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Fantasy Drama

“THIS BLASTED ELEVATOR IS GOING TO GET US ALL BEHEADED!” The young boy hollers, kicking the sleek metal walls of the elevator. Worry and fury wrestle for control of his face, and it comes out as a yell while salty tears stream down his cheeks.

“Ow, ow, ow,” he whimpers, his blue eyes swimming with more tears as the kid holds his hurt foot. “That door was too hard….” 

“Then don’t kick it,” the only other passenger suggests. His blond hair partially covers his chocolate-chip eyes as he stares down at the child.

The younger boy snarls. “But we’re going to die!”

“Who are you?” The first boy asks, studying the other person’s face. The kid looks like a tween, with shaggy dark hair and tear-stained, flustered cheeks.

“I’m Miles,” he says, his voice shaky, “and this elevator is cruel.” He starts to pace. “Okay. Okay. The power went out. We’re stuck here. The Queen’s marriage starts in ten minutes. She ordered the whole Kingdom to be there. Even the River goddess will be there. If we’re not….” he gulps then shoots a look at the older boy. “Who are you?”

“I’m…Chase,” the blond replies hesitantly. Nobody knew the Queen had a son, so he was safe from Miles figuring out his true identity. “But my friends call me Ace.”

Not like he had any friends. Only his family, the Royals, knew he existed. And his baby cousin Bri didn’t count.

“Why the pause?” Miles asks, wiping more tears from his face with his robe’s sleeve. “And why aren’t you wearing the designated outfit? The Queen ordered all citizens of the Kingdom to show their loyalty to the Royals.”

Prince Chase inwardly curses as he scans Miles’ robe. It’s scarlet fabric draped over the small boy’s frame, embroidered with the silver outline of a star—the Symbol of the Kingdom. His own robe has a purple star in the center of the silver one, as a sign he’s a Royal. Chase’s not allowed out of the castle, as he’s a secret to the Kingdom, but he snuck out to watch the ceremony between the Queen and her fiancé, disguised as a Citizen. Chase couldn’t very well have worn his robe, because that would’ve given away his identity of a Royal, but he should’ve had a Citizen’s robe tailored to him. Citizens who don’t follow orders—in this case, to wear the Kingdom’s robes with the Symbol—would be beheaded, and disobeying an order didn't blend in very well.

“I have my Citizen’s robe under this,” Chase says, gesturing to his tunic and pants. “I’ll maybe sure the Symbol of the Kingdom is showing by the time we get to the ceremony, don’t worry.”

“I’m worried,” Miles says nastily, “because we might not ever get to the ceremony.” The young boy musters up his angriest face before it dissolved into more crying.

“I don’t want to die,” Miles says between sobs.

Chase pats his back. “How old are you?”

“Ten.”

“I’m fourteen.” The words fly out of Chase’s mouth before he can consider what to say.

Miles’ glistening blue eyes dart around the stalled elevator. The glossy elevator buttons of the Citizens apartment building are superstitious—they go 𝟏𝟏, 𝟏𝟐, 𝟏𝟒, no 𝟏𝟑 in sight. The entire Kingdom is packed in the one, huge apartment building, with the equally large castle for the Royals a courtyard away.

Miles slumps on the floor. He seems to realize he couldn’t do anything but wait for the power to go back one. “So, um…hi.”

“Hello.” Chase shifts his weight.

The word hangs in the air as an awkward silence covers the elevator. Miles’ tears have dried away, but his eyes are still watering as he inhales and exhales slowly. “Why aren’t you scared?”

“Of what?” says Chase.

“Of this elevator not hurrying up. If we’re not at the ceremony soon, we’ll be killed.”

“Oh, I am scared,” Chase says, “just not for that reason.”

Miles gives him the side-eye. “What reason is more important than life?”

Chase inwardly curses. He can’t very well say, “My mom is the Queen, I won’t die because I’m a Royal, but I’ll get an insane scolding and a grounding for a year”, but his mind comes up blank with new ideas. “Um….”

“Yes?”

“Urm….”

Spit it out, Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace!”

“I don’t know,” Chase admits truthfully.

Miles’ hard gaze fixes on Chase’s face. “You’re hiding something.”

“No, I’m not!”

“Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace, you most definitely are.”

“First, please stop calling me that. Second, why are you so barky all of a sudden?!” Chase snaps. “You were sobbing and sad a moment ago, and now you’re accusing me of something that’s completely false.” True, true, false. ⅔ wasn’t bad when your existence is a secret.

Miles’ mouth opens then shuts. “Sorry. I’m just a little…worried? I mean, did the power have to go out right now?”

“It’s okay, buddy,” Chase says, patting the boy on the head. “I’m sure the elevator will get moving soon.”

“And if not?” Miles sniffles.

Chase hesitates. “I’ll protect you from the Queen’s rage.”

“How would you do that? And why?”

“I like you, and nobody deserved to die because of a power outage that wasn’t their fault, much less a ten-year-old. And about how…I don’t know.” ….a way to protect you without revealing myself to my mom and the kingdom, Chase silently added.

“Thanks,” Miles says. “I feel much safer now.”

Chase cocks his head then realizes Miles is joking. The small boy sniggers. “But seriously, thanks. I just really hope it won’t come to that.”

He jumps up. “STUPID ELEVATOR!”

A moment later, Miles is back on the floor, not having enough hands to put pressure on all the places that were injured. “ARRRRRRGH!” was the attack with his foot. “I WILL DIE BECAUSE OF—” was him punching the elevator wall. The continuation of that sentence, “—YOUUUU!”, was Miles ramming into the wall at full speed, with his full body.

“Ow,” Miles moans. 

“Sorry,” Chase winces. “How much does it hurt?”

“I’ll be dead soon, so that doesn’t really matter.”

“Don’t say that,” Chase says. “I’m sure the power will be back on soon.” He glares at the sleek walls, like, Power, you better be on soon. 

“You know,” Miles says, his gaze fixed on 𝟏𝟒 taking the place of the button 𝟏𝟑, “It’s funny to imagine there’s a building that is completely made of all the level thirteens, and it has awful luck.”

“Funny indeed,” Chase nods, “but not possible. The other buildings don’t have levels. The school, the library…they’re all flat.”

“Yeah, but the castle has floors,” Miles says.

“Maybe so, but no level thirteen.”

Chase immediately regrets his words. Miles will find out he’s the unknown prince before the end of the elevator ride. He tries to swallow the hard lump in his throat as Miles glares. 

“How do you know that?” Miles asks, his brows furrowed and a frown painted onto his pale lips.

“Just a guess,” Chase lies, hoping the cover-up would be enough. “Anyways, urm, you must be pretty smart to think of that level-thirteen thing.”

“Really smart, or loves to daydream.”

“Hmm. What else do you know?”

“Digits and digits of pi, way too much mythology, and an insane amount of random facts and ideas, among others. But I know—”

Chase’s face flashes white. That sentence could definitely end “I know…you’re the prince that’s a closely guarded secret from everyone other than the Royals”.

“What?” Miles says, interrupting his own sentence as the sight of Chase’s paled face.

“Na…nothing.”

“Were you nervous about how I was going to end that sentence?”

Chase nods. “Yes.”

“How did you think it would end?”

“How was it going to end?” Chase counters.

“Hmm,” Miles says. He was going to say, “I know how to write in Hebrew, too”, but all of Chase’s behavior had given him a hunch that he needed to test. “The end starts with a ‘p’. Is that what you were afraid of?”

That could mean anything, Chase tells himself. “Yeah.”

“Then ‘r’.”

“Um….”

“‘i’.”

“Yeah….”

“Next is ‘n’.”

Chase takes a deep breath. “Yes. So you, know, don’t you?”

Miles smiles. He thinks he did, but he doesn’t know, and he was making his fast-friend-in-the-making nervous. “Yeah. I know how printing works.”

“Thank the Royals,” Chase burst.

Miles smirks. “What did you think I was going to say?”

“That. Exactly that.”

Miles sighed and glanced at his watch. “Well, it was nice knowing you, Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace. We’re dead. Very dead. Extremely dead. In fact, we’re so dead we’re—”

Creeeeeak.

Miles jumps with joy as the elevator starts moving. “YES! The power’s back on!” He raises an eyebrow at Chase and says, “Why aren’t you celebrating?” before going back to hollering, “YES!”

Chase starts to celebrate too. He wouldn’t die anyways, but he was afraid Miles would. Besides, Chase’s cover would be blown if the Queen said she was going to kill them.

Miles’ face fell as he glanced at his watch. “We’re out of time.”

“Huh?”

“We’re out of time—the ceremony started a while ago—and we’re out of time as in, we’ll die because of that.”

Miles looks like he’s holding back tears as the elevator doors ding! open.

Guards, dressed in shiny armor fitted over red jumpsuits and armed with sheathed swords, stand in front of the way out. Ahead of the guards, the giant courtyard is packed with thousands of Citizens, staring ahead at the stage in front of the castle on the other side of the courtyard.

The guards grab Miles and Chase as they try to bolt out of the elevator. The men hoist the boys in the air. “What do you think you’re doing?” one of the guards demands in a deep voice.

“Trying to get to the wedding,” Chase answers, nodding towards the music coming from the stage.

“You’re late,” the other guard says. “Also, why aren’t you wearing your robe, young man?”

Chase winces and Miles whispers, “P-p-please spare us.”

“No,” the first guard says. “Actually, it’s the queen’s judgement.”

“Chase-my-friends-call-me-Ace,” Miles whimpers, “what are we going to do?!”

The boys struggle to get loose as the guards march towards the stage just as the wedding is ending. People are just started to disperse, and the Queen and the new King are still on the stage.

“What do we have here?” the Queen booms as Miles and Chase are dropped into the floor.

One of the guard bows. “These Citizens refused to attend your wedding. They were very, very late. Also, the older one isn’t wearing his robe!”

“The power went out in the elevator!” Chase protests. “And my robe isn’t on because—” 

The Queen pointed to the ground. “Bow before your Queen!”

Chase and Miles kneel on the stage for a full minute. Chase wonders when he should rip off his hood and reveal he’s a Royal—not yet, not now.

Eventually, the Queen says, “Rise, so we may address your punishment.”

The boys silently get up. The entire crowd has now returned to watch the sentencing. The tall Queen, dressed in a white robe with the Symbol of a Royal and draped in expensive accessories, glared down at the late kids. “You’ll die,” she decides after five minutes of sweat trickling down Miles’ neck.

Chase and Miles both scream and flail as the two guards pick each of them up and start in different directions. Miles freaks because he’s about to be killed, and Chase screams because Miles feels like a little brother by now. No. A friend. 

“STOP!” Chase roars.

Both guards stop and stare at the Queen. Her eyes focus on Chase, who thumps to the floor as the guard drops him. “Twice now you’ve spoken out of turn. Citizens don’t—”

“I’m not a Citizen,” Chase snaps.

He rises and pulls off his hood, smiling at the Queen. “Hi, Mom.”


There's a pause as Queen’s jaw drops, and the crowd’s jaws drop with it. Chase turns to the whole Kingdom. “Hello, Citizens of our Kingdom! I’m your prince, Chase. But my friends call me Ace. Anyways…yeah, hi!”

He beams at the shocked people then twists back his mom.

“You didn’t,” the Queen says in a hushed voice.

“I did.”

Miles’ eyes bug out as he looks from the Queen, to the guards, to Chase. 

“Well….” the Queen struggled for the right words. Finally, she points to the young boy on the floor. “That one will still be beheaded!”

The guard picks up Miles again and Chase says, “No.”

The guard stops again as the Queen says, “What?” 

“No. I said, no,” Chase repeats. “Miles stays alive. It wasn’t his fault the power went out and he deserves to live. You’re not killing him.” 

“Why aren’t I?” the Queen says innocently. 

Chase tosses his blond hair as he rushes over to the vacant guard. Before the metal-clad man can react, the prince grabs his sheath.

Chase takes the sword out and matches over to the Queen. He holds up the blade, then puts it at his own neck. Chase knows his mother doesn’t care if a Citizen dies. But a Royal? The prince? Her son?

Oh, the delicious way Chase’s action takes effect on the Queen.

“N-no,” the Queen stammers as she stared at the sword resting on Chase’s throat. “You wouldn’t.”

Chase doesn’t break eye contact as he presses the sword a little harder. “I would.”

“What—”

“Let. Miles. Go.” Chase says, gritting his teeth in determination. 

The prince’s brown eyes lock with his mother’s as she spits out the words, “Fine.” She motions for the guard, and the brown-haired ten-year-old drops to the floor. “We’ll discuss this later,” the Queen sneers.

Chase nods and Miles sprints over to him. The crown, once again, starts to disperse and the Queen and King leave the stage.

“I can’t believe you did that,” Miles breathes as he hugs Chase.

“Neither can I,” the prince admits.

“Thank you.”

“No problem!” Chase smiles. “Will you be okay?”

Miles’ features tighten. “Yeah.”

“I need to go now,” Chase says. “My mom will literally kill me and I need to be early for that. Goodbye, Miles,” he says as he starts walking towards the castle.

Miles sets off towards the apartment buildings, but not before pausing to say goodbye. He’s about to say “So long, Chase-but-my-friends-call-me-Ace”, but his own words surprise him.

“Goodbye…Ace.”

September 11, 2020 20:16

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1508 comments

01:14 Sep 24, 2020

I loved this story! Part 2, STAT! The plot was really nice, and I love how Chase and Miles's friendship grew throughout the story! 10/10! New follower! 😁

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01:24 Sep 24, 2020

Thanks!

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Amaya .
22:20 Sep 23, 2020

upvote for upvote? someones been downvoting me :( so I want to get my points back up and also I feel like upvoting someone else

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22:43 Sep 23, 2020

We just did, lol. Um, maybe...I hafta go right now but maybe later.

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Amaya .
23:38 Sep 23, 2020

haha sorry I have no idea why that posted again, that was the same comment as last time, right? Ya, we just did, I think I gave you...200? I wasn't really counting but it was definitely around there. That's how much you gave me too, I think

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23:58 Sep 23, 2020

Thanks! Yurp!

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Avery G.
21:40 Sep 23, 2020

AERIN!!! I'M GETTING DOWNVOTED-AGAIN!!!! It stopped, but came back again. Please ignore this if you're busy. You probably have better things to do than to listen to all my problems.

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22:11 Sep 23, 2020

SO SORRRRRY! I’m often downvoted when I’m not on Reedsy, but I HATE it when I activity see my points going down. Lol I honestly don’t

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Avery G.
03:19 Sep 24, 2020

Yes, I know!! The comment you just put was at 0!!! I upvoted it, but still, ugh. Thanks!!

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B. W.
15:01 Sep 23, 2020

My gosh, i'm being down-voted again. I still have a feeling that it's her doing it because she might be lying. she still took a decent amount of my points though i know it's probably not as bad as your points. Though it was really bad at some point because you know what my points are at the moment? they got down-voted all the way to i think 16xx and if your wondering why i put X's i don't remember the other parts i just know it had been there before.

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The Cold Ice
04:29 Sep 23, 2020

Hey Aerin I had attend your quizz.It was super.Waiting for the next quizz .

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01:57 Sep 23, 2020

Aerin- random question...when's ur birthday?

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02:20 Sep 23, 2020

St. Patrick’s day!

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02:25 Sep 23, 2020

Cool! I actually know 2 more people with the same birthday lol...mine is Oct 2!!!

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20:03 Sep 23, 2020

No way! Really? Same!

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21:27 Sep 23, 2020

What?! Really?! Wow!

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B. W.
00:27 Sep 23, 2020

Ya wanna hear some puns?

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00:38 Sep 23, 2020

Yurp!

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B. W.
00:39 Sep 23, 2020

How about I tell you one about some Pizza? no wait- sorry that's to cheesy! gosh how was that one?

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01:11 Sep 23, 2020

Love iiiit

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B. W.
01:16 Sep 23, 2020

wait so the new story will be out tomorrow right?

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01:25 Sep 23, 2020

Idk...probably closer to Thursday or Friday!

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B. W.
21:24 Sep 22, 2020

Aerin go check out "Cheating"

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21:35 Sep 22, 2020

Who’s is by? Oh wait you sent a link in another string never mind

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B. W.
21:38 Sep 22, 2020

let's check out her story

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21:40 Sep 22, 2020

Yurp I did! Mia is an amazing author! But she was downvoted...poor girl, the downvoter is downvoting everyone.

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Amaya .
21:48 Sep 22, 2020

oh my god...is it the Mia girl that has been downvoting so many people? That's so sad that she would do that!

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Zilla Babbitt
21:57 Sep 22, 2020

No, Mia IS the downvoter. Go check her profile.

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22:42 Sep 22, 2020

Yeah, I saw. But check her NEW bio: she’s actually not. And yurp, I knew, I just wanted to be nice to see...idk, actually. Back when I thought she was the downvoter (an hour ago), I was basically: 😱🤭🤭😶😶😢😣😔😤😠😡🥺😩😫🧐🧐🧐🤓🤓🤓 Lol. It was just confusing to FINALLY know who the downvoter was...but she wasn’t. I’m glad, I guess? Idk. Anyways, this is probably a confusing comment. All in all: THANKS BUT MIA AIN’T THE DOWNVOTER Oki bye-bye

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B. W.
20:37 Sep 22, 2020

:D i've finally made something else with this weeks prompts, go check out "It has begun" and tell me what you think. it's something with my demi-god series and i'll try to upvote ya again

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Grace Reardon
16:38 Sep 22, 2020

Yo Aerin, my brother Daniel Reardon faced a fierce opponent...the downvoter. Can you help me like and comment on his story so he can get a few of his points back? Please and thanks! 😉

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21:11 Sep 22, 2020

Usbduiwhdiuwehduefw ugh. Sure! Send a link :D

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Grace Reardon
22:37 Sep 22, 2020

Oh crap, I just got downvoted again. Great. Anyway I dont speak:Usbduiwhdiuwehduefw. LOL. Anyway thanks Aerin! blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/daniel-reardon/ oh and also, thisis the downvoter blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/mia-rigini/

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22:39 Sep 22, 2020

Oof so sorry. I’ll upvote mooore! Lol Thanks! Yeah, I know. Although read her new bio: she’s not the actual downvoter!

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Grace Reardon
22:43 Sep 22, 2020

Haha, sorry I was mistaken. Thanks though. I hope you'll read my new story tommorow!

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06:01 Sep 22, 2020

Hey Aerin! My story got Approved! yay! I hope your new one does too!

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11:56 Sep 22, 2020

Ooh! Yay! BUT, have your stories not been approved before? Idk, I’m just trying to figure stuff ouuuut...

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21:19 Sep 22, 2020

Yeah before they weren't approved but at least now they are!

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Amaya .
22:47 Sep 21, 2020

This question is directed at Aerin, but answers from anybody who has experience or tips are highly appreciated: do you have any tips for how to plot a novel? Like if you have a very vague idea of what you want (my idea is in my bio, if you want to read) how do you decide on the other details? And what is a good "format" to use to plot your novel?

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Akshat .
17:37 Sep 21, 2020

Kept the message that Samara wrote to the Reedsy judges in my bio. Long live the revolution! Lol

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18:40 Sep 21, 2020

Thanksssss! Yup lol

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Hriday Saboo
14:22 Sep 21, 2020

Hey 👋 aerin, would you mind checking out my new story the zombies

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14:23 Sep 21, 2020

Um, sure, but please leave a comment on one of mine first! Just so you know, I’ll always read stories, but you should comment on my stories before you ask me to read yours!

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Hriday Saboo
14:25 Sep 21, 2020

Ok aerin but I have already commented on that story

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Hriday Saboo
04:34 Sep 21, 2020

Hey aerin, would you mind chking me new story ‘The Zombies’. Do share ur feedback.

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Megan Sutherland
01:38 Sep 21, 2020

Also thank you so much for mentioning my story in your bio!!!!1

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Megan Sutherland
01:36 Sep 21, 2020

omg Aerin thank you for mentioning my story in your bio!!!!!!

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01:40 Sep 21, 2020

No problem :D

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18:24 Sep 20, 2020

Hey, Aerin would be kind to watch the first video it's on Harry potter. https://youtu.be/KxfnREWgN14 Sorry for asking your time, I would ready your story. Just press hold over the link.

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01:03 Sep 21, 2020

I did :D

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17:05 Sep 21, 2020

" I'm grateful"

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Judith Buskohl
17:31 Sep 20, 2020

I couldn't wait to the end to see how it ends and if the boys gets beheaded. I really enjoyed reading the story. Good job of writing.

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01:04 Sep 21, 2020

Thanks!

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Sia S
17:11 Sep 19, 2020

Colour Quest a couple days ago I want to give you feedback ok here it is dont mind its a little constructive but don't feel bad... 1. It was toooooooooooo AWESOMEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! 2. It was toooooooooooo Funnnnnnnnnnn!!!! 3. You are under arrest. Stories aren't supposed to be so gripping, fun and spectacularly awesome !!! Wowwwwwwww

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18:00 Sep 19, 2020

sdhisrhisjndjwhfiwd THANK YOU! Lol, I think I knew you read it, but there weren’t any reviews (nefienfuerbkwrner) from you so idk, I just thought you didn’t have feedback. Whatever. THANKSSSSSSS!! So glad you liked it!!! Oof, I’m so sorry it was toooo fun...lol, thanks!!! Did you have a very character and/or part?

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Sia S
05:06 Sep 20, 2020

Hmmmm All of em were so goood ! But u killed me when Parker got a concussion. :( But Abcde, Celeste and Parker were awesomeeee !!! Favourite parts. Hmmmm the ylobs and the Antarticas !!!!!

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11:57 Sep 20, 2020

Noiiiiice, thanks!!!!!!!!!!

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Sia S
15:27 Sep 20, 2020

Welcomeee

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01:06 Sep 21, 2020

Alsooooo sorry to bother you again but would you mind leaving a review for CQ? Not even a review, just a rating...I put a note about this in my bio, but nobody really wants to commit to buying a book there are no reviews on! So please, if you want to, click whatever amount of stars you think CQ deserves, lol... Side note: so, apparently, Amany’s story was approved! So maybe Reedsy is changing this...do you think I should try to submit one more thing?

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Pragya Rathore
13:29 Sep 20, 2020

Why do you have negative points even after I upvoted this comment? Looks like the anonymous downvoter isn't done yet :(... I know you said in your bio that you don't mind, but it still isn't fair.

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22:56 Sep 20, 2020

Thanks....Yeah, the downvoter is SO annoyingggg

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