Death Loves the Brave Ones

Written in response to: Write a story where fortune doesn’t favor the brave.... view prompt

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Adventure Fantasy Friendship

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Falling skies should have signalled a reprieve for Leonor City. Ash rained from grey smoke that hid beautiful blue horizons from war weary people in need of hope. Southern blowing winds brought worse. By the second day, tears of the heavens fell through the white detritus. Hell itself fell from the skies.

            Trudging through that nightmare would have been enough. Those who had been content to see out the night and hope it would all be better in the morning had to admit that the world was surely ending.

            Cruel winds whipped the muck in every direction. Veterans of many bloody slaughters kept their watch in vain. Unlike snow, there was no admiring beauty in weather that choked the joy from anyone out in it.

            Chanting from beyond the wall met Sir Danielle’s ears. Caked in filth she roared an order to inform the queen. The enemy had returned. The dreaded day had come.

            “Just another battle, right?” Said another soldier in their sodden armour by her side.

            “Just another battle.” She nodded, knowing it was a cruel lie. Everything they thought they knew about war was meaningless against the terror soldiers of the Empire of the Holy Proclamation had brought.

            Dark shapes slipped in grey mud beneath the walls. Their red uniforms were the same muddy mess as the defenders. She aimed her bow at one, hearing a scream after she fired an arrow into the curtain of damned tears.

The city, if not the world, had heard the thunder crack of the far-off volcano which was burying them all in ash. The mighty boom of the cannons was a worthy impression of that hateful sound.

            A man rushed to stand by her side as the warning bells rang along the wall. “How can we fight what we can’t see?” Asked a man with a long beard poking out from the bottom of his helmet.

            “If we can’t see, neither can they.” Danielle coughed, spitting out ash.

            “In case we die, my name is Connor Riverton.”

            “Don’t say that. We have to fight for every breath.”

            “Of course. Are you Sir Longbow? Everyone looks the same in this mess.” He craned his neck, brown eyes peering at her.

            “That’s me.”

            “What are those noises?” He asked in a tone of voice that told her his bladder was already empty, and for a while, his leg wouldn’t be so cold.

            “It’s just another way to die Connor. A new one.”

            Nodding, Connor drew his sword. He began rolling his shoulders, warming up for battle. Danielle kept another arrow ready, hoping to use it before a sword was necessary.

            Familiar screaming blew their way from further north. The piss in her bladder offered to make itself scarce. She declined.

            The wall below them was pounded by metal from nowhere with crashing bang. Granite that had not moved in hundreds of years trembled.

A magical tree, Leonor’s first and greatest line of defence, screamed in otherworldly agony. The thick trunk was ripped in half by whatever had hit the wall. Agony in the cries of trees all along the walls rang in her ears.

“They’re killing the curaduile. How is that even possible?” Connor asked.

Waiting to fight was an itching torture. Eventually victorious cries beyond the wall became a battle chant.

            “They’re coming in. We need to head them off. Go that way.” Pulling her bow over her shoulder, she picked up her shield. Danielle patted Connor’s arm and began to run along the wall top towards the noise. Wet feet slipped in slush. Granite caught her hard in the shoulder. Connor’s trembling hands helped her up.

            The wall that had been an endless loop ended in rubble. Thirty feet below, invaders were pouring in through the hole.

            “We have to get down there,” Connor ran to the stairs.

            “We should shoot them with arrows first.” She warned him, throwing down her shield, and drawing her bow.

            “I have to defend Leonor.” He kept going, bravely trying to turn back a tide of imperials.

            The bang of a round of gunshots below was followed by screams, one of which sounded like Connor.

            “I like your plan,” said a woman by Danielle’s side, drawing her own bow. “Fools rush in. No wonder there are no men left in Leonor.” Her arrow caused a scream among the throng below. “Do you have any red arrows?”

            “No,” Sir Longbow said. Even if she had, using the arrows that would turn enemy soldiers into curaduile trees within the city felt like a terrible idea.

            Defenders ran to be down the steps fighting the enemy. Danielle and her companion cheered every kill their comrades scored until they were shot or stabbed and thrown aside. Bodies piled in the shattered ruins of the wall.

            “I’m Anne,” said her companion. Another arrow hit someone below. Another arrow was drawn from her quiver.

            “Danielle.”

            “Longbow, as in Sir Danielle Longbow?”

            “That’s me.” Her arrows were running out with no end in sight to the enemy.

When her ammunition was spent, Danielle threw down the bow and quiver. She picked up her shield and watched Anne fire her last two arrows.

            “Ready to die?”

            “Never. But I’m ready to fight. Let them come to us. We have the high ground.” Danielle cupped her hands and yelled. “Hey morons. Look up.” Two dozen faces turned to look at her. “That seemed like a good idea at the time.”

            Two dozen imperials tried to roar as they raced up steps. Doing both proved impossible.

            “The idiots ran out of breath halfway,” Anne shouted. “What a shame to walk all this way and run out of puff halfway up the stairs. Fragile little northerners. You should have taken your chances with the volcano.”

            The first man heaved his feet up the last few steps. He looked up at the point of Danielle’s sword. She kicked him backwards and sent the rest tumbling. Armour hit stone and the wooden banisters. Banisters gave way, the fall wouldn’t have been fatal for any of them, but it bought time.

            “One dead imperial.”

            The guns of the empire crackled throughout the city. Rooftops blazed with flame. Children were crying somewhere. Another soldier untangled himself and climbed the stairs. He had to look up. Stabbing down was easy.

            “Two dead imperials.”

            Men behind the corpse on the stairs threw him aside with no regard for dignity. The body tumbled and landed over an empty weapon rack, folding like a sheet.

            “Three dead imperials. You know the way home if you want to live.”

            “Fuck you,” said an imperial who had taken off his helmet.

            “I prefer women.” She stabbed. “Four dead imperials. Who’s next?”

            “Save some of the bastards for me,” Anne said behind her.

            “Are there any more arrows?” Danielle stabbed. “Five.”

            “I’ll look.”

            “Six. You all just want to die? I don’t mind if you walk back out of the wall.”

            One stabbed towards her ankle. She cut his forearm, thankful that cheap imperial armour only covered the upper arms and legs. Her sword went through his open mouth. One more down. She couldn’t be bothered to count out loud.

            Her shield met a gladius blade which stabbed as a man tried to keep his distance. “If your emperor gave a crap about you, he wouldn’t send you to fight with those butter knives. Not a sword between you all.” She stabbed his throat. Blood sprayed back at her and then over the soldiers behind.

            “I found more arrows. No red ones.”

            “I have eight kills now. You need to catch up.”

            “I already killed five with arrows.”

            “Did you see them die though? Nine.” Sir Longbow kicked a man down the stairs and back into men behind who were white from ash and red with blood.

            “I heard them die. That’s enough for me.”

            “Then I have twelve.” She stabbed another neck. “Thirteen now.”

            “Need a break?” Anne asked.

            “Are you ready?”

            “Born ready.”

            Danielle kicked the next dead man hard in the face. He slammed into the men behind as she stepped back to let Anne defend the stairs with her sword. The stairs had been painted red beneath the ever-creeping centipede of imperial soldiers.

            “Six for me.” Anne’s voice told Danielle that she had a bitter smile on her face. “Seven. How many to go?”

            “How many of you idiots marched into Crann today?” Danielle asked. None of the men waiting for their turn at the blade had the good manners to respond.

            A crossbow bolt whizzed past Anne’s shoulder from the bottom of the stairs. Soldiers below had noticed the corpses piling up around them.

            “Where’s your shield?” Sir Longbow asked.

            “Leaning against the wall further south.” Anne grunted as she put her sword point into another man’s eye. “How many is that now? Eight.”

            “Switch places, get your shield.”

            Anne backed away, letting Danielle take over.

            TING!

            A crossbow bolt slammed into Danielle’s metal fronted heater shield. Danielle winced at the jolt that travelled up through her left arm. With her right she sent another foreigner to the next life.

            “That’s fifteen of you I’ve killed now.”

            Another bolt hit the shield. She looked at the endless tide of invaders still scrambling over their own dead to get through the wall. Familiar dread wrapped its hands around her stomach and squeezed.

            Every house she could see was on fire.

            “Anne? ANNE? Are you there?”

            Another crossbow bolt thudded against her shield. Another imperial bit the dust.

            They stopped coming to her.

Peering over her shield, Danielle saw four crossbowmen aiming at her.

            “Fuck the north!” She lowered herself to hide more of her body behind the shield.

            Two shocks of pain, almost simultaneous, passed through her body from her father’s loyal shield.

            “ANNE?”

            Peering over the shield again she saw a familiar beard poking from a helmet in the ash behind the crossbowmen.

            “Rest in peace Connor. I’ll be with you soon.”

February 26, 2022 12:46

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39 comments

Michele Duess
23:20 Feb 27, 2022

Good story. "he told her in a tone of voice that said his bladder was empty." Interesting way to say how scared Conner was. A soldier once told me he was so scared in his first battle in Vietnam he peed himself. This is the kind of thing they don't mention in stories.

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Graham Kinross
05:56 Feb 28, 2022

I don’t like when people glorify fighting. It’s dramatic and exciting in stories but when we think about what’s happening right now, not just the war in Ukraine but other conflicts, I think it’s necessary to show the terror and the trauma. I saw on a tv show last night a car salesman excitedly asking a former soldier if he’d ever killed anyone. It was accurate when the soldier just gave him a look that said ‘why would you even ask me that’. No one wants to relive that. It’s awful. The news just now is full of what really happens, the innocen...

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Michele Duess
11:51 Feb 28, 2022

I agree with you.

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James Grasham
19:15 Mar 02, 2022

Hi Graham, Danielle and Anne in this story reminded me of Gimli and Legolas at Helm's Deep. Counting their kills and sharing a bit of banter - excellent!

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Graham Kinross
21:22 Mar 02, 2022

Thank you. Are you a Lord of the Rings fan?

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James Grasham
21:25 Mar 02, 2022

Massive fan! I've seen the movies a hundred times! I read the books at the end of last year/start of this for the first time. I'm going to try The Silmarillion and the others at some point too.

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Graham Kinross
21:39 Mar 02, 2022

It’s probably because I had the audiobook as a kid but The Hobbit is still my favourite. It was such a shame that the films of that were rushed because Lord of the Rings was really well done. There were a lot of unnecessary changes to the story and I think it would have been better as two films, also the sheer mess of the Battle of Five Armies at the end was a bitter end to what had started well with the first of the new trilogy. Casting the tallest people to play the dwarves was a weird choice as well. Which is your favourite battle from th...

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James Grasham
22:00 Mar 02, 2022

I didn't dislike The Hobbit films, I just found them hard to love. Kind of felt to me that they didn't have enough material for three films and inserted some padding. I think from the films it's Helm's Deep. The dark night, pouring rain, and getting pulled back from the very brink of defeat. From the books it's the battle of the black gate, simply because you know what is happening elsewhere and the book gets you whipped up into a real frenzy over it. Tolkein's ability to drive your emotions is really unparalleled.

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Graham Kinross
05:28 Mar 03, 2022

My favourite battle from the films is definitely Helm’s Deep. It has the doomed feeling, the humour and like you said the fact it happens at night gives it a different feeling. I wonder if it was based on the battle of Thermopylae because of the huge disparity in numbers and the few holding off the many, even though in reality the Spartan 300 were fighting alongside many other Greek forces against the Persians. The elves were incredible in the battle as well. It was good to see them fighting in the Hobbit films but that trilogy was let down ...

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Graham Kinross
07:43 Mar 20, 2022

I really hope they take their time to get it right. It looks good so far. I’m hoping it gives me the same excitement that the Witcher does. Wheel of Time was good but some of the costuming choices made it feel like the world was too new to me. People with hard lives wouldn’t have clothes that came off a rack and are perfectly clean all the time. Maybe it was just wash day just before the series begins though because they started to wear down the clothes later in the series. I love the Lord of the Rings films, especially the second one when A...

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Graham Kinross
06:27 Dec 11, 2022

Have you seen the Rings of Power tv show? I really enjoyed it.

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Gip Roberts
21:40 Feb 28, 2022

This prompt fit the story's theme well. I know you get aggravated trying to keep the saga going the way the prompts tend to veer off in all directions from week to week, but you're doing great staying inspired and tackling the obstacles. These words: "The stairs had been painted red beneath the ever-creeping centipede of imperial soldiers." Chilling description! Not only vivid, but rhythmic as well.

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Graham Kinross
00:27 Mar 01, 2022

Thank you. The last few prompts have fitted things better. Not too specific. Everything in the news has been making my rethink the way I want it to go. It’s too easy to get caught up with the dramatic representation of conflict and portray it as heroic rather than tragic.

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Moon Lion
02:52 Feb 28, 2022

This was another incredible read on your account. A) The opening set the stage so well, it was incredibly easy to imagine their dynamic and chaotic surroundings. Also the fantasy woven through the story was a great touch: "The thick trunk was ripped in half by whatever had hit the wall. Agony in the cries of trees all along the walls rang in her ears." made the world you've created so much richer. And Danielle and Anne were so great together :)

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Graham Kinross
00:36 Mar 01, 2022

There will be at least one more story with them working together as the battle continues, depending on how it fits with the prompts, maybe more.

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J.C. Lovero
13:45 Feb 27, 2022

Hi Graham, Really enjoyed the banter you wrote here between Danielle and Anne. I could almost picture them holding their ground against the onslaught of attackers. Thanks for sharing this story!

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Graham Kinross
22:11 Feb 27, 2022

Thank you. I was picturing a bit of the banter between Legolas and Gimli in the Two Towers a bit, humour to get them through the horror.

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L M
03:44 Dec 03, 2022

I prefer the monster stories but this was well done as a battle story.

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Graham Kinross
06:25 Dec 11, 2022

Thank you.

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L M
12:54 Dec 12, 2022

You are welcome.

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Graham Kinross
12:09 Apr 15, 2022

Thank you for reading my story. I've had a lot of fun writing this series. If you want to know what happens then you can use this link. https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/s8t3ds/

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Aoi Yamato
01:19 Jun 07, 2023

another good story. thank you graham.

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Graham Kinross
01:44 Jun 07, 2023

You’re welcome, Aoi.

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Drizzt Donovan
15:33 Nov 16, 2023

Thrilling stuff! Great action scenes and chat.

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Graham Kinross
05:23 Nov 17, 2023

Thanks Drizzt

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Drizzt Donovan
09:58 Dec 15, 2023

You’re welcome

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