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Creative Nonfiction Kids Funny

Bewitched

I'm bewitched. Well, that is, I'm becoming a witch. No, not the true, crone looking, broom flying, cauldron cooking kind of witch. But still a witch. A pretend witch, that is. And only for one evening. Not so bad. And I'm actually being encouraged to become a witch or something I'm usually not. Don't intend to cast any spells on unsuspecting souls, good or bad. But you never know. Could happen unintentionally, you understand. Since I'm only eight years old how bad could it be? I have never been schooled in becoming a witch. I'll have to work on it. And, of course, I don't want anyone to know that is what I'll be. So don't tell anyone. It has to be a secret. Now, let's do this!

We, my whole family, don't have much money so Mom will never agree to buy a ready made witch outfit. Those aren't easily available out here in the country anyway. I have to be creative. What am I going to need to make myself look like a witch? Witches always dress in all black, right? I'm gonna need a black dress. One that reaches all the way to the ground. I don't have one of those but my older sister has a long black skirt. Maybe it would reach the floor on me. Now I have to be sure she doesn't need it tonight and will let me use it. Maybe she will help me turn into a witch. She is very resourceful and she knows how to sew. Dad had an old black shirt, once. If we can find it and cut it up some, it would work for the top half. Long sleeves and all, maybe even a cape or shawl. Sis can fix it, I know.

But for the hat? Has to be pointy on top, right? I saved some black construction paper from school. With some glue and scissors bet we can fashion a proper witch hat. Boy, that will look fine! Mom will help draw some lines on my face with her eyeliner makeup to look like wrinkles and mold my silly putty into an extra long nose maybe with a mole on it for good measure.

Wish I had a better pair of shoes to wear. Curly toed boots would be wonderful but I can't think of anything to mimic that. The long skirt won't let them show anyway. I'll put my striped socks on and call it good. Mom's letting me carry our old outdoor straw broom as long as I don't lose it.

Okay, okay! I'm so excited. It's time to go. My two older sisters are ready, too. Even though they are only in fifth and sixth grades, they are going as teen-age boys with their hair swept into Elvis style pompadors including a bad-boy curl in front. They look so goofy with their letter sweaters on. The party is for the whole school and their families. Mom will stay home with the three little one's. They are only five, two and one years old. Way too young to have a good time. Dad will drop us off then come and get us again. He doesn't like these kind of events. You gonna ride with us? Remember, we don't want anyone to know who we are. It's more fun that way.

Our gymnasium doesn't even look like the same place! Sure you can still see all the classrooms spaced around the center open room where the basketball hoops are but the eerie decorations, the orange and black streamers, cobwebs and jack-o-lanterns transform the place into a spooky backdrop for the activities they plan for us. Do you see the graveyard in the corner? Skeletons, ghosts and everything. The cafeteria is serving all kinds of treats, too. Over there is a witch's cauldron. I need to stand by it and stir in some bat's teeth. This is gonna be fun. I heard someone say there will be a costume contest. We all have to parade in front of judges. Maybe you want to volunteer to be a judge. You are new here. You'd be an impartial observer.

Anyway, I see a bunch of my classmates. I'll go hang out by them. Hmm. Nobody seems to recognize me. I'm not going to talk so they won't know who I am. See how long it takes for someone to get wise. I know who they are. Kay Anne is the angle, as always. Martha is a spotted ladybug. Billy is the ghost, I can tell because he has his glasses on the outside of his sheet. Charlie is a caveman just like Fred Flintstone. Jimmy, the hobo or Freddie Freeloader, keeps following me trying to figure it out.

This is so funny! This costume is working out better than I would have ever guessed. No one knows me. Maybe I'll have a shot at winning the costume contest. Wonder what the prize will be. I'll make a clean sweep with my broom. I'm enjoying this whole night except Jimmy is starting to make a pest of himself. He is asking everyone around who they think I am. Did I come with them? Don't tell, please. Hope my sisters catch on and keep the secret.

Gonna have to cast a spell on Jimmy if he doesn't quit annoying me. But I can't talk. Oh, good! Some games are starting. Maybe that will distract the little detective. He could bob for apples. I can't or my nose would fall off or my makeup could smear. I'll paint a small pumpkin. Dracula is whispering scary stories in the graveyard. The skeleton is leading a scavenger hunt. Teens are doing the Monster Mash. I see my sisters joining in.

Finally the parade is lining up. We walk around and around the room while people pick out their favorites. Oh, these stupid annoying shoes. I have the same problem all the time at recess. They are hand-me-down flats a little too sloppy big on me. Every time I try to run or hurry one falls off nearly tripping me. I have to double back to pick it up.

Suddenly Jimmy calls out, “Ah, ha! The witch is Mary! Those are her shoes! I'd know her anywhere!”

November 07, 2024 23:11

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Ghost Writer
05:15 Nov 17, 2024

Delightful. To be a kid again and experience the excitement of Halloween.

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Mary Bendickson
05:58 Nov 17, 2024

Quite bewitching😆. Thanks for the follow.

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Timothy Rennels
22:54 Nov 16, 2024

Ah, to be young again! I remember as a boy suffering through just such an event in a insufferable plastic cone with two armholes and two eyeholes. I was Candy Corn!

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Mary Bendickson
05:56 Nov 17, 2024

Two years before as a first grader I was a pumpkin without arm holes. Sisters decided we couldn't enter together because we would be recognized as a set. They left me outside unable to get the heavy doors open.😭

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Timothy Rennels
04:31 Nov 19, 2024

I hope they were kinder to you as the years went by! Hilarious!

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Mary Bendickson
16:01 Nov 19, 2024

Wasn't meant to be mean. We just never thought it out far enough. Someone soon came along to open the door. But I don't remember if I had anything to eat 😭.

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Rebecca Detti
16:47 Nov 14, 2024

I really enjoyed this Mary!

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Mary Bendickson
01:13 Nov 15, 2024

Thank you. Not so scary Halloween story.😄

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Philip Ebuluofor
17:50 Nov 13, 2024

I think judging from what is happening here around me, everyone is one already. Fine move.

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Mary Bendickson
20:45 Nov 13, 2024

Thanks for reading my story.

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Philip Ebuluofor
18:01 Nov 17, 2024

Welcome.

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Adelle A.
14:48 Nov 13, 2024

The younger siblings always get the hand-me downs.... A lovely, cute Halloween read!

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Mary Bendickson
16:45 Nov 13, 2024

Indeed they do. Glad you liked it.🤗

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Marty B
03:53 Nov 13, 2024

Tripped up by your shoes! Great story- Thanks!

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Mary Bendickson
20:39 Nov 13, 2024

Made that event memorable.☺️

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Tom Skye
16:41 Nov 12, 2024

This was a fun read. Very simple story but filled with so much detail and childlike enthusiasm, it really captured the setting. The opening was a little ambiguous and brought some intrigue to what was going on, before it unfolded into a party setting. The final line and identification can be considered harmless child's play but to the children it is the most important thing in that moment. This meant the scenario drew parallels with being identified as or falsely accused of being a witch. Something with graver consequences in earlier cen...

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Mary Bendickson
19:17 Nov 12, 2024

Thanks so much. Who knew my innocent childhood memory could hold so much intrigue?🤔

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Tom Skye
19:33 Nov 12, 2024

Haha I overthink things

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Mary Bendickson
19:44 Nov 12, 2024

Oh, but I like it😅

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Kevin Keegan
14:09 Nov 12, 2024

What a lovely story Mary. Very nostalgic and it brought me back in time too. Great work Mary.

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Mary Bendickson
14:13 Nov 12, 2024

Pleased you liked it. Also all the others you've been catching up on.😀

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Rebecca Lewis
12:07 Nov 12, 2024

I enjoyed reading this story — it’s got a sweet, nostalgic vibe that brought me back to the excitement of being a kid during Halloween. I love how you captured the energy and voice of an eight-year-old. It’s a fun story with a lot of heart.

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Mary Bendickson
14:00 Nov 12, 2024

Glad you enjoyed it.☺️

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Carol Stewart
02:57 Nov 12, 2024

So endearing! Love the descriptions of the home-made costumes - even better when the child puts them together themselves.

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Mary Bendickson
05:01 Nov 12, 2024

Thanks.

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10:18 Nov 11, 2024

This is a delightful story. I was getting excited right along with her! Children used to be delighted with such simple things. A costume made up of family items. It's a shame the shoes were a give-away. You can't win them all.

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Mary Bendickson
14:21 Nov 11, 2024

Glad you were delighted. Yep, no store bought costumes! 🤗

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Brynn Helena
17:04 Nov 10, 2024

this was so adorable, gosh. it made me really miss being a kid at halloween :,)

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Mary Bendickson
07:26 Nov 11, 2024

Thanks. You are a talented writer.

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Max Wightwick
16:34 Nov 10, 2024

Hi Mary, This is a very endearing story. There is much to chuckle at, such as the Elvis style pompadors or the Monster Mash, and the perspective of a child is well executed. It is nice to read a peaceful, happier tale for Halloween.

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Mary Bendickson
07:26 Nov 11, 2024

Thanks. Three weeks of mostly horror, I needed something else ☺️

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11:08 Nov 10, 2024

You write a child's pov really well. Great and realistic voice . Love the boundless imagination of the child that you have delivered here. Very sweet :)

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Mary Bendickson
06:49 Nov 11, 2024

Thank you🤗

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Helen A Smith
09:22 Nov 10, 2024

I knew she wouldn’t get away with not being recognised for long. Shoes are always a bit of a giveaway I love your depiction of the fun side of spookiness. It makes a nice change.

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Anthony Andrés
07:57 Nov 10, 2024

A cute take on the prompt. Really captured the child’s voice well.

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Deborah Sanders
06:47 Nov 10, 2024

Very nice point of view. Cute, not scary. It’s too bad Jimmy figured it out. But I imagine he was trying so hard that he wasn’t really having much fun. And Mary, resourceful and determined, was a winner.

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Daniel Rogers
23:52 Nov 09, 2024

Too bad she couldn't find curly toed boots. She may have kept her identity secret. Fun story, and I see it's creative nonfiction. Your story?

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Mary Bendickson
00:51 Nov 10, 2024

My story. I had a hard-knock world😜. See my comment to Trudy where I tell what happened two years before.😭

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Chris Miller
22:32 Nov 09, 2024

This reads really nicely, Mary. A really sweet tale. There may be a typo on Kay Anne's costume? Unless she was just really into geometry.

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Mary Bendickson
00:49 Nov 10, 2024

Too late to fix but it puts a good angle on it😜

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Trudy Jas
21:45 Nov 08, 2024

Poor little Mary. Pesky little Jimmy. 🤗

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Mary Bendickson
05:05 Nov 09, 2024

I should have put a spell on him 😜

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Trudy Jas
12:23 Nov 09, 2024

You already had. His relentless looking for you,was the equivalent of tugging on your braids. He had a crush on you. LOL

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Mary Bendickson
17:24 Nov 09, 2024

You may be right about that😆. Wanted to work in that when I was six, two years before, at same party I was left stranded outside because we sisters had the great idea we shouldn't go in together because people would recognize us as a set. I was dressed as a pumpkin but had no arm holes therefore I couldn't get the big heavy doors open! 😭

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Trudy Jas
17:26 Nov 09, 2024

And left in the cold. Poor little Mary. :-( LOL in retrospect.

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