travel right now.” He gestures to all the mapping of battle strategies he has in front of him.
“Fortunately, my power is strong enough that I can send others in my place. I’ll just instill the power of darkness inside of you, temporarily. Just think, ‘darkness inside Princess Mira Nobelius’s heart’. Very simple. You can even control her that way, but we only need her dead.”
The past day had been extremely dizzying. Half of me was obeying the orders of Jean Valjean because it made sense to, and why wouldn’t I want to? The other half was struggling and straining against the orders since they just didn’t make sense. Why would you want to take over the world? Life’s just nice and peaceful right now. But it was much harder to accommodate both. Simpler to just follow the actions of Jean instead of trying to come up with my own plans.
In fact, I doubted I was even doing any of it, really. I felt the darkness inside of me or regret and guilt being controlled by Jean. But it was pleasant and a heartwarming feeling. I for once could relax, and do whatever Jean wanted me to...
So here I ended up in this clearing by the side of a regal looking girl with a grimy and hole-ridden dress.
“Did you- I swear- you just appeared out of nowhere!” She exclaimed.
“I’m am Nainika the fierce of the Sand Kingdom, here to take your life.” But before I could whip out my sword, five other people stepped in my way. One wielding a sharp blade of ice, another with his hands blazing on fire, two girls who started circling above my head, stirring up a tornado, and a brown haired girl studying me with an unnerving amount of regard. But again, thinking and observing takes up too much energy.
Ha, five pesty children all years younger than me? I don’t think so. I summoned the darkness from each one of them, ready to enclose them with it, the way Valjean’s power was prompting me to do. Unfortunately, before I could do that, one of the girls circling above me sent my darkness to drown me, and then,
Everything
Went
Black.
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Hey... I know it’s been awhile! But I hope you enjoyed! Dedicated to my good friend Brooke D. (who is temporarily Kiwi Kelsey 😀) Btw, she started the fruit/food name trend which is catching on like wildfire! Of course, all my other friends are in here except for a few which are coming in the next part... hehehe. Shoutout to Luke for creating this AMAZING prophecy! Like dude whaaaaa? I asked him to in the middle of a zoom class in in 3 minutes he handed me this masterpiece (you must remember I'd spent 30 mins creating my own version...) Anyways... chicken. No jk. Love y’all have a nice day.
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YAY BROOKE'S HERE NOW TOO! And the squad's almost assembled ( we just need Nainika to snap out of whatever funk she's in so far). Great job btw! The worldbuilding here is IMMACULATE and it feels so real!
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YAYYYYYYYYYY yep, nainika become good later on tho
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UWUWUWUWUWWUWUWUWUUWUU ALL THATS LEFT IS TOO MAKE PRETTY BOY FALL IN REAL LOVE WITH HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEEHHEEHE XD
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ahhhhhhhahahahahahahahahaa i promise thatll happen!
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WAIT REALLY PERMANET FOLLOW AND A PLACE IN CELESTE/CHINSESVILLE FREE RAMEN THANKS SO MUCH
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They....they must kill ME???????????????? I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OMG THAT'S ICONIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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I LOVED IT. I LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING AND HOW ITS SO LIGHT AND FUN AND I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AND I LOVE MY CHARACTERRRRRR
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AHHHHHHHH THANKS YOUUUUUUUUU.... writing is fun! That's what I do it for these days! Plus it feels nicer to get praise than upvotes lol... Yes, I made you a tad bit fierce hehehe but then again you're the only one with battle training
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NPPPPPPPPPP Yeah it really is!!! XD I LOVED ITTTTTTTTTTT
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yAYYYYYYYYYYy ok I'm also writing another WWII themed short story rn, and I'm hoping to get it out before tonight!
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OMG YASSSSSSSSSSSS I AM SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYYY THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IT MEANS A LOT TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK Your bestie (?), Brooke, daughter of the earth
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EEEEEKKKKKK hehehee yes BESTIE!
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YAYYYYYYYYYYYY BESTIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Ok after re reading- some requests for my character please No silk because that’s harmful to silkworms :( Instead can I just have like a blue dress embroidered with stars? I really like stars- But I love my character so so much!! She’s so freaking cool like I can’t- Is she really based on me- Impossible- I 👏 LOVE 👏 THIS 👏 SERIES 👏
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NEW STORYNEW STORYNEW STORYNEW STORY
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OMG OMG OMG OMG I love ya new format of name !!!!!
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HehehehehXDDDDDD
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Also can my character pls feel guilty that Mira’s father was kidnapped by darkness? And me and Celeste get promoted to scouts because we can travel quickly, me as a night scout and Celeste as a days scout? Because there should be a bunch of dangers in the forest and if they get hurt I will be sad :c
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oooohhhh thats such a good idea...!
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I AGREE SIS
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Hey imma go draw all of these characters starting with the coolest ones which is obviously me and Celeste!! Can ya gimme descriptions? For all of them?
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GIVE ME SOME OF YOUR TALENT PLS ALL OF MY STORIES ARE CRAP COMPARED TO YOURS DANG IT ALSO UHUSHDWUGDWU I AM SO COOL THANK YOU THAT PROPHECY IS SO COOL TEACH ME I WANNA DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS NOW ALSO DID I KNOCK OUT NAINIKA WITH MY COOLER DARK POWERS BECAUSE THEN IM SUPER IMPORTANT HAHHAAAAAAA
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NOOOOOOOO YOU ARE TALENTEDDDDd
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MORE IMPORTANTLY: DID I KNOCK OUT NAINIKA
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bruh yessssssss
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