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โRise and shine!โ shouted Lillian, bursting into my room.
I rubbed my eyes, covering my face with my wings.
โCome on, get up! We rise with the sun here- most of us, anyway. Meet Celeste in the cafeteria in exactly one hour. Move, move, move!โ
Lillian left the room as Zoe entered.ย
โWhatโs up with her?โ I groaned.ย
โSheโs always like that,โ responded Zoe, spreading aside the leaves that covered the window. โShe was just too in shock yesterday to insult you. Now come on, we have to check out that bump, then we have to meet Celeste aboutโฆ well, you.โ
โMe?โ I asked, stretching my wings.ย
โYeah, you. Since youโre the daughter of an All-Beast, you should be an All-Beast as well, and that means- well, youโll see. Now Come on! Celeste is waiting.โ
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I sat at the table next to Celeste, my eyes roaming the room, taking in the scene. Luke and Varsha were seated in front of me, whispering in each other's ears. To their right was Zoe and Felicity, discussing recent patients of theirs. To the left of Luke and Varsha were two people I didnโt recognize. The first had dark purple hair that faded to gold at the edges, her amber eyes flicking from person to person. Her white fox ears and tail twitched in irritation at what the person next to her had said. Her dark purple diamond earrings dangled as her gaze landed on me. She shifted, the sound of metal prominent. I could feel strange vibrations from under the table, and I came to the conclusion that she had an artificial leg. I snuck a glance under the table to confirm my suspicions when the other person tapped the table spot in front of me.
โHey, who are you?โ her long, wavy black hair cascaded down her back, her bright blue eyes gazing into mine. I recognized her as the one that came to rescue me at the facility with Ethan: Liz I believe. A bow was wrapped around her torso, a sheath of arrows strapped to her back.ย
โHello, can you hear me?โ asked Liz, waving her hand in front of my face.
โLiz,โ hissed her purple-haired friend. โSheโs Mother Heatherโs daughter.โ
โWell, how was I supposed to know?โ whispered Liz. โYouโre the one thatโs always eavesdropping, Cirah.โ
โItโs not eavesdropping,โ replied Cirah. โI justโฆ overhear sometimes.โ
โUh-huh,โ muttered Liz, shaking her head.ย
I was about to say something when Palak walked up and sat next to Celeste.
โPalak!โ exclaimed Celeste. โHowโs it going?โย
โNot bad, Cel. Whatโs up, Harp? Heard about yourโฆ wellโฆโ
She was interrupted by several other people walking up and sitting down next to me. I gasped softly when I recognized the orange tail and ears, the reddish-brown hair, and the bright green eyes.
โEthan!โ I exclaimed.
Ethan smiled. โHey, howโs it going?โ
Celeste looked past me and frowned at Ethan. She turned back to Palak and started whispering in her ear.
โSheโs still mad at me,โ explained Ethan. โFrom when I took some of her pollen. I only needed a little, but she wouldnโt budge.โ He winked. โAnyway, I brought some friends I thought I could introduce.โ
He gestured to the people seated next to him. One had big, blue eyes and a hijab concealing her hair, delicate white wings protruding from her back, similar to Zoeโs. Her backwards knee and talons also resembled Zoeโs, except this personโs was thicker and stronger. She rubbed her eyes as she spoke.ย
โI donโt understand why we have to be up so early, Ethan. Why couldnโt it be at night?โ
โBecause not all of us are nocturnal, Wish,โ smirked Ethan.ย
โBut youโre a cat. Arenโt cats nocturnal?โ
โYeah, but we can handle daytime, unlike snowy owls.โ
Wish yawned and laid down her head.ย
Her friend shook her awake, and when that failed, she pulled off her shoe and lightly tapped Wishโs back.
โCome on, get up lazy-bones. Donโt make me use this.โ she said, her thick latino accent mushing her words together. She waved her shoe, her brown hair draped down her shoulders.
โIโm up, Iโm up,โ mumbled Wish, lifting her head. โAnd donโt you dare use that shoe on me again, Rainhart.โ
โThen at least stay awake through the rest of the meeting,โ retorted Rainhart, putting on her shoe. She smiled teasingly, revealing her large, sharp teeth, her grey eyes shining. Whiskers freckled her cheeks, and peaking through her back was some orange and black striped fur.ย
โIs everyone here?โ asked Celeste. The group nodded, turning their attention to Celeste.
โOk, so hereโs the dealโฆ as most of you know, Harper here isโฆ well, sheโs Mother Heatherโs daughter. And since Mother Heather was an All-Beastโฆโ
โSheโs an All-Beast too,โ nodded Felicity.ย
โI am??โ I asked. โWhat does that mean?โ
โIt means that you can transform any of your body parts into any animal,โ responded Wish, lifting her head from the table.ย
โExactly,โ said Celeste. โSo, uhโฆ try to think of an animal part, like claws orโฆ cat ears.โ
I shut my eyes and pictured cat ears emerging from my skull, orange just like Ethansโฆ
I opened my eyes. โDid it work?โ
Celeste shook her head. โMaybe you werenโt concentrating enough?โ
I shut my eyes again, this time thinking of a slick orange tail protruding from my back.
Why was I thinking of Ethan?
โItโs not working,โ said Celeste, shaking her head. โYou keep trying. In the meantime, we have an important mission ahead of us. Predator troops were spotted near the field.โ
โTheyโve never ventured so close to Adapter territory,โ commented Felicity, lightly tapping her deer hooves on the floor.
โExactly,โ responded Celeste. โWe need some scouts to survey the field for any clues as to where the Predatorโs base is. A dropped map, bootprint, anything. Ethan, Rainhart, and Liz will explore the northern side. Luke, you will be with Sia to search the eastern side- once Sia is done with her previous mission, that it. Zoe and Felicity will stay here in case something goes wrong. Varsha, Wish, and Cirah will venture to the winter side, since they are best equipped for cold weather and snow. Palak and I-โ
โNo,โ said Luke.
โWhat?โ
โI said no. Varsha and I are always together for missions, I refuse to separate from her. What if something happens? I canโt risk her safety.โ
โI can protect myself, Luke,โ said Varsha. โIโm not helpless. I donโt need you stalking my every move like Iโm some child!โ
โI canโt risk it!โ shouted Luke. โWe cannot risk that they capture you, Varsha. We canโt have what happened to Treasure to happen to you!โ
โShe went willingly, and you know it! You just want to pretend that sheโs still out there, scared and helpless, wishing you were with her. News flash, Luke, she doesnโt need you! And neither do I!โ
โThen leave!โ His last word echoed, leaving us all in stunned silence.
โThen maybe I will,โ whispered Varsha, rising from the table and fleeing from the room.
โVarsha, wait!โ shouted Cirah, running after her, her metal leg clunking against the wooden floor. Liz glanced at us before following with her.
Luke huffed and left the room, tearing the leaves from the doorway and crumpling them in his fist.
Everyone remained silent, unsure how to react.
โWhoโs Treasure?โ I asked tentatively.
Celeste sighed. โSheโs Luke and Varshaโs sister. She and Luke got into a big fight and she left. She joined Azazelโs army and is now the head sergeant there.โ
โOh,โ I mumbled.
โAchlys is part of the Predator army, too,โ whispered Rainhart. โWe used to date. He would give me flowers every day, whispering promises in my ear. But thenโฆโ She dropped her head, a silent tear running down her cheek.
โMy friend is part of the army,โ said Celeste, fiddling with something under the table. โDraco. But he found out Scarlett had joined and he followed her. He was captured, given the choice of joining Azazelโs army or facing death. He chose to join, not caring about the lifetime of friendship we once had.โ
โWow,โ I whispered. โIโm sorry, I didnโt know.โ
โNo, itโs okay,โ said Rainhart. โThis is why we need to win this war. They donโt understand what theyโre doing, they donโt understand that Azazel is manipulating them. He knows their weaknesses, Harper. He uses it against him.โ
โBut not anymore,โ said Zoe. โWe wonโt let him do this any longer.โ
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โAre you crazy?!โ shouted Nainika, slamming her fist against the table.ย
โAre you sure there isnโt another way?โ asked Achlys, his face still splotched with bruises and swelling.ย
โThatโs Azazelโs direct orders,โ responded Treasure, her ear flicking in irritation. โWe have to venture that area now that we know where their base is- at least their general direction.โ
โWho knows how many of them are there?!โ yelled Nainika, her green eyes blazing with rage, her black tail swishing back and forth. โWe donโt have very many of us here, in case you hadnโt noticed! They could have thousands on their side!โ
โBut we are more powerful,โ commented Draco, his snake tongue flicking out instinctively.ย
โYeah,โ agreed Nina. โWe are the strongest warriors on Azazelโs side. They probably have a bunch of trainees.โ
Scarlett raised her hand, a bubble of water forming in her palm. She shifted the shape to a bird, its translucent wings flapping in the air.ย
โScarlettโs right,โ said Draco. โThereโs the new All-Beast to worry about. How do we know she wonโt be a problem?โ
โYou must know how to solve that problem, Scarlett,โ sneered Nina, revealing her sharp fangs. โSince youโre sooo perfect, right?โ
Scarlett glared at Nina, turning her water bird into ice and crushing it in her fist.ย
โWhatโs wrong, Scarlett? Canโt use your words? Is the poor swan scared?โ Nina stalked forward, placing her hand on Scarlettโs throat.ย
โGo on, speak. Tell me how much you hate me. Whatโs wrong, too tongue tied?โ Her tongue flicked out as she spoke, drawing out the Sโs.ย
โNina,โ warned Draco. โYou know why she canโt talk.โ
โAh yes,โ responded Nina. โMuted in battle. Couldnโt handle a teensy blade to the neck. Let me help you add another scar to the collection.โย
โNina,โ said Draco, grasping her arm. Nina whipped her head around before her skin went cold, the warmth leaking from her body. She gasped for breath as her hand released from Scarlettโs throat. Scarlett had her arm raised towards Nina, manipulating the water in her body.
โScarlett!โ shouted Draco. โLeave her alone.โ
Scarlett glared at Draco before dropping her hand, returning Ninaโs body temperature to normal. She stayed on the floor, gasping and shivering, the birthmark on her eyebrow prominent against her pale skin.ย
โT-taking advantage of a c-cold-blooded creature now, are we?โ sneered Nina. โN-nice to finally have you show the real y-you.โ
Scarlett snarled at Nina before stalking out of the room.ย
โScarlett, wait!โ he turned to Nina. โDo you enjoy making her miserable? You know what sheโs gone through, yet you insist on making it all worse.โ He left the room, leaving a shivering and heart-broken Nina on the floor.ย
โWeโve all gone through something,โ whispered Nina before rising from the floor.ย
Treasure cleared her throat. โNina, you may go to the medic.โ
โI donโt need to,โ she retorted stubbornly, sitting at the table.ย
โFine,โ said Treasure. โEveryone else, prepare to leave at dawn. Scarlett will be taking Squad W to take the winter side. Draco and Nainika will take the northern area. Achlys, Nina, and I will take the rest. Meet back at the center zone. Capture anyone you can find, kill them if necessary. But leave the All-Beast to Azazel. He will deal with it himself. This war will end here and now."
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Hey everyone! Sorry it's been a while, writer's block am I right? Anyway, here are the people featured in this story! Lillian as Lillian Ivy as Zoe Celeste as Celeste Jose as Luke Varsha as Varsha Felicity as Felicity Luna as Liz Amethyst as Cirah Ethan as Ethan Palak as Palak Kayla as Nina Amany as Wish CJ as Rainhart Nainika as Nainika Bucky as Achlys Draco (made up character for Celeste) Wolfie as Treasure Danny as Scarlett Lmk how you like your character! NO MORE BIG CHARACTER CHANGES at this point in the story! I accept feedback and c...
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My elf name is: Samantha Ahtnamas
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oooo! Athna for short. :) -putting in bio lol-
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Yay! Antha it is!
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OMG, I love my character...such a talented writer...Sorry I haven't been active much...been in a huge slump...I'll be trying a little harder now tho... Keep up the great work...gonna be reading the other now :)
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it's totally ok that u arent as active :) tysm for reading so glad you like it <3
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yesssssssssss I love this seriessssss also I'm commenting out of order bcuz I forgot to comment on these XD the characters all have a relationship with each other and in ever part you do a great job of showing that by having their dialogue very comfortable. great job Abbie!!!
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tysmmm!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING ME! :D I like how you're writing both sides to the story (literally XD) :) you SNAILED ๐๐๐ it! (okay I'll stop XD) ~ Amethyst
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XDDDDDDD lolll tysm!!!! Trying to include the characters more XD
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np! ;))) :>
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WOWOWWOOWOWO I'm so impresssed Abby! This is truely starting to feel like I'm reading a fantasy novel! U should think about making this into a book... I'll be the first one in line to get it:DD I LOVEEE my character... :D so snarky and she's perfect! Good work
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tysmm! I might lol XDD btw warning one of you (or Luke or Treasure) is going to die, haven't decided yet heheheheheh :)
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LOL, of course! Ohh, hehe.... I'll be waiting:D
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XD
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yeah rainhart is CJ lol. Eheheheh shhhhhh dont question loloolooolol
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oops sorry XD still getting used to name change lol. I'll go change it. Sorry it tok so long! Writer's block XDDDD hope ya like it btw part 7 is out
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tyy! Part 8 prob coming out tomorrow XD taking advantage while writer's block is gone TvT #speedwriter time
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yay! Another amazing part! It's so well developed and it's all coming together! heheh, I enjoy being evil XD still great job with everything. And especially avoiding info dumps, but still giving us enough ;)
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PART 7 IS OUT GO CHECK IT OUT
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lol ehehehehe yesssss you are the LONE WOLF lololol the lead sergeant TvT -whispers- do you mind dyinggggg... actually no i think ill kill of you sister instead XD ooooo or maybe your brother... one of yall gonna die tho lol
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Sorry for...erm--charging in like this but when you said "one of yall gonna die tho" that just made me smile, I don't know why. XD
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lollllll XDDDD ehehehehee
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Plot twist: turns out we all bite the dust. XD
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LOLLL i would do that XD needs to be nice and tragic... but i need at least one of yall to live... OOO I CAN KILL TWO OF YOU AND HAVE THE OTHER LIVE IN CONSTANT GUILT AAXHNIAUUCAC im so nice arent I :D
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XD yeah i don't mind if you don't mind, but either of them seem okay ;) dArK hUmOr XD
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lol ehehhehehe ill surprise ya lol DaRk HuMoRrRRrRRr
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okie :) XDDD *makes a hashtag* #darkhumorrrrrrrrr
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lol -adds hashtag to bio-
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EEEE Huh, wonder y I did tell them that Dracoโs my brother- Hehehehheeeee- Lol, hope this goes well-
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lollll XD eheheheeheheh -people confused as to how a butterfly and a cobra can be siblings- iTs An AdOpTiVe ReLaTiOnShIp
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XDXD Oh trueeeee We need backstory lol
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XDXD Oh trueeeee We need backstory lol
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lol dont worry you'll have one eheheheheh
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YAYYYY
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Abbie this is amazing!!! I hope the next parts will be easier to write, and I see why this one was harder to type down. I noticed that some romance is now in the picture, nice. ;) That's definitely not gonna make things easier. My backstory has been revealed! XD I loved the way you brought it about; very clever. There were a lot of characters you included in this part which probably made it hard and intimidating to write again. Hopefully, the ideas will flow more easily now! (I really can't express how well you're doing with this series.)
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Tysm! Yeah lol that's gonna be some good drama later XD. Yeah it's so hard to include so many characters. I tried to make each character have a distinctive feature so people won't get confused and add stuff like "swished their black tail" or "snake tongue flick in and out" so the readers know who im talking about and can sort of visualize it in their head. Mental note: Max of 10 characters in my next reedsy cast XD. Tysm I love the feedback <3
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No problem! Those little descriptive hints help a lot for visualization. Yeah, 10 characters is more than enough. If I ever make a Reedsy cast I'll keep that info in mind! Sorry I haven't responded to our 'other' conversation lol, I've been busier than usual.
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lol it's fine, ive been a bit busy too. And yeah, there's twenty characters in this reedsycast rn TvT
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THANK YOU for including me in your story. This was an amazing story with a fab plotline :))
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tysm! Part 7 will be coming out as well and I got something special for you XD you're character is going to have a special ability would u like to know now or wait until Part 7 to see? hehehhe :)
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I don't know hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Okay fine, tell me. I can't wait !!!!!!! :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Also, please let me know when part 7 comes out. I am so excited yeeeeeeeeeee !!!
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Ok lol since you're a hyena in the story... during the battle, when they are in a tough spot, they have to make you laugh. That's it. No, really XD. Your ability is when you go into a full hyena laugh, it can cause a major ear strain to anyone within a mile of you who isnt covering their ears, temporarily deafening and weakening them. Lol XD. I will dont worry!
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PART 7 IS OUT you aren't featured in this one it's just a lil side plot BUT GO CHECK IT OUT JUST FINISHED IT
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I love that idea, it is so cool, I never would've thought of it lol :)) I am going over there right now yay !!!
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Also, could you please read my latest story if possible. Thanks :))
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yay! ok i will! :) just gotta respond to my 4 pages of comments first TvT
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I'll admit, I'm a bit late to the party, but I followed just fine. IT's very action-packed and I enjoyed it a lot! The ending makes me want more. The subplots are well written so we can still follow with the big picture. Nicely done! I wish I actually had blue eyes...Keep writing :D
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tysmmm! Yes blue eyes are so prettyyyyyy
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HAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR INCLUDING ME IN YOUR STORY, ABBIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! IT'S AMAZING, I LOVE ALL THE DESCRIPTIONS AND THOROUGHNESS OF THE PIECE GOOD JOBBBBBBBBBB AHHHHHHHHHHH
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YAYYYYY TYYY IM SORRY YOU ARENT INVOVLED MUCH IN THIS STORY I PROMISE TO INVOLVE YOU MOE IN THE FUTURE THERES JUST SO MANY CHARACTER AHHHHH
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Lol, it's okay, juggling so many characters is amazingggggggg!! ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
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lol its so hard tho XD
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Ikrrrrrr
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wHy ArE yOu ThInKiNg Of EtHaN? great job! I canโt wait to see how the predators destroy any notion of a stable storyline, lol
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HmM mAyBe BeCaUsE yOu ArE tHe LoVe InTeReSt In EvErY rEeDsY cAsT lol XDDDD
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Lol, thatโs bc Iโm bi, annoying, serious, and a crisis stupidly immortal teenager, lol.
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XDDDD lololol exactly
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